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| Basic Information:
Name:
Aitou Uchiha
Secondary Title:
N/A
Age:
18
Gender:
Male
Physical Appearance:
He is rather tall, standing at 6'1'' and usually seen in darker, solid neutral colors such as black that, while resembling the Uchiha dress, have their own flare to it. His hair is somewhat long, and black and he usually keeps it up in a pony tail of sorts to prevent it from getting in the way of anything. His eyes too are black but take up the red, three tomoed pupil of the sharingan when active; an obvious sign of his backround. He also has the facial structure of a uchiha which would make him easily recognizable. His nose and, jawline and the crease of his cheek bones are all similar to that of the average Uchiha. He is, in body, about 180lbs; most of which being muscle, and none of which taking away from his speed or agility. He has a surprising wingspan of his arms and would otherwise be rather lanky. His body is thus lean and cut; efficient so to speak. His legs are seemingly long, though his tall frame supports with scale to the rest of his body and it makes up for a powerful, natural fighter that comes in handy when dealing with swords.
Personality:
Aitou is a special case in that he essentially has two underlying persona separated by the event that cast amnesia upon him at about the age of thirteen. Eventually, these two personal will meet to form a third, final mind, but the question is... in the favor of sanity and order, or of chaos and madness?
Prior to this event, he was considered to be a cold product of militarism. He valued little human life, and took his own life for granted on many occasions. He believed that sacrifice was often necessary and acceptable for an over all purpose or mission. He was more machine then human. He registered emotions as weakness, and friends as burden. He knew no pain, he knew no strife. There were only objectives and goals, and the means in which to accomplish them. Because of this, he was torn from even his own family and new them as little more then the individuals that he was born from. He has no ambition of love or gain. He was by all standards, the perfect military asset and at such a young age was harden to believe that everything fabricated by the mind was simply a tool of survival and thus could be used as a weapon in battle.
However, after the event that lead to his amnesia, he developed a personality almost opposite of that which he originally had. He was almost hyper empathetic; easily picking up and even sharing the emotions of others. He valued life, and especially his own. He became an introvert and a wonderer, though curious to the world as he strives to absorb everything around him in hopes of one day recovering his lost memory. He is quite, as he values the art of listening over simply hearing and would rather receive input then talk himself. He doesn't believe in awkward moments, rather, appreciates the silence. While his overall ambition is geared toward good intent, his isolated state leaves him easily feeling frustrated and lonely, which has caused him to grow somewhat cold as the darkness in the hearts of those around him can often times be overwhelming. He tries to experience as much as he can so that he can possible relate to the world around him.
In battle, he is often surprised at his own ability. He is always at a contrast, as though he always goes all out in 'serious' situations, he attempts to refrain from killing the other individuals, which often times leads to hesitations in his judgement. However, with all that involved, he balances his instinct and muscle memory with a well thought out analysis; almost letting his body and mind work in sync with each other independent of his own will. It is a fated sort of combat that he would describe as 'fighting by faith'. His ideal of justice isn't necessarily strict when based on other individuals. In fact, he tries to be understand rather then judge others. While it was more or less a pensive individual, he does have a lighter side...
His less serious side is still pretty quiet, though he isn't a harden individual. His cold temperament isn't seen on his expression; and a soft smile and be seen on his otherwise neutral face. While he doesn't always express his contentment, he enjoys the beauty of silence and takes in the world around him to th best of his ability.
Catch Phrase:
N/A
Clan Information:
Clan Name: Uchiha
Clan Location: Konoha
Clan Traits:
The Uchiha have a number of traits which set them apart from the normal ninja. First off being that they all seem to have black hair. Also, every one in this clan has a main element of fire. They seem to be very proficient in the three basic jutsu arts of Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, and Taijutsu (This does not mean Uchiha characters can have three specialties), and are usually known as the elite brand of shinobi. Uchiha generally seem to work with their speed rather then raw brute strength and are very agile and quick.
* Must have Fire as main element and either Ninjutsu or Genjutsu as a specialty
Kekkei Genkai:
Sharingan is the blood inheritance limit of the Uchiha Clan. The Uchiha are said to be descendants of the Hyuuga, with the Byakugan changing into the Sharingan over time. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and almost instantly memorize the movements required to be able to complete it, including the needed chakra moldings and seals used. However the clan member cannot copy techniques that are unique to another bloodline and the clan member must have a body capable of meeting the chakra and physical requirements to do the jutsu. This rarely stops the clan member though, as such stressful situations often push their limits farther and allow them to harness their full potential.
The Uchiha clan member is not granted the Sharingan at birth; it is only activated later in life, typically during a time of emotional stress in the heat of battle. The Sharingan itself can be transferred to another non-Uchiha by a medical ninja, such as happened with Leaf ninja Uchiha Obito to his teammate Hatake Kakashi. Because his body was not born to carry the Sharingan, the eye is always activated and it burns Kakashi's chakra when used. To lessen the impact of the Sharingan on Kakashi's body, he normally keeps the eye hidden and out of use. Also of note, is the fact Kakashi, a non-Uchiha, was able to advance the Sharingan from two tomoe to three tomoe after gaining the eye.
The Sharingan itself contains three tomoe (comma). A higher mastery of the Sharingan can be seen in the creation of a new tomoe in the eye, with three tomoe being the typical highest form of the eye. The rare Mangekyou form is a unique evolution of the Sharingan beyond the three tomoe form, please see its entry for more information. An eye possessing two tomoe can allow the Uchiha clan member to track the movement of an opponent and do some minor copying of an opponents attack. For avoiding incoming attacks, the Uchiha's speed and agility will greatly control whether they can move to avoid it. However, three tomoe will greatly help in this area.
Two tomoe will also allow the ninja to pierce Genjutsu and see the surrounding reality for what it really is. It can also allow the member to pierce another’s body and see their chakra. While the eye is not refined enough to see the tenketsu and chakra circulatory system like the Byakugan, it can view the movement and flow of chakra. This can help them tell if a person is trapped in a Genjutsu, or if an attacker is a real threat or merely a bunshin.
An eye containing three tomoe will allow the ninja to see the image of an attacker’s next move from the slightest muscle tension in their body. This prevents wasteful movement and allows the Uchiha clan member to conserve much needed chakra in battle. It allows them to synchronize their movement to strike at an area moments before their opponent is even in that spot, essentially allowing them to strike out and hit their opponent before they're even there.
Three tomoe also grants the Uchiha the ability to do Genjutsu and hypnosis after locking eyes with an enemy. This can be used to cause their opponent to do an attack of the Uchiha's choosing. This hypnosis can also be used as a Genjutsu counter, which is the ability to turn a Genjutsu spell back upon the original caster without the requirement of forming any handseals.
The Mangekyō Sharingan ( Literally meaning Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye) is a heightened form of Sharingan. The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques. The Mangekyō Sharingan is distinguished from a normal Sharingan through its appearance, which changes the form of the tomoe seal. Unlike in the case of the Sharingan, the appearance of the Mangekyō Sharingan differs from user to user. The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to several powerful techniques, and erodes the eyesight of its users, eventually causing blindness, which can be alleviated by obtaining another pair of Mangekyō Sharingan from a sibling. The new Sharingan is dubbed the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan. The techniques used by this eye vary from person to person and is limited to one technique per eye. It can be achieved by the killing of someone who is very close to the user as a display of being willing to sacrifice anything for power. This can not be fooled and be a fake friend. It must be a real and true strong connection so it takes a certain kind of individual to be able to get it. It can also be gotten by extremely brutal and long training, taking many many many years to obtain of constant hard work and dedication, though the person can not be aiming for it and it actually just happens at random. Even with the hardest work, it is possible for an Uchiha to never achieve this level of eye mastery.
Secret Clan Jutsu:
Name: Demonic Illusion - Mirror Heaven and Earth Change
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Element: -
Description: A Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. Using the copy and counter functions of the Sharingan eye, the Uchiha clan member can stop the sensory spell cast on their body and reverse it back on their opponent. This technique requires the user to have three tomoe in each eye to use it.
Name: Sharingan Windmill Triple Blade
Type: Weaponry
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: A Weaponry technique utilized by the Uchiha clan. Using the developed vision of the Sharingan eye, the clan member hurls three Windmill Shuriken which have wire attached. While in the air the clan member can manipulate wire to make the blades circle the target, which results in the attached wire binding them.
Name: Ephemeral
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Element: -
Description: A Genjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha clan members. They will start this technique by using only one finger on their right hand. The target does not have to look into his eyes, a glance at the hand itself will be enough. Once inside the illusion, they can control the visions the ninja sees. This illusion can also be used to play on the fears of the target, causing them to see and hear those who they care about degrade them.
History:
The Uchiha clan was descended from the elder of the two boys entrusted by the Sage of the Six Paths with the power and will of the way of the ninja. The elder believed that might would bring peace. The Sage chose the younger as more fitting to be his successor, causing the elder to be vengeful. From the younger boy descended the Senju clan who would be the eternal rivals of the Uchiha. Before the founding of the ninja villages, the Uchiha were one of the many mercenary clans for hire. Because of their Sharingan, the Uchiha clan came to be known as one of the two strongest clans, the second being the Senju clan. Madara Uchiha was particularly powerful, and, upon attaining the Mangekyō Sharingan, he took control of the clan. Under his leadership the Uchiha grew stronger, conquering whatever clans they came upon, such that, whenever the Uchiha clan was hired for a job, the opposing side would hire the Senju.
Hashirama Senju, the leader of the Senju clan, grew tired of the endless fighting, and approached the Uchiha clan with a peace treaty. Madara feared that an alliance would lead the Uchiha to ruin, but his clan disagreed, and he was forced to accept. The two clans came together to form Konoha, with Hashirama being selected as Hokage. Madara believed that this was proof that the Uchiha would be made subservient to the Senju, but his clan saw this only as his attempt to rekindle the flames of war. They turned their backs on him, and he defected. Following Madara's betrayal, the Second Hokage gave the Uchiha control of the Konoha Military Police Force as a sign of trust. According to Madara, this was really just a way of keeping the Uchiha in check and out of Konoha's governing affairs. Over the years, some Uchiha have figured out this motive's true meaning, and tried to rebel against the village as Madara did, but they found that it was too little, too late to make a difference, as the Senju had already completely suppressed the Uchiha. Eventually a revolt was attempted by a select few Uchiha members, but this was crushed quickly and they were thrown in jail or put to death based on their role in the uprising. The Uchiha who did not partake in it, were not held accountable and after that the relations between the Uchiha and the rest of the village grew stronger and trust was finally instilled.
Clan Details: Open
Rank Information:
Rank:
Jounin
Village Affiliation:
Kirigakure
Special Information:
Character Speciality:
Main: Genjutsu
Sub: Weaponry
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Fire
Sub: Wind
Special Characteristics:
Ambidexterity -- Both of his sides, left and right, are considered 'dominant' allowing him to handle objects and situations/tasks with equal dexterity on both sides. This also dramatically increases his ability to shape hand signs and wield blades.
Background Information
History:
Aitou's History is a dense and complicated story that not even the most wise and old could possibly understand without experience. It all started as Medical Ninjutsu and other forms of advanced ninjutsu arts came into existence. It became possible through these advanced ninjutsu technologies to change and augment power and abilities within some reasonable limit and on the physical scale almost anything was considered possible. The Uchiha clan was one of increasing interest and many new borns of the clan were being made test subjects for the latest addition to these experiments. With the power of the clan being in the sharigan and it's unlocking, many scientists were searching for a way of forcibly opening the sharigan eye in those who had potential to gain it. Eventually, the Uchiha clan and the Medical core of Konoha came to a mutual agreement to begin secret studies into such a process, as both the military of Konoha and the Uchiha clan would benefit from success in such an industry. Some even supported the idea so much that they offered their own children for such tests; with high hopes that the opportunity would bring them glory. The plan was to create the most perfect of shinobi, and the Uchiha had the foundation in which to make it possible... one of the test subjects in this process was Aitou.
At only three months old, Medical Ninjutsu Technologies were used to test the child. It was thought that they child wouldn't remember these process and that they could just as easily be erased from memory. Many of the process were kept secret from even the clan as they were considered immoral by most standards, however the more they experimented the more was learned about the brain in general and the extreme knowledge that was being harnessed seemed like too much of a reward to yield to a single childs life. Aitou was from a very young age the play thing of Konoha's curiosity. Many different process were used. Originally, simply genjutsu were used as a form of suggestive training. Like simulations, if the boy could be trained in a threatening yet non physical environment, then perhaps the sharigan's activation could be accelerated. However, this was a failure over all as the boy was too young for the genjutsu to have any specific effect and the amount of chakra needed to prolong such events were too costly on those who had the ability to do so in the first place. They moved on to Fuuinjutsu and Ninja Technologies. Scientist nin, from Amegakure, werecalled in to weight in on the question and further hypothesis were drawn. Eventually, they looked to a new science known as 'Fuuineurology' which would be used to directly influence the childs brain.
Through these techniques, the scientist-nin and the Medical core could literally get images of the brain and follow the optic and sensory nerves of the child in correlation to reaction and balance centers of the brain. The Amegakure Scientist-nin had already compiled multiple reports and experiments in which a 'normal' human brains function was printed in detail and they used these as a control group in which to base the Uchiha brain upon. If there was potential to unlock the sharigan, it would be found in the brain. Nearly two years later, when Aitou was two, a procedure was performed using Fuuineurology to that would forcably shock the optic nerves into a threaten state for prolonged periods of time. It was a brute force method, but it worked... At the Age of Two, Aitou was the youngest individual to ever obtain the one-tomoe sharingan. It was considered a complete success.
However, with success came further experiments. It quickly became a case study in which Aitou was still young enough to be the perfect patient. They exposed him to every stimulus they possibly could, literally replayed records of battles, demonstrated ninjutsu, genjutsu, fuuinjutsu,taijutsu and many other arts for him to see and absorb, to take in. He was also taught as a soldier would be taught. He would enforced with the discipline of a shinobi and literally taught to be the perfect soldier. The young Uchiha, with nothing but the sharingan to guide him, had no choice but to become the perfect military tool. At the age of six, he had so much experience with the sharingan that he could recall almost anything that he had seen. The two tomoe was in his possesion, and he had learned basic academy ninjutsu simply at a glance. He was more then a success, he was a miracle. But these came at a great cost, that no one would ever think to consider.
Aitou was militarized as a child, literally brainwashed, and there was no hint of child in him. Even his parents were known to him as nothing more then the individuals that brought him into the world. He knew not happiness of love, only duty, pride, and a sense of justice that was taught to him. He was more robot then human, yet he was clinical. The sharingan exposed to him so early resulted in an exponential amount of activity in the brain. The plasticity of the brain created thousands of routes through the optic nerve that allowed him to learn permanently from only one lesson. He didn't forget, unless of course he wanted to. At only eight years of age, he had accomplished the third tomoe, and was considered chunnin status, though he wasn't allowed to literally go on missions because the scientists and medical nin were too afraid to lose their investment. Instead, they allowed him to go on simulation; experienced in subconscious genjutsu known as lucid dreams. It wasn't too long until he learned to use this technique on his own and could in fact train in his sleep. It was slowly getting to the point that the scientist questioned how much control they had over the boy, however they had instilled a deep militaristic patriotism that would cause the boy to monitor himself.
At the Age of ten, he was given the title of Jounin, and rivaled even decorated member of the Uchiha clan that were many times his age. However, his parents had long regretted their decision. They no longer had their son. They saw him, and of course, they knew who he was, but they had no hand in his raising, in who he was, or in who he would become... he was still just a toy of the military, and with not a hint of happiness in his heart, the parents wished they could take it all back; they realized that success is something earned, and more over, that it was not something worth risking the lives or paths of their loved ones for... their pain and sadness sunk deep into their hearts as if they had actually lost their sons life; as if the person walking about was simply his ghost and reminder of what could have been.
An Anbu black op at 12, he still had to report to the scientist, however, it was now that the military began to slowly distance Aitou from the medical core and scientist-nin. They were greedy. The weapon had been developed for them and now they wanted it in there hands, not to be simply looked at and admired. It wasn't too long until, in order to gain him as a 100% military asset, the military police turned Aitou against the scientist-nin with slander of false files that contained proof of malpractice and treason. It had worked, and Aitou abandoned his obligation to the scientist-nin as planned, however, what they didn't expect is for Aitou to then proceed to destroy and execute all that were accused of being involved as a form of 'justice'. Treason was punishable by death, and the 12 year old was the one who judged them. Without emotion and only guided by knowledge of 'wrong', he killed all involved in the original Uchiha project, and all information regarding the 'success' of the experiments where lost. Thought, because not only the experiments, but also the militarizes betrayal of the scientist were top secret, Aitou actions were covered up ten fold, even involving a massive pay off to the failing Amegakure government to atone for the loss of the scientist lives that were involved. However, now Aitou was 'free'.
It was at the age of 13 that Aitou's father made a decision. HIs name was Nail Uchiha, and him and his brother had both accomplished the Mangekyo Sharigan over the course of their lives. His brother was now a hermit of sorts in that he lived deep in the forests of Konoha, but was still affiliated with them. His used of the Mangekyo resulted in his blindness and thus his retirement from Konoha, however Kyoka and Nail had both developed devistating techniques their their eyes, both of where were, when demonstrated, considered forbidden in nature. Nail was blind in one eye due to the use of his technique once, however he decided that he would use his technique once more... on his son.
This forbidden technique was a powerful genjutsu that was deemed the highest tier of S-ranked. It was a sealing illusion (Fuuinjutsu + Genjutsu) In which the target's memories were captured and lost, sealed away to never be reclaimed, in short, selective amnesia. As a father, he felt it was his duty to fix what he had wronged, and by casting this amnesia on his son, he could completely remove all knowledge of the sharigan, ninjutsu, and shinobi in general. His son would be as close to a normal boy as he could ever be... and that would be all he would hope for. Nail and his brother Kyoka spoke on it, and his brother agreed. Kyoka would take Aikou after the technique was used, where he could live happily without ever learning about the Uchiha clan and their abilities, or even shinobi life at all.
Nail confronted his son without any hostility, needing only a glance in which to catch him in the technique; however Aitou had far surpassed even him; even without the Mangekyo. As a father, he hesitated, but was forced to fight his son. To his astonishment, Aitou was in fact the most powerful Uchiha he had come against, and not wanting to strike down his own son, he decided that he would let himself fall in order to save his son. Immediately before his death, Nail used the technique on his son blanking his memory and leaving him to pass out cold from the experience. However, it was incomplete, as he died before finishing the seal...
He came to live with his blind uncle, calling him uncle as he didn't know any better. He was always curious, always asking the question of where and how he had lost his memory; as the absence of memory of his life was more then an obvious sign. Kyoka always answered with a long elaborate story, through every time the story was completely different and obviously fabricated. Though Aitou lacked the sharigan, and now knew nothing of the sharingan, the make up of his brain was still vastly accelerated and his physical reaction and strength far greater then just a 'boy'. Even blind, Kyoka could recognize this... As he grew more curious, Kyoka gave in; defying his bothers wish and began to once again, teach him ninjutsu.
Just as before, it was simple and easy to learn, because his brain had done it before, he had simply forgotten. It was muscle memory; however his ability to use complex ninjutsu was completely lost, and so Kyoka spent alot of quality time in teaching him Kenjutsu and more specifically styles that only he had picked up on and could perform even in his sightless state. At the age of 15, he had learned all that he could form his uncle, and thus, his uncle sent him off into the world a-new, to different and exotic places where he would be able to learn and become a great shinobi; a destiny that he could not avoid.
Over the next three years, he studied under everything from samurai, sensory shinobi to circus performer and Tao Monks only to return to Konoha (All the while his uncle vouched for his existence in the village). His mastery of Genjutsu and Kenjutsu was impressive, even for someone that had not mastered the sharigan, and his adventure and experiences in that short amount of time shaped a new and brilliant individual from the machine that he once was. He retained his Jounin status, though was considered to be inactive due to the fact that he had once lost all of his ability. Re-instating as a shinobi was simple, though he was compeltly unknown as anything but a Jounin. Even knowledge of his Uchiha ancestory was a distant truth to those around him. All knowledge of his past was lost... with one exception.
Because the seal of the genjutsu was incomplete, it was weakened. However, thankfully, very few processes would ever be able to break such a thing, but one of which was the sharigan... It would soon come to pass that Konoha was no longer a sufficient home for him. If he couldn't find the knowledge that he needed in the roots of konoha, then he would move on to elsewhere that he could search. His obligations to the village were dropped, and with nothing by naive ambition, he set out on a journey to discover his past, with no clues... As you can imagine, upon discovery of such intent, Konoha wasn't too happy. Intel soon alerted that the man known as 'Aitou' was to be claimed a missing-nin, and hunted down and they did just that. It was only a week after Aitou had left that he was discovered by a pair of ANBU. His persistence prevented a peaceful alternative to brute force, and when brute force failed, the ANBU wished to kill Aitou to eliminate him as a threat. The two much more experienced shinobi toppled Aitou, leaving him on the brink of death and tossing his seemingly lifeless body over the cliffs of the Valley of End where he would be crushed by the waterfall at it's base. At some point in this rag doll free fall, the voice from under him willed him to live, and the sharingan was reawakened. In this state of hyperawareness, he was able to escape his fate, and escape. The two ANBU were none the wiser, though as they checked for the body, they found nothing. Afraid to report a failure, they simply stated that he was dispatched at the seen, and thus Aitou was truly free.
But the reawakened sharingan would be the key and clue to recovering his past, but having left Konoha, he couldn't simply return to discover the truth about himself through intell. Instead, he spent many days researching the doujutsu to the Uchiha clan, and his ancestry. It would turn out that he was a member of a widely known and famous ability. No wonder that when his travels led him to Kirigakure he was welcomed with open arms; they were more then happy to have a shinobi that could use the sharingan as a military asset, but it would make for the more free form base of operations. In search of his past, he looks to unite his clan and forge the future... but what does the future hold for him?
Role-Play Sample:
Hmm... paranoid? It was hard to believe that he would be so quickly approached and apprehended, but at the same time it WAS believable. This was a hidden village and for himself to be considered a jounin any individual on guard wouldn't simply let him walk out without word or authorization. Quick to engage. There was little hesitation in judgement in the shinobi world; after all there couldn't be. If he or someone else were to hesitate, it would cost them their lives, and just as he didn't think twice about leaving, this individual most likely wouldn't think twice about trying to stop him. But what an interesting intro.
It was a technique that he hadn't ever seen before. Dozens of swords fell from the sky in what was possibly an attempt to ensnare him or trap him. It was a decent way to make someone stop if they were trying to move. The only good tip were the shadows and the whistle of the air as they fell. The moon light was just bright enough to cast a difference in darkness and with such numbers he couldn't help but look upward and react immediately. He couldn't keep track of every sword but a small cluster was his target. He simply judged their trajectory and took an agile hop to where the blades wouldn't land. As a counter measure he lowered his hand to one of his blades just in case he had to make any emergency defenses but thankfully this wasn't the case. The blades landed about him, scattered almost. He checked them with his eyes as he turned to view the origin of the attack. While the blades themselves weren't rigged, it would seem as though he was already under the pressure of attack.
He pulled the blade that he had grabbed from the sheathe, flicking it straight into the air with a single finger as he reached across his body to grab the top blade on his right side, pulling it outward and slashing harshly across his body with a technique he called "The Reigning Prelude". It was a powerful technique that would extend a shockwave of from the brute strength and speed of the attack. With his opponent traveling at him as if attempting to attack, it would be hard for him to change momentum to avoid the first pull of his blade without retreating completely. It was about hip level, lower torso, and would be difficult to dip under or jump without being caught by the bladed shockwave. With any luck he could slay his opponent with this first deadly technique, but the mask that the man wore implied that he was a member of the ANBU black op, and thus the expectation of his skill would be higher then most opponent. One would soon discover the extent of the skill of the individual, especially if they continued their aggressive attack. In any case, he had to be quick yet careful. about how he handled the situation, because where there was one, another was never too far behind.
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| Name: Roshikomizue - The Six Concealed
Quantity: Six
Rank: A
Appearance: Six Identical Katana, each only 26'' each, all in black wooden sheathe made to six at the hip and down the thigh, three to a side. The bladed edge of each sword is a dark, luster black, while the rest appears to be metallic. The blades are all of highest quality, and have been not only smelted into a powerful alloy but have been said to be cold worked into incomparable density. Finally, the blade was re-enforced finished with a black obsidian edge. The wooden sheathe has a specific oil that has a powerful lavender scent that fills the air when drawn. The handled is made of insulated rubber and thus prevents the surge/current of electricity through the blade itself.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: In the case of many and almost all Genjutsu, some manner of sense based medium is needed in order to properly transmute the illusion to the opponent; especially in cases without hand signs. While Hearing and Sight are the two dominant forms of such transmition, one with Scent Medium can use a declared scent to capture foes in genjutsu. If the opponent can smell the scent, they are subject to the effect of a genjutsu; even without hand signs. In the case of Aitou, the lavender scent of his blades allow for such a connection. The blades themselves; as per common sense, the scent can be made to travel with the wind, and wind based techniques will smell of lavender while used. In this way, with every attack, the scent medium is released into the surrounding air. This is more of an explanation then a technique as something having a scent requires no chakra of exertion of any kind.
While the blades are drawn, the scent can fill the air for about 5meters and only lasts for a single posts in any one 'area'. If the blades remain in one spot, the scent will linger for as long as the blade is there. The winds can also blow the scent about, and wind infused and normal blade attacks will be able to send scent along with them, extending the range to equal that of the attack. For the most part, the scent is restricted to close quarters situations. However, exceptions exist where strategy and skill come into play.
Origin: The six identical blades were all considered failures. The original creators, "Georba and Boara" were trying to create the perfect katana with a smelting process that only used the smelting process of burning hot lava from the active volcano that their smith sat upon. However, the extreme heats caused each attempt to shrink, becoming shorter then a desired katana. The formula was accurate, however the en result was a blade whose reach wasn't adequate to be the 'perfect blade'. On the seventh try, the Black Smith pair was successful, and thus discarded the six original failures by gifting them to Aitou as a way of thanking him for helping; while they were useless in the eyes of the blacksmith perfectionist, he did say that they would sell for a high price and would make decent payment. Instead of selling the blades, he kept and used them.
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Name: Tegina Matsuro - Six of Swords
Emphasis: Kenjutsu, Six Identical Blades
Requirements: Must be able to keep track of multiple things at once, and use both sides of the body equally.
Description: This technique uses six blades in a form of sword play so unique to the style that it cannot be replicated in any other form. In it's most basic level, the Tegina Matsuro is a sequence of drawing, tossing, slashing and sheathing any one of the blades at any one time. With three blades at either side, one can attack from either side while feinting attacks, forcing distractions in a series of bluffs and stabs that vary in 'height' of the opponent. 'Height' being a word to describe the level in which the sword is used. For example; while the blades are kept about hip/thigh level, one will bring them into torso level when held, and often above the head when tossed. To accurately keep track of any one of the attack options, one would have to be able to follow the drawing of swords, which swords are attacking, which swords are decoys, and which ones are mid-air. This is a multitasking event that cause even the most sharp of opponents to fall victim to the otherwise unpredictable style.
Natural Jutsu:
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Name: Underworld Performance
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is the most basic of techniques in that all other techniques will eventually branch off of this maneuver. The user will reach down, grasping three blades; two in one hand while one in the other. The hand with two blades will flick the blades into the air; to the left and right sides, while the hand with a single blade will move forward to the opponent for an attack. The user can then sheathe, discard, or flick the attacking blade into the air while grasping the two blades that were originally flicked into the air and either sheathing or attack. If at anytime one sheathes a blade they can then toss one or two blades into the air in it's place or simply attack straight from the sheathe.
Name: Sharp note
Rank: E
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A simple technique possible during an 'Underworld Performance' technique or just a general skill. One can sheathe a blade, turn it on their finger and re sheathe it.
Name: Flat Note
Rank: E
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A simple technique possible during an 'Underworld Performance' technique or just a general skill. One unsheathe a blade, turning it in their fingers toward the opponent to thrust/stab directly from the sheathe without having to pull the blade across their body.
Name: Half-Rest
Rank: E-A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A simple technique possible during an 'Underworld Performance' technique or just a general skill. The rank of the technique depends completely on the physical exertion put into it and thus the rank that can be effectively blocked. This is a defensive skill in which the user will stop stop the 'Underworld Performance' grasping two blades in a linear form or in the form of an 'X' to block and in coming phyiscal attack with either the blunt or blade of the swords.
Name: Harmony
Rank: E
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A simple technique possible during an 'Underworld Performance' technique or just a general skill. This simply states that the user can attack with perfect symmetry; attacking at both sides as if they were identical reflecting attacks.
Name: Major Chord
Rank: E
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A simple technique possible during an 'Underworld Performance' technique or just a general skill. When tossing a blade, it will be made to arc forward slightly so it will simply fall on the opponent; easily cutting their head or piercing their skull if left unattended.
Name: Minor Chord
Rank: E
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A simple technique possible during an 'Underworld Performance' technique or just a general skill. When tossing or discarding a blade, it will be allowed to fall in front of the user, the user will then gently extend their foot, kicking the hilt of the blade forward to send the blade spiraling upward toward the opponent.
Name: Sharigan Intonation
Rank: D
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a technique that requires that the sharigan be active. With new found spacial rendering, depth perception along with motion tracking of the mind, the user can essentially improvise while using the style; putting together new techniques that branch of the Underworld Performance through imaginative creation alone. The rank of the techniques that can be created depend on the rank of the sharigan itself;
1 Tomoe - C-rank
2 Tomoe - B-rank
3 Tomoe - A-rank
History: This is a variant style in which other "multi blade" styles exist. It is the simplest of stances for the multitude of blades and is a result of his samurai training. For the most part, this is a result of him watching sword battles from a young age, when his sharigan was active; when he lost his memory and also his ability to use his sharigan, all that was left behind was the muscle memory form the experience; allowing him to piece together movements into a patchwork style known as the Six of Swords. In this way, it is completely original to himself.
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Name: Movements of the Demon's Solo
Emphasis: Kenjutsu, Single-Handed Blade
Requirements: Must be A-ranked or greater swordsmen with Kenjutsu Main or Sub.
Description:This is series of one handed sword whose name derive from a series of music works known as the demon's songs. Each focus on balanced yet incredibly fast motion that are made to completely overwhelm the opponent with close and ranged bladed techniques and situational counters that makes conventional sword play impossible.
Natural Jutsu:
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Name: Libera me Domine
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a technique used to catch the opponent with a trailing blade, so even if the target manages to read the pattern of this attack and move out of the user's trajectory, they will still be cut as the user careens past them making simply dodging an ineffective way of escaping this technique.
Name: Anaboko Chouka no Giri - Hollow Elegy
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a technique involving a single sword that acts as a counter to an opponents movement. At any time should an opponent attempt to use a technique such as the body flicker, substitution etc., in order to get in range behind the user, the user can counter by body flickering behind their opponent, leaving behind an after image. While the opponent’s attack hit’s the afterimage, the user will waste no time in finishing the opponent from behind them. Only possible if one can anticipate the move behind them.
Name: Zetsumei Enkatsu no Giri- Death’s Harmony
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a technique in which the user slashes so quickly that they appear as though they are split into different beings upon attacking giving one the ability to visually slash in up to five directions at a single instant, up to 5 hits at once; however, the most slashes used, the more space they occupy and thus more opportunity for counter attack form external sources.
Name: Odoyoumei no Giri- Ode to Order
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will use another weapon of bracer to block and parry an opponents weapon, sword, or physical attack. As the attack is blocked, one will crouch down and slash at the opponents midsection/torso with their free hand.
Name: Baree no Giri - Balled of Sorrow
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A form of fencing stance in which the user will keep their arms relaxed and extended, toward the opponent for range, they thus attack with tensed flicks of the wrist like a conductor. Any such attacks with this form are considered ‘C’ ranked kenjutsu attacks. However the primary use of this technique is the damage/destruction of items. Any item struck with the ‘Balled of Sorrow’ that is ‘C’ ranked or down will be considered broken. Any item struck with the ‘Balled of Sorrow’ will be considered one rank lower as a result. This effect can be stacked and weapons weakened until eventually broken.
Name: Bakemono Seimitsu no Giri - Phantom Minuet
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a powerful stabbing motion in which one muscles generate a cannon like burst of energy from the end of the blade by brute force alone. One will thrust their blade forward toward the target sending the concussive wave (about 1meter in radius) toward the opponent; nearly unseen by the naked eye. Upon contact, the concussive force can generate an impact of explosive quality.
Name: Doragon Borero no Giri - Dragon’s Bolero
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will place their blade into their dominant hand, while their other hand grasps the wrist of their strong hand in order to steady it. The user will then flex their dominant hand causing their grip on the blade to tense. As a result, the blade itself will build in friction with the air around it. Not only does this allow the user to nullify the effects of piercing/vibrating techniques, but any solid objects struck with the blade will light on fire with a blue flame as a result of hyper friction.
Name: Otaki Serena-Do no Giri - Cascading Serenade
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique has two forms, both consisting of a downward slashing motion. While standing the user will swing their blade to the ground, sending a wave of brute strength along the surface, crumbling the ground for about 20meters in front of ones self; possibly damaging foes with the jagged rocks burst forth from the ground. It also causes the collapse of caverns or tunnels underground doing critical damage to those underground by not only crushing them with the force of a cave in but possibly burying them alive in the process. The second form is in the air, in which the user will wing their sword vertically, using the momentum of gravity with the powerful swing as a divebomb area attack option.
Name: Akumu Yasoukyoku no Giri -Nightmare Nocturne
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique rapidly thrusts the blade at the opponent in fencing like drives at different points. This technique is so quick that it appears as if the user has multiple arms at once attacking the opponent. It is possible to hit the opponent eight times in a single second with this technique, making retreating the best option of escape.
Name: Touji Zensou no Giri - Reigning Prelude
Rank: B (A)
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is usually the first kenjutsu move used in which the user reaches across their body to unsheathe their sword, generating a powerful bladed shockwave that can cut through almost every natural substance in existence with the exception of materials equal to or harder then steel. The shockwave can travel up to 10meters by brute strength alone and when wind element chakra is added to the process (while increasing to A-rank) can double that to 20meters. This can also be used by sheathing and then unsheathing ones sword.
Name: Lion’s Song
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a powerful Kenjutsu technique that takes full advantage of the potential of the speed and strength of the user. The user will step forward and slash the opponent with incredible force mid dash. While incredibly fast, it is possible to block it with a defensive technique, however, the technique is faster then a single hand sign and an attempt to defend with a chakra based attack will most likely fail. Considered the most powerful simple Kenjutsu technique, able to cut through steel and even damage titanium. The user must be within 10meters of the target in order to successfully use this technique.
Specialty Jutsu: N/A
History: This collection of sword techniques were created in theory, as a number of master-able, yet steep techniques. Not even it's original creator could master the techniques that he had drawn the scroll blue print for, however three individuals have been seen to be able to use these techniques as they were inscribed. Prior to the events that lead to Aitou's case of amnesia, he simply learned these techniques by extensive study with the sharingan eye. Upon losing the sharingan to his affliction, however, he was unable to master the final ability; however found himself oddly able to use the technique via muscle memory alone, though he had no recollection as to how he could use such techniques by reflex alone.
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| Common Kenjutsu
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Name: Splinter Slash
Rank: C-A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This isn't necessarily a an offensive attack as much as it is a defensive attack. With this focused, two handed attack, one will swing vertically and part incoming focused projectiles with the blade. It is possible to cut entire kunai and shuriken in half. Any projectile that is the result of a ninjutsu, such as an elemental attack, it would part the attack into to separate blasts that move away from the user at a 45 degree angle in either way, protecting them from ever getting hit. The rank of the technique is equal to the rank of the technique it is being used against.
Name: Rebound Slash
Rank: C-A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows one to strike an object/projectile etc., with a blade that is infused with chakra. In this way it is possible to completely switch the momentum and send it back at the opponent. Of couse, large scale attacks or attacks that take up a large area or have special effects besides just being projectiles will be exceptions. The rank of the technique is equal to the rank of the technique it is being used against.
Name: Hidden Sword Technique
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a technique in which the user will pull blades from their sheathe directly over their sleeves of their hands or legs. Then can then hide the blade up their shin or forearm. At a later time then can retract the blade to slash at point blank range, or shoot the blade out like a projectile.
Name: Warrior's Spirit
Rank: E-A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a Kenjutsu technique that involves the users willpower as a front line battle shinobi. The user will conjure up the strength necessary and in a burst of chakra, shake/escape from the effects of binding, constricting, paralyzing or otherwise limiting effects that afflict the user. Rank of the technique and stamina required are equal to the rank of the technique placed upon them.
Name: Erasing Slash
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a Kenjutsu technique in which the user will charge the edge of their blade with chakra in order to cut spiritual and chakra based presence. Things that are otherwise 'intangible' such as spirits, seals, chakra, chakra strings, etc., can thus be cut with this chakra edge.
Name: Broad Counter
Rank: D-A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Using a method known as 'power - skill' the user will be able to essentially catch, parry, block and then counter an opponents kenjutsu technique; basically using their momentum against them. They rank and thus physical exertion and thus the rank of the technique must be greater than that of the opponents technique but will in most cases completely halt an opponents momentum, allowing this technique to be both offensive and defensive in the same instance.
Common/Normal Ninjutsu - Spoiler:
Name:Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Element:N/A
Description:Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
Name:Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Element:N/A
Description:Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
Name:Kai - Release
Rank: D-S
Element:N/A
Description:Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name:Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Element:N/A
Description:Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Name:Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank:E
Element:N/A
Description:Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name:Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D-S
Element:N/A
Description:Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Name: Hidden Mist technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, reducing visibility within the affected area. The density can be controlled by the user, allowing them to create a mist so thick that even they can't see through it. Though it can't fool theByakugan, against the Sharingan it is a most effective technique. Due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan-user will see the mist colored by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.
Name: Dispelling Hidden Mist technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a technique in which the user will dispell the effects of the Kirigakure specific technique known as the "Hidden Mist technique". By using this technique, mists generated will quickly settle, clearing the air and returning visibility.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: C
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Slight of hand Shuriken
Rank: E
Difficulty: E
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a technique that seemingly requires no hand signs. The user will create an illusionary shuriken, kunai, or otherwise common small weapon and throw it at the opponent. These will simply 'poof' when striking something solid and do no damage.
Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique
Rank:D
Element:N/A
Description:Kage Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing a giant Fuuma Shuriken. When throwing the shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second giant shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware. When using his pistols, Stark can perform this same techniques with his different projectile techniques.
Name: Under Water Motion Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to propel themselves through a body of water by using their chakra. While underwater, this technique will also partially mask their presence and will not disturb the surface of the water.
Name: Listening through walls technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a simple shinobi technique in which one will hold their ear to a surface, such as the wall of the ground, while using chakra to enhance their hearing; this allows them to hear conversations through walls or pick up on vibrations along the ground.
Name: Art of breathe holding
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a simple shinobi technique in which ones chakra will be used to maintain ones breathe, allowing the user to hold their breathe for extended periods of time. The user can hold their breathe for a maximum of five posts before having to breathe. If they cannot breathe, they will pass out as a result.
Name: Art of walking anywhere
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a technique that branches from the 'water walking technique' This allows the user to walk normally on almost any surface; sticky, slick, incredibly hot, liquid etc., as if it were a normal surface. One could theoretically walk on magma without being burned or run on ice without sliding; making the uses numerous and adaptive.
Name: Chakra Suppression
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a simple ninjutsu in which one forms the majority of their chakra into physical and spiritual energy, storing it as stamina so that those that sense objects with chakra will be unable to sense the user. They can then summon up chakra as needed.
Name: Blade Summoning Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjugsu
Element: Wind [Fuuton]
Description: Any sword charged with wind element chakra can retracted back to the user by literally sucking the blade back to the user with a powerful but controlled wind.
Elemental Kenjutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Ignition Blade
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Fire [Katon]
Description: This is a kenjutsu supplementary in which the user surges fire chakra through their blade. Upon striking flammable object, the blade can light the object on fight where cut; essentially creating burning cuts, slices and jabs. Possible with chakra channeling alone, no hand signs needed.
Name: Gilded Friction
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Fire [Katon]
Description: A simple technique using fire chakra along with a blade to increase the friction along the blade. The added friction will increase the strength of the sword by not only superheating objects upon striking them, but also countering pure slashing/piercing damage. One can melt through objects with a slash or stab without damage to their own weapon. Even metals and standard blades can be melted through. Possible with chakra channeling alone, no hand signs needed.
Name: Tempest Blade
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Wind [Fuuton]
Description: This is a kenjutsu supplementary in which the user surges wind chakra through their blade to double the length of the blade with an extension of bladed wind. Possible with chakra channeling alone, no hand signs needed.
Name: Harnessed Wind-Resistance
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Wind [Fuuton]
Description: This is a kenjutsu technique in which one will use wind resistance around the blade as a buffer for physical attack. Should an opponent attack physically and the user choose to defend with swords, they can use this technique to lower the rank(power) of their opponents technique by one upon the moment of connection only. (Excluding S-ranked techniques)
*All genjutsu's difficulty are equal to their rank unless otherwise noted.*
Genjutsu
E-rank
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Name: False Telepathy
Rank: E
Difficulty: E
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a simple genjutsu in which the use casts an illusion of words upon an opponent or target. In this way, they can cast words, phases, sentences or an entire speech into a targets mind in which they will 'hear' and understand it as if he were normally speaking without actually speaking. In this way, the user need not speak out loud, or can relay information via illusionary sound of voice to individual targets.
D-rank
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Name: Hidden Eye technique
Rank: D
Difficulty: D
Type: Genjutsuu
Element: N/A
Description: A simple genjutsu that is activated if the opponent can see the users eyes when the sharigan is activated. The users eye will appear normal to all caught in the illusion, though the sharingan will be active.
C-rank
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Name: False Invisibility
Rank: D-C
Difficulty: D-C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is used to make objects or things disappear from the opponents site. The D-ranked form is limited to small objects no bigger then 3.5 feet, however, the C-ranked form can make objects of bout 7 feet disappear from the opponents site. The object will remain 'invisible' until either the opponent releases the technique or another sense of the opponent interacts with the object. Aka, if they have another way of seeing the object, such as smell or feel, they will also be able to see it. Thus, if the object is a weapon and the weapon hits the opponent, they will be able to see the weapon after being hit.
Name: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique
Rank: C
Difficulty: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.
Name: Forbidden Silence
Rank: C
Difficulty: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a genjutsu that eliminates the hearing of the opponent. Anything heard will become null and the opponent will be temporarily deaf until the illusion is broken. This doesn't technically prevent the opponent from hearing on a realistic scale, simply imposes the illusion that they cannot hear anything.
Name: Shallow Mind Illusion
Rank: C
Difficulty: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique specifically targets the memory of the opponent, placing a mental block that disallows the opponent from using any ninjutsu techniques know by the user. If the user knows the technique and can actively use it in battle, then the opponent under the influence of the Asai Maindo will be unable to use it.
Name: Shrouding Eyes Technique
Rank: C
Difficulty: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a form of forced sleep jutsu in which the user will literally and physically close the eyes of the opponent or touch their closed eye lids with two fingers at the same time (any two fingers, usually the pointer and middle finger) rendering them immediately into sleep. This can be used on any target
Name: Black Exile
Rank: C
Difficulty: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a potent genjutsu that when cast on the opponent will cause their surroundings to go completely black with the exception of themselves, and the user; leaving the two to face off in the void of darkness. However, while the opponent can see nothing but the user, the user has free range of vision; thus the opponent could very easily fall victim to an unseen technique or environmental hazard.
Name: Frozen Reality
Rank: C
Difficulty: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a potent genjutsu that when cast on the opponent freezes their vision; thus making the only thing that they can see being that one site no matter where they look (Like a visual Screen Patcher set as the default image of the brain). This is easy to pick up on if things are moving, but if people are for the most part still one may not notice until it is too late. They can still move, etc.,
Name: Visual Agnosia Disguise
Rank: C
Difficulty: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a weak, though perfect genjutsu disguise in which on can take up the voice, and appearance of another individual on a hypnotic level, to convince the opponent(s), mind that they are who they appear to be. Unlike a normal "henge" the user can appear to be a different person to each individual and can seemingly change at will. However, the only dead give away would be the actions; as the user will most likely be unable to copy habits/actions/personality of a given individual.
Name: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu - Sly Mind Affect Technique
Rank: C
Difficulty: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.
B-rank
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Name: Faded Dream
Rank: B
Difficulty: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a potent genjutsu technique that allows the user to directly effect the memory center of the brain by blocking thought at it is stimulated. As a result, every time the opponent uses a jutsu, they will forget how to use it immediately after, and be unable to recall how to use it until the genjutsu is broken. The best case scenario is that the opponent continues to use and thus forget techniques until they have lost all possible techniques. This isn't limited to active techniques, but also KKG and passive techniques and abilities; whenever they are used, they are forgotten. If the genjutsu is broken, however, then the opponent's memories will be returned to them.
Name: Reverse World Technique
Rank: B
Difficulty: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a potent genjutsu technique in which the user will cast the illusion upon the opponent that switches the movement of their body. Where originally the right side of the body will move, the left side of the body will move; however visually, the world will appear the same. There is no cue that the opponent is under an illusion until they attempt to move and recognize that there is a potencial problem.
Name: Falling Sky Technique
Rank: B
Difficulty: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a potent genjutsu technique in which the opponent will view the world upside down. As a result, up becomes down and vice versa. This can be highly disorienting for a potential opponent and will more likely greatly effect dexterity. This technique when used with "reverse world" will cancel one of the two techniques so that both cannot exist at the same time. However, when one is dispelled, the effects of the other can take place as if a layered jutsu.
Name: Nightmare Scenario
Rank: B
Difficulty: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a potent genjutsu technique in which the opponent will be put under the illusion where their site becomes that of the user; essentially seeing from the users perspective. This can either be the real life visual perspective, or a pure illusionary perspective. For an opponent trapped in this genjutsu, the worst case scenario is that they are forced to watch as they themselves are cut down; literally seeing themselves die as they are caught in the illusion. However, the opponent can still move on their own will.
Name: Vacant Breeze
Rank: B
Difficulty: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a technique that cast the illusion upon the opponent that any smell is void. Meaning that even if there are scent to be detected, they will all smell the same; as if normal air. One will thus be unable to distinguish one scent from another as they will all smell like... nothing. Good against opponents with a heighten sense of smell.
Name: Body Ignorance
Rank: B
Difficulty: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a genjutsu in which the one in which it is cast upon will not feel real pain (however can feel illusionary pain). Thus, if the opponent would normally feel pain, it would be forgot. Their sense of feeling is still very much in tact, but they wont feel any sorts of pain. This can be used and targeted upon allies or the self as well. Because it involves the sense of touch, it cannot be deactivated by means of pain.
A-rank
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Name: Broken Ambition
Rank: A
Difficulty: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a potent genjutsu technique that allows the user to directly effect the memory center of the brain with a specific effect. The opponent will simply forget how to properly formulate hand signs, thus disallowing them the use of techniques that require hand signs until the genjutsu is broken. When they attempt jutsu that will require hand signs; they will either do them incorrectly or fail baffled as to what they are in the first place. This technique can severely punish opponents that depend on the use of ninjutsu and other hand sign prevalent type of techniques.
Name: Setting Moon Technique
Rank: A
Difficulty: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a potent genjutsu technique with visual and metaphysical effects. On the first post of use, the sky will turn dark like night and the bright moon will light the the ground, setting at the center of the sky. For every post after that for five posts time, the moon will slowly sink in the sky toward the horizon, tilting the angle of the light on the battle field. At the end of the fifth turn, the moon will sink under the horizon and the area will be rendered pitch black in the opponents mind, only a second later they will be rendered in an unconscious state similar to sleep, that can be sustained by chakra. Every turn, a 'C' ranked amount of chakra is used to keep the opponent asleep, though external stimulus from the outside world can wake them.
Name: Reverse Moon Technique
Rank: A
Difficulty: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a powerful technique that can only be used if the target is asleep. This places a genjutsu upon the opponent that allows the user to control every aspect of their dream; including time and space. One can choose to torture the opponent in a nightmare or even resume the battle within the opponent dream. This is incredibly deadly because the
opponent cannot Kai out of this technique (attempts to kai will simply be manifestations of the dream and not reality). The opponent can literally only hope that something in the real world knocks them out of their sleep, or that the user runs out of chakra.
Name: Lucid Dream
Rank: A
Difficulty: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a form of self targeting genjutsu in which the user will be allowed to not only put themselves to sleep, but also wake themselves up and control every aspect of their dream, including time and space. In this way, they can train seemingly endlessly in a mental environment. At the same time, with the sharigan, they can implant real physics to the dream like state, and run simulations in their mind that transfer to copyable muscle memory. During which, the user IS asleep and is helpless in the real world if attacked or ambushed.
Name: Shadow Illusion Clone
Rank: A
Difficulty: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a complicated illusion in which the user creates a clone in the opponents mind. This clone is a copy of the user and realistically replicates all aspects of the user; the user can even see and control their clone if need be. The target, if ignorant to the false hood of the 'clone' can fight the 'clone' as if it were real; his blows upon him will feel as though they connect, and any blows done by the clone will cause illusionary pain based upon the laws of physics. The clone, however, is technically indestructible, as it only exists in the mind of the opponent until the jutsu is broken. Any illusionary pain will not break this illusion. While using this technique, the user cannot use any other jutsu, and will force to maintain a meditative state while the technique is active. The user can at any time release the technique and break the illusion on the opponent.
Genjutsu/Kenjutsu
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Name: Illusion Blade
Rank: B
Difficulty: B
Type: Genjutsu/Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a technique in which uses sight as a cue to trigger genjutsu. At anytime, after activating this technique, should the opponent/target be looking at the blade, it becomes possible to use Genjutsu/Kenjutsu combinations without the prior need for hand signs. Only one technique per post can be accomplished without handsigns in this way, however. The blade used must be at least B-ranked or higher in order to be used with this technique.
Name: Dimension Slash
Rank: C
Difficulty: C
Type: Genjutsu/Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a technique in which the user will cast a genjutsu upon the opponent. To the opponent, the user will seemingly disappear. The user must then use a single kenjutsu technique, and upon doing so they will become visible to the opponent once more. If the user doesn't use the kenjutsu technique within a single post of afflicting the opponent with the genjutsu, the genjutsu will wear off and the user will become visible to the opponent once again. Can only be used on a single target at a time.
Name: Spectre Blade
Rank: C
Difficulty: C
Type: Genjutsu/Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a technique in which the user will cast a genjutsu upon the opponent. To the opponent, the users body will seemingly flicker and they will, a second later, feel as though they had been struck with a blade. The illusion includes all sort of basic slashes and the opponent feels pain on an illusionary level. Once successfully cast and used, the genjutsu will wear off, but the pain from the experience will be very 'real' as if feels like being struck successfully with a C-ranked kenjutsu, despite any armor or resistance the opponent might have. No actual physical damage is cause, however, which may lead the opponent to question the difference between actual sword strikes and illusionary ones.
Name: AfterImage
Rank: D
Difficulty: D
Type: Genjutsu/Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is a more advanced form of the bushin in which a targeted opponent will be made to see after images of the user. Once cast, the genjutsu lasts until released or broken, however the rank is relativity low and can be broken by most individuals. Almost at any time when the user is moving they can leave behind an illusionary copy of themselves in the opponents mind that fade in a single post. These however are illusionary, and upon attempting to touch said afterimages, one will physically pass through them.
Name: Split Vision
Rank: C-B
Difficulty: C-B
Type: Genjutsu/Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a genjutsu in which the user will cast upon a single target. The user will seem to split or separate into eight or sixteen illusionary clones of himself that surround the opponent in a circle. Only one of these is real. They will all either scatter/flee to escape, move about him quickly to confuse, or rush from all angle to overwhelm. Illusionary clone will fade when it becomes obvious that they are illusionary (cutting through them with no effects, etc.,) The technique ends should the user take damage, or two posts have lapsed.
Name: Phantasm Blade
Rank: C
Difficulty: C
Type: Genjutsu/Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a genjutsu technique in which the user will cast upon a single target. The user will seem to split into three separate individuals in a perpendicular line facing the target. Two of these are illusions while one of them is real (must be stated which one is real). They will then rush forward toward the opponent and perform an attack, however only one of the attacks is real. Defending against a fake attack will result in getting hit by a real one. Once the technique is used the genjutsu is released. It will also release if the user takes damage during, or in one posts time.
Sharingan Abilities
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Name: Sharingan Recall
Rank: A
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Considered A-rank because of mastery required not chakra cost. With this ability, the user can recall back to lesser stages of the sharingan for situational use; allowing them to use lower stages for longer to preserve their chakra and rest the full potential of the eyes in situations that don't call for their complete use.
Name: Sharingan Perspective
Rank: A
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Considered A-rank because of mastery required not chakra cost. The user is able to activate the sharingan in only a single eye to preserve the other, gaining it's benefits, but unable to copy techniques while only using a single eye.
Name: Demonic Illusion - Mirror Heaven and Earth Change
Type: Genjutsu
Difficulty: A
Rank:A
Element: -
Description: A Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. Using the copy and counter functions of the Sharingan eye, the Uchiha clan member can stop the sensory spell cast on their body and reverse it back on their opponent. This technique requires the user to have three tomoe in each eye to use it.
Name: Ephemeral
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: A
Difficulty: A
Element: -
Description: A Genjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha clan members. They will start this technique by using only one finger on their right hand. The target does not have to look into his eyes, a glance at the hand itself will be enough. Once inside the illusion, they can control the visions the ninja sees. This illusion can also be used to play on the fears of the target, causing them to see and hear those who they care about degrade them.
Last edited by Lament on Sat 20 Feb 2010, 12:16 am; edited 5 times in total |
| | | | WTFlash
Age : 33
Posts : 308
| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Wed 17 Feb 2010, 4:08 am | |
| | ~Reserved for possible Summons/Copied Jutsu~ |
| | | | Osaru
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Wed 17 Feb 2010, 4:57 am | |
| | Fire must be your Main element to be an Uchiha. |
| | | | WTFlash
Age : 33
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Wed 17 Feb 2010, 5:16 am | |
| | Simple enough, editted. |
| | | | Osaru
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Wed 17 Feb 2010, 6:05 am | |
| Likes fine to me 
APPROVED! |
| | | | Dameon Shikyo
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Wed 17 Feb 2010, 9:10 am | |
| Unapproved.
-Genjutsu must follow the new format under the rules section.
-Also since Adam would technically have any final word on any Jounin in his village but is awol, Hage and I both have to agree on a Jounin app before it is approved.
-Extremely tired to check over every detail of it, Genjutsu stood out as being in the incorrect format. |
| | | | WTFlash
Age : 33
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Wed 17 Feb 2010, 4:49 pm | |
| As far as I understand, the only difference to the template is the 'difficulty', in which I placed a disclaimer that the difficulty equals the rank on all accounts. However, I will also add it to the template as required.
~editted. |
| | | | Uchiha Osore
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Wed 17 Feb 2010, 10:29 pm | |
| Kai Trap is not only OP, but theres no explanation for how the technique actually works, you just say that it works and what it does.
Thats all I noticed in a quick scan, I'll run through everything later. |
| | | | WTFlash
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Thu 18 Feb 2010, 12:23 am | |
| | I will do all edits at one time when you've had time to look over everything in completion. The Kai trap has been removed, however. |
| | | | Uchiha Osore
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Thu 18 Feb 2010, 11:32 pm | |
| Sharingan Intonation: I don't have much wrong with the skill, though it seems pointless because you end up describing how the attack works in post and then its rank is based on your own sword which is a higher rank than most of your tomoe, so you're actually weakening your own attacks with this technique which seems intended.
Roshikomizue: With the scent, you'd have a finite amount of the odor if its not chakra powered, so how far can you disperse this smell before it dilutes. How many posts do it linger, according to how far you've dispersed it?
Manipulate Advancing Blades: Thats Kugutsu, as Chiyo has demonstrated, please remove unless you intend to define another method of using this technique without a sting through each of them.
Art of Walking Anywhere: Remember, even if you can walk on it, its still not safe most of the time. Magma is still way too hot and even if your soles don't burn, every other part of your body will be enjoying the sweet sweet cripsy smell of charred flesh...
Oh, and side note, I've reviewed some of this techniques before (Aye Turk *Waves*) but you left some of your original source character names in there, you probably want to remove those from the jutsu.
*cracks knuckles* Genjutsu will be up shortly. |
| | | | WTFlash
Age : 33
Posts : 308
| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Fri 19 Feb 2010, 12:33 am | |
| In the mean time...
Manipulate Advancing Blades - removed
Art of Walking Anywhere - understood
Sharingan Intonation: - also understood
Roshikomizue: - Elaborated. 5meter radius of blade, can linger in un stimulated area for only a post; effected heavily by wind and radius of blade attacks, limiting it to close combat in most situations.
-I can't seem to find where past names have snuck into my app, if you wouldn't mind pointing me in the direction so I can sweep em out, it'd be appreciated. |
| | | | WTFlash
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Fri 19 Feb 2010, 10:48 pm | |
| | Bump |
| | | | Uchiha Osore
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Fri 19 Feb 2010, 11:24 pm | |
| I can't find the references at the moment but I would like to point out that theres only one remaining Jounin slot left, which Jsalos is likely to fill out before you're able to finish so it might be better to make this character a Chunnin. I'll see what I can do afterwards to get you ranked up if you choose to do so, or you can remain at the rank, your call.
Shallow Mind: Definitely more B Rank than C, also I'd like it to be more defined, like two or those chosen jutsu that you and the opponent both know. I get the goal here, and I like the idea, but needs some tweaking to get my approval.
Shrouding Eyes: I'm slightly confused, can you close the eyes without touch? If so you'll need to explain some limits on how long, and inducing sleep this way would make it higher than C because sleep is a very powerful effect to induce as I'm sure you know.
Reverse World: Very iffy about this one...this effects all the muscles on that side of the body and flips them to the other side? What if those muscles don't exist, such as the case of a lost finger or limb?
Faded Dream: You'll have to exclude very basic chakra manipulation, such as Tree or Water Walking, Henge, Kawarmi, all the basics really, because its unrealistic that a ninja would forget these, they're very fundamental. Also this appears to be A Rank because you have it listed as both A and B Rank.
Falling Sky: Please place a limit on this technique about combinations with Reverse World, or make it consume more chakra to hold both at once because combined they are incredibly potent to the level of near OPness.
Scattered Ignorance: Sorry, going to have to say no to this one because Genjutsu targets the nervous system and chakra sensing doesn't have anything to do with the nervous system. Please remove.
Thousand Sly Mind Tricks: You'll have to explain this better, you say 'triple layer' but this is a double layered Genjutsu. Also, how does this work? You mention it takes two seperate Kais, but how so? What makes it like that?
Broken Ambition: Please add a note that they still remember Kai, otherwise you can't break this. Also as it is this is OP, you'll need to make it take more than a post to take effect or make it so that those who need hand signs have a way to fight it, even if its small. |
| | | | WTFlash
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Sat 20 Feb 2010, 12:12 am | |
| When I made the character there were two spots left and the Uchiha spot which I was told I could obtain. I would think it unfair that the rate in which an app is checked and approved decides the place in which it would be taken, not when it was finished being made.
In any case...
Shallow Mind - I made it C-ranked so that it would be easier to 'Kai' for those without the specialty. If you still want it to be B-ranked I understand. Also, would it be more 'specific' if I limited it to ninjutsu?
Shrouding Eyes - No, one must literally closes the opponents eyes physically.
Reverse World: - There is something known as the 'phantom limb' effect in which those who have had parts of their body removed will still be able to feel themselves move their limbs even if it isn't there. This is an effect of the brain, not the muscles.
If someones left arm is missing, the will still be able to move their right side by trying to move the left as if it were still there, regardless of if it is there or not physically. I can't easily go into further detail without giving you a crash course in neurology.
Faded Dream: - While you argue that it is unrealistic, I'd argue that it's an illusion and thus not realistic anyway. I'd like to keep it 'B' ranked so that it is easier to kai, however if you want it at 'A' rank that is fine as well. I will exclude the basic jutsu as requested.
Falling Sky: - Hells yes it's potent, Haha. But seriously though, I'll limit it based on the combination clause.
Scattered Ignorance: - Good argument. Removed.
Thousand Sly Mind Tricks: - I'm never gonna use this anyway, just removed it.
Broken Ambition: - By hand signs I refer to the twelve original hand signs, which 'Kai' is not apart of. It's made to punish those who depend on hand signs, for as shinobi we should be well rounded. It is powerful, but i'll downplay the difficulty so that it can be kai'd easier. Is that okay? |
| | | | Vegapunk
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Sun 21 Feb 2010, 3:59 am | |
| As your sub speciality of kenjutsu, that should be changed to Weaponary. As on this site kenjutsu is classed under weaponary. There is a guide that explains this further if you like.
After that you get my initial approval, but you will require either Hages or Dames final approval for acceptance for jounin. Nice application. ^^ |
| | | | Uchiha Osore
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Sun 21 Feb 2010, 4:07 am | |
| All I have to say that hasn't be addressed is that Shallow Mind, just limiting Ninjutsu would make it C Rank suitable, yes, since I believe that would be noticable enough for somebody and they're likely to Kai anyhow, I'm not going to impose a B rank cost for it.
*thumbs up* Should be good to go if thats it. |
| | | | WTFlash
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Sun 21 Feb 2010, 8:52 pm | |
| | Alrighty! I've changed kenjutsu to weaponry and will elaborate further on his abilities in character via RP in training and what not. I believe i'm finished if you have nothing else you'd like me to fix! |
| | | | Uchiha Osore
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Sun 21 Feb 2010, 9:16 pm | |
| If Dame's fine with this, I'm fine with it.
My half is given for approval. |
| | | | Dameon Shikyo
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Mon 22 Feb 2010, 6:31 am | |
| | Approved....Welcome to....wherever this is..... |
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| | Subject: Re: ~Lament [Kiri Jounin] Mon 15 Mar 2010, 6:14 pm | |
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