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| Basic Information:
Name:
Yamanaka, Freya
Secondary Title:
N/A
Age:
14
Gender:
Female
Physical Appearance:
Freya stands about 3,9 ft tall and has slender body build. She is smaller than most of the girls her age. She has Blond Hair that reach down to her shoulders. Her ears are covered by her hair. Freya has light blue eyes. She has small eyelashes. Freya's nose is also quite small. Her mouth is normal size. Freya doesn't usually wear any kind of lipstick. Her nails are not painted. Her special character features are probably that she always has a lollipop in her mouth, even when fighting.
~Normal Appearance
[This is appearance she has while just walking around the Village.]
At her free time she normally has her hair free and doesn't have any kind of hairpin's in her hair. She always has lollipop in her mouth. During her free time she wears tight black pants that reach little below her knees. She wears light purple long shirt with some extra features. She has red belt around her waist. Even when walking around the Village she has her ninja tool bag attached to her left hip just in case. It contains some basic Ninja Tools [Look Under Weapons]. Her Konohagakure no Sato's headband is attached to her right arm. It has blue cloth. She also wears black ninja sandals. Freya also wears long black cloves with metal plates that have Konoha Symbol graved on. Under her clothes she has bandages around her chest. There is a Shuriken Holder attached to her right leg.
~Mission/Battle Appearance
[This is appearance she has when going on a mission or having a battle that has previously planned.]
Unlike on normal appearance, on mission she has her hair tied up with senbon. Although this might be a battle appearance she still has lollipop in her mouth. She also wears tight black pants, only little shorter. Above that she has a blackish mini skirt. During battles she wears gray shirt. It has fishing net in one place [Look Picture] but in overal it looks pretty plain. She has her Ninja Tool Bag attached to her right hip. She also has another attached to her right hip, there she keeps her medical stuff. On her back she wears a normal Katana. Freya has arm guards that can withstand normal kunai and katana hits. She also wears leg guards. She wears short black gloves with metal plates. Short so she could remove them quickly and heal more effectively. Just like before she has black ninja sandals. During missions and battles she wears her headband on her forehead. She still has wrapping around her chest. There is a Shuriken Holder attached to her right leg.
Personality:
Freya is seemingly quite nice person. She is also very kind and always tries to help people who need help. Young Kunoichi mostly likes to be outside. She hates being inside the house or some kind of other building expect hospital. She loves sweets the best and can't live without them. That is why she is almost always seen a lollipop in mouth. When someone asks why does she likes sweets so much she usually tries to dodge the question or answers "I don't like sweets, they just put your brain to work" which is of course a lie. Freya loves reading medicine books and when walking around the Village she often reads one. She also loves flowers which is mostly because she is from Yamanaka Clan. When she is lonely and has nothing to do she talks to them.
She likes to solve her problems herself. She is more the talking type and doesn't like to battle. She tries to avoid fighting at all costs. When it comes to fighting in the end she usually first tries to understand opponent's fighting style and then make him/her unable to battle. Although Freya is quite experienced being a Ninja and is quite old genin she still can't take opponent's life without hesitation. She usually tries to knock the opponent out. Although she doesn't like to kill she can still do it when the life of her companion is at risk. Freya can also kill for the sake of the Village. Some people might think of her battle style as little soft but when they look more into Freya stores the corpses of those who she has killed inside the scroll and has no hesitation of using them in real battle. When she is on the battle field with her companions she stays on background and doesn't attract much attention. If someone get's injured she quickly goes and heal them. She treats everyone equal.
Catch Phrase:
"A successful mission with death is a failed mission."
"Everyone are equal in the shinobi world."
Clan Information:
Clan Name: Yamanaka
Clan Location: Konoha
Clan Traits: There is only one large distinguishing physical trait of the Yamanaka clan and that is their natural blue eyed blonde hair appearance. Members of this clan are big into studying flowers and so they know how to utilize what the flowers can provide in a scientific/medical way. Therefore, they are typically medics. Largely, this clan takes mental warfare to a whole other level, having the main frame of their techniques focus on the opponents mind rather then their body or chakra network. This also gives them heightened mental powers of their own. This is further explained in their jutsu.
*Must have Ninjutsu as a specialty, preferred Medical ninja as a specialty as well
Kekkei Genkai: -
Secret Clan Jutsu:
Name: Mind Transfer Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: This technique allows the user to enter the mind of another person or even an animal.[2] The user transfers their consciousness to the opponent, giving them complete control of the body for a short period of time. Their original body is left defenseless while this jutsu is active, leaving it susceptible to attack until they return. The mind transfer is slow-moving, moves in a straight direction, and takes some time to return to the user's body if it misses. Because of these reasons it should only be used on immobilized targets. Similarly, if the opponent's will is strong enough, they can force the user from their body. Lastly, should any physical injury befall the victim's body while the mind-link is active, it would cause the user's body to also receive those same injuries. For example, should the victim's arm be detached, the user's arm would be detached as well, leading to the conclusion that, should the victim die, the user would also die. Drains a C rank amount of chakra per post.
Name: Telepathy
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: This jutsu allows the user to telepathically communicate with other people. The user must control their chakra in order to keep the telepathic link with the designated communicator. If they are startled or attacked when they are concentrating the link breaks and takes up a C rank amount of chakra for every post it is used. It it is only good for up to ten meters.
Name: Mind Destruction Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: -
Description: This technique is a variation on the Mind Body Switch Technique. Rather than transfer all of the user's consciousness into the target, this jutsu sends only a spirit of confusion, causing them to attack their allies. Although the target is aware of what they are doing, they are unable to stop themselves. This technique can also be used to simply stun the opponent so they can't move. This can also be used to transfer the user and target to a nearby location (50m away, no more). Drains A B rank amount of chakra per post.
Name: Mind Puppet Curse Seal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: -
Description: This jutsu utilizes puppetry as well as the Mind Transfer Jutsu. The user will first transfer their consciousness into a puppet. Then they will control the puppet directly with their mind and attack the opponent. When the opponent attacks the puppet, the minds will switch, placing the opponent in the puppet, and the Yamanaka user into the victim. This leaves their body very open for attack, and also, any damage the victim receives will also be done to the user as long as this jutsu is in place. Drains an A rank amount of chakra per post.
History:
The Yamanaka Clan is one of the newer additions to Konoha's Ranks. They were once a secret group of people, hiding in the wilderness and forests of what is now called the Land of Fire. Their unique jutsu was developed by honing their 'influential' attitude and ability to 'communicate' with other animals and people in the forests. The were a independent, and often reclusive people, but often had contact with the Nara and Akimichi Clans, and soon realized their talents as a group. This would be known as the Ino-Shika-Cho trio; a deceptive, yet devastating combination.
They joined Konoha after their homeland was destroyed by the raging demon. Their greatest heroes, including their clan leader, all went to fight against the demon, only to be destroyed so quickly. They were all in awe when their clan was left defenseless, especially in such a destructive time. Their leaders for the past hundreds of years have demanded solitude and independence from the Villages, and their affairs. After this, they had no where else to go. The Hokage at the time accepted them, after finding out about their past and powers. Shinobi were needed to fill the Konoha Ranks, and the Yamanaka were their to help. Whether as support ninja, or ANBU away from site from the rest of the world, the Yamanaka have never ceased to fail to support Konoha.
Rank Information:
Rank:
Genin/C-Ranked
Village Affiliation:
Konohagakure no Sato
Special Information:
Character Speciality:
Main: Medical
Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Water
Sub: Wind
Special Characteristics:
Very good Chakra Control; Has talent in Medical Ninjutsu and knows everything about human body; She has quite small and flexible body and thus she is pretty good at dodging.
Skill Information:
Note: You can find the other templates in the other Creation Areas if your character needs them.
Jutsu Template:
~Normal Ninjutsu
- Spoiler:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Other commonly known Techniques
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Name: Generic Sealing Technique
Rank: D/C
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items or weapons that have been stored using Fūinjutsu, typically they are stored within scrolls. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice. Puppets can have these hidden inside various compartments as a means of increasing their own killing potential as well as hiding useful weapons from the opponent's sight.
~Medical Ninjutsu
- Spoiler:
- Quote :
- Name: Enchanted Palm Techniques
Type: Ninjutsu [Medical]
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: A technique very similar to Mystical Palm Technique. Although it is a lot weaker and takes more chakra.
The Enchanted Palm Technique is a multipurpose technique that can heal wounds. To heal with the ability, users collect huge amount of chakra to their hand to speed up cell regeneration wherever it is applied.
Medical use/Bastardized use: Can Heal
~Yamanaka Clan Tecnhiques
- Spoiler:
Name: Mind Transfer Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: This technique allows the user to enter the mind of another person or even an animal.[2] The user transfers their consciousness to the opponent, giving them complete control of the body for a short period of time. Their original body is left defenseless while this jutsu is active, leaving it susceptible to attack until they return. The mind transfer is slow-moving, moves in a straight direction, and takes some time to return to the user's body if it misses. Because of these reasons it should only be used on immobilized targets. Similarly, if the opponent's will is strong enough, they can force the user from their body. Lastly, should any physical injury befall the victim's body while the mind-link is active, it would cause the user's body to also receive those same injuries. For example, should the victim's arm be detached, the user's arm would be detached as well, leading to the conclusion that, should the victim die, the user would also die. Drains a C rank amount of chakra per post.
Name: Telepathy
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: This jutsu allows the user to telepathically communicate with other people. The user must control their chakra in order to keep the telepathic link with the designated communicator. If they are startled or attacked when they are concentrating the link breaks and takes up a C rank amount of chakra for every post it is used. It it is only good for up to ten meters.
~Water Ninjutsu
- Spoiler:
Name:Mizurappa - Violent Water Wave
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Description:Suiton • Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent.
Name: Mizu Shuugou no Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
This jutsu allows the user to gather water from the environment around him, like from the air, soil, etc. However, if in dry lands, this jutsu is useless.
Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.
Name: Taihoudan - Large Projectile
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Taihoudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Elements. Amachi will generate water in his mouth and spit it as a stream at his target.
Name: Teppoudama - Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Teppoudama is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, the user manifests a large amount of water in his mouth which he can then spit at his opponent as a large spherical projectile.
Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however; it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.
Name: Mizuame Nabara - Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Izumo will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows Izumo or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.
~Wind Ninjutsu
- Spoiler:
Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, Orochimaru will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.
Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fuuton
Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Nagato will send a strong gust of wind towards his target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.
Weapon Template:
5x Kunai [In Ninja Pouch]
5x Shuriken [In Shuriken Holder]
1x Normal Katana [On her back]
5x Paper Bombs [In Ninja Pouch]
3x Smoke Boms [In Ninja Pouch]
1x Sleeping Gas Bomb [If the gas is breath in the opponent falls asleep. It is the one Sakura used in manga] [In 2nd Ninja Pouch]
5x Food Pill [In 2nd Ninja Pouch]
Food Pills are special pills that replenish one's stamina and chakra and nourish the body. It's made up of powerful stimulants and nutrients, said to allow the user to keep fighting for three days and three nights without rest.
5x Plasma Pill [In 2nd Ninja Pouch]
This pill is used by medical-nin to speed up the formation and increase of blood in the body. After having lost a significant amount of blood in battle, a medical-nin can use this pill to replenish the blood, so they can keep on fighting.
3x Empty Scrolls [In Ninja Pouch]
1x 5 Meter Bandage Roll [In her 2nd ninja pouch]
1x Brush with bottle of ink [In 2nd Ninja Pouch]
1x Small Bottle that contains bleeding stopping salve. [When Placed on a wound the bleeding from there will stop] [In 2nd Ninja Pouch]
2x Scalpel [In Ninja Pouch]
3x Mind Awakening Pill [In 2nd Ninja Pouch]
If someone is knocked out in the battle, Mind Awakening Pill can wake them up when they swallow it.
1x Senbon [in hair]
- Quote :
- Name: Bleed Stopping Salve
Quantity: 1 Bottle
Rank: D
Appearance:
A normal looking Small Bottle. It doesn't have any signs on it. The brownish salve is visible trough the glass. Because of it's little unique shape it is easy to find from Ninja Bag without looking.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: When opened it smells pretty good, but it's best effect is that when some of the salve is placed on a wound that bleeds, the bleeding will stop. It can start again when the one bleeding started moving too much but that hardly happens unless opponent has major wound.
Origin: Freya got it from his dead teacher when he thought her a little about Medical Ninjutsu.
- Quote :
- Name: Mind Awakening Pill
Quantity: 3
Rank: C
Appearance: [What does your weapon look like? a detailed paragragh or more is required. If you have an image please insert it in the area provided.)
Special Abilities/Characteristics: When placed into sleeping human's or any other being's mouth he will imminently wake up, although he might still be little dizzy. The pill tastes like ..., so basically it tastes very bad and probably no one wants to eat it.
Origin: Freya got it from Konoha Hospital just in case to aide his team mates someday.
Item Template:
- Quote :
Name: [What is the name of your item callled?]
Rank: [What is the rank of your Item E to S]
Type: [This is Medicine, Supplement, Enhancer, or Other.]
Natural Abilities: [What does your Item do? what are the effects? how long does it last?]
Background Information
History:
~Before Academy
16 years ago in Konoha a girl was born in Konoha Hospital. Girl was named Freya, Freya Yamanaka. Her father and mother were both from Yamanaka Clan. The girl had Blue Eyes like most of the Yamanaka Clan. After about a month her blond hair started to grow [I have no idea when do babies hair start to grow]. The youngster seemed very smart, being a baby or not and she also didn't cry much. Her parents had no problems with her. When she grew she learned how to walk, how to talk and a lot other things. Soon she released that she her father is a shinobi and her mother runs a flower shop but also has some skill as medical ninja. The girl learned how to read when she was 3 and a half. When she was already 5 years old she got herself a dream. She wanted to become the best Medical Ninja in the world so she could save many many people. It also meant that she wanted to become a Ninja and her father often trained her.
Although most of her time was wasted on normal training she still had time for her friend. She had quite much of them. They always played their games and talked secrets. Freya was pretty respected in the group because everyone liked her. As her time passed and she grew she got more sure about her dream and she also grew stronger. When she was around 6 years old she didn't talk to her friends much but still kept herself in contact with them. Her time was spent on training with her father or alone. She also read a lot of books. When Freya got 7 years old it was certain that she would become a kunoichi of Hidden Leaf because she entered the Academy.
~Academy Arc
When she entered the Academy she earned respect by her teachers quite quickly. She was very smart but her psychical needed some work. Freya worked on her psychical quite hardly because she knew that one important point for Medical Ninja was dodging. In Academy she met many new and interesting people. She quickly became friends with a lot of them and even met a girl who had similar dream with her. The girl was from Nara Clan and they became very good friends. They did everything together and because of that they worked very hard. Both girls wanted to become better than another, so while being best friends they were also biggest rivals.
As the years passed and both of the girls grew. Soon both of them had pretty grades but weren't best in the class. They didn't really care about that, they just wanted to surpass each other but that seemed impossible as they always had the same grades. Teachers often brought Freya and Nara Girl up as good examples of a Shinobi. They were happy that they were praised. In Academy Freya also learned a lot of different techniques which she found pretty useful. She knew that as an Academy Student she probably couldn't learn any Medical Ninjutsu but learned about Human's Body so she could treat them. She also trained her body pretty hard as well.
When Freya was 12 years old, soon 13 she slowly started getting into Yamanaka's Clan Techniques as-well. Freya asked from her father what are Yamanaka's clan special techniques and he answered "Well, I think I should put it this way, Yamanaka Clan Members are able to challenge their chakra trough the air and thus can preform some pretty decent moves." Freya's father wasn't very good in explaining and decided to teach her one of Yamanaka Clan Techniques to get better picture out of it. From that time Freya spent most of her time learning the clan technique but when Genin Exams started to come up she decided to study for those. She passed genin exams with pretty good grades just like Nara girl.
~Genin Arc
When Freya graduated from Ninja Academy she was put into a squad with a Jounin Teacher. Her other team mates were her best friend, the Nara Girl called Kageyo and a boy from Achimichi Clan called Farrot. Their Jounin teacher was pretty respected in the Village and was also quite strong. Their Team was one of the only teams in Konoha which had 2 Kunoichi and 1 Boy. Soon after joining the squad Freya finished learning the Yamanaka Clan Technique called Mind Body Switching Technique. She was very happy about her accomplishment but still was very hard working.
After about a month or so being together with her team she became very attached to them. All of them wanted to become stronger and so they spent most of their time training, Jounin Shinobi in the team guided them of-course. They also completed many D-Rank Missions. The missions were very easy for them and after they had completed some of D-Ranks they also started taking C-Rank Missions. At their free time they often went to help people around the Village. Because of that their team got known pretty quickly and they had quite good reputation among the normal villagers.
After the team had been together about 6 months and Freya had learned some new Techniques, Freya's team got very amusing announcement. The registration of Chuunin Exams were open and the team insisted on joining so their team leader signed them up. All in the team were pretty exited about the exams. And started working extra hard to pass them. Soon when they entered the Exams they were really surprised. They met so many new and interesting shinobi.
The squad passed the 1st test pretty easily. Two kunoichi of team were able to figure out the answers and Ferya used Yamanaka Clan telepathy to pass answers to Farrot and that's how they passed the first test. When the seconds test came up they quickly ran to forest and started coming up with plans. They came up with perfect plan and were able to ambush one team. They were quite successful with that and were able to take down the squad, they didn't kill them of-course. A little before 3rd test came up Ferya caught a terrible flu and wasn't able to participate in the 3rd round. Other two joined in but non of them were accepted as Chuunin, they didn't show their ability enough.
After the tests the squad was pretty down but Freya kept their spirits high. She encouraged the team by saying sentences like "Let's train more and beat them all." It made them smile a little bit. They started taking training seriously and learned a lot new techniques. They decided to try a B-Rank Mission but it came out that the Rank was way off and their Jounin Sensei had to give his life away to protect Nara Clan Girl. After that the team broke up but they still stood in contact.
Role-Play Sample:
[This is how I would start a normal Practice Fight Topic or just chatting post but my fighting posts will be longer and more detailed.]
It was quite nice day. The sun was shining above Konohagakure no Sato. The sky was almost cloudless, those lone clouds moved very slowly because there were almost no wind. A Kunoichi who was still genin would have loved to enjoy the weather she liked but she couldn't do that because young yamanaka was about to have a little spar with her friend. Girl sat below the tree, resting her back against it and calmly waiting for her opponent. She had a lollipop in her mouth. "She is late." said young girl with blue eyes calmly. It wasn't very comfortable to talk with a lollipop in her mouth but she had already gotten used to it. Girl and decided to do something useful with that time. She look over the area once more time before they were going to fight. Her eyes scanned trough the ground, it was all covered with grass and there were almost no dirt visible even tough it had been rained recently. There were also not many trees around, just couple of small over so hiding in an area like that would be practically pointless. The ground was quite broken as it had some small hills, in fact Freya was on the highest one which had a tree on the top.
After about 2 more minutes of waiting for her opponent she got pretty impatient. She decided to stand up. She wiped off some dust from her clothes that were there because of her sitting. She quickly looked over the area, hoping that the girl was already there or maybe hiding somewhere and laughing over the girl who was waiting there. It wasn't like that, at least waiter didn't spot the girl. She made one big leap and jumped down from the small hill that was biggest in the area. Young girl yawned a little and started thinking but said her thought out loud. "Freya, Freya, Freya, why do you even wait the girl. She isn't my friend or anything like that." She placed one of her hand into her ninja pouch and pulled out a small scroll. She opened it and there was something written there. Freya calmly started reading it. 'Now where was I?' After she had found out where was she reading the scroll ... she started reading it and waiting for her opponent.
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| | Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Freya [Konohagakure Genin] (Completed) Mon 15 Feb 2010, 11:22 pm | |
| | Konoha Chunnin is closed now. |
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| | Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Freya [Konohagakure Genin] (Completed) Tue 16 Feb 2010, 7:23 am | |
| | Looks like I dawdled too much. I changed my rank to Genin and also removed all B-Rank Techniques and changed some things to make me more like a genin. |
| | | | Travis
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| | Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Freya [Konohagakure Genin] (Completed) Tue 16 Feb 2010, 8:11 am | |
| | That is a lot of weapons your carrying on yourself. |
| | | | Freya
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| | Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Freya [Konohagakure Genin] (Completed) Tue 16 Feb 2010, 2:20 pm | |
| | Well yeah, but most of them take not that much room and are basic Ninja or Medical Ninja equipment + I have 2 Ninja Pouches and a shuriken Holder. |
| | | | Ulkira
Age : 31
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| | Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Freya [Konohagakure Genin] (Completed) Tue 16 Feb 2010, 10:31 pm | |
| Ninja pouhes aren't that big, at least 4 would be requried to fit all of the stuff. I would suggest moving the majority to scrolls or removing them all together.
- Quote :
- Name: Enchanted Palm Techniques
Type: Ninjutsu [Medical]
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: A technique very similar to Mystical Palm Technique. Although it is a lot weaker and takes more chakra.
The Enchanted Palm Technique is a multipurpose technique that can heal wounds and perform surgery. To heal with the ability, users collect chakra to their hand to speed up cell regeneration wherever it is applied. This aspect of the ability can be used in combat, though it requires great precision to be effective. When utilized in combat it allows the user to sever their opponent's muscle fibers or their chakra circulatory system at the point of contact.
Medical use/Bastardized use: Can Heal How is this any weaker than Shousen no Jutsu? Also, it's offensive use is actually another Canon technique, Chakra no Mesa (Chakra Scalpel or Chakra Dissection Blade) used by Kabuto. I would suggest removing that part from the technique's description and using the Canon jutsu. |
| | | | Freya
Posts : 6
| | Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Freya [Konohagakure Genin] (Completed) Wed 17 Feb 2010, 7:24 am | |
| Yes but my items aren't all that big. I have made a picture where i describe where the items are and from my point of view they fit there.
- Spoiler:
Red Ring - 5x Kunai, 2x Scalpel [And there should be some room left.]
Green Ring - Scrolls
Purple Ring - 5x Paper Bombs
Blue Ring - 3x Smoke Boms
As for second ninja pouch
Red Ring - All Pills
Green Ring - 1x Brush with bottle of ink
Blue Ring - 1x Small Bottle that contains bleeding stopping salve.
Purple Ring - 1x 5 Meter Bandage Roll
I also edited the technique
Last edited by Freya on Wed 17 Feb 2010, 7:24 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Forgot to put picture in spoiler) |
| | | | Travis
Posts : 414
| | Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Freya [Konohagakure Genin] (Completed) Wed 17 Feb 2010, 11:59 pm | |
| - Quote :
- 5x Food Pill [In 2nd Ninja Pouch]
Special Abilities?
- Quote :
- 5x Plasma Pill [In 2nd Ninja Pouch]
What they do?
- Quote :
- 2x Scalpel [In Ninja Pouch]
Normal Scalpels?
- Quote :
- 3x Mind Awakening Pill [In 2nd Ninja Pouch]
For? |
| | | | Freya
Posts : 6
| | Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Freya [Konohagakure Genin] (Completed) Thu 18 Feb 2010, 7:03 am | |
| Edited.
The Scalpels are normal. |
| | | | Travis
Posts : 414
| | Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Freya [Konohagakure Genin] (Completed) Fri 19 Feb 2010, 12:03 am | |
| | Ok, I'd like all custom pills, weapons, etc put in the item template seeing as a couple of them are custom and aren't seen in the anime. |
| | | | Freya
Posts : 6
| | Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Freya [Konohagakure Genin] (Completed) Fri 19 Feb 2010, 7:28 am | |
| | You meant those two things that I just edited? |
| | | | Pattycakes
Age : 30
Posts : 1701
| | Subject: Re: Yamanaka, Freya [Konohagakure Genin] (Completed) Sat 27 Feb 2010, 7:49 pm | |
| | all custom/irregular items have to be in the template ^_^ |
| | | | Hugh
Age : 37
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