Renkaisha Clan [Advanced Marksmen]

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Clan Name:The Renkaisha Clan
Location: Everywhere
Signature Traits:
Various body traits - The clan is not made up of bloodline members, so there is no set body type or hair color or similar. In general, however, Rangers tend to be on the shorter side.
Extreme Skill in Archery, throwing knives - Usually have the Pinpoint Accuracy and hunter nin accuracy SCs
Extreme Skill in Stealth and infiltration - Normally have the Stealth and Infiltration SCs
Kekkei Genkai:
N/A
History:
The Ranger clan was formed hundred of years ago by a king of a long gone and ancient nation. They were formed originally by that king as a special operations force, that would watch the kingdom and ensure the safety of all its residents. They would be watchful of neighboring countries as well as of suspicious characters. The Rangers, from the beginning trained to develop considerable skill in stealth, infiltration, archery, and throwing knives. This would eventually lead to the creation of several skills and jutsu that the Ranger clan would be extremely secretive about. At start, they used only a bow and Throwing knives.

The clan eventually evolved and became highly selective, rangers being chosen in secret from areas across the world. Every Ranger would, at some point take an apprentice to replace himself or another ranger. The Apprenticeship process is highly personal for rangers. It is a very difficult process where apprentice rangers are driven through difficult training exercises where they develop exceptionally advanced skill in archery and throwing knives, and especially in stealth and infiltration. The Rangers normally chose individuals who showed such skills from a young age. During apprenticeship, an apprentice becomes a full fledged apprentice by completing a series of tests. Afterwards, they are granted a bronze oakleaf necklace as a symbol of their accomplishment. Upon going from apprentice ranger to full Ranger, a Silver oakleaf necklace. The Gold Oakleaf necklace is achieved when a ranger retires from old age or dies honorably.

During the initial years, the Rangers served only the one king, but overtime they separated themselves to be an independent force. At present, the Rangers are still independant, and dedicate Rangers to Kusagakure and neighboring Allies. Currently, Will is the Ranger of Kusagakure. When Rangers are appointed to Ninja Villages, it is with the Rank of Jounin. This Tradition has existed for centuries.
Clan Jutsu:
Name:Background Meld Technique
Rank:E
Type: N/A
Range: Effectiveness increases as range increases
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is one of stealth. Using the appropriately colored Ranger's Cloak, the user of this technique will move their bodies in tune with the light and background movements. This gives them the appearance of moving in and out of visibility. It is less effective when the user is actually moving forward or back (walking, running, etc), and is nearly imperceptible when the user is completely stationary. It works on the principle that people tend to see what they're expecting to see, and takes advantage of it. Someone with extremely keen eyesight or keen perception will be able to see past this. This is a Ranger's most basic technique, and requires no chakra, as it is simple movement. At E rank, someone who was looking for you would notice you if you moved, if they're closer than 15m. It would take someone with extremely accurate eyesight or keen perception to notice you while you didn't move, and they'd have to be closer than 10m.

Chakra Cost: 0

Name: Advanced Background Meld Technique
Rank:D
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:Infinite, increases in strength at higher ranges
Element: N/A
Description:This jutsu is infinitely low in chakra cost, but is a staple of the Ranger clan is one of their most basic techniques. Using a very small amount of chakra, the user augments their Background meld technique, using chakra to further blur them, rendering them nearly invisible while moving. This technique is less effective while running or walking, but even then, it takes someone with extremely keen vision or keen perception to see them. When remaining stationary, the user becomes almost completely invisible, and even someone with keen perception will not be able to match them, as they copy the movements of nature so incredibly, blending in with the environment and the shadows to create a near perfect concealment. The method at which the user does this makes the technique infinitely more useful than the camouflage concealment technique. At D rank, it would take someone with extremely accurate eyesight or keen perception to notice you while you moved, if they were closer than 10m and it would take someone with B rank Perception to notice you while you were stationary, and they'd have to be at least closer than 5m. At 5m+ it would become virtually impossible to see the user of the technique while they didn't move.
Chakra Cost: 3 [1 more per post]

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Code:: Name:Background Meld Technique
Rank:E
Type: N/A
Range: Effectiveness increases as range increases
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is one of stealth. Using the appropriately colored Ranger's Cloak, the user of this technique will move their bodies in tune with the light and background movements. This gives them the appearance of moving in and out of visibility. It is less effective when the user is actually moving forward or back (walking, running, etc), and is nearly imperceptible when the user is completely stationary. It works on the principle that people tend to see what they're expecting to see, and takes advantage of it. Someone with extremely keen eyesight or keen perception will be able to see past this. This is a Ranger's most basic technique, and requires no chakra
Chakra Cost: 0

Please increase this to D rank. While this is a ranger jutsu I believe that thorough training was needed to achieve this jutsu, in which the rank of the jutsu should be increased to D rank. Also is what you mean about the ranger cloak is whether they are colored within their rank. (Bronse, Silver, gold?) Also I am guessing that this jutsu decreases in effect when the target is moving its body, not just walking but extending his arm out or something along the lines since it disrupts the lighting and background/environment in which the target is suppose to see? Also change the CP cost when this rank Increases.

Code:: Name: Advanced Background Meld Technique
Rank:D
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:Infinite, increases in strength at higher ranges
Element: N/A
Description:This jutsu is infinitely low in chakra cost, but is a staple of the Ranger clan is one of their most basic techniques. Using a very small amount of chakra, the user augments their Background meld technique, using chakra to further blur them, rendering them nearly invisible while moving. This technique is less effective while running or walking, but even then, it takes someone with extremely keen vision or keen perception to see them. When remaining stationary, the user becomes almost completely invisible, and even someone with keen perception will not be able to match them, as they copy the movements of nature so incredibly, blending in with the environment and the shadows to create a near perfect concealment. The method at which the user does this makes the technique infinitely more useful than the camouflage concealment technique.
Chakra Cost: 3 [1 more per post]

Please increase this to C rank. I have no further questions then what I had in the first jutsu.

Code:: Name: Fluid Movement
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is simply an ability to quickly perform actions in an extremely fluid way. This is achieved through repetition and practice. Prime examples of this in the Rangers Clan are their ability to draw, nock, and fire an arrow from their bow in under a second.
Chakra Cost: 0

I hate to say this but I think this may have to be switched to a SC only exclusive to the clan. If not then I need you to explain the ‘fluid way’ How much faster can one achieve to draw and fire an arrow from then your normal shinobi/archers.

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

The first background Meld technique doesn't take chakra, thats why it's E rank. It's simply a movement technique =]. And yes, movement disrupts it, I think I put that in there.

I'll remove the fluid movement, I already am planning on speed, and it just seems unecessary =]

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ehhh, I guess that is alright about the E rank.

Alrighty for the fact that you removed the fluid movement. I want to ask to please explain the differences with the jutsu in terms of rank, How does the jutsu change in rank. What is the effect in short range, mid range, to Long range.

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

The ranges don't matter much. The closer you are to the person using the technique, the less effective the technique is.

At E rank, someone who was looking for you would notice you if you moved, if they're closer than 15m. It would take someone with extremely accurate eyesight or keen perception to notice you while you didn't move, and they'd have to be closer than 10m.

At D rank, it would take someone with extremely accurate eyesight or keen perception to notice you while you moved, if they were closer than 10m and it would take someone with B rank Perception to notice you while you were stationary, and they'd have to be at least closer than 5m. At 5m+ it would become virtually impossible to see the user of the technique while they didn't move.

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I think I have a better understanding of the jutsu.

1/2 Approved my friend

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

I updated them with those precise figures, too.

Subject: Re: Renkaisha Clan [Advanced Marksmen] Sun 10 Apr 2011, 6:19 am

Quote :: Name: Meisai Gakure no Jutsu - Camouflage Concealment Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This is a ninja escape technique that allows the user to control how light is reflected around their body with chakra inflections. The technique also erases the user's scent and shadow, and is usable on any terrain. Perceiving the user's position is possible only for ninja with the ability to see chakra.
Chakra Cost: 22

This technique is A-Rank. To say that your D-Rank is infinetely more useful at that level means that it is highly overpowered. If a D-Rank which just causes the cloak to shift colors around you is better than an A-Rank that hides all presence except for those who can see chakra, there is a problem.

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

But it's not better than the A rank version =] with the A rank version, you can move as much as you want, and that alone is a HUGE difference. Furthermore, when you get really close to the user, it loses it's effectiveness, with the ranks posted. I think those two things added together definitely places it at D rank, as they majorly remove it's effectiveness compared to the A rank technique.

Subject: Re: Renkaisha Clan [Advanced Marksmen] Sun 10 Apr 2011, 6:53 am

So can I assume that it is like the technique Naruto and Konohamaru used except a lot better?

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

Definitely alot better, as it doesn't require the dumb sheet thing. It's very basic, and is effective because of it's simplicity.

Age : 31 Posts : 8965

Please go into detail with your clans traits.

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

There is no detail to be had, really Razz

The clan isn't made up of a bloodline, but rather people who are enlisted to join it. The only real traits are the accuracy and stealth, which are pretty easily explained.

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"The Ranger Clan"?

Clans need names. Please edit in an appropriate name.

After that you should be good:)

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

Haha, it doesn't have a name though. Ranger is what they call themselves, because it's not a clan comprised of people sharing lineage Razz

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They would all be known under a specific title even if they are not a "typical clan", as a form of a group. The forum is japanese based and "clans" have to named appropriately for approval. Just a proper name please and then it will be approved.

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

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2/2 Approved.

Age : 29 Posts : 4301

Archived.