Naka, Insei Hitome [Sunagakure Genin] (Complete)

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Basic Information:

Name:

Secondary Title:

Age:

Gender:

Physical Appearance:

Personality:

Catch Phrase:

“Bang”

Clan Information:

[list]Clan Name:
Naka
Clan Location:
Sand Village
Clan Traits:
Highly Adpet at earth ninjutsu
Kekkei Genkai:
n/a

History:

spoiler]泥[/spoiler]

At the Start this was an earth village clan but during the great ninja war the clan migrated and they were attacked by a group of anbu on the way to their new home almost an entire generation was killed but a 20 year old man survived and became the leader of the clan he married sand village clan head there for theclan was invited to come to the sand the head of the clan for the next generation was quite a powerful ninja after being in the sand village becuse Insei is a genius among his geneation he is very adapt with his Earth jutsu And Has honed it to usable ability
Clan Details:
closed

Rank Information:

Rank:

Village Affiliation:

Special Information:

[list]Character Speciality:
Main:Ninjutsu
Sub:Genjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
What element(s) your character possesses, no more than two
Main: Earth
Sub: Fire
Special Characteristics:

Skill Information:
Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them.

Quote :: Name:Retsudo Tenshou - Revolving Split Earth Palm
Rank:C
Type:
Element:
Description:Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it.

Name: Moguragakure no Jutsu - Mole Hiding Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Moguragakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to burrow into the ground and hide out of sight. This allows them to avoid attack or travel underground.

Name: Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.

Name: Dochuu Eigyo - Underground Fish Projection
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Dochuu Eigyo is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. Using the Bunshin, the ninja use the clones to confuse their enemies and then hide within the earth. From the shadows of the clones, the actual ninja can then attack their target.

Name:Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:
Element:
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name:Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:
Element:
Description:Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name:Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:
Element:
Description:Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element:
Description:Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.

Name:Kokohi no Jutsu - False Place Technique
Rank:C
Type:Genjutsu
Element:
Description:Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object.

NameMagen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique
Rank:C
Type:Genjutsu
Element:
Description:Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.

Name: doro kuro-n (MudClone)
Type: Ninjutsu,
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: When focusing Earth chakra and near a source of earth he can fuse together chakra and earth and make a clone being mud the contact will be a little sloppy but not enough to stop anything last two opponent posts other than that it’s a regular clone

Name:Doro hi kanpan (Mud fire cracker)
Type: Ninjutsu,
Rank: D
Element: Earth
Description:A small bomb is made with a hard earth shell and a mud inside after breaking the earth shell pieces heat up and cause the muddy water to turn in to steam only used for escaping USUALLY!! The drawback is that they cannot remotely destroy it it must be hit with such(Such as stomping intense punching ect.) impact to break. This bomb can be transformed into other items with henge no jutsu making a combo (Sometimes)

Name:Doro kabe (Mud wall)
Type: Ninjutsu,
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: with a Large amount of earth the user after handsigns can from a wall of mud with enough practice and chakara four walls can be created boxing his/her opponent in, this is a fromidible escape tactic

Name:Doro bugu (Mud armor)
Type: Ninjutsu,
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description:this jutsu covers the user in a thin layer of hardened mud. It covers the vital organs, as well as the upper arms, fore arms, shins, and anterior thighs. It won't cover the joints to maximize agility. The mud is thin but strong being able to block a kunai. By Dranked attacks it will block completly C ranked will weaken the armour but not destroy it B and ove can can crumble the armor

Name:Doro enban (Mud Disks)
Type: Ninjutsu,
Rank: D
Element: Earth
Description:After the materials are made thin disks from at the users hands and the sharpness depends on the rank and the amount also depends on the amount of chkara used they can be thrown at they are assharp as Throwing star

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Naka, Insei Hitome [Sunagakure Genin] (Complete) Ninja

I regret to tell you that mud is not a KKG, it is simple earth jutsu, as displayed by the third Hokage in his battle against Orochimaru. So please remove this as a clan, you can still have your custom mud jutsu but make them earth element and not clan based please.

Age : 28 Posts : 114

You have to elaborate on the Clan. What the KKG Does, you have to list jutsus, etc

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Mod said Mud aint KKG

Age : 28 Posts : 114

Quote :: Clan Information:

[list]Clan Name:
Naka
Clan Location:
Sand Village
Clan Traits:
Highly Adpet at earth ninjutsu
Kekkei Genkai:
N/A

History:
spoiler]泥[/spoiler]

At the Start this was an earth village clan but during the great ninja war the clan migrated and they were attacked by a group of anbu on the way to their new home almost an entire generation was killed but a 20 year old man survived and became the leader of the clan he married a waterfall rouge ninja there for the kids began to learn water ninjutsu the next generation was born with both water and earth ninjutsu in there blood the head of the clan for the next generation was quite a powerful ninja after being in the sand village becuse Insei is a genius among his geneation he is very adapt with his Earth jutsu And Has honed it to usable ability
Clan Details:
closed

~ I meant that clan

Posts : 38

Well I'm Ready

Age : 37 Posts : 1136

Still need to do more on your clan

Quote :: Name: doro kuro-n (MudClone)
Type: Ninjutsu,
Rank: C-S
Element: Earth
Description: When focusing Earth chakra and near a source of earth he can fuse together chakra and earth and make a clone which depending on the rank of the move at rank B and up the clone can absorb a hit from physical contact and explode much like Bunshin Bakuha - Shadow Clone Explosion but it can only explode on physical contact and the move only last two opponent posts until A rank other than that it’s a regular clone

The decription describes it akin to a B rank tech why there is it listed C-S

Quote :: Type: Ninjutsu,
Name:Doro hi kanpan (Mud fire cracker)
Type: Ninjutsu,
Rank: C-S
Element: Earth
Description:A small bomb is made with a hard earth shell and a mud inside after breaking the earth shell pieces heat up and cause the muddy water to turn in to steam only used for escaping USUALLY!! The drawback is that they cannot remotely destroy it it must be hit with intense impact to break unless A rank or higher when that happens it can be made with the shell so soft it can explode on contact with the wind this bomb can be transformed into other items with henge no jutsu making a deadly combo (Sometimes) A skilled ninja (Jonnin and up) can slip a posin bomb inside before closing it

The description needs reworking, its very hard to from it what you mean

Quote :: Name:Doro bugu (Mud armor)
Type: Ninjutsu,
Rank: C-S
Element: Earth
Description:A cloak of mud covers the user after fusing the materials when a attack come towards his/her body the person can concentrate chakara to that point and harden it to deflect it At C rank the earth crumbles away after contact B and up holds stronger resistance S is like steel to break through and hardens on its own because the chakara always runs through it

Once again please use a better description. It is not clear how effective this defensive Jutsu is

Quote :: Name:Doro enban (Mud Disks)
Type: Ninjutsu,
Rank: C-S
Element: Earth
Description:After the materials are made thin disks from at the users hands and the sharpness depends on the rank and the amount also depends on the amount that can be thrown at A rank they are sharp as Throwing star while C rank is about the sharpness of a butter knife can be used as a form of travel at B rank the user hardens the bottom while smoothing it out making a slick ride like a skate board you can't just glide on it

Description needs improving once again. I am not sure how making anything as sharp you already can own warrants an A rank though, on the whole seems and underpowered Jutsu

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Good?

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

Mud Armor sounds like jsut a Mud Mask, look on leafninja.com to see if you can find the description there, as im pretty sure its a jutsu.

Mud fire cracker... the description sems to utilize two elements. Fire being one as its necessary to create steam. May need to reword that again.

Your clan needs to be placed into the clan applications for approval, and needs much more description relating to it. (2 paragraphs for history atleast).

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So does my clan app come before my char app in approval?

Also whats jpn name mud mask can't find it

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

I mean look for the Mud armor description on leafninja.com, and yes, the clan would come before oyur character

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K no Prob

Posts : 414

You KKG is gonna need some more specifics as to what changes and how far.

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umm i don't follow Smile

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how much mud? range of mud? can you make mud? how much control over mud? etc.

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Oh bout that instead of having my clan approved i just got rid of kkg altogether so Dame ur comment i irrlevant but thks for check app

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

Needs two paragraphs for looks and personality.

longer history Very Happy

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Explain your special characteristic MUCH more thoroughly please, why is he a genius? Exact Iq? also if you want him to be a genius, I expect much cleaner, and more gramatically correct, and with better vocab- especially during dialogue. You want to be a genius you'll have to talk like one.

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i ment clan genius like sasuke

Posts : 191

since you no longer have clan, remove.

NameMagen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique
Rank:D
Type:Genjutsu
Element:
Description:Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.
-This is C-rank

Name:Doro bugu (Mud armor)
Type: Ninjutsu,
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description:this jutsu covers the user in a thin layer of hardened mud. It covers the vital organs, as well as the upper arms, fore arms, shins, and anterior thighs. It won't cover the joints to maximize agility. The mud is thin but strong being able to block a kunai.

-Is it possible to destroy this armor? What rank will destroy it?

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All Suna ranks are closed now.

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

Archived as Kakashi Jr started a new application thread.