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Hideaki, Makoto "Near"

THE INFO.

Name: Hideaki, Makoto
Nickname: Near
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Appearance: Of average height and weight, Near has fairly darker skin, with eyes that seem to show eternal boredum. His eyes show, the sign of Shukkaku's influence, and underneath, is a face paint darker than his skin. His hair is black, combed back and goes to about his neck. In most situations, Near is dressed in a black top, that hangs down to his knees, zipped up. His red Iwagakure forehead protector sits wrapped around his neck. Both forearms are covered in bandage. Around his waist is a white cloth that holds up a scoll. The scroll itself is a darker brown with a lighter, more sandier color. On his legs, he wears average black ninja pants, with white cloth holding up a pouch on his right leg. Oh his feet he wears black shinobi sandals with bandage wrapped around the upper part. Near also carries a gourd full of sand on his back.
Personality: Near is regularly a calm, emotionless, with odd habits. With a calm personality, Near hates talking and commotion, leading him to normally stay in secluded areas or often refuse to go out into large crowds. Because of his calm personality, Near is also able to think a lot faster and clearer without any emotional distraction, and often never ends a plan until he's explored every possible solution he has to offer. He also plays with toys, blocks, little figures and die. He often takes his time and fools around with them, or at least people assume this. He is really using these toys for his plans and may often ignore them and start working on a puzzle. His various odd habits include: holding objects delicately, occasionally when bored he'll stack die into something, he cannot sit down, and he'll rarely act surprised. Despite his lack of social skills, Near can and will leave his home and talk to people if he desires.

However, Near, as calm and emotionless as he seems, can easily be convinced about the moon, because he is a Jiinchuriki. His biggest and most fatal flaw is the fact that if the full moon is out, or the moon has a strong power, Near cannot bide Shukaku's demand of blood. Near also suffers from a lack of sleep, as the host of shukaku cannot sleep, unless they wish to have their only personality eradicated from their mind. Near despises Shukaku's negative effects on his body, and will often stare blankly at someone talking about him in a vile manner. However, Near subjugeted to testing Shukaku's abilities, and understands that, although he is always protected by the shield of Sand, he is not invincible. He has a plan for this as well, and it is something he dare doesn't share.

Clan: N/a
Ninpō: If you can't solve the puzzle, you're nothing but a loser.

THE NINJA.

Origin: Iwagakure
Affiliation: Iwagakure
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Doton, Fuuton and Suna.
Combat Style: Despite his calculating skills, coupled with the power of being a human sacrifice, Near is not a front line character at most. He normally uses his sand to fight from a long to medium range, often avoiding direct conflict, unless Shukkaku takes control.
Special Characteristics:
Spoiler:

THE BACKGROUND.

History:

Prologue

The cold, full moon lit night, with a cold breeze coming apon a group of shinobi. This group, from Iwagakure, comprimised of a mother, father, and several other shinobi who planned to both guard the ritual and assist if nessecary. The mother, was not a current Jiinchuriki, but her unborn child would be the new container for the large Tanuki beast sealed withen a large, oversized and hardly used teapot. The mother was fully preparedto both give birth and life, knowingthat sealing such a ruthless and cold-hearted killer into her soon would make her into a hero, along with her husband. Her one dream would be fufilled as she laid on her deathbed. The unborn child's father smiled brightly, as the star crossed lovers kissed for the final time, replaying the memories they shared together and vowing to reunite once more in some other world.

Capturing by Daylight

As the sandstorms inside what was left of Sunagakure blazed foward, a small group of shinobi searched. The well decorated, Iwagakure loyal shinobi seemed to be raiding a once prosperous and lively village that was left little to it's name. Their goal, was perhaps to find any lost survivers, or even search for ansient weapons. And like every story, their is always someone's greed tainting others, and soforth when the leader of the group, decided to read a scroll, he and his group became filled with the taint and greed of finding an ancient weapon. This ancient weapon was one far greater in both size and immense strength than any sword. However, the double-edged sword was Shukkaku the Ichibi, legendary being of immense chakra levels. Most, no no, many of the men decided they had no choice but to capture it and seal the Ichibi, with or without the Tsuchikage's permission. And the leader of this group, and already hardened shinobi, was well-reknowned as a noblemen and father.

The greed let them get hasty. tHe leader, who's wife was currently impregant with his fourth child, would be escorted to a secret building on the edge of the Wind Country, while he and his men found, defeated and sealed the beast to transport it. They decided to pray on the legend or Shukakku and planned to seal away the being inside a large teapot, then into the unborn son, who would become the Jiinchuriki, whether he choose to or not. His wife refused to believe that sealing it into her newest child would give their village any good, but her husband insisted, and persisted they would look like hero's in the end and live to see a strong shinobi in the future. What they wren't ready for, was the full moon when they would confront Shukkaku.

As planned, they would use powerful ninjutsu to attack Shukakku. However, they never took into account what happens on a full moon with Shukkaku. They feared as his wind based jutsu and sandstorms ripped their numbers down quickly, the loud and flamboyant personality sticking out duriong his murderious defence. However, the last one to die was an Uchiha who had fled and joined Iwagakure. Looking up at Shukkaku, they began to have a personality conflict, the Uchiha using his sharingan read the movements as the father prepared the pot for sealing.Shukakku seemed to become worse and more enraged ever hit the Uchiha delivered. Up until then, Shukkaku was losing.

A large sandstorm, one not made by Shukakku rolled onto the battle. The sealing and the Uchiha seemed to become buried benearth tons of sand quickly. However, the Shukakku became chained back in the Uchiha's mind. The Uchiha noted how, that even if Shukkaku was strong, he didn't think enough to realize that the Uchiha can control the bijuu. With the Mangkyou sharingan visible, the man sighed and said good-bye to his friend. With his last bit of chakra, he used a technique that would prevent shukkaku from stopping the now prepared sealing technique. Shukakku obviously raged at how he didn't want to be sealed again, but the man refused after all those deaths. A sandstorm, covered the area and by morning, all that was left was the teapot, the man, and a mound of sand.

Sealing by Midnight

The cold, full moon lit night, with a cold breeze coming apon a group of shinobi. This group, from Iwagakure, comprimised of a mother, father, and several other shinobi who planned to both guard the ritual and assist if nessecary. The mother, was not a current Jiinchuriki, but her unborn child would be the new container for the large Tanuki beast sealed withen a large, oversized and hardly used teapot. The mother was fully preparedto both give birth and life, knowingthat sealing such a ruthless and cold-hearted killer into her soon would make her into a hero, along with her husband. Her one dream would be fufilled as she laid on her deathbed. The unborn child's father smiled brightly, as the star crossed lovers kissed for the final time, replaying the memories they shared together and vowing to reunite once more in some other world.

After the vows, they began to realise that, the moon gave Shukkaku it's power and he needed to quickly be sealed. If they waited any longer, he may break free and prove difficult to stop without the Uchiha and his hypnosis genjutsu. With the seal already laid out on the floor, the string of handseals began, followed by a speech in ancient kanji. Considerable, everyone there knew that father and mother would die, and we're prepared to retrieve the child who was being born as Shukkaku was being sealed inside him. Considerable, the mother gave out during birth, to which the sealing was not finished. But now, the young baby and cold mother, lay on the barren deathbed. Loud crying could be heard, as with any child. A bright blue glow emaneted from the eight seals written on the ground as the cover of the teapot was slightly pushed off.

The eight seals began to unravel, moving towards the unnamed host, who cried for his mother or father. The eight seals climbed up the infants exposed body, stoping and placing themselves on his left shoulder. Shukkaku then, and thereforth, would now be trapped as he was removed from the teapot in a gaseous form and sucked into the seal, almost like a vortex. the baby stopped crying, and the father was pronounced dead because he succumbed to feeling greedy and feeling responsible for killing his wife, hurting his and her family, and cursing his son. The other shinobi entered, burning the two parents along with the building. They returned with the knowledge that the sealing killed his wife. By his eldest brother, the Jiinchuriki was named Hideaki, Makoto.

Academy Years

as the simple years grew by, Makoto, or called by others "Near", took less active lifestyle and enjoyed difficult puzzles and playing with various toys, especially die and blocks. His brothers and sister never understood him, nor did they try to because the young host refused to open up and often avoided them unless he had to see them. He kept locked to himself, confining himself inside a world only he knew about. A place where sHukkaku didn't exist and he had friends, family, and felt loved. It was a dream he longed for, something he felt was unreachable. With a lack of social skill or status, he began attending the Academy in Iwagakure. At first, hiw real problem was that he rarely spoke unless he had to, and never sat proplerly in his chair. This was from his lack of sleep, giving him more odd habits.

His teachers then started complaining about how he consistently played with various toys and put together puzzles during class hours. Althought the teachers were furious at Near, the other students found Near to be a great kid who turned their dull teacher into a funny clown. At this point, Near's powers began to manifest, and he was given a special teacher who tried to teach him, although the outcome was no different. It seemed Near was more interested in exploring his newfound prowess, and stayed mainly ahead of said teacher. Like his old Academy teacher, he often fooled around daily when he was trying to teach: by playing with various toy and putting together puzzles together. However, the teacher decided to try and teach the child during a fullmoon.

As the moon shoon brightly, Near accepted the fact he wouldn't be normal as his teacher brought him to a clearing. He offered to spar with him, giving him no option as the shield of sand quickly rose, protecting Near from his opponent's kunai. The man was such a fool, as many of the shinobi who knew him would say as an answer. As the sand moved, Near continued to scream out nightmarish words many would never forgot. The sand wrapped, crushed, and liquified his teacher. However, it would be simply proven as a test, and although he killed someone he cared little about, he was upset greatly by their actions. He felt so simple, like a dull tool.

Genin Times

The feeling lingered on, and even his eldest brother couldn't open Near up and talk to him. Near started avoiding people as an official genin, keeping much to himself. Not that it affected him in anyway, as he already lacked the most basic social skills. The future was unpredictable for the young genin, who had not partaken in a genin squad due to his refusal to show up and meet his team. Therefor, he was to just train by himself and eventually be assigned a team. Near also started opening back up to his brother and began experimenting with Shukkaku's power. It amazed him, such a power that he despised was really his lifeline in any situation. In scecret, Near vowed to protect Iwagakure to his final breathe.


Roleplay Sample: http://shinobireality.heavenforum.org/t56-aimless-on-the-training-field-training

THE ARSENAL.

Academy Jutsu
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It all looks good. Though are you sure you only want one specialty?
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Oh....Well I haven't put much thought foward as what else I could use, it practically escaped my mind. I suppose that's two things more I need to look into.
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Appearance is up, and I've decided I'll gain a second spec in rp. If there's anything missing please tell.
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