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Basic Information:

Name: Kyuusho , Jiyuu.
Secondary Title: Kuro no Shinigami, Consumer of all meats and Polymath Pragmatist

Age: 19
Gender: Male

Physical Appearance:
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Like his twin, they range around the same height but that is where the comparative ends. Jiyuu has never been one to be weak in both body and mind. His physique is as what the picture shows. Polar opposite to his brother, he has more of a solid and muscular physique ranging from 155 pounds to 160 respectively. Towards the trunk area, there are multiple remnants of what appears to be scars from the cuts. One can tell that they are from slash marks to do the darkening of his skin on said marks around his obliques, upper and lower abdomens. There are more faded marks on his lower back where the slash marks are shorter and bundled together like whip marks rather than the longer marks on the front.

His arms are usually covered in white bandage. His left side has the most of its side covered up. Half of his fingers are wrapped while the fingertips are left untouched. Both right and left palms, wrist and part of his arm are covered. He originally wanted to keep these bandages in order to make sure his skin wouldn’t break when he punched. This original plan has failed him but he continues to wrap his hands and arms up. His left bicep and triceps are also covered with bandages as well and he’ll rarely put a patch on his shoulder. What’s interesting is the fact that sometimes he’ll walk around in nothing but his bare feet. This gives the bottom of his foot very coarse but very durable. His guardian has commented that his foot (when he is kicked in the face unexpectedly) feels like the surface of a stone.

He has an attractive face (much to his guardian’s surprise). The color of his eyes is that of sapphire and his hair, a raven black that seems to spike downward naturally. The jaw line of his face is narrow and when he smiles (either genuinely or coyly) he has some type of an effect on the opposite sex.

In his casual attire, he wears a tank top ranging from a wide variety of blue (navy blue is his favorite color but he tends to wear a black tank top just because he has a large amount). When the weather is respectively nice, he’ll just wear that around with a jet black pants and boots. It was mention that he sometimes walks around with just his bare feet. This has gotten him into trouble in the past when they asked him to leave the premise of said establishment but over time they just accepted it and don’t even bother with it. Out of respect (his respect, not theirs) he’ll bandage up his feet to make it look like he’s wearing shoes or socks. Underneath his pants and shirt, he wears a body armor that holds onto weights.

His mission attire has him with a covering over his mouth and over his head (in the most popular color black mined you) only seeing his eyes. The jounin attire of Kumogakure is what his upper and lower body presents during such but the only thing that a person see is either his sapphire eyes or his shadow black eyes. Either way, it’s quite fearsome.

Personality:
With an action, there is a reaction. With life, there is death. Through creation, there is destruction. He believes that there are some simplistic philosophies in the universe that simply have dual relationships that are not necessarily against each other, but rather co-exist. Even as a young man, he believes that this exist because there is something out there that allows it to exist like it. Nothing happens for a reason and nothing happens without consequence (Well, some things at least).

With this, Jiyuu varies with the ideal. Yes, nothing happens without a consequence but without the risk, he would be balled up in a corner afraid to do anything out of the fear of such negative consequences. Because of this he always, but reasonably, takes risk in life. He’s not one to regret his decisions. If there is death, then why fear it? Why not embrace it? If there is destruction, rather than avoid, go towards. This makes creation and life all the better to enjoy. With that said, Jiyuu is one to enjoy life’s pleasures without regret. Though, depending on how you view the pleasures of life, it is certainly different than the norm. He enjoys the hot days in the mountains and the cool nights where the moon shines. He loves taking long walks around the village; not having anything in mind, just the feel of walking soothes Jiyuu’s mind. He enjoys sleeping during the day and waking at night and vice versa. He is one to enjoy whatever it is he enjoys.

At a surface level, Jiyuu could come off as someone who is at ease and, as one may put, cooler than thou attitude. I say this because Jiyuu is one to smile that coy fox smile in some situations. He can make a comment that can sometimes be as wise as a sage or deadpan snarky. He’s settled in the mind most of the time, there are things that do upset him, and after all he is human. But with his relaxed and stress free mind, he usually shrugs it off without thought and he’s back to being his calm and most of the time, cheery self.

Recently, Jiyuu has tried not to speak out the first thing that comes to mind. When he was younger, usually the first thing that he thought comes out without much hesitation. It was like his mouth had a mind of its own and the conscience mind of Jiyuu was agreeing along with this other mind. Oh, he’ll still make remarks concerning something at the right moment but he’ll give a slight moment of thought (Not much ) before speaking out.

His actions are at times, questionable. When he was a teenager, he’s been one to not particularly start fights but rather just get into physical fights for the excitement. He didn’t really care who would fight him, strong or weak. He just wanted to fight to get the thrill; that primal bloodlust that was usually fed. Win or lose, he wanted that thrill; that carnal pleasure of feeding the adrenaline in him. When he was a small child, he was use to all the fighting he received from his mentor/father figure and only enjoyed it more and more as the bloodlust of his Sookato was always satisfied.

When it comes to intelligence, he seems to choose his fist not because he is a mindless man. On the contrary, he’s very intelligent for his age and among other prodigies minds around the world. He chooses to use his fist for talking only out of simplicity. Brilliant as he may be, he is, again, a relax type of fellow. He can deduce, solve, plan and give proper strategy but he tends to keep that at arms lengths due to his laidback and carefree approach.. When it comes to strategy however, it appears to be random. The random of some of his moves, attacks, etc. are likely due to make those around him confuse or so that they can’t follow what the hell he is trying to accomplish. Random though it may be, it’s this type of randomness that allows him to keep his opponent at a distance when it comes to intelligence.

With the known fact that he is a bastard child, he hasn’t come to a proper conclusion on the matter. A child knowing he is a bastard does have repercussions on a child’s psyche. If Jiyuu was the typical child, he would certainly be a dreadful person. Instead, he took that negative reinforcement and used that to get stronger both as a shinobi and as a person. Whomever he was a son to, they certainly couldn’t raise him. (This is what he thinks) For whatever the reasoning behind him being an orphan, he doesn’t hold anything against them. In short, he’s taking it well and without regret (Unlike his twin brother unbeknownst to him).

He tends to do things by himself only because he has gotten use to doing things by himself. A lone wolf mined you. Because of this, you can tend to find him doing things on his own like training and at times eating alone. He finds clarity when he is alone though this doesn’t mean he is anti-social in any way, shape or form. He is, in fact, quite an interesting person to talk to (depending on what he talks about and what you talk about). When he is social, he’ll act social. He can be the life of the party or just sitting back and relax. Either way, he is not anti-social.


Likes: Meats. All kinds of meats.
Dislikes: All sweet desserts and products under the grain family.

Catch Phrase(s):
“To be ruled by fear is to be a servant”
“ Resquicat in pace”
"This ain't no game!"
"I am HIGHLY upset"
"Where the hell is the meat?"


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PostSubject: Re: Kyuusho, Jiyuu [Kumo Jounin] Kyuusho, Jiyuu [Kumo Jounin] EmptyFri 14 Jan 2011, 5:49 am

Clan:
Sookato Clan
Rank Information:

Rank: Jounin

Village Affiliation: Kumogakure


Special Information:

Character Speciality:

Main: Taijutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity:

Main: Lightning
Sub: Fire
Special Characteristics:

Life’s Pragmatist
His sense of honor is always questioned. Jiyuu has always been one to play dirty. He never saw it as playing dirty because if the person has a sense of honor that is senseless in his mind, he is just taking advantage of such said honor. He fights dirty in order to survive and never holds off with any sense of dignity towards his opponents. Examples would be throwing dirt in someone’s eye, a swift kick to the groin or to other vital weak points, striking when the enemy isn’t looking; Pragmatists are usually quick thinkers and they love to improvise on the spot, planning according as things happen. His quick decisive thinking makes him susceptible at being an expert at pragmatism.

Flexibility
For his height, weight and body type he is surprisingly flexible. This flexibility allows more limber and smooth movements when it comes to hand to hand combat. This also lessens the chance of pulling muscles and there is less build up of lactic acid with said muscles when overworking.

Extreme Physical Prowess
Which much surprise, his body has been through the shredder, decimator, annihilator (add more words here). Jiyuu is a polymath when it comes down to kinesthetic abilities(Which includes acrobatics, endurance, raw speed, raw strength, balance and general awareness). Much like others who are taijutsu experts and masters, he relatively tries to put some baggage on his body (body weights) in order for his body to adapt to the weight. When his body adapts over a period of time, he ups the weight in order to keep his body at top strength. He has excellent balance and can keep hold of his own weight and other baggage (four times his body weight) in high intense situations. Even with the extra baggage, his speed and strength are not hindered.

When fighting, he can add in alot of flips, cartwheels, rolling, vaulting, kongs and other necessary acrobatic moves in order to move efficiently and effectively. When moving, those of the untrain eye will have a difficult time reacting to his speed and reaction time.


Heightened Chakra
Jiyuu, being of the son of Taku Sookato, has an increase of 50% in his chakra reserves compared to the average shinobi of his rank. Furthermore his chakra is colored black to reflect the potency and power of it.

Large Appetite
He has a knack for eating a lot of food and consuming it all at once. Due to his body needing extra calories to store due to his active lifestyle, he tends to eat more fatty goods and meats. Since fats take longer to burn, this is the ideal food he prefers rather than starchy foods


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Skill Information:

Non-Elemental

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Styles of Taijutsu


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Taijutsu Techniques

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Raiton techniques
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Katon Ninjutsu
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Background Information

History:

Birth Arc
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Academy Arc

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Genin Arc

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Chuunin Arc

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Jounin Arc.

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Extreme Physical Prowess
Which much surprise, his body has been through the shredder, decimator, annihilator (add more words here). Jiyuu is a polymath when it comes down to kinesthetic abilities. Much like others who are taijutsu experts and masters, he relatively tries to put some baggage on his body (body weights) in order for his body to adapt to the weight. When his body adapts over a period of time, he ups the weight in order to keep his body at top strength. He has excellent balance and can keep hold of his own weight and other baggage (four times his body weight) in high intense situations. Speed Increase: 40% faster than the average jounin. Strength Increase: 35% stronger than the average jounin
Remove your percentage increases from here. You can detail it but % bonuses for the speed/strength are incredibly common and overused.

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Heightened Chakra
Jiyuu, being of the son of Taku Sookato, has an increase of 50% in his chakra reserves compared to the average shinobi of his rank. Furthermore his chakra is colored black to reflect the potency and power of it.
Do you have permission from clan creator to gain the highest potential chakra increase from their clan? seeing as their are varying levels I would like consent from them please. Smile

- Regarding your styles. In the jutsu section we have a Martial Styles template and a small guide on it. So please could you reformat your styles into US template. Also, you will have to cut the number down also. For a single person to be skilled in all of those styles isn't very realistic and is over the top.

- Can you please place some ranges on your raiton technique's.

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I give him permission to use the full potential of the clan.
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PostSubject: Re: Kyuusho, Jiyuu [Kumo Jounin] Kyuusho, Jiyuu [Kumo Jounin] EmptySat 15 Jan 2011, 7:53 am

-As to regard to the Raiton techniques, (with the exception of the ligthning surge is which fifteen meters max) these are all close range. No extentsion of lightning out five meters, ten meters etc. If you can imagine the lightning armor for A on the Fourth Raikage only mine is down to a minor and specific part of the body.

-As regard to the styles, my character is only a master in two styles which are Jeet Kune Do and Muay Thai; he is proficient in Capoeira, Champuru Kendo and Hateshiganai-ryu no Kujikeruken

-As requested, I removed the percentages

-As requested, I placed the Taijutsu styles in the proper format
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Regarding the styles I wouldn't think someone would have a such a large array of styles under their belt. Especially when you have no listed technique's natural or chakra based under any of your known styles. I would say reduce it to two styles maximum.
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The reason I have five styles is because it is an incorporations of style. In understanding the philosophy of having "no style" one incorporates styles picked up over time.

In one case was the martial school I took. (one that I'm familar with is Tae Kwon Do) This specific school didn't just have related techniues to its just it's style. It incorporated martial arts from china, mainly Kung Fu; it incorporated Judo with grappling and throwing and also Karate that was involving high kicks. Western boxing seem to be an aparent style that I saw and it also incorporated lethal points on the body to dispose the body quickly

Does this mean that a person in this school is a master in those different styles? No. Proficient enough to have a basic understanding of styles but not a master. I put those techniques down because I didn't want to put a generalize martial art because good martial artist don't limit themselves to mastering a style without taking it to another level. Good martial arts adapt.

I picked Jeet Kune Do and Muay Thai as his mastery but incorporated styles like Capeoira, Hidden Snake fist and Champuru Kendo to these styles to make it a better style. Again, not master of said three styles but only adding on to the previous two
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No it does not mean that in real life, but on a Naruto RPG where taijutsu styles should be created for the Narutoverse not just real life styles trying to be adapted. Do you see what I mean? You seem to have a great RL knowledge so I encourage you to make your own taijutsu style using both your RL and Naruto knowledge.
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Fair enough.

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Taijutsu style of Butoukai Mugen and Shinryakuteki both made up and put into the Narutoverse as requested
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