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| Onoshaka, Takashi [Kusa Genin] | |
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TNT
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| Subject: Onoshaka, Takashi [Kusa Genin] Fri 01 Apr 2011, 4:27 am | |
| Onoshaka, Takashi.THE INFO. Name: Takashi Onoshaka Age: 14 Gender: Male Appearance: Takashi looks much like he does in the picture above. The wrap on his left hand extends all the way up to his shoulder. He has another one just like it on his right hand. They are both the same red as his red sash, which is a bit brighter than in the picture. The sash hides his ninja belt where all of his basic tools are. Usually, the cloth that he is using as a scarf in the picture is usually neatly folded in a pouch on his ninja belt, aligned with his spine. Takashi uses it whenever he finds it handy. He'll use it as a scarf when it's cold. He'll use it to wrap injuries if they are bleeding terribly. He'll even use it as distraction in battle. There is no brown cloth on his left arm. All that is visible is the red wrap to his shoulder, and his black, sleeveless muscle shirt. The two golden hoops and the cloth attached to those hoops don't exist. The red symbol above his eye means "Two eye's for an eye." It is his Ninbō, and in lame-man's terms means "don't stop at just revenge. Get your revenge and take it one step further." His eyes are green with yellow highlights. Despite the usual style, his hair is kept in a buzz-cut. It is a red color, as are his eyebrows. His muscles are well defined. Not like, Brock Lesnar or Batista defined, but they are noticeable. Personality: Takashi is cold towards most people. This is because he is paranoid. He is extremely cautious about most things and doesn't like to rush into anything. He is short tempered, but doesn't show his temper often. Instead, he uses harsh sarcasm and a wicked tongue. He is always moving. Constantly, he is shadow boxing, working his technique and evasiveness. His favorite thing in the world to do is fighting, and he constantly pictures himself in fights. He creates scenarios for himself and acts them out, pretending to smash in the faces of his enemies. He has a problem with authority, but only when he feels disrespected with authority. He is respectful until he feels that he no longer has to be. There are two quick ways to get him to fight. 1:Disrespect him 2:Swing When he fights, unless it's a spar, he is ruthless. He won't stop fighting until he is satisfied that he won, even if it means causing permanent damage to himself. His pride is his greatest flaw. Both his pride and his drive to show the world that a kekkei genkai isn't needed to be a great ninja keep him motivated and training. Ninbō: Two eye's for an eye.
THE NINJA. Origin: Kusagakure Affiliation: Kusagakure Rank: Genin Specialties: Taijutsu, to be developed Elemental Affinities: Unknown Combat Style: Takashi likes to lure the enemy in, open up a weakness, and then strike. Also, he likes to make the enemy feel comfortable, make himself appear predictable, and then surprise the enemy. His signature move is a scoop kick, aka, a swift kick to the balls. He is well versed in MMA, so he can take the fight anywhere if it is pure hand-to-hand. Special Characteristics: To be created through rp
THE BACKGROUND. History: Birth Arc Takashi's father was a body guard, his mother a chef. He didn't see his father often, but when he did, his father taught him as much about fighting as possible. When his father was away, all he would do was train. He wanted to be just like his father and worked as hard as he could to become as good of a fighter as him.
Takashi's mother didn't spend much time with him. She would cook all day, come home, and drink until she fell asleep. The martial arts that his father taught him was the perfect escape from his mother and her abusive nature. He put all of his thought and training into becoming a ninja. Takashi knew that becoming a ninja would make his father proud and that was all that mattered to him. Endlessly he trained, night and day, injured or sick. He was never forced to use his talent and skill as a fighter, but he was always prepared to do so.
Academy Arc Takashi was blown away by the talent of the other student's at the academy. Most of them had special abilities called kekkei genkai. He couldn't help but wonder why he didn't have one, but he didn't ponder it long. Quickly, he became determined to prove that you don't need a kekkei genkai to be a great ninja. He trained even harder than before. He would train the jutsu he learned from the academy over and over again until he didn't have enough chakra to stand. During this time, he father began teaching him more advanced taijutsu. Some of the moves even used chakra.
When he'd spar other students, the would use more ninjutsu than taijutsu. He found fighting ninjutsu difficult, especially because he was so accustomed to taijutsu. If anyone tried to fight him hand to hand, he would dominate them. Eventually, students learned to fight him at a distance. It didn't always work for them, but it didn't always work for him either. His defeats just made him more determined to better himself.
He finished the academy with flying colors. When he did so, his father celebrated with him. During said celebration, the training weight suit was given to him. It vaccinated him. It wasn't pretty, but it looked like it could get the job done. The pride his father showed that day has encouraged Takashi to train even harder, if that is possible.
Genin Arc Takashi hasn't been a genin for very long. He has not been given a squad. He hasn't had a mission. In fact, he took a few days off from training and celebrated his graduating of the academy. Literally, nothing has been done as a genin yet.
Roleplay Sample: Focus. Using his gloves, Fang sliced yet another log in his obstacle course designed as a warm up. Breath. Using the metal nails of both of his hand gloves, he ripped open another log. For crying out loud! Keep your tongue in your mouth, man! Fang fought his animal-like urge to pant while using a woo shoo style kick to jump over a log, followed by a kneeling reverse punch to send a log flying across the course with the spine marks of the glove in it.
Fang Ookami rose slowly, breathing in deeply, taking in the world in a single breath. He did this again, keeping his eyes closed. And again. At the end of the third breath, he opened his eyes, a fierceness in them. He was ready for whatever may be waiting in the wilderness. He had his explosive kunai and his clan's gloves. His loin cloth was brand new and blended well with his fur. Fang was well groomed and clean. His razor sharp teeth were cleaned and ready to be bloodied. Physically, he was at top peek. Mentally, he couldn't be more prepared. This was his moment. This was his time to shine.
He looked up at the sky. Konoha was clear and sunny, but it was a different story near the Waterfall Village. It looked as if it were about to rain. If the targets were still in that area, then his lightning ninjutsu would have more of an effect on them, for they would be wet. Fang snarled at the thought of the outlaws. Anger boiled inside of him. They were messing with HIS country. Nobody did that and got away with it. A howl erupted from his snout. He ended the howl and was filled with a wild, rampant sense. He bolted over the fence and headed for the direction of his destination.
He ran down the streets of Konoha on all fours, tail up, ears and eyes scanning the area. He dodged people left and right, using his agility and speed to his advantage to move through the crowed. A group of tourists blocked his path at one point, so instead of plowing into them, he ran up the side of a building and began to leap from roof to roof.
During a leap to a building over an alleyway, Fang's sharp eyes and ears caught a horrible scene. A group of five or six males were cornering a young lady. The one in front appeared to have a knife in his hand, slowly approaching the woman. The woman was terrified, obviously, of what was about to be her fate. Fang halted in his tracks as he hit, reversed direction, and aimed his body at the leader.
He hit his mark. He landed on the leader's back, causing him to collapse to the ground. Quickly, Fang stood up, bringing the leader up with him. The metal tips of his glove were on the man's neck. Blood drops hit the ground as the evil man gasped like a fish for air. Fang took command in his own voice. "Leave. Turn yourselves in or I will find you."
The men scattered like cockroaches. He released the death grip on the man and pushed him into a running start. He crashed into civilians as he ran for his life. Fang looked down and picked up the switchblade the man had left. He folded and pocketed it. Before leaving, he looked at the woman who stared at him, mouth wide open, and said, "Have a nice day mam."
He traveled the rest of the way by roof, keeping an even better eye on his surroundings than before, just in case he was needed again. He wouldn't be. When he saw the destination and three shinobi at his destination, he knew what to do. He could walk up there on appearance alone and most likely still get stared at, but he couldn't resist doing what he was about to do. Of course, any shinobi could do it and it was no special thing, but it was a big enough entrance for him. He launched himself into the air, performed a front flip, and landed behind the group silently. He looked back at the group and simply said, "Let's go. We can get to know each other on the road." He began walking toward the gates. He wanted to get this mission through with fast.
THE ARSENAL. Academy Jutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. This technique can only be used if the user is a higher rank then their captive. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 3
Cannon Taijutsu (from the encyclopedia)
- Spoiler:
Name: Konoha Reppuu - Leaf Violent Wind Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The move here is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Konoha Senpuu - Leaf Whirlwind Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A taijutsu where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Konoha Dai Senpuu - Leaf Great Whirlwind Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A series of kicking attacks, starting from a low kick and linking into a middle kick and high kick then finishing off with a heel drop. As the rotation speed picks up the user gains buoyancy, which they use to shift into gradually higher attacks. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Konoha Kage Buyou - Leaf Shadow Dance Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Konoha Kage Buyou is a Taijutsu technique that is used to position a ninja's opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. The ninja will first quickly appear below their opponent, then with a switch upper kick they will launch their target into the air. The ninja will then jump into the air to "shadow" the target with the target's back to their chest. This move is used before preforming "Omote Renge - Front Lotus" or "Shishi Rendan - Lion Combo". Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Konoha Raiken - Leaf Thunder Fist Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The user will spin to gain momentum and then lay a powerful strike into his or her opponent via punch. Chakra Cost: 6
Custom Tools- Spoiler:
Name: Training Weight Suit Rank: C Type: Training gear Appearance: The suit consists of many different parts. There is nothing at the joints, making joints the weak points in the suit. The suit covers the torso, the arm (excluding the elbow, shoulder, and hand), the legs (excluding the hips, knees, and feet) and the top and back of the head. Even though the suit doesn't have weights on the joints and neck, the suit is connected. The suit itself is black and thick because of how many layers there are. The layers lessen the impact on the user they take when struck in areas where the weights are. The suit is all black and bulky. There is a zipper running down each shin and down the chest and stomach. This makes for quick put-on and take-off. Quantity: 1 Storage: The suit is either worn or left on the ground. Special Abilities: This suit can be hit with E-C ranked weapons and techniques without breaking. This can prove as a helpful defense for the user. However, if hit with a B-S rank weapon or technique, the suit will break.
The following percentages are taken from someone that has never worn the suit before: The suit will lessen power, speed, evasiveness, and accuracy by 50%. When training with the suit on, it will increase these stats by 5%. This 5% will build on itself for every topic, meaning that if the user does five topics that qualify for the stat gain, then the user will be 25% faster, more evasive, more accurate, and more powerful then when the user started training with the suit. The stat increases are cut in half when the suit is on.
Here is an example: after the first training session, the user will be at 105% without the suit on and 52.5% with the suit on with all of these stats. These stats continue to increase with each training session. The only way to increase these stats is to be in a topic and have the suit on from the first post to the last. If the suit is taken off or broken off in the middle of the topic, the stats will not increase. The stats and evidence of increasing stats will be kept track of by the user and put into the user's signature.
Last edited by TNT on Sun 03 Apr 2011, 6:33 am; edited 5 times in total |
| | | TNT
Age : 30 Posts : 644
| Subject: Re: Onoshaka, Takashi [Kusa Genin] Sat 02 Apr 2011, 6:33 pm | |
| Completion bump |
| | | Ryuuza
Age : 32 Posts : 381
| Subject: Re: Onoshaka, Takashi [Kusa Genin] Sat 02 Apr 2011, 8:28 pm | |
| A Genin Arc is needed, however it can be a few sentences long.
- TNT wrote:
- When training with the suit on, it will increase these stats by 5% when the suit isn't on and 2.5% when the suit is on.
That part needs to be reworded, of your training suit. I'd simply put it makes training more effective, because of weight. |
| | | TNT
Age : 30 Posts : 644
| Subject: Re: Onoshaka, Takashi [Kusa Genin] Sun 03 Apr 2011, 6:09 am | |
| Done |
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| Subject: Re: Onoshaka, Takashi [Kusa Genin] Sun 03 Apr 2011, 7:03 am | |
| 1/2 approved. Seeing that Blaize was wanting a better of the suit, I'll let him determine to apprve. |
| | | Blaize
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| Subject: Re: Onoshaka, Takashi [Kusa Genin] Sun 03 Apr 2011, 10:49 pm | |
| 2/2 Approved |
| | | Adam
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| Subject: Re: Onoshaka, Takashi [Kusa Genin] Thu 14 Apr 2011, 8:25 am | |
| Unapproved after a conversation with the user. |
| | | TNT
Age : 30 Posts : 644
| Subject: Re: Onoshaka, Takashi [Kusa Genin] Sat 16 Apr 2011, 4:31 am | |
| This should be archived |
| | | Elder Sage
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| Subject: Re: Onoshaka, Takashi [Kusa Genin] Sat 16 Apr 2011, 5:00 am | |
| Archived. |
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