Three New Fire Jutsu

Age : 29 Posts : 62

Made 3 new jutsus, Not too sure about the Fire Bomb jutsu so Please reply saying if their is any problem.

Name: Faiāraion (Fire Lion)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu makes a Lion appear that is completely made of Fire. The lion is around 2 foot high and 3 foot in length. Once the Lion is made the User can control the Lion. However there is a time limit. It can stay for around 6 minutes (5 Posts), Any longer and it will require giving more chakra to the Lion. It can go up to 12 feet away from the user, any further and it will disperse.
Link: https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/t2996-making-the-perfect-jutsu

Name: Faiā bakudan (Fire Bomb)
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Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu makes a Small fire ball ,like in the image above, the ball has Loads of fire compact in this small ball. This ball is around 2cm in Radius. The user can then make the ball go anywhere they wish. Once it’s in place the Fire can be released and when it is released it causes a Massive explosion. The explosion can cover up to 30 feet to 35 feet. However this jutsu is very tiring to use. It can cause the user to be slow-thinking and his/her reactions would be affected massively. But after 6 minutes (4 posts) from using this jutsu, the user can regain their reaction time.
Link: Work In Progress.

Name: Hi-ken (Fire Fist)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu covers the users hand in Fire. Once this is used the user can hit their opponent and cause devastating effects. However the main part of the chakra is used to protect the hand from the fire. Once the fire burns longer than 5 minutes (4 Posts) it can cause Burn marks on the hand unless the user uses another more chakra to protect his hands.
Link: https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/t2996-making-the-perfect-jutsu

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

First; Remove chakra points, we don't operate on that system.

Quote :: Name: Faiāraion (Fire Lion)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu makes a Lion appear that is completely made of Fire. The lion is around 2 foot high and 3 foot in length. This jutsu takes 3 chakra points to make. Once the Lion is made the User can control the Lion. However there is a time limit. It can stay for around 3-6 minutes, Any longer and it will require giving more chakra to the Lion. It can go up to 12 feet away from the user, any further and it will disperse.
Link: Work In Progress.

Convert your minutes to post count, seeing as how time runs differently in roleplay for every individual.

Quote :: Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu makes a Small fire ball ,like in the image above, the ball has Loads of fire compact in this small ball. This ball is around 2cm in Radius. The user can then make the ball go anywhere they wish. Once it’s in place the Fire can be released and when it is released it causes a Massive explosion. The explosion can cover up to 30 feet to 35 feet. However this jutsu is very tiring because it uses 6 from B level.

Genin are not permitted B ranked techniques.

Age : 29 Posts : 62

Ok, Fixed that 1 error and also the B level Jutsu I was going to ask if it could be kept in the Jutsu to be Trained section, so that When I am eventually able to use that jutsu I can use it.

Age : 35 Posts : 1492

Just put it in red for the moment. We can still moderate it, but so long as it is in red, we wont add it and you will be unable to train it until you reach the correct rank.

Age : 31 Posts : 8965

What's up with the two pictures?

Age : 29 Posts : 62

The 2 pictures was just a script bug. Anyway, do I need to make a training topic before it is approved?. And I can remove the one in red for now since Im not able to use it.

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Quote :: This jutsu takes 3 chakra points to make. Once the Lion is made the User can control the Lion. However there is a time limit. It can stay for around 3-6 minutes (4-7 Posts),

*Please take out chakra points
*How can this jutsu determine the amount of time it can be lit? Ths jutsu should have a Max limit only. The min amount should be at least 1 post. (Since the enemy has a chance to take it down)
* As this is a C rank I believe nerfing this to 5 posts Max should be alright

Quote :: Name: Faiā bakudan (Fire Bomb)

Take off Chakra points

Quote :: This jutsu covers the users hand in Fire with the expense of 4 Chakra points. Once this is used the user can hit their opponent and cause devastating effects. However the main part of the chakra is used to protect the hand from the fire. Once the fire burns longer than 5 minutes it can cause Burn marks on the hand unless the user uses another 4 chakra points to protect his hand.

*Take off the chakra Points
*If you want this jutsu to last a certain amount of time then explain it in Post, I.E 3 posts

Age : 29 Posts : 62

Ok thanks for posting, and I have fixed the Errors stated/

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Quote :: However this jutsu is very tiring to use

Please explain the drawbacks? Will the user not be able to make jutsu for a certain amount of time? Will the user have reduces stamina of physical abilities? Just some suggestions of what to think about when creating drawbacks for this jutsu

Age : 29 Posts : 62

Ok fixed that error. Added about the reactions.

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I meant the drawbacks to the b rank jutsu. Sorry forgot to add the jutsu I was talking about.

Age : 29 Posts : 62

Woops, I put the drawbacks onto the wrong jutsu, Sorry my fault.

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Alright, With that said. C ranks are approved for training right now. The B rank is approved when you reach the level to learn B rank jutsu

Age : 29 Posts : 62

Ok I have trained the 2 c rank jutsus.

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Approved.

Techniques will be added to your application, which would be a much easier process if it was linked in your signature like the rules state. Aww yeah