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DarkFox
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| Subject: Inuzuka, Sōdaina [Suna Genin] Mon 10 Jan 2011, 1:43 am | |
| Basic Information: Name: Sōdaina Inuzuka Secondary Title: DarkFox Age: 14 Gender: Male Physical Appearance:
It Weighing 165 pounds, Sōdaina is a really strong guy! He is 5 feet 10 inches. His gorgeous thick hazel hair is highlighted black and falls to his neck. Under sunlight his hazel hair can look very light or very dark, depending on where the sunlight is mostly shining on his head. In doors or in low light conditions, his hair has the appearance of a light shade of brown. And unlike some guys, he keeps his hair neat.
Sōdaina has a gorgeous tan complexion. His enticing honey brown eyes are something that anyone could find themselves staring into with great mystery behind them. They claim to lure females in like crazy, so watch out! Sōdaina usually finds himself wearing a black form fitting biker jacket with a fuzz lined hood. Instead of standard sandals, he prefers to wear running shoes.
Unseen to everyone except Initaki and the Inuzuka clan members, are the many scars that adorn his back like a tribal design. These lightly bulging scars are the reminder of the hatred he experienced after his parents death in his village. At times the scars can look almost raw when he is enraged or very pale when weak. He wears his clothes in a way that can hide the scars he suffered so as to dissuade questions about his childhood. The fear of having people know about them has prevented him from logically seeking out a doctor who can heal them. Personality: Sōdaina is a very sarcastic guy but he is kind to everyone he meets; he's a very helpful person and helps almost anyone.His favorite phrase to use when others are annoying is "Go screw yourself". He's always been very outgoing but is a bit withdrawn due to his childhood. He can be serious, but at other times he can be very funny or... perverted. On the other hand, he doesn't let anything get in his way. He is definately one of the most persistant people you will meet!
He has a very good amount of patience towards a lot of things, except when he knows its a gift. Sōdaina has the tendency to "wear" a mask of neutrality so as to not get dragged into problems and to keep his feelings in check. He doesn't mind fan girls as long as their respectful and know how to give him personal space, otherwise he will run for his life. Sometimes Sōdaina can be annoyed rather easily, if you press on about his childhood; which he seems to have a hard time remembering anything if at all. If he's feeling insecure about something, he has the tendency to act somewhat detached from life which may or may not worry those around him depending purely on their understanding of him. Catch Phrase: Go screw yourself Clan: Inuzuka Clan Traits:
This clan has a large infatuation with the dog species. Rarely will a clan member be seen with out their canine companion which all of them have. All of their clan jutsu incorporate the usage of their dogs and could almost be considered another ninja with the level they are utilized at, quite often using the same jutsu as their human master. The dogs are often regular sized puppies, nothing to large from the beginning, and are usually in this stage for the duriation of the time the ninja is a genin, and part of their chunin. When the ninja is about 15, the puppy will go through a giant growth spurt, at least quadrupling in size. These dogs are bred specially and do not age in normal dog years and can live as long as a human. This was done so that a clansmen would not have to constantly replace companions because they often grow very attached to their dogs.
Inuzaka clan members also take on some very dog like characteristics in their body and also in their personality. Typically they are very brash and up front, being very animalistic and instinctual. This can cause them to come off as confrontational. Their canines are sharper then most, resembling that of dogs, and they have increased senses of smell, being able to track like a dog with little effort. They also always have red face paint on, which is the symbol of their clan.
* Must have Taijutsu and Ninjutsu as specialties
Rank Information: Rank: Genin. Village Affiliation: Sunagakure no Sato
Special Information: Character Speciality: Ninjutsu,Taijutsu Main: Taijutsu Sub: Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Earth and Fire Main: Fire Sub: Earth Special Characteristics: decent chakra reserves paired with really good stamina for his age and rank. Chakra reserves are around a good 75%, while his reserves are at a somewhat incredulous 85%
Skill Information: Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them. Jutsu Template:
Other Useful Jutsus - Quote :
- Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Rank: E Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kai - Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the
Academy Jutsu - Quote :
- Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Ninjutsu Name: Shunshin no Jutsu "Body Flicker Technique" Type: Ninjutsu, General skill Rank: D Element: N/a Description: A simple jutsu that allows the user to "flicker" or teleport out of sight and to a different location. A puff of smoke can be added to disguise the users movements. There are several variations of the jutsu that are used in the hiden villages. Suna for example, uses sand when they teleport. Medical use/Bastardized use: [Only add this if the technique is a Medical jutsu. Describe what qualifies this jutsu as medical. What is it's medical use or how was it bastardized from its original medical use, as in the case of poisons, etc.]
Inuzuka Jutsu's
- Quote :
- Name: Shikyaku no Jutsu "Four Legged Technique"
Type: Ninjutsu,Taijutsu Rank: D Element: N/a Description: This supplementary D-rank jutsu grants the user the animalistic form of a four legged animal like a nin-dog. This grants the user speed, strength, and increased reflexes. Other than that, the users body is slightly more altered with wild eyes with slits, animal-like claws, longer canine teeth and an aggressive attitude. Medical use/Bastardized use: [Only add this if the technique is a Medical jutsu. Describe what qualifies this jutsu as medical. What is it's medical use or how was it bastardized from its original medical use, as in the case of poisons, etc.] Name: Tunneling Fang Type: Taijutsu Rank: D Element: - Description: The user spins at a ferocious speed and delivers many powerful beast-like attacks when contact is made with the target. This attack is done alone but it can be done with a partner, making it more effective.
Name: Fang Over Fang Type: Taijutsu Rank: C Element: - Description: The user and his partner spin at a ferocious speed and deliver many powerful beast-like attacks when contact is made with the target. The force of this attack is strong enough to drill through stone. This attack can be done alone, although it is less effective.
Name: Man Beast Clone Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D Element: - Description: A modified version/mix of a Transformation Technique and a clone technique, this jutsu, unique to the Inuzuka clan, allows a canine-user to transform their animal companion into a perfect copy of themselves. When combined with the Four Legs Technique, the user and the animal become virtually impossible to tell apart, since both act equally animalistic. Like any transformation, the jutsu can be broken by identifying and attacking the animal, thus dispelling the transformation.
Doton Ninjutsu - Quote :
- Name: Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Doton Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him.
Name: Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Doton Description: This technique changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. The user can pinpoint where they are, despite being underground, by sensing the magnetic forces. They can also sense what is happening on the surface and use that information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. One can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy can't reach.
Name: Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Doton Description: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave. A good note to keep in mind, this jutsu has an efficient radius of 15ft with an additional 15ft depending one's chakra reserves and control.
Potential minimum radius by rank: Genin: 15> Chuunin: 30> Jonin: 45> Special Jonin: 60> Anbu: 75> Kage: 90>
Name: Splitting Earth Opposite Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C-S Element: Doton Description: This jutsu has the same usage as Tearing Earth Turning Palm, but except the earth splits in opposite directions, leaving a trench in the middle. Depending on how long the user spends on expending chakra in this trench effects the depth of the trench. Obviously, the trench gets deeper and steeper the more chakra expended.
C Rank Chakra Expended: Trench is fifteen feet deep, and has a 60 degree incline. B Rank Chakra Expended: Trench is twenty-five feet deep, and has a 75 degree incline. A Rank Chakra Expended: Trench is forty feet deep, and has an 80 degree incline. S Rank Chakra Expended: Trench is fifty feet deep and has a 90 degree incline.
Weapon Template:
- Quote :
- Name: Unmei o kyōka "Intensified Doom"
Quantity: 1 Rank: C Appearance: Unmei o kyōka or "Intensified Doom" has the appearance of any standard Wakizashi, from its material build to the plain blue collor of its hilt and sheath. Assuming this sword is just like any other can be the biggest mistake anyone could make when it comes to Unmei o kyōka. This sword has a container built within the inside of the blade which can allow for oil to be filled within it. With a click of a button on the hilt, the oil can be unleashed and doused on the enemy, a simple kanton jutsu, and the enemy will be burned alive shortly. Special Abilities/Characteristics: by pressing a button on the hilt while swinging, It can douse enemies with oil so when kanton jutsu is used, it'll burn them quicker. Origin: Was simply purchased from a Blacksmith. Items Item Template:
- Quote :
- Name: Medical ointment
Rank: D Type: Medical Natural Abilities: standard med-kit
Name: Vibrating Wire Rank: D Type: Supplement Natural Abilities: The vibration wire is very much like normal wire in all respects but one: it is much more prone to vibrations. This allows the wire to vibrate at a much larger range of frequencies than most other weapons. It does not vibrate on its own and is very prone to snapping if hit by another weapon, due to the large amount of vibrating.
Background Information
History:
Kekkei Genkai: -
The Inuzuka clan (犬塚一族, Inuzuka Ichizoku) or Inuzuka family (犬塚家, Inuzuka-ke) is known for their use of dogs (some clan members prefer wolves) as fighting companions. Clan members are apparently given their own canine partner or partners when they reach a certain age. Thereafter, the shinobi and his/her dog(s) are practically inseparable. Clan members have distinctive red fang markings on their cheeks, animalistic eyes, and enlarged canine teeth. It would seem that due to the bond between a Inuzuka clan member and their canine partner(s), their chakra is allowed to mix and is shared between them, adding a feral appearance to the human partners, and makes a bond between then that affords them the use of the clan's collaboration-style techniques, such as the Dual Piercing Fang technique.
Life Story: ~Early Years~
Sōdaina was born to a small town, somewhere along the path between Konoha no Sato and Sunagakure no Sato. He lived with his parents in peace until a war broke out when he was barely six years old. All those in the town feared for their very own lives as many were killed at the hands of the enemy without cause. Sōdaina's parents were murdered by one of the nin in front of him. As he went into shock, the ninja left the kunai used to kill the parents with in the boys hand. Many of those who lived resented him and hated him under the assumption that he was the killer.
In the midst of the sadness and loneliness that accompanied him in his home town, Sōdaina left the town in hopes of finding someone; anyone who would care for him and help aleviate the pain his heart felt. For days, weeks, and months he travelled through the ninja world, without a clue of what to do. the ninja world, without a clue of what to do. He would steal, trick, and deceive others to get food until he was caught and forced to flee into the forest where he was lost for days until an Inuzuka ran into him on the way back to Konoha. The Inuzuka clan member offered the boy the chance of survival and without question he followed to the land of Konohagakure no sato, were he was welcomed by the Inuzuka with open arms after learning of his rough childhood. Unseen to everyone except the Inuzuka clan members however, are the many scars that adorn his back like a tribal design. These lightly bulging scars are the reminder of the hatred he experienced after his parents death in his village. At times the scars appeared to look raw when he got enraged or very pale when weak (provided he didn't have a shirt on, but as the Inuzuka are wild and untamed, he usually didn't wear a shirt inside the compound sometimes). Soon though he started to wear his clothes in a way that could hide the scars he suffered so as to dissuade questions about his childhood. The fear of having people know about them has prevented him from logically seeking out a doctor who can heal them. No one in the Inuzuka clan told him that scars were considered a sign of survival of the harshest moments in ones life.
He trained and lived with the Inuzuka's for quite some years before the start of his academy years would begin. The leader of the Inuzuka clan asked him if he wanted to stay in Konoha or go train in another Hidden Village, with the company of a Inuzuka clan's member to which Sōdaina agreed to; as it presented the chance to see a different place. When asked what village he wanted to study in he gave it thought. Eventually he settled on Sunagakure no Sato, the hidden village that happened to be somewhat near his home town. The clan leader called in Initake Inuzuka, barely out of the academy and assigned him the mission of being his guard and trainer while he stayed in Suna. Initially he argued as to why he had to watch over Sōdaina instead of focusing on his ninja career that had just begun, to which the leader simply told him that it would help with his anger management problem. Begrudgingly he accepted the mission in the end and the two said their goodbyes before leaving for Suna.
~Academy Years~
During the academy times, Sōdaina made some close friends and avoided fan girls at all times. He kept to himself and did all the work required from him without complaint. He studied hard not only at school, but with his trainer and friend Initake. Although the two didn't get along because of Initake's attitude; eventually with time the two became close allies who know they could rely on each other and confide their problems with. He learned many things during his time in the academy such as the Taijutsu stances and other basic skills. Truthfully though, he learned far more from Initake regarding clan jutsus and the clan's special Taijutsu stances. He proved he was superb with Taijutsu and Ninjutsu. This rhythm of training went on until Sōdaina graduated the academy as the rookie of the year for which he received many honors for accomplishing such a feat, even a personal congratulations from the Kazekage himself! He was even rewarded with his own pup courtesy of Initake, a Collie breed dog; perfect for hunting down enemies. He was excited beyond belief and named his Collie dog, Meiyo (Honor). And with that his ninja career would be off to an interesting start...
Role-Play Sample:
Sōdaina breathed heavily as he blocked a blow from his "sensei" Initake, as he was mercilessly forced onto the defensive courtesy of his attacker. Initake relentlessly assaulted Sōdaina with strong hits to his torso in an effort to wear him out or knock him out. Decided to step it up a notch, he threw a kunai sharply aimed at Sōdaina's stomach to test how far his reaction timing was developing. He was impressed to say the least, as Sōdaina rolled to the side of the projectile; his hand pulling it out of the air. When he made back on his feet, he lunged at Initake with the kunai only to have it pulled out of his hand by an arm lock that forced him to drop or break his arm from the pressure.
His persistence kept him from giving up as he dropped low to leg sweep Initake, who vaulted over him to avoid the kick. Initake quickly kneed Sōdaina in the back, sending him flying for a feet or two before he stabilized himself in mid-air, landing a outstretched crouch. Initake grinned as he could tell the cub was ready to break from the exhaustion he felt during their hour and a half long spar. Wanting to end things quickly, he dashed at Sōdaina, readying a finishing blow to spare the cub the effort. Sōdaina for his part, just stood there catching his breath, ignoring the fact that Initake was quickly zeroing in on him; eager to finish the spar. Just as Initake was ready to punch the unaware boy in the face, Sōdaina snapped his eyes open before sidestepping and delivering a decently powered chop to the back of his head, knocking him out momentarily. Sōdaina sat down breathing heavy, a smirk present on his face at his outrageously lucky victory of his brother-like-figure. When Initake came to, he was greeted to the wide grin of Sōdaina, and couldn't help himself to grin before patting the cub on the back and congratulating him on his victory.
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| | | DarkFox
Age : 30 Posts : 9
| Subject: Re: Inuzuka, Sōdaina [Suna Genin] Mon 10 Jan 2011, 3:52 am | |
| Name: Meiyo "Honor"
Nickname: Sukai
Age: six months old.
Species: Dog
Appearance: Meiyo is a six month old pure Collie breed dog who has the appearance of an innocent dog. However, don't let his appearance fool you as he is equally vicious as any other Inuzuka dog. He has somewhat log fur that is mated down to keep his body aerodynamic. His fur is mostly black with a slight oval of white towards the front, while his paws and underbelly are white as snow. A pinched oval of white travels symmetrically down his muzzle, parting at the tips of the black fur that frames his muzzle, in the shape of the Inuzuka clan symbol.
Personality: First off, Meiyo is a very calm and friendly dog for a hunter type breed. He is usually very aware of those he is around and is always attentive to anything that could be amiss. If anyone he knows is upset or distressed, he usually injects himself into the situation to help make things better; even if the person he's helping can understand him. He tends to be very calculating for a dog, always keeping tabs on what others say or do. In a way he profiles people he meets so that in case he has any doubts of any given person, he can report them to Sōdaina so that any traitors can be sniffed out efficiently.
Background: Meiyo was gifted to Sōdaina by Initake and the Inuzuka clan shortly after his stellar graduation of the Academy over in Sunagakura no Sato. The two were able to hit off and get to know each other over the days and weeks that went by. It was very normal owner and dog friendship with the exception that the Sōdaina and Meiyo were actually capable of communicating with each other thanks to the gifted abilities of the Inuzuka clan. They had their highs and lows and were pretty close, until Meiyo fell into a river during a spring morning while he was walking around the town. Sōdaina was quick to hear the three month old puppy crying for help.
Sōdaina threw himself into the river carelessly and tried beyond his abilities to catch up with the pup who was quickly drowning as the river became more powerful. Before he could pull the puppy towards him, Meiyo drowned which forced Sōdaina to dive underneath the water and pull him up. He swam for several minutes with Meiyo, who could only spasm and twitch against his masters body; his small undeveloped body going into shock. When Sōdaina made it to the river bank, he quickly laid Meiyo down before checking sure he wasn't dying. When he concluded that he had only suffered delayed shock, he sighed in relief and wrapped the dog in his jacket, running home to get Meiyo to warmth. Since that day, the two became quite literally inseparable; always there for the other at all times.
Jutsu's:
- Quote :
- Name: Man Beast Clone
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D Element: - Description: A modified version/mix of a Transformation Technique and a clone technique, this jutsu, unique to the Inuzuka clan, allows a canine-user to transform their animal companion into a perfect copy of themselves. When combined with the Four Legs Technique, the user and the animal become virtually impossible to tell apart, since both act equally animalistic. Like any transformation, the jutsu can be broken by identifying and attacking the animal, thus dispelling the transformation.
Name: Tunneling Fang Type: Taijutsu Rank: D Element: - Description: The user spins at a ferocious speed and delivers many powerful beast-like attacks when contact is made with the target. This attack is done alone but it can be done with a partner, making it more effective.
Name: Fang Over Fang Type: Taijutsu Rank: C Element: - Description: The user and his partner spin at a ferocious speed and deliver many powerful beast-like attacks when contact is made with the target. The force of this attack is strong enough to drill through stone. This attack can be done alone, although it is less effective.
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| | | Elder Sage
Age : 31 Posts : 1118
| Subject: Re: Inuzuka, Sōdaina [Suna Genin] Mon 10 Jan 2011, 6:08 am | |
| I love the voice you add to your writing, its very reader friendly.
But back on topic;
- Quote :
- Special Characteristics:
decent chakra reserves paired with really good stamina for his age and rank. Please provide a example or percentage as to how much extra stamina and chakra reserves your character has.
- Quote :
- Name: Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Doton Description: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave. Provide how much ground area is effected by this technique. |
| | | DarkFox
Age : 30 Posts : 9
| Subject: Re: Inuzuka, Sōdaina [Suna Genin] Mon 10 Jan 2011, 11:07 pm | |
| I've fixed both errors and I'm flattered by your comment. I'm usually told I'm a very good writer but I never had anyone tell me I could really give them a good voice. |
| | | Blaize
Posts : 830
| Subject: Re: Inuzuka, Sōdaina [Suna Genin] Mon 10 Jan 2011, 11:27 pm | |
| 1) You need to add way more detail under your special char. If you want look at mine or elder Sage's char app to see how we use and describe our Special Characteristics.
2) Under skill information take this out
Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them. and the "other useful jutsu"
3) fix your quote with your jutsu.
I.E
1)start a quote before your water walking jutsu and end the quote before the word "Academy Jutsu"
2)Then open a quote right after the word academy jutsu and end it before the word "Ninjutsu" that was bolder.
3)After that for the quote that started in your clan's jutsu end the quote at the end of man beast clone jutsu.
4)Right after I want you to add a quote after the word Doton that was bolded and end the quote before the word. "Weapon temple"
5) Next change the ending of your quote for items right after the description of your vibrating wire.
6) Then quote your jutsu for your pet as well.
7) Your weapon need to add more details in special char.
In your Body flicker jutsu and the jutsu right after that take out the "medical uses" since they are not needed in those jutsu.
{{Sorry if you dont understand this I was typing to fast and my post was deleted so i had to write it again}} |
| | | DarkFox
Age : 30 Posts : 9
| Subject: Re: Inuzuka, Sōdaina [Suna Genin] Mon 10 Jan 2011, 11:51 pm | |
| It is now most definitely fixed |
| | | Blaize
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| Subject: Re: Inuzuka, Sōdaina [Suna Genin] Tue 11 Jan 2011, 3:17 am | |
| unless anyone else sees a problem i say approved |
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