Bone Dagger (x5)

Age : 28 Posts : 701

Name: Bone Dagger
Quantity: 5
Rank: D
Appearance: It looks like a basic dagger made out of bone, nothing special to it's appearance. It's handle is wooden, but the blade itself is made of shark bone.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A
Origin: Initake had traveled to Kirigakure a few months ago, on a mission. There he had met a fisherman who was doing some deep sea fishing, with this new fishing rod he had made. He had caught a few sharks, and skinned them. He had given Innitake one of the smaller bones, about a foot long or so, to keep as a souvenir. He then went to a blacksmith, who then carved it into a nearly unbreakable state, and to the sharpest point anyone has ever seen.

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Quote :: He then went to a blacksmith, who then carved it into a nearly unbreakable state, and to the sharpest point anyone has ever seen.

I believe you are exaggerating it a little too much given its rank. From you description one would assume your kunai are virtually unbreakable which is very odd given that they're bones. Also the sharpest point anyone has ever seen? I can understand if they were sharp, but that's a little much for a D ranked weapons. Don't get me wrong you can still have some cool bone weapons, but can you tone it down to a more reasonable notch please.

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Tony wrote:: Name: Bone Dagger
Quantity: 5
Rank: D
Appearance: It looks like a basic dagger made out of bone, nothing special to it's appearance. It's handle is wooden, but the blade itself is made of shark bone.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A
Origin: Initake had traveled to Kirigakure a few months ago, on a mission. There he had met a fisherman who was doing some deep sea fishing, with this new fishing rod he had made. He had caught a few sharks, and skinned them. He had given Innitake one of the smaller bones, about a foot long or so, to keep as a souvenir. He then went to a blacksmith, who then carved it into a nearly unbreakable state, and to the sharpest point anyone has ever seen.

We need to know how sharp is this weapon. How deep can this cut make?

Also describe how much can the sword take before breaking. It can only take so much impact until it breaks. The handle is made of wood so it can be easily broken down.

Age : 28 Posts : 701

Can a guy get a little hyperbole going? Damn, I just used the phrase "anyone as ever seen" to show it's sharp.

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Well since two mods had asked for a rewording I suppose not.