Uchiha Sasme [Genin of Iwa] DONE

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Uchiha, Sasme.

THE INFO.

Name: Uchiha Sasme
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Age: 15
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Sasme is a tall shinobi standing at a thick five foot and seven inches being also very muscular from all of his training while in the academy with two other sensei besides the one in the academy. Even more so, he likes to throw people off again by his laid back stance always walking around lazily and sitting slouched wherever he goes. To be honest Sasme likes to be lazy, he figures working his ass off all the time gives him the right to be lazy when peoples lives are not at stake.

Aside from those simple facts he has jet black hair which is usually wild and all over his head and drooping down on both sides of his head. He also has dark black eyes which can be seen filled with determination and focus at all times even when he is lazing around or goofing off. From all of his training and conditioning Sasme has built up a darker tan then most Uchiha have been known to have, which covers everything above his waste and from his knees and below. His normal attire which is a simple pair of black shinobi pants with mesh on his shins down to his ankles along with black shinobi sandals. On top he wears a simple black mesh shirt with another black shirt v-cut just over top of it.

As for his few asscessories he wears simple mesh sleeves on his elbows, and fingerless gloves on both his hands with metal plates on the front of both his gloves.

Personality:Sasme for the most part is like any other fifteen year old teen and is basically over excitable, over emotional, quick to jump to conclusions, and most of all hormone deranged. Even with all the common faults most teens have he still manages to work as hard as he can when he trains even though the results may make him regret it the next day he will never stop his hard work. He will admit most of all that he is not as smart when compared to the top of the class, especially when it comes to strategic thinking that is. However at critical skills and reaction time it is believed he has a true gift.

Something that truly stand out amongst Sasme's wide ranged personality, is his ability to make friends and to keep them close. He will do anything and everything to help out a friend even if it put his life on the line he would do it in an instant. His loyalty to the village is the same extint if it meant protecting the people of the village he would easily throw his life on the line for it, no matter what may happen.

Clan: Uchiha

Nindō: "Impossible is just a word to get me motivated"

THE NINJA.

Origin: Konohagakure
Affiliation: Iwagakure
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Ninjutsu, Fuuinjutsu.
Elemental Affinities: Raiton, Katon.
Combat Style: Chaotic, Ungraceful, Lucky, yet resourceful. Each of those are the most important traits of Sasme's battle style, he comes at the enemy as fast and violently as he can. Though that is usually how he begins his fights, he is able change direction and tactic at the turn of a dime. He also has a strange form of recovering from attacks and defending himself which appears as graceful and ungraceful at the same time. What that means, is that, he can use his surroundings to save himself from attacks by using the environment around him, making them miss their jutsu, or using grabable objects around him to help recover from attacks quicker. But none of those compare to what his luck helps him out with, barely dodging fatal attacks, being able to come up with last second plans, and even pushing himself to the brink without dying.
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:

Birth:
Sasme was born thirteen years ago on the twenty second of July from the Konoha hospital, a boy from the couple of Tiyana and Hukudo Uchiha. Both were excellent Shinobi his father a Jounin and his mother a retired Medic who soon after began to work at the hospital to do her part after retiring. They both were hoping that the young boy would hopefully be another addition in the always growing Shinobi of Konoha and would do his part to keep the village safe.

Pre Academy: 1-6
Even before joining the Academy Sasme had a distinct interest to one day become a Shinobi this was made obvious by his constant sneaking around the house just to see if he can get by his parents, or even when he tried to get his father to teach him the jutsu that he knew. At his young age it was very entertaining to watch him try to do hand signs to indicate certain jutsu. However his father did oblige to teach him basic Tai-jutsu stance and what chakra was.

These were basic things that the academy would teach him, but his father figured it couldnt hurt to give him a small headstart on trival things.

Academy: 7-12
Once Sasme finally turned seven he asked to be put into the Academy which his parents happily did so with pride very evident in their hearts. After Sasme's first day in the Academy his father decided to teach him about his clan and how to ready himself for his own special training. He began to tell him the tale that passed down from their ancestors on how their family gained suched a Kekkei Genkei. Unfortunately due to the Uchiha's famous ability to use the Sharingan, he was placed under enormous amounts of scrunity, and watched especially close.

Sasme loved it, being taught basics at the Academy then coming straight home to learn more about his clan, it was as if his time in the Academy was spent being a sponge soaking up all the knowledge around him. By the time he was eleven he had met up with a tall and very lean blacksmith who seemed to know a lot about Katana and even offered to train him for a whole year. Sasme quickly accepted and now it seemed that he would be a rounded shinbi as soon as he left the Academy, being taught basics there, his clan at home, and now Katana training every week.

Graduation: 13
The time had come for Sasme to go back to the Academy one final time as a student he hoped anyway, he had been training for the past two weeks straight just to make sure he had it down. After making it in on time for class he began to wait paitiently as his name was near the bottom of the list he cursed himself at always being at the bottom just because his sur name started with an U.

However after waiting for nearly an hour it was finally, his turn. He entered the room confidently and when requested to perform the bunshin making two clones he did so with pride as they both came out perfect. Then he was asked to perform a henge which the first time he done he forgot to change the clothes as well, but a quick reaction had him doing it again the correct way his second time. With a smile from his teacher he was given a thumbs up that he had passed.

The Fall of Konoha:13-15
Almost as soon as Sasme became a Genin, the fall of Konoha had started which had been a totally disasterous experience for Sasme, his village lost their status as the greatest super power in the Ninnja world. Instead of taking it badly however, Sasme simply used it to further his motivation and his training lept to new heights. He pushed himself so that he would be the one that could help Konoha rise out of its own ashes even stronger then before.

However his plan was soon tossed aside as he was taken away from what remained of his village by a passing recon group of Iwa shinobi. Realizing that he had no chance on taking out the group, and his village had no one they could send to help him, or even buy him time he resigned to the commands of the Rock ninja. Realizing that Konoha was no more, the Iwa shinobi simply took him as a prisoner of war to be recruited and used for their own army.

Deciding that it would be better to join another village and build his strength he pushed aside his goal of bringing Konoha back, and decided to simply work on becoming stronger. Though it would be years before he'd likely be able to come back, he would make his time spent in Iwa worth it.

Role-Play Sample:
Pushing himself harder he was quickly growing exhuasted, as the pants coming from his mouth were becomming harsher and harsher. Sweat was easily pouring off of his blonde hair as he was pushing the limits on his body, "Father, I dont think I ca- can go a-anymore." His voice dragged and stuttered as he tried to raise his front up from the hunched over position that he was resting in.

The answer he got was not a kind one however as his father quickly barked out to him, "You want to be a shinobi then you need to learn how to push yourself further then your body will let you!"

Sasme wasnt sure which was burning him up more the burning sun which was directly overhead or the constant battering he was taking from his father. Even with his Raikigan activated he could feel himself moving slower and not being able to react as fast as he normally should be able to. He wasnt going to give his father the satisfaction of having to yell at him again though as once he raised up he quickly began to run through hand seals, "Raiton-Strike!!"

The bolt quickly began to revolve around his arm and fired forward towards his father who was caught by surprise if even just for a moment it nearly got him as it blazed by his arm searing his long sleeved shirt and leaving an obvious burn on his shoulder. His father quickly smiled in approval at his son then wiped his forehead noticing quiet a bit of sweat drenching his forearm. "Let's go eat." The praising voice of his father quickly brought a smile on the Genin's face.

"Sounds good to me!" Sasme quickly chirped at him as he began to move forward sweat still dripping of his hair causing it to flatten out and get slightly into his eyes. A thought however echoed in his head, "To be a shinobi i'll need to push myself past even my body's limits" He would make sure to remember that the next time he trained with his team.

THE ARSENAL.

Kunai pouch: x5
Shuriken: x10
(my weapon was aleady approved the first time around this is just its reposting with my new app)
Name: Crescent
Quantity: 1
Rank: C-B
Appearance:

Uchiha Sasme [Genin of Iwa] DONE 0456210

Special Abilities/Characteristics: This particular Katana was made by a former ANBU shinobi who knew his way around many jutsu as well as weapons, so when this blade was made it was infused with the ability to manipulate chakra. In the way it is made to manipulate it creates a layer of chakra equivalent to that of the Users natural affinty. While chakra is being pumped into the blade a small crescent moon is lighted on the hilt, therefore the name Crescent.Origin:
As said above the blade was created by a former ANBU who had a liking for katana himself, so once he retired he became a weapons master and focused his life on making and training with katana in particular. How he had come to meet Sasme happened as he was about to leave the village in order to collect more of the rare materials that were needed for some of his personal weapons he liked to create, such as the Crescent blade attached to his side.

He saw the boy training in the training ground on his way through the village having a lot of trouble with proper kunai throwing technique. Something that the ANBU had in common with the child, for when he was young he never liked throwing weapons very much and that is what had him interested in katana for the first time. Feeling for the boy the old ANBU walked over to him and after introducing himself as a simple merchant began to instruct the boy on other weapons that could make up for a lack of kunai training.

At the mention of a Katana the boy sounded very excited, and the ANBU noticed it. After letting him use the basic Katana that he always carried along his Crescent blade he began to think hard on a very important desicision. He then told the boy that if he would continue to practice with him once a week for the next year, he'd give him the blade attached to his hip, he told him it's name was Crescent, and it had very interesting properties.

With that motivation Sasme had come to train with him every week at the same training ground from the time he turned eleven to his just before his twelth birthday. Though Sasme was far from a master at the Katana the old man was very pleased with the improvement and told him he was far better suited with the Katana then the kunai he was having so much trouble with.

Basic Jutsu:

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Subject: Re: Uchiha Sasme [Genin of Iwa] DONE Mon 18 Apr 2011, 8:22 am

-You are classified as a genin. Chunin are B-rank.

-Your origin can be from Konohagakure but your affliation can't be Konoha. You are a nukenin.

-Please add a paragraph or more on your combat style.

-Your jutsu's (including your academy jutsu" are missing the chakra cost.) The academy jutsu's all have chakra cost which can be found in the encyclopedia. Also, it is not in the proper template which has been presented here:

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Code:: [b]Name:[/b]
[b]Rank:[/b]
[b]Type:[/b]
[b]Range:[/b]
[b]Element:[/b]
[b]Description:[/b]
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b]

So please edit accordingly.

-The act of water surface walking and the act of tree climbing are under the basic academy jutsu so you can place that with your "Basic jutsu" category. The academy jutsu's do not count towards your total of fifteen. At the moment, you only have four to your fifteen.

Raiki Sasme wrote:: Name: Hiraishin - Sparking Electric Needle
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: Raiton • Hiraishin is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. After coming into physical contact with his opponent, Sasme will raise his arm into the air. He will then generate a bolt of electricity which will travel through his body into the body of his opponent. The bolt will usually stun the opponent for a few moments or if the blast is strong enough render them completely helpless.

This is a B-rank ninjutsu. Remove it

-Remove the A-rank and the SS-rank technique. There is no need for it to be in your application at this time regardless if it is striked out.

Age : 32 Posts : 65

Name: Hiraishin - Sparking Electric Needle
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: Raiton • Hiraishin is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. After coming into physical contact with his opponent, Sasme will raise his arm into the air. He will then generate a bolt of electricity which will travel through his body into the body of his opponent. The bolt will usually stun the opponent for a few moments or if the blast is strong enough render them completely helpless.

First time I did my app that was a C rank? Why is it a B rank now?

Todd told me that I can live in Konoha, and since its a minor power couldnt I still be from there? He just told me that i'd be placed in the Nukenin group.

And i'll do the jutsu now, I didnt see the new template yet.

Subject: Re: Uchiha Sasme [Genin of Iwa] DONE Mon 18 Apr 2011, 8:37 am

Name: Hiraishin - Sparking Electric Needle
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Raiton (Lightning)
Description: After coming into physical contact with the opponent, the user raises their arm into the air, generating a powerful bolt of electricity which will travel through into the body of the opponent.
Chakra Cost: 10

That's why. It's been placed under canon and has been edited to be a B-rank ninjutsu.

-I wasn't aware of this so thank you for clarifying.

Age : 32 Posts : 65

No problem, and i guess with Leafninja.com not clarifying on the rank I could see why, the ruling would have changed. I'll take it out, and let you know when im finished. Thanks Smile

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sorry but you cant be an uchiha unless you are going to be an iwa shinobi. iwa has the last uchiha spot sry

Age : 32 Posts : 65

Even if Todd, told me I could be a Konoha nin? (techniquel Nuke but i reside in Konoha) He was the one that suggested such.

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Sorry, he must have forgotten then. Its the only way I can see why he told you such.

There are only four slots in this clan.

Two are already in Kusa and One is with the Shantaki. The last remaining Uchiha slot has to be a resident of IWA. I am sorry either make an Iwa shinobi or change your character.

Age : 32 Posts : 65

Well, you kinda came about that, a little more then rude. But okay, i'll completely remake my charcter for the 3rd time just so i can be in Iwa and get this overwith.....

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I did say sorry, I was not rude at all. Just trying to give you the run down is all. It is not your falt that you did not know. If I knew you wanted to be an Uchiha, then I would have let you known a while ago

Age : 32 Posts : 65

Its fine, i was just aggrivated because ive had to make last minute changes. Smile

Didnt mean to call ya rude, btw, i was just tired. But I changed what ya told me to.

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

Sorry, newcomers have to start as Genin. Also, your app title still says nukenin.

Age : 32 Posts : 65

Done.

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

Your last academy jutsu's chakra cost is outside of the spoiler tag.

Age : 32 Posts : 65

Fixed

Age : 30 Posts : 1701

1/2 approved.

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2/2 but since Trick has posted first he has the last say. For now you can Rp freely but if trick say's otherwise then it is unapproved

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