Kaguya, Gavin [C-rank Nukenin]

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Kaguya, Gavin

THE INFO.

Name: Gavin Kaguya

Nicknames (Other personalities):
Ace
Scourge
Bane
Aisu

Age: He is actually 17, but he doesn't know that himself. He doesn't know his birthday or anything.
Gender: Male
Appearance: He stands about 5' 10" tall when he is standing straight up,
but most of the time he doesn't stand to his full height.
His posture is mostly dependent on his personality.
He has white, shoulder length hair that is very unkempt and randomly ripped and cut at spots.
There are random scars across his body, mostly self inflicted.
He is very fit and toned muscle wise, but he also shows a hint of malnourishment as he only weighs 140 pounds.
Because of his bones, he always rips his shirt, so he doesn't bother getting new ones.
Other than that, he has a crimson red cloak that he recently got, and only shows minor ripping,
and he has pants with a similar crimson coloring.
He doesn't use the bones in his legs often, so he doesn't have to get new ones all of the time.
His sandals are the standard black ones, and they are very beat up.

Personalities:
Gavin: Gavin is the fun-loving person. He is very energetic, and loves to dance.
He doesn't mind fighting, but only for fun.
When someone attacks a friend or even a neutral person who seems friendly,
he almost always springs to their defense.
When in real combat, his fighting style is moderately defensive,
and that is because he doesn't want his friends getting hurt.
He doesn't get aggressive because he can't get angry,
he doesn't control that part of the brain.
Gavin is one of the main personalities when dealing with people,
so he is usually out in villages and around others.

Ace: Ace is emotionless. He doesn't care about anyone else.
He will thrive, no matter the consequences on others.
He is cold calculating logic that is easily capable of murder without any remorse.
His fighting style is very precise and smooth, and he disregards almost all stress.
He doesn't control any of the emotional parts of the brain.
Ace is one of the two primary fighting personalities.

Bane: Bane is extremely fearful. He is completely paranoid about everything, and will never trust.
He is very unpredictable with his fighting style.
He could fight or he could run, but you never know which.
His fighting style is based on survival, though.
In the brain, he doesn't control happiness or any sort of trust.
Bane is the scared personality, and comes out most often when he is uncomfortable.

Scourge: Scourge is the angry personality.
He is pure rage, and almost always when he comes out he begins fighting.
His fighting style is extremely aggressive, and very relentless.
He doesn't have any friends, to him everything is an enemy.
The only parts of the brain he controls is anger and instinct.
Scourge is one of the fighting personalities, he is always the angry one.

Aisu: Aisu is the romantic, kind person.
He is a soft person who likes peace, and hates fighting.
He generally refuses to fight, unless someone suddenly attacks him or his friends.
If so, then he fights defensively to protect himself and his friends.
But even then, he most likely wouldn't attack at all.
He controls only a slight bit of the angry part of the brain,
but mostly controls the loving part.
Aisu is a personality that is out more often around people,
and usually when something sad is brought up.

Clan: Kaguya
Nindō: "How can you say you know me, when I don't even know myself?"

THE NINJA.

Origin: Unknown
Affiliation: To himselves. XD
Rank: C-rank Nukenin
Specialties: Weaponry (Main: Swords; Sub Exotic); Taijutsu
Elemental Affinities:
Combat Style: Depends on his personality.

Gavin is moderately offensive, but more defensive if he is around friends. He is energetic and has fun with his battles. This energy translates into a quick, up-close style of fighting. It also shows in his constant motion, rarely stopping to catch his breath. He will use some long ranged, but he won't stay back for a long time. Generally, he will use it while moving forward to get back to close range, or to move around the target.

Ace is more offensive than defensive, and very precise. He is patient and observant, always waiting for the perfect moment to strike. He is cold, calculating, and not afraid to kill. He has relatively no conscience or emotions, so killing is an obvious choice for him. He stays long ranged and sets traps, but when the right moment comes he will get up close and strike. But he can fight normally up-close as well, he just prefers to stay farther away.

Scourge is completely offensive, a chaotic storm of up-close fighting. Never letting a moment go to waste, he relentlessly attacks his enemies. He has no friends, so everyone and everything is a target. He doesn't like fighting long ranged, he rarely ever does. He doesn't just consider killing an option, it's more of a goal for him. He loves all of the blood and the gore from the kill, and will often start laughing and become giddy at the site of it.

Bane is defensive, and everything is an enemy too him. He prefers to fight long ranged, though his main goal is to get away. If he has to, he will fight though. He is mostly blind at telling friends from enemies. So even if someone is trying to help him, he may attack them as well. In general, he is paranoid about everything, so he is very observant and watchful.

Aisu, is very defensive, he mostly refuses to fight. He is a pacifist, unless he is forced into fighting. If he does fight, he prefers long ranged. He also aims to deter, and rarely, maybe on accident, will he seriously injure someone. He refuses at all costs of killing someone. If that were to happen at his own fault, suicide would be a strong option for him.

Special Characteristics:

"Clan Prodigy":

THE BACKGROUND.

History:
Even from the beginning, Gavin never had any real family. His family was a part of the Kaguya clan, an aggressive clan that used their powerful bone manipulation to take over other villages. His mother was in one of those villages, and his father raped her, just like any other woman. She put up a lot of struggle and tried to escape a lot, so after Gavin was born, they killed his mother.

When he was about five, his clan finally went too far. They tried to attack a village far too big for them, and finally got defeated. None of those attacking survived, they fought to the end no matter what. Right after that, the other village invaded and wiped the rest of them out, they didn't want the Kaguyas to come back. However, they saw the helpless child, and unlike the Kaguyas, they felt pity for him.

They brought Gavin back to their village, but they didn't raise him. They were still afraid of him and his kekkei genkai, so he had to live off of their scraps. At about the age of seven, he began idolizing a ninja from the village. His idol's name was Gavin, and he was just a teenager. But he was a happy, energetic ninja that actually talked to him. This is where Gavin came to call him self that name, and why that personality acts that way.

When he was ten, he began finding things out about his bone powers. The village didn't like that too much. They tried to keep him contained. Gavin, the other one, however encouraged him to use his ability. He gave him the nickname Ace when he was shooting his finger bones out because he could easily make them accurate. He was at a different mental state when training, though. It seemed to be a different person than Gavin, and even some memories made by Ace weren't retained by Gavin.

The villagers soon found out about the other Gavin helping him train, and disallowed them to talk or be near each other any more. This made Gavin upset, and he became extremely angry. He began trying to find Gavin, but soon the rage consumed him. He forgot about Gavin, and just fell into a rage of attacking. He killed two people, including Gavin, and injured a few others, and before they could catch him, he left into the woods. He came to call himself Scourge, or the curse of the village.

As he was in the woods, they chased after him. They wanted him dead and his bloodline gone. Their pity for him was gone. paranoia set in, and yet another personality came out in him. He called himself Bane, another word for curse, but a remorseful one unlike Scourge. Soon, the villagers stopped chasing him, but he kept on running. He saw them around every corner. No matter how tired he was, if he was Bane, he would be too scared to go to sleep.

Years passed, and he spent all of his time alone, or however alone he was. Bane always took over near people and ran away. But eventually there was an instance that he did meet someone for the slightest moment. The man's name was Aisu, and he was an ice ninja. Gavin was in control at the time, and he was climbing trees at the time. He swung off a branch and landed on the ground right next to the tree Aisu was laying against. He didn't notice the man there until Aisu said hello. It surprised him, but his voice had a kindness about that calmed Gavin. Aisu managed to get Gavin to talk to him about his personal life, and that brought out another personality. This one was named Aisu after that man.

Now Gavin just wanders through the woods, surviving by hunting or stealing from others. He constantly trains, as he has nothing else to do. Gavin and Aisu would like to find someone to travel with, but Scourge and Bane are completely against it, and Ace usually doesn't care, but he doesn't want to have to help people.

Roleplay Sample:
He was Gavin at the moment, and as usual he was climbing a tree. He really loved doing that. He got up to a good view point about thirty feet up the tree, close to the top. It was a lone tree in the middle of a field with grass that reach up to almost knee height. The field was surrounded by a forest, and it was a good hundred feet to the nearest tree in any direction.

Aisu came out of Gavin as he watched the sun set behind the trees. Beautiful... So very beautiful. I wish I could paint a picture of this... He moved farther out on the branch to get a better view, but suddenly the branch snapped.

While he was falling, Aisu hit a branch. This brought Scourge to the surface. He stabbed bones into the tree to stop from falling, then he began cutting at the tree with his bones. He cut off the top of the tree and kicked it down to fall the other way. He then back flipped off of the new top of the tree, and rushed forward to cut down the rest of the tree.

After he was done, he looked at the fallen tree. Aisu came back into control and sadly put his hand on the tree. "Why...? Why did I do something like this..." he trailed off. He then walked away sadly from the tree and went into the forest.

THE ARSENAL.

Academy Jutsus:

Spoiler:

Clan Jutsus:

Spoiler:

Age : 30 Posts : 41

Complete.

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Would you please align your application to the left, I don't know if it's just me, but its fairly difficult to read and analyze when it's centered.

Age : 30 Posts : 41

Sure thing.

Age : 30 Posts : 41

Bumpity bump bump!

Age : 29 Posts : 269

Are you sure you want ninjutsu as your second specialty? I ask because its kinda useless to have it without any element affinities to support it.

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Furthermore, C-rank is the only open spot for nukenin, and judging from your rp sample and lack of techniques, I find it suitable for you as well.

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Measure wrote:: Are you sure you want ninjutsu as your second specialty? I ask because its kinda useless to have it without any element affinities to support it.

I use nothing else, since he was never taught anything else in his life, so I don't know what else I could put.
Would it make any difference if I had only Taijutsu as my specialty, nothing else?

Elder Sage wrote:: Furthermore, C-rank is the only open spot for nukenin, and judging from your rp sample and lack of techniques, I find it suitable for you as well.

Alright, understood. I apologize for the short RP sample, I'm still working out exactly how to RP like this. But that is just a reason, not an excuse.

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-A good second specialty would be weaponry, actually. You could consider the various "Dances" as using different bone weapons, so it would actually fit quite well, and you could build off of that. Its up to you though. If not, it would be fine to leave it at just Taijutsu.

-As a C rank, you cannot have any B ranked jutsu. Please remove Dance of the Willow and one of your Special Characteristics.

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Measure wrote:: -A good second specialty would be weaponry, actually. You could consider the various "Dances" as using different bone weapons, so it would actually fit quite well, and you could build off of that. Its up to you though. If not, it would be fine to leave it at just Taijutsu.

Oh right, didn't think of that. lol
Thanks

Measure wrote:: -As a C rank, you cannot have any B ranked jutsu. Please remove Dance of the Willow and one of your Special Characteristics.

Done.

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Still need to remove a SC :/

Age : 30 Posts : 41

Oh, right. Done

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

1/2 Approved. It'll be interesting seeing how you play these different personalities of yours.

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2/2

You and me both.

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Archived.

Due to inactivity.

Subject: Re: Kaguya, Gavin [C-rank Nukenin] Wed 11 Apr 2012, 7:37 am

Unarchived due to interest.

Age : 30 Posts : 41

Yay for interest! :3

Age : 29 Posts : 1585

Is it complete and ready for review? Otherwise, please add a WIP tag.

Age : 30 Posts : 41

It's complete, I just had it pulled out of the archives from being approved in the early fall. The only thing might not be completely up to date. I don't know what has been changed, but I'm hoping it doesn't need changed much.

Age : 29 Posts : 1585

There are some issues that need to be taken care of.

You are only allowed one Special Characteristic. Please remove one.
Change your Age to just "17". What you say about not knowing his birthday doesn't matter. You can include it in his personality if you wish to.
Change affiliation to N/A. It is a character application.
You have to expand on your Combat Style. Since we are talking about five personalities, you cannot just mention a trait of each in battle. A large detailed paragraph in certainly required.
You can add Weaponry Jutsu or Weapons from the Encyclopedia. You can also add a Kit from the list provided, but you are only allowed one. Read through the systems respectively if you have questions.

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Scale wrote:

There are some issues that need to be taken care of.

You are only allowed one Special Characteristic. Please remove one.

I actually had training for that when I was previously on here, and it was approved. I don't know if it still would be allowed, but I figured I'd ask first before I got rid of it. Here is a link to it:
http://www.ultimateshinobi.org/t4069-sc-s-bro-x

Scale wrote:: Change your Age to just "17". What you say about not knowing his birthday doesn't matter. You can include it in his personality if you wish to.
Change affiliation to N/A. It is a character application.

I respect that you are keeping it all serious, but I don't see a need to change either of those. They add some interest/humor to the character application, without changing the actual idea behind it so much that no one can tell what it means. So I respectfully deny unless there is reason enough to change them.

Scale wrote:: You have to expand on your Combat Style. Since we are talking about five personalities, you cannot just mention a trait of each in battle. A large detailed paragraph in certainly required.

That is understandable, however I will change it later on a computer, since I am currently on my iPod.

Scale wrote:: You can add Weaponry Jutsu or Weapons from the Encyclopedia. You can also add a Kit from the list provided, but you are only allowed one. Read through the systems respectively if you have questions.

I added a main and sub weaponry choice, and changed my specialties around so weaponry is first, then taijustu. And he does not have any kits. And any weapons he may need, he will make out of his own bone, since he grew up with that as his only real supply of weaponry.

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Let me know when all necessary changes are done.

Age : 30 Posts : 41

I apologize for the delay, but I'm done now. Combat styles have been elaborated, let me know if I need more for them.

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Okay, so.. Still, you're only allowed one special characteristic upon character creation, please remove one for the time being.

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Out of interesting in eficiency in saving time and reducing work for all of us, can the training not just be looked at now and decided of it should still be approved. If not, I will comply, but there is no point if after this character is approved that I just post another topic linking to the same training topic and getting it approved then added to my profile. I would understand more if this was a new character, but this is just bringing an old character out of inactivity.