Death to a Disgrace (Suicide)

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[SUICIDE - Please approved]

Temi slowly walked towards the wilderness. The sands of death, or at least in his case. He had as little gear as possible only carrying the thin cloth he used as a garment to elegant occasions. With him were too hid twin blades which before had protected him in all situations. It seemed that today they would be his downfall.

The Asakura mainland had gotten word of Temi’s disqualification and his lower cousin’s win by default. How could a lower, like Isama get further than he could? He was frustrated beyond belief. He then slowly started to run, like the wind he ran. Further and further. Faster and faster. No stopping, no going back not after the disgrace he brought on his loving and caring father.

Eventually, Temi grew tired and dropped onto the floor, where he lay exhausted and his life force grew faint. Fainter than it had ever been before. His eye lids also grew weary and eventually shut. And for two hours that dragged on, crazily he was just still, like a statue.

And two hours later he became conscious again an after focusing his chakra he stood up erect and drew his sharp and destructive blades. He then extended his arms to the hilt and tip of the swords were point evilly at him. “Goodbye Dad, goodbye Suna.” He quietly whispered as he drove the sharp, silver blade into his tired body.

A thump sounded and he dropped to the floor. He then lost all his delicate life force as he lay in a pool of his own, red blood. Temi was gone, his body impaled by two medium sized blades. However, this didn’t matter because he was about to meet his mother.

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Temporarily Denying this suicide for the following reason: lack of detail. This barely scrapes over the post requirement for a Genin and I say that when suiciding the post must be detailed and better yet, creative. Not missing key details and just stabbing yourself with a weapon. It's so overused. Secondary Note, in character you weren't disqualified from the Chuunin Exams, I wish you had read the post I left there after the match, I clearly wrote a small roleplay of what transpired during the match.