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YuskeFudo
YuskeFudo

Age : 27
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PostSubject: Mysterious Prankster Mysterious Prankster EmptyFri 07 Jan 2011, 9:39 am
Character Name: Aburame Fugi [Eg. Nakamura, Arashii]
Rank: Genin
Village: Kiri
Mission Bulletin: https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/t2070-pre-approved-c-ranks
Mission Link: https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/t2826-mysterious-prankster#29725
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Adam

Age : 31
Posts : 8965

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PostSubject: Re: Mysterious Prankster Mysterious Prankster EmptySat 08 Jan 2011, 1:02 pm
Official Grading: 4/10 + 4/10 (C-rank) = 8/20
Unofficial Grading: 7/20
Comments: Word Count could be higher. The quality isn't great, you have spelling, grammar and even coding issues; regarding how you coloured your speeches. However, this is to be expected; since your new to roleplaying, or at least roleplaying on Ultimate Shinobi. Your potential is great and if you stick to doing missions for a while I'm sure your skills with get better. Good Work.

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