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Akimichi, Sukai [Suna Genin]

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Basic Information:

Name:
Akimichi Sukai
Secondary Title:

Age:
13
Gender:
Male
Physical Appearance:
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Like most Akimichis, Sukai is a "big boned" person. He is a lot bigger than any of the ninja his age in his village, and bigger than most of the adults in his village. He is also quite tall for his age, standing at 5'4. Even though he looks big, he is rather muscular. He has no scars on his body right now, because he is a fairly new Genin. Sukai has black, shaggy hair, that reaches down to the middle of his neck. His has big black eyes, and a small nose. Under his eyes are two red circles that he has painted onto his checks. These circles do not cover much of his face.

Sukai does not wear a headband like most ninja his age do, but instead he wears a black hat, with the suna symbol on top of his forehead. He wears armored wrist guards that cover the front side of his hand. He wears a long black shirt, as well as long black pants. Above his shirt he wears an armored plate, that has his clan symbol on it. He wears black leggings that reach down to the middle of his lower leg. Also, right below his knees he wears bandages. These bandages are also seen on his left leg, around his knee. Lastly, He wears black open toed sandals.

Personality:
Sukai most notable features are his cheerful, energetic personality and love of fighting. He cares for everything and everyone in the world he lives in. He feels that everyone has a sense of good in their heart, and wants to try and bring that out in people. He is a very kind person, and if he weren't so young, he might give his life to save a complete stranger. Although, if it was the only way to save his close friends, he would gladly give his life. He likes to lighten the mood anyway he can.

He is a person who enjoys the simple things in life, despite having a lot of energy, he likes just laying back and watching the clouds. Although he really enjoys to train and better himself. His favorite part about being a shinobi is being able to help others through missions. Training makes him feel stronger and better able to help people. He also likes to test his and other people strength. He is all about getting the strongest he can be.

To Sukai, fighting is mostly looked as a sport. He loves competition, and will do quite a bit to get some. He likes to fight for fun, but if he has to get serious he can. If the person he is fighting is trying to hurt someone, anyone he will not take them lightly. While serious, he tends to not talk to much and only think about the main goal at the time, defeating the enemy and protecting whoever needs it.

Like most Akimichi, he loves food. However, Sukai takes that love of food to a whole new level. He couldn't go a whole day without eating at least three meals a day, and he likes to make it double if he can. He is always carrying food around with him, and it is not just a bag of chips. If he his hungry, he seems to fight a little worse, because that feeling in his stomach makes him a little dizzy. Despite his love of food, he will not let it get in the way of his shinobi work.

Sukai has a lot of energy, and loves to use it the most he can. While he is not jumping off the walls, he does tend to be able to do things a lot longer than most people can. It is rather hard for him to sit still at times, but it can be done. This might come from him giving it his all, but nonetheless, Suaki has too much energy sometimes.

Lastly, Sukai is an extremely innocent person. He has never heard a cuss word in his life, and just recently found out the big difference between men and women, and at times he still is not sure. Sukai is by no means stupid, but isn't very sociable up to date. He has never once thought about harming someone to just do harm. He has never once thought about killing someone.



Catch Phrase:


Clan:
Akimichi

Rank Information:

Rank:
Genin
Village Affiliation:
Suna

Special Information:

Character Speciality:
You may pick 2 skills:
Main: Taijutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Water
Sub:
Special Characteristics:

Name:Vigorous
Rank: N/A
Type: Physical
Description: With this trait Sukai excellent physical shape. They are generally slightly stronger, heal faster and are rarely ill. Enhances physical traits by 25% times of the normal shinobi. Sukai still a tad bit shabby on some stuff but his still well condition and is still stronger than most shionbi around. His wounds still take a bit of time to heal and he is sometimes sick but he is beginning to sharpen your body.

Name: The Tank
Rank: N/A
Type: Physical
Description: Sukai's vitality have greatly improved Not bad, he can take much more damage. It takes a good amount of time for him to be taken down without him feeling the innate pain that will reach to his nerves and to his body itself. Because Sukai understand pain, he is able to determine what will cause his opponent to fall. Sukai can take damage 15% better than a normal genin his age.

Name: Strength
Rank: N/A
Type: Physical
Description: with this Sukai trait is stronger then your average ninja, due to intense training. He is able to move about 15% times his own weight which is good considering that most shionbi can't even achieve this. It'll be safe to say he could do 25% times your weight (if you have vigorous as a trait) safely but he will have a bit of strain to do it. Sukai's attacks have slightly increased

Skill Information:
Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them.

Jutsu Template:

Clan Jutsu
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Water Jutsu

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Basic Techniques

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Weapon Template:

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Item Template:

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Background Information

History:
Birth Arc
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Academy Arc
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Genin Arc

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Role-Play Sample:
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PostSubject: Re: Akimichi, Sukai [Suna Genin] Akimichi, Sukai [Suna Genin] EmptySun 09 Jan 2011, 6:14 pm

Quote :
Name: Strength
Rank: N/A
Type: Physical
Description: Character's with this trait are stronger then your average ninja, due to intense training.

How much stronger compared to your rank?

Quote :
Name:Vigorous
Rank: N/A
Type: Physical
Description: Character's with this trait are in excellent physical shape. They are generally slightly stronger, heal faster and are rarely ill. (Enhances physical traits)


Enhances by how much?
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PostSubject: Re: Akimichi, Sukai [Suna Genin] Akimichi, Sukai [Suna Genin] EmptySun 09 Jan 2011, 6:37 pm

Fixed
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PostSubject: Re: Akimichi, Sukai [Suna Genin] Akimichi, Sukai [Suna Genin] EmptySun 09 Jan 2011, 9:44 pm

remove all B-Rank jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Akimichi, Sukai [Suna Genin] Akimichi, Sukai [Suna Genin] EmptySun 09 Jan 2011, 9:48 pm

I would enjoy keeping them. Considered the Genin Choji uses them, the same way I plan to. With the Akimichi pills. These pills are canon, and all the b ranked jutsu are as well. And secondly, these pills cause extreme pain and poison the body. The last one can kill the user if taken, if I don't seek medical attention.
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PostSubject: Re: Akimichi, Sukai [Suna Genin] Akimichi, Sukai [Suna Genin] EmptyMon 10 Jan 2011, 2:16 am

Genin cannot use B-ranks, that is just how it is. We are not the canon.
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PostSubject: Re: Akimichi, Sukai [Suna Genin] Akimichi, Sukai [Suna Genin] EmptyMon 10 Jan 2011, 2:19 am

Removed 2 out of the 3 jutsu. Colored last B rank red.
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PostSubject: Re: Akimichi, Sukai [Suna Genin] Akimichi, Sukai [Suna Genin] EmptyMon 10 Jan 2011, 4:56 am

i see nothing wrong with it. Except for your special characteristics. Have them in third person and also we need the Specialties in percents not just 1.5 times etc
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unless anyone objects approved
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