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Lightning.

THE INFO.

Name: Lightning
Nickname:Amazon
Age:18
Gender:Female
Appearance:

Lightning, as she is called, has a tribal appearance that goes right along with her tribal name. The most notable feature besides her highly obviously athletic form is the number of tribal tattoos that are very visible thanks to her lack of clothing. The tattoos include a number of beast like forms that trace up her thighs, from the base of her hip about her stomach and along both arms, some of which seeming somewhat metallic in nature. Secondly is the number of jewelry that actually make up the majority of her actual clothing. These are formed from primitive leathers, metals and silvers. A chocker around the neck with a pendent, metal bracers, and bracelets, gauntlets and gloves. Finally, a number of jewelery line he forehead and a ring through her bottom lip. That aside there is plenty to distract from her otherwise attractive appearance.

Her skin is a fair tan that has seemingly sunk in over time. She is moderately tall at 5'10'' and 150lbs, a muscular and thin frame. Her stomach is lean, her breast full and legs shapely, and really the only thing preventing these very womanly features from curious eyes is an animal skin jacket like cloak and a loin cloth. Her hair is wild and unkept, though has it's own appeal and the her body is decorated finally in the multitude of weaponry that she has acquired, each of which she is apt in using. At only 18 years of age, she is appears older then she really is, and her intimidatingly wild appearance gives her an edge that that makes her stand out as a shinobi, or in a crowd.
Personality:

Light is staunchly loyal, firm, and unbending in her beliefs. She is a hard worker and takes a strong moral stance — she particularly believes in following orders. She is generally reserved and truly not arrogant in any manner like her Allies, though she is not above mocking/joking around with her opponents or smirking while in combat, a trait also seen in her predecessor. She will not hesitate in the slightest to strike down even her subordinates if they stand in her way. She chooses to ignore all her subordinates, including her sister if she get on her nerves, believing that personal struggle builds character.

Light hungers for personal power and is a dedicated nationalist. Harboring a high intolerance of imperfection, light relentlessly drills herself towards perfection and settles for nothing less from herself or those that serve her. She believes that power and domination are what makes a person strong. She has absolute confidence in herself.which she believes she was born with. She has neither pity nor mercy towards those she marks as treasonous or inferior. Naomi is marked by a distinct lack of empathy. Even as a child, she was seen to react with hostility when outdone

From a very young age, Light demonstrated sadistic aggression and a near total lack of remorse to friends, servants, family, and animals which suggests that she could be suffering from an antisocial personality disorder. Light does retain some insecurity. As a result of her sequestered life of royalty, she has developed a considerable amount of social ineptitude, particularly in her uncertainty of how to act around boys, and she frequently intimidates them during conversation. Her overly competitive nature surfaces during Any type of battle

LIght have a messed up personality when it comes down too it due too her past events her stability is off balance. Meaning she is mentally unstabled due too the lost of her mother and father. Her brother was lost in wars before she heard and nothing more. But she till this day stay isolated to herself thinking those around her would be lost also. So in time she lose who she is in that time being.

Clan:Uchiha
Ninpō:"Your No Fast Enough"

THE NINJA.

Origin:Kusagakure
Affiliation:Kusagakure
Rank:Genin
Specialties:Ninjutsu,Kenjutsu
Elemental Affinities:Katon,Fuuton
Combat Style:Long/Short Range
Special Characteristics:

THE BACKGROUND.

History:

The time we take to acknowledge one another should be the time we brace each other in harmony. Well I would want to say something like that if my life started as a fairytale, but like all things it comes falling down to the depth of earth itself. Life is supposed to be cherished but in this world it is taken from us. Just like candy from a baby, as fast life can come it can also leave just as fast. When we are born do we ever ponder the efforts of life or what it brings we don’t all we ever see is the negative side of it what about the light side and the balance of the human being like yin and yang. This is my story the story of lightning.

On the borderline of the land of grass in a very small village there was a couple who lived nowhere near the small village. This couple had there own harvest and cattle you could say they were old country folk. Well not exactly old they were young and healthy, well as far as you can tell. There names were Olivia and Seth a couple who lived from the world of ninjas and stuff. But both were ninjas with special talents, Olivia was a tall women with dark pink hair her beauty made sparks fly if you could say something like that She was a simple jounin of the hidden Rock village., She was famous among her peers for her talents for earth release and assassinations. Seth was abit better but he was an alien to the land of fire parts. He was a skilled anbu of sorts you could say in other words. He led the anbu black ops of the hidden cloud village. How they met to reach this day would be yet another tale of lightning.

On the night of the land of grass festival there was a surprise to the couple that neither would have expected. The birth of there first child Lightning a child who future was about to start at the time she was released from the womb. Lightning eyes and hair was like her mothers it was yet another beauty have enter the family. Well that what her father use to always say in words which were kind of hard to understand he had some kind of accent about him which was weird. But since her birth she was gifted with some of her mothers talents which started to show at the age of six. When she was able to sneak towards her mother and father, with out being notice like a real assassin. Of course her parents took notice of this and knew what was best for her. So starting at six her mother started to train her in the ways of the assassin a way long forgotten by years that pasted. By starting her off with simple tactics to dismantle her enemy useless. But that wasn’t the end of it her mother also taught her the basic Fire release which was what her mother used. Her father was skilled in earth and water release so her mother taught her the ways she learned.

Two years have pasted since then now she was ready for her next step her mother would put it. Living in the middle of nowhere was hard for a young girl like lightning. She had no friends to play with like other kids but that didn’t bother her even abit. Her mind was on her tactics of the assassain, one day her mother called out to her for her to come outside. Unknown to her that there was an academy scout outside ready to take her. Her mother explained what she was doing since her father was on a mission and she wanted lightning to go to the grass village and improve her skills beyond that of her mother. After a few hugs and kisses goodbye, Lightning made her way to the grass village an academy student where she would start her new life. The next day after reaching the village she was put in her class with other kids her age. Yeah she felt abit uncomfortable since she never was schooled before. So the days went by so fast it seem it was yesterday she was just coming from her lonesome household.


On the final day of class after a few years since she started abit late. She grew to be a stunning and beautiful woman that took the appearance close to her wonderful mother. On the day she became a genin. , At the ceremony her parents was no where to be found, that’s when the same scout who came and got her and pulled her to the side holding a case with her name on it. That’s when she was told her parents was killed and her mother wanted her to have an item special to her. Lightning was empty after hearing the news she was alone now and no one to be there for her. She took the case from the scout and left. Having her back pressed against a tree she open the case to find her mother Grande Katana which was the last thing of her mother she had. Now let the new eras of lightning begin.


Roleplay Sample:

The clouds that covered the skies were moving among the blue sky like it was a day of forgiveness. But there were a lot more then we could count upon as he day we live go on,With a roaring appearance. The clouds sudden grow darker emitting a dangerous shadow over the sudden man who followed this man. If there eyes would look upwards towards the sky they will see the great view of the city, They were dragons long to be extinct they were full blooded dragons this will most likely get there attention. It wasn't everyday you see a ancient lizard that was more of a amazement itself. The Roars of the raging dragons would make a more vibrating echo through the city. The city was roaming with the military soldiers that was sent by the head of this generous city who lead this city to the great Ryugakure. As the military would head towards the intruders of the city there was a chill among the area as coming from a trail was a marching of the military as the intruder would meet the many of the heads of Volcano Country bu what was going to come of this meeting you couldn't help but wonder.

As the sounding of marching man filled the area as a women with a blue uniform with among five stars on the shoulder. She was the General of this parts and one known by Ice Queen she heard of a intruder who just walk into her city without permission. This women had long yellow hair part of it covering her eye as the other was clear as day. The Kaidakage sep forward as a growl would escape her lips as she would come to a halt military soldiers behind her. Her Sword was facing towards the ground as she stood there as silence would be there and no sound but the wind the blew through the streets. The two sheaths on her sides held her weapons Oblivion one of her many rusty dual weapons that she grew up with. She growls as she look towards the kage since he was in the city.Now "Who Are You And Why The Fuck Are You Invading My City" she would say holding nothing back as she would stand at the twenty-five meter mark as she would frown her pink lips was one of her many exotic accents on her body.


"SO SPEAK YOU VERMIN" she says annoyed she could tell he was from the mountain region. She released a pulse as she stood there waiting for this man to speak or die were he stands so what would happen you might ask.

(Blah Im Lazy Take It Or Leave I)
THE ARSENAL.

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Weapons:
Bow And Arrow:

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Katana:

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Dual Swords:

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Equipment:

[50]Arrows(Main Weapon)
[25]Kunai
[25]Shuriken
[15]Paperbombs
[x]Ninja Wire
[50]Senbon
[10]Smoke Bombs
[10]Five Senses Disorder Powder
[5]Empty Scrolls



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Appearance is a required field Razz 2 or more paragraphs
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edited my dear
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Gotta Choose, Genin or Chuunin =] If you want Chuunin, you'll have to have Hugh look over your app
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Your Academy jutsu need to be in the correct template (Custom Registry -> Custom Jutsu -> Jutsu Template)
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i dont understand.......X.X..so confusing
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Lightning [Kusa Genin] Uchiha, Lightning [Kusa Genin] EmptyMon 28 Mar 2011, 4:27 am

It's simple, this is what you have

Olivier wrote:
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description:
This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another
person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image
of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not
change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool
pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be
injured.

This is what you should have:

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Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description:
This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another
person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image
of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not
change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool
pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be
injured.
Chakra Cost: 1

Academy Jutsu - https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/t3132-open-academy-jutsu
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ok ok edited you should know im not use to this patty><
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Haha, it's fine =D

I'm tired, but I don't think theres anything wrong with it...

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Could you have a definite number for the amount of weapons you carry : kunai, shuriken, arrows, senbon and smokebomb . Once you have that, it'll be golden
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Whoa. That's alot of arrows. I wouldn't think you need all of them for a mission or a battle perhaps. I think 50 would do well atm. Not trying to hold ya down, it just seems like 100 would be excessive for anyone.
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lolz its ok edited again lolz
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My apologies, but I must temporarily unapprove this. I spot one problem.

• Uchiha members are required to have Katon (Fire) as their main elemental specialty. You may still have Fuuton (Wind) as an elemental specialty, but it must be the minor specialty.
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