Adashi Clan - Explosion Release

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.THE ADASHI CLAN.

"Iwagakure's Main Branch Family"

Clan Name: The Adashi Clan.
Location: Iwagakure no Sato.
Signature Traits:

Nature Affinity.
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Fire Release [Katon].
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Lightning Release [Raiton]
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Explosion Release [Bakuton]

Physical Appearance
Members of the Adashi clan are known to possess ankle length raven hair, light brown skin, and hazel eyes. Their casual clan attire typically consists of black loose fitted clothing with red fishnet shirts and ninja sandals.

Killing Machines
Being one of the more specialized clans in Iwagakure, clansmen are trained at birth in the art of battle and assassination. They possess a encyclopedic knowledge on different tactical approaches to kill a target when on the field as quickly and stylishly as possible. This makes them versatile fighters and extremely dangerous warriors. During both the First, and Second, Shinobi War, their skill was said to only be rivaled with that of the Senju, and the Uchiha. Clan members are skilled in nearly all form of Ninjutsu which includes Genjutsu, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu and even Weaponry (this does not permit more than two specialties however). Even with their natural elite attributes, the clans most power trait is definably their devastating kekkei genkai known as Bokuton; Explosion Style. With their natural fighting abilities and kekkei genkai, the clan became known as the perfect, "Killing Machines". When in battle, clan members are taught to observe the enemy and be as perceptive as possible.

Kekkei Genkai:

BAKUTON - EXPLOSION RELEASE.

Explosion Release (爆遁, Bakuton) is an advanced chakra nature created by simultaneously mixing both Katon (Fire Release) and Raiton (Lightning release) nature elements. By combining the hazardous and unstable properties of both fire and lightning, the wielder is capable of spawning powerful explosions, that can range from micro-cellular, to macro-nuclear levels. Due to level of monstrosity that it can potentially bring, Bakuton has been noted as being one of the most powerful advanced natures in existence. The Explosion Corp. ranked the Adashi a top-tier clan due to their mastery in the use of the Bakuton nature type despite the few other clans that wielded it. Their uses for it include "charging" objects and people with explosive chakra, shaping their Bakuton chakra in a variety of fashions, and even absorbing the force of other explosions to prevent damage to oneself. Depending on the training of the Adashi clansmen, Bakuton can be applied to a number of specializations to amplify their lethality considerably, with the most common being Taijutsu or Weaponry. This can potentially give rise to an unmatched explosive fighting style that can literally annihilate an enemy with a single punch. Before explosion, the appearance of Bakuton chakra is usually stunning white color, which migrates itself to the surface of the charged object, whether it be a fist, or a weapon. Elite users of the Bakuton art were said to be so powerful, that they were capable of destroying entire villages with higher-end techniques.

History:
The Adashi clan were known to be one of the oldest clans in the shinobi world, existing in the late times of the Uchiha and Senju. They were founded by two brothers, both whom possessed the kekkei genkai which allowed them to access the Bakuton element by mixing both their earth and fire chakra types. The brothers lived on Mt. Iyashi which was located near the great mountains of Iwagakure. They resided in a small temple inside the mountain area where they trained intensely to perfect their Ninjutsu. Eventually both boys matured, and left the mountains to embark in a long journey across the villagers to fulfill their thirst of adventure. When reaching the lands of Konoha, they discovered a large clan whom they found much in common with, the Echiha clan. The Adashi brothers grew along with the Echiha, forming the now larger Adashi clan. Both clans existing in a cordial relationship, and they helped each other in whatever battles they encountered. The Echiha aided the Adashi clan in their training, which is how the Adashi became such talented ninja that they are today. During a last battle, the Raishi clan smashed with the Mushiki clan who allied with the Zenju. It was an epic battle of two clans that both possessed advanced element kekkei genkai, which ended in many members of both sides being killed. After the war, the Raishi left the Uchiha and fled back to Iwagakure to stabilize their war engulfed life and find some peace in its stone walls. Many elders of the clan possess memories of the battles and prepare the young for the, "Day of Reckoning" which is a conspiracy theory that the Echiha and Benju will once again fight in a epic battle where they will aid the Echiha once again.

After the war, the founders of Iwagakure saw potential in the Adashi clan and devised an alliance with them in hopes of wielding their power. They formed an organization of ANBU operatives called the Explosion Corp., which specialized in explosions and mass destruction. It didn't take long for the Explosion Corp. to become highly feared throughout the neighboring countries. By this time, the Adashi clan had branched into a few other small clans that specialized in their own use of explosions, with the main branch still being the most elite. In recent years, upon the destruction of Konoha, and the recent war, some members of the Adashi clan have migrated to other villages for their own personal needs. Some being spies for Iwagakure, while others taking this opportunity to leave the village once and for all.

Adashi Jutsu.

Quote :: Name: Bakuton: Denka [Explosion Release: Charge].
Rank: D-S.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Short-Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: A fundamental technique used by members of the Adashi clan. It allows the user to charge an inorganic object with chakra and cause it to explode momentarily. This is normally done by physical contact, but for more experienced members, they are capable of extending their chakra to the object over a few foot distance and charging it through those means. Once the object is charged, it will static with white chakra, until it detonates into an explosion corresponding to its size. The amount of chakra used in this technique is scaled by the size of the charged object. Smaller objects such as a throwing weapon, consumes less chakra and creates small explosions, but are still life threatening to the target such as an explosive tag. Likewise larger objects such as boulders consume more chakra and therefore create larger explosions. Given the nature of Bakuton chakra and the user, they are immune to the harmful shockwave effects of the explosions.
Chakra Cost: D[3] C[5] B[20] A[20] S[30].

Name: Bakuton: Kyūshū [Explosion Release: Absorption].
Rank: D-S.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Short-Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: A hidden technique used by members of the Adashi clan. It allows the clansmen to absorb the shock wave force given off by an explosion. The technique is performed by the user extending their hands and channeling the force through their palms, sucking it in like a vortex. The amount of chakra necessary to perform this technique depends on the size of the explosion, or the the rank of the technique used to create it. The absorption process is fairly quick, however, larger explosions will take more time to absorb than smaller ones. Fire, or substances given off by the explosion other than the force itself, is incapable of being absorbed.
Chakra Cost: E[1] D[3] C[5] B[10] A[20] S[30]

Name: Bakuton: Hiyaku [Explosion Release: Makibishi].
Rank: D.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Short-Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: An explosive trap technique usually done in stealth. The user withdraws a handheld amount of makibishi (spikes) from their bag and charges them with explosive chakra. They then throw the spikes on the ground in hopes of the target stepping on them so they can explode. The detonation of the spikes are enough to cause significant pain to the person's feet, so much that they would find it difficult to walk. The spikes can stay charged for up to two posts by the user.
Chakra Cost: 3CP

Name: Bakuton: Jiraiken [Explosion Release: Landmine Fist].
Rank: B.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Short-Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: After establishing direct contact with their opponent through a expeditious jab, the user utilizes Explosion Release to subsequently generate an enormous explosion from the initial point of physical contact. This explosion is powerful enough to completely obliterate an opponent far larger than the user. Due to the directionality of the blast, the user minimizes any potential repercussions, such as being struck by resultant debris and even recoil appears to be completely negated. It is possible to aim this technique towards the ground and cause an explosion beneath the target as well, plopping them upwards while severely damaging the lower portion of their body.
Chakra Cost: 14CP

Name: Bakuton: Hōden boruto [Explosion Release: Discharge Bolts].
Rank: C.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Mid-Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: The Adashi accumulates explosive chakra in both palms and propels them forward. Using shape transformation, they will shape the chakra as it propels from their hands and thin streams of energy as they fire in their direction in great speeds. Their thin shape makes it hard for others to see their presence, which makes them rather difficult to avoid. Once landed, the bullets explode with enough impact to knock a person unconscious and leave them in critical condition depending on where they hit. In variation, it is possible for the user to aim the two bullets in different directions if need be, to attack two targets at once.
Chakra Cost: 8CP

Name: Bakuton: Giga Bōru [Explosion Release: Giga Ball].
Rank: C.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Mid-Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: After performing a short sequence of hand seals, the Adashi launches a small sphere of explosive chakra from their mouth which detonates on impact. The aftermath of this technique creates a large cloud of cinder and ash that can obscure the vision of the enemy, assuming they survive.
Chakra Cost: 7CP

Name: Bakuton: Senbon Sempuku [Explosion Release: Senbon Ambush].
Rank: B.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Mid Range. (0-10m)
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: One of the many variations of the Bakuton that uses shape transformation. The Adashi transforms their explosive chakra into a storm of senbon all aimed at the enemy. Each of the countless senbon launched by this technique will detonate upon impact, with the ultimate power of this technique capable of causing impressive devastation to an area. Given the overall performance of the technique, it is difficult to avoid.
Chakra Cost: 12CP

Name: Bakuton: Nagare [Explosion Release: Explosion Stream].
Rank: B.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Mid-Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: A powerful ranged attack used by members of the Adashi clan. The user places a hand on the ground and channels explosive chakra through it in a stream like formation. The stream of statical chakra can swiftly move through the ground and change directions instantly. As an added effect of the Bakuton chakra nature, the stream causes an subsequent explosion on every spot that it covers. This gives the appearance of a trail of explosions leading up to a target. The user must remain stationed to channel the chakra needed to supply this technique. In addition, the rubble and dust created from this technique can be used to hinder the vision of the target until the dust settles.
Chakra Cost: 12[3].

Name: Bakuton: Bunshin no Bakudan [Explosion Release: Exploding Clones].
Rank: C-A.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: -.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: The user creates shadow clones infused with explosive chakra. Upon contact or command, the clone(s) detonate into a large explosion. The clone looks like a normal shadow clone, which allows the user to get it close to the target without them expecting anything besides a normal attack, or the target might even close in willingly to try to attack the clone. Using multiple tricks and diversionary tactics to disguise the nature of the clone can make this technique more likely to be effective. C-rank [2 Clone]. B-Rank [4 Clones]. A-Rank [8 Clones]. The clones are not capable of performing jutsu.
Chakra Cost: C [6]. B [11]. A [22].

Name: Bakuton: Doragon Kobushi [Explosion Release: Dragon Fists].
Rank: A.
Type: Nin-Taijutsu.
Range: Short-Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: An extraordinary technique developed by one of the founders of the Adashi clan. It gave name to the Adashi as the, "Dragons of Destruction" during their era. After forming a sequence of hand seals, the Adashi forms two large fiery dragon-shaped shrouds around their fists that animate on their own. They then attack their target with them like a pair of boxing gloves. Every strike from this technique is capable of creating a herculean explosion upon impact, that can not only destroy a target, but decimate others in the vicinities as well. Users will experience great fatigue after the duration of the technique, despite their remaining chakra reserves.
Chakra Cost: [20][5].

Name: Bakuton: Genzai [Explosion Release: Explosion Current].
Rank: B-A.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Mid-Range. B-10m A-20m
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: A devastating technique used by adept members of the Adashi clan. The clansmen channels a substantial amount of explosive chakra through their body, and literally charges themselves with explosive chakra, turning them into a human bomb. They then subsequently force the energy outwards in every direction outside themselves, causing a massive explosion in focal point of themselves that can decimate a large land mass and nearly destroy anyone caught within the explosion. The farther one is from the explosion, the more likely they are to survive, however unconsciousness and severe wounds are a following outcome. This attack leaves the user unharmed, because of the relationship between the users Bakuton chakra and themselves. The more chakra channeled throughout the user's body, the larger the explosion.
Chakra Cost: B[13]. A[23].

Clan Details: Open [Permission Required]

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Can someone check this please

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I plan to, I've just been very busy. Maybe in the meantime you could reply to my PM.

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Okay so I'll get started where I can. I see notes within your Clan trait and obviously throughout your history about the wars, the Explosion Corp. etc. These seem to be canon references. The Naruto world here has obviously not followed the same history line as the show or manga and I'm recommend making some changes.

The Kekkei Genkai itself seems quite well written however I don't like the final sentence about being able to decimate an entire village and I'd suggest you remove it.

Quote :: Name: Bakuton: Denka [Explosion Release: Charge].
Rank: D-S.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Short-Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: A fundamental technique used by members of the Adashi clan. It allows the user to charge an object with chakra and cause it to explode momentarily. This is normally done by physical contact, but for more experienced members, they are capable of extending their chakra to the object over a few foot distance and charging it through those means. Once the object is charged, it will static with white chakra, until it detonates into an explosion corresponding to its size. The amount of chakra used in this technique is scaled by the size of the charged object. Smaller objects such as a throwing weapon, consumes less chakra and creates small explosions, but are still life threatening to the target such as an explosive tag. Likewise with larger objects, such as a boulder, consuming more chakra, and create larger explosions. Given the nature of Bakuton chakra and the user, they are immune to the harmful shockwave effects of the explosions.
Chakra Cost: D[3] C[5] B[20] A[20] S[30].

Obviously this wouldn't apply to other shinobi, right?

Quote :: Name: Bakuton: Kyūshū [Explosion Release: Absorption].
Rank: D-S.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Short-Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: A hidden technique used by members of the Adashi clan. It allows the clansmen to absorb the shock wave force given off by an explosion. The technique is performed by the user extending their hands and channeling the force through their palms, sucking it in like a vortex. The amount of chakra neccesary to perform this technique depends on the size of the explosion, or the the rank of the technique used to create it. The absorption process is fairly quick, however, larger explosions will take more time to absorb than smaller ones.
Chakra Cost: E[1] D[3] C[5] B[10] A[20] S[30]

There appears to be nothing there that determines what rank of explosion requires what rank of chakra. I'm also wondering if fire jutsu apply to this?

Quote :: Name: Bakuton: Hiyaku [Explosion Release: Makibishi].
Rank: D.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Short-Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: An explosive trap technique usually done in stealth. The user withdraws a handheld amount of makibishi (spikes) from their bag and charges them with explosive chakra. They then throw the spikes on the ground in hopes of the target stepping on them so they can explode. The detonation of the spikes are enough to cause significant pain to the person's feet, so much that they are incapable of walking. The spikes can stay charged for up to two posts by the user.
Chakra Cost: 3CP

A D-rank explosion capable of inflicting enough damage to cause the opponent to become handicapped? Seems a little much.

Quote :: Name: Bakuton: Jiraiken [Explosion Release: Landmine Fist].
Rank: C.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Short-Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: After establishing direct contact with their opponent through a quick punch, the user utilizes Explosion Release to subsequently generate an enormous explosion from the initial point of physical contact. This explosion is powerful enough to completely obliterate an opponent far larger than the user. Due to the directionality of the blast, the user minimizes any potential repercussions, such as being struck by resultant debris and even recoil appears to be completely negated. It is possible to aim this technique towards the ground and cause an explosion beneath the target as well, plopping them upwards while severely damaging the lower portion of their body.
Chakra Cost: 6CP

Dunno if this should be a C-rank, it should also be a Ninjutsu-Taijutsu technique.

Quote :: Name: Bakuton: Hōden boruto [Explosion Release: Discharge Bolts].
Rank: C.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Mid-Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: The Adashi accumulates explosive chakra in both palms and propels them forward. Using shape transformation, they will shape the chakra as it propels from their hands and thin streams of energy as they fire in their direction in great speeds. Due to their thin shape, it makes it harder for others to see their presence, which makes somewhat unavoidable to the untrained eye. Once landed, the bullets will explode in great impact which are capable of blowing off the chest of a person and leaving a large hole in their body. In variation, it is possible for the user to aim the two bullets in different directions if need boy, to attack two targets at once.
Chakra Cost: 8CP

An unavoidable C-rank with fatal blows. The explosive power needs to be reduced and the unavoidable part needs to be reconsidered. I don't know what you'd be implying by untrained eye. All shinobi would be trained to have impeccable perception.

Quote :: Name: Bakuton: Giga Bōru [Explosion Release: Giga Ball].
Rank: C.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Mid-Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: After performing a short sequence of hand seals, the Adashi launches a sphere of explosive chakra from their mouth which detonates on impact. The aftermath of this technique creates a large cloud of cinder and ash that can obscure the vision of the enemy, assuming they survive.
Chakra Cost: 7CP

How big is the sphere?

Quote :: Name: Bakuton: Senbon Sempuku [Explosion Release: Senbon Ambush].
Rank: B.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Mid Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: One of the many variations of the Bakuton that uses shape transformation. The Adashi transforms their explosive chakra into a storm of senbon all aimed at the enemy. Each of the countless senbon launched by this technique will detonate upon impact, with the ultimate power of this technique capable of causing impressive devastation to an area. Given the overall performance of the technique, it is almost unavoidable.
Chakra Cost: 13CP

Once again the unavoidable word is there, I'd remove it. What sort of radius does the technique cover?

Quote :: Name: Bakuton: Bunshin no Bakudan [Explosion Release: Exploding Clones].
Rank: C-A.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: -.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: The user creates shadow clones infused with explosive chakra. Upon contact or command, the clone(s) detonate into a large explosion. The clone looks like a normal shadow clone, which allows the user to get it close to the target without them expecting anything besides a normal attack, or the target might even close in willingly to try to attack the clone. Using multiple tricks and diversionary tactics to disguise the nature of the clone can make this technique more likely to be effective. C-rank [2 Clone]. B-Rank [4 Clones]. A-Rank [8 Clones].
Chakra Cost: C [6]. B [11]. A [22].

Can these clones perform any techniques?

Quote :: Name: Bakuton: Doragon Kobushi [Explosion Release: Dragon Fists].
Rank: A.
Type: Ninjutsu.
Range: Short-Range.
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: An extraordinary technique developed by one of the founders of the Adashi clan. It gave name to the Adashi as the, "Dragons of Destruction" during their era. After forming a sequence of hand seals, the Adashi forms two large fiery dragon-shaped shrouds around their fists that animate on their own. They then attack their target with them like a pair of boxing gloves. Every strike from this technique is capable of creating a herculean explosion upon impact, that can no only destroy a target, but decimate others in the vicinities as well. In addition, the dragon heads give off a fiery flare when swung, which blinds the target when they're in movement. Those with Taijutsu talent are able to utilize this technique to its fullest capacity, while non-specialists are still capable of causing great damage.
Chakra Cost: [20][5].

Shouldn't blind an opponent, I'd get that it would decimate an opponent which is why it confuses me why you'd be using it multiple times. I feel like it too should be restricted to Ninjutsu-Taijutsu and should have some sort of drawback.

Quote :: Name: Bakuton: Atomikku Bakudan [Explosion Release: Atomic Bomb].
Rank: S.
Type: Ninjutsu | Kinjutsu.
Range: Long Range (40m).
Element: Bakuton: Explosion Release.
Description: This is an advanced and extremely powerful technique only learned by the most disciplined of the Adashi clan. Atomic Bomb is a suicide technique used for a last resort. The user performs a string of handsigns and generates enormous amounts of explosive chakra within themselves. The collecting chakra pulls in everything in the users surroundings until the great detonation when the user explodes. The technique is so devastatingly powerful that it can obliterate everything within it's proximity to its atomic level in an instant. This technique was once used to destroy an entire village during the warring eras, and since then has been declared forbidden amongst the clan.
Chakra Cost: S[37].

No.

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Will edit this.

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Quote :: Obviously this wouldn't apply to other shinobi, right?

Nope.

Quote :: There appears to be nothing there that determines what rank of explosion requires what rank of chakra. I'm also wondering if fire jutsu apply to this?

It says in the technique that it depends on the rank of the deriving jutsu, or the relative size of the explosion. If the fire technique generates a shockwave, then it's absorbable, but the fire itself isn't.

Quote :: Dunno if this should be a C-rank, it should also be a Ninjutsu-Taijutsu technique.

I'd like to keep it as it is. Delivering a simple punch is a fundamental ability.

Quote :: Can these clones perform any techniques?

No they cannot.

Quote :: Shouldn't blind an opponent, I'd get that it would decimate an opponent which is why it confuses me why you'd be using it multiple times. I feel like it too should be restricted to Ninjutsu-Taijutsu and should have some sort of drawback.

Well, as stated in the technique, those who specialize in Taijutsu can use the technique in greater proficiency, but it's not limited to them. Added the drawback.

Everything else is either removed / changed accordingly.

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Bump for checking.

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Apologies, I've only had my wireless reconnected today. I'll be checking it sometime today, try not to bump topics though there is a topic in Forum Assistance dedicated to having topics checked.

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DemetriSage wrote:

Quote :: Obviously this wouldn't apply to other shinobi, right?

Nope.

State it in the technique then please.

DemetriSage wrote:

Quote :: There appears to be nothing there that determines what rank of explosion requires what rank of chakra. I'm also wondering if fire jutsu apply to this?

It says in the technique that it depends on the rank of the deriving jutsu, or the relative size of the explosion. If the fire technique generates a shockwave, then it's absorbable, but the fire itself isn't.

So what determines the rank of the explosive is the jutsu of the technique's shockwave you're essentially absorbing, but what about Explosive Tags or Pouches? You need to state you can't absorb fire itself and will need to say it will effect you all the same.

DemetriSage wrote:

Quote :: Dunno if this should be a C-rank, it should also be a Ninjutsu-Taijutsu technique.

I'd like to keep it as it is. Delivering a simple punch is a fundamental ability.

I'm fine with you keeping it Ninjutsu but it needs to be bumped up to B-rank and probably given the top chakra cost of a B-rank.

DemetriSage wrote:

Quote :: Can these clones perform any techniques?

No they cannot.

State that then, please.

DemetriSage wrote:

Quote :: Shouldn't blind an opponent, I'd get that it would decimate an opponent which is why it confuses me why you'd be using it multiple times. I feel like it too should be restricted to Ninjutsu-Taijutsu and should have some sort of drawback.

Well, as stated in the technique, those who specialize in Taijutsu can use the technique in greater proficiency, but it's not limited to them. Added the drawback.

Unlike Landmine Fist this technique isn't just a single physical blow its a barrage of hits, it should require Taijutsu regardless of you stating those who specialize in Taijutsu use it with greater proficiency, there's no way to measure that. It should be Nin-Tai to use.

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Edited.

Quote :: So what determines the rank of the explosive is the jutsu of the technique's shockwave you're essentially absorbing, but what about Explosive Tags or Pouches? You need to state you can't absorb fire itself and will need to say it will effect you all the same.

Explosive tags are E-rank weapons, so it will take E-rank chakra to absorb the shock wave.

Quote :: Unlike Landmine Fist this technique isn't just a single physical blow its a barrage of hits, it should require Taijutsu regardless of you stating those who specialize in Taijutsu use it with greater proficiency, there's no way to measure that. It should be Nin-Tai to use.

Not it's not. This technique isn't an attack, nor a physical enhancement. It's a Ninjutsu technique that wraps concentrated explosive chakra around your fists. If a specialized attack was involved then it would be Taijutsu, but it doesn't. If I was making this technique Nin-Taijutsu, then I would've implemented an awesome Taijutsu attack that went with it.

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DemetriSage wrote:

Quote :: Unlike Landmine Fist this technique isn't just a single physical blow its a barrage of hits, it should require Taijutsu regardless of you stating those who specialize in Taijutsu use it with greater proficiency, there's no way to measure that. It should be Nin-Tai to use.

Not it's not. This technique isn't an attack, nor a physical enhancement. It's a Ninjutsu technique that wraps concentrated explosive chakra around your fists. If a specialized attack was involved then it would be Taijutsu, but it doesn't. If I was making this technique Nin-Taijutsu, then I would've implemented an awesome Taijutsu attack that went with it.

One Thousand Years of Pain, Dynamic Entry, Leaf Violent Wind. Lead Demolishing Rock. Just a few techniques named that could be considered pretty basic physical blows. Your technique far exceeds them. You use a chakra enhancement to use a Taijutsu technique. It is Taijutsu, Deme.

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Alright.

Edited.

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-I asked you if the Charge technique could be used on other people and you said no yet in your Kekkei Genkai it says "Their uses for it include "charging" objects and people with explosive chakra" I think it should be edited out of your Kekkei Genkai, you shouldn't be capable of charging people with explosive chakra which is why I was questioning it earlier.

-"Elite users of the Bakuton art were said to be so powerful, that they were capable of destroying entire villages with higher-end techniques." You said you've remove this but you didn't.

-I think there should be a note in your Kekkei Genkai when people try to absorb your chakra, whether its through a technique, item or something like the Aburame's chakra bugs.

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