Special Training (Private)

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Raizou smiled excidedly as he saw the top of his father's head from over a rock.my training is finnally going to begin, i really hope i dont dissapoint father. I mean he did dedicate his day off to help train me Raizou jumped over the rock that seperated him and his father. Raizou landed softly, his head looking at the ground. He looked up to see his father looking at him, the look that his father was giving him made him straighten up almost instantly. Raizou looked up to his father so much and wanted more than anything in the world just to be able to make his father proud.
"Hello son, lets skip the formalities and get straight to the explosions shall we?" Raizou's father said in his deep bass voice. Raizou could tell that his father was happy to see him but it pained Raizou so much that his father never said that he was glad to see him.

Raizou nodded as his father threw his hands into his pouches filled with clay and threw many balls of special clay at him. His father made a single handsign with one hand and the balls exploded, sending Rai flying. All of a sudden while Raizou was in the air, more balls of exploding clay flew towards him and exploded in his poximity. Raizou was able to shield his face from the blasts luckily. The explosions were mild but they still stung. Raizou knew what his father was capable of and if he didnt start fighting back he knew his father would stop holding back. Raizou dug his hands into his clay pouches, he could feel the mouths on his hands mold the clay, and this being his second time trying this it felt really weird. If felt like someone was tickling his hands at the same time. Raizou fell to the ground hard, and trying to diffuse his momentum by rolling as soon as he hit the ground. He smiled at his father who was running towards him, raizou's jutsu was finally finished. Raizou crossed his forearms with his palms faced towards himself and then uncrossed his amrs quickly, throwing two clay birds at his father. Once the birds were in range he made the same handsign that his father made earlier and the birds exploded, except that his father kept charging at him like the explosions didnt effect him at all, even though his clothes seemed singed. Raizou drew his sword quickly and took a ready position. "Bring it on little man!" his father yelled as he pulled out a kunai. Raizou swung his sword at his father but it was met with the kunai, making a piercing clink echo through the training area. Every time Raizou swung his father met it with his kunai. Unbeknownst to Raizou his father had created more than just the balls, he had also created three tiny little spiders that were now on Raizou's clothing. All of a sudden Raizou's father jumped into the air, Raizou took this opportunity to make a bed of spikes on the ground where his father was going to land. His father threw some clay on the spikes and made a handseal and blew them away.

"Nice try son," He said as he landed on the ground softly. "but you lose. KATSU! he yelled and made a handseal, Raizou looked down and saw three white spiders on his clothing and watched in horror as orbs of orange radiated away from them. Then everything went black. Raizou woke up two days later in the hospital, he tried to sit up but his whole body ached and stung. He recounted the battle with his father and sighed. why did i fall for such a stupid trick. Im never going to make him proud of me! Raizou looked down the length of his body, it was covered in bandages. He layed his head back slowly, trying not to hurt himself further and noticed a note on his pillow that was adressed to him. He oponed it and it read "You did much better with the clan jutsu than i expected of you Raizou, i really hope you continue to improve at the rate you are because you will be a truely great shinobi. Take care, dont over do it, I would be devastated if i were to lose you. Love you always, your father." A smile crept up on Raizou's face, he was one step closer to becomming a great shinobi. Raizou then drifted back to sleep.

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