Zen Tankou [Kumogakure Genin](WIP)

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Zen Tankou [Kumogakure Genin](WIP) ZenTankou

Zen has short, spiky, black hair that seems to cross at the eyebrows. He wears a rough dark shirt purely made from leather. Just around his waist is a small strap with iron chains, a close backup option for Zen to reach for in order to utilize a partial metallic power. Around his neck is a dark scarf that covers Zen from neck to nose to help shield him from sub-zero temperatures. However, this is usually removed on sunny days. He usually struts around with a serious expression on his round white-skinned face with flat snow-colored cheeks. Black ninja leggings are worn with iron chains to them as well to further Zen's metal ability. His leggings generally possess two pocket holes that act as a replacement for small shinobi puches to carry a couple of scrolls or a small round of metallic bullets. Usually, a few pennies are stored in his pockets for a fast but small usage of his kekkei genkai, although it'll just fill up part of the limb that is touching it, the entire limb at most. Attached nearby his right hip is a single ninja pouch carrying his kunai and shuriken, reachable as Zen's right- handed.

Zen mostly carries his steel katana to his back or a ring on his leggings. The sword is sheathed and he can easily take it out to either attack, defend, or absorb it. His hands are cold and bandaged from numerous bruises he suffered when he was younger. Zen is only 5"2 and is only on an average height compared to other boys his age. Measuring only 93 lbs, he's quite skinny and lightweighted. It was quite easy for bigger bullies to think of Zen as a "spineless little boy" and picked on him. Underneath his layers of clothing lay a white short-sleeved shirt. Behind that shirt are layers of bandages that Zen's parents had wrapped onto him when he fell out of a tree and landed on his stomach. The impact nearly cracked his skull. An alternative outfit for Zen would be a red-colored shirt with the the symbol of his clan on the sides. This would be followed up by a pair of lightly black pants that Zen sweats on when he walks around the village.

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Zen is cool, calm, and collective. He has a serious personality but also has a concealed warm spot and gets wild when it comes to combat and training. He's very interested in learning new techniques and skills in order to increase his powers. He supports his clan and is constantly wanting to gain more power in order to protect his clanmates. He gets excited but sometimes unprepared for missions. Zen thinks that he is ready for the Shinobi World and graduating from the Academy is a giant step, but he is not aware of the hellness of war. He isn't the type to kill people and gets very nervous and hesitates when he is forced to even severely beat someone to a bloody pulp. But when times of war come and Konoha is in an endangered state, Zen would have to be forced to end someone's life with no remorse or mercy. Zen is cunning and observant, a trait described by his parents, which marks him proficient as a squad leader, but Zen hates such responsibility and usually goes with his comrade's choices. Zen believes that teamwork is the most important value above all aspects of shinobi and is therefore a strong believer of the Will of Fire, the bond that ties everyone in Konoha together as one huge family. He very much enjoys spars as "warm-ups" but very unusual for him to get competitive. He reveals immense respect for anyone superior to him, but the only exception might be his sensei. He possess a great sense of humor and produces a lovable laugh that is so persuading it can make others laugh with him as well.

Zen quickly rushes to the scene where might a comrade's life is endangered. When it comes to murder, Zen gets very scared and lacks the rage that bursts out when his friends' lives are on the line. Even to someone weak or inexpierenced to him, it'll take a lot of blood and fear for Zen to step up and releash his abilities to defend someone important to him. He cowers in bushes to make sure his own life dosen't face death anytime soon and watches people die cowardly. This is why he dosen't especially attach his emotions to someone else so he won't have to feel all of the pain and hatred he would have to face when they die. His expression remains neutral and sullen and is not short-tempered. The moment his killing instinct or anger arises, the grudge he holds quickly diminishes the next day and he forgets about it. Zen is able to think of quick plans when it comes to strategizing. Although it mostly can be inaccurate and bleak, he's still able to analyze enemy movement and abilities and discover advantages and disadvantages to it. He believes that all jutsus have limitations and loopholes in them. He prefers triumping over an opponent just by using sheer force alone but using all the knowledge that has been gain so far. His rule of combat is to take every opponent seriously- similiar to that of the Aburame's way. First, he perfers to charge towards the enemy with his basic techniques and find out what their elemental affinities or combat type are. Secondly, he studies how the enemy moves (their speed) and fighting style to determine their battle expierence and strength by pressuring them with multi-angled attacks from multiple directions or using his blade to find more about his enemy. Thirdly, he combines all of the intelligence he has gathered so far on his enemy's abilities, plan the rate of success, and formulate a way to throw the enemy off balance with sheer force. Lastly, once Zen figures out a plan, he looks for backup and include them to overwhelm the opponent and defeat them. This is naturally Zen's Code of Combat. Zen is quite agile and the most distingushing feature he has are the hawk-like eyes he glares at you with that can send shivers crackling down your spine. He has a childish voice and dosen't talk like he's the boss of everything.

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Name: Kunai
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Zen Tankou [Kumogakure Genin](WIP) Kunai

Special Abilities/Characteristics: N/A
Origin:The Kunai is a basic shinobi weapon used by ninja at Academy age.

Name: Shuriken
Quantity: 20
Rank: E
Appearance: Zen Tankou [Kumogakure Genin](WIP) Shuriken

Zen Tankou [Kumogakure Genin](WIP) Shuriken

Special Abilities/Characteristics: None
Origin: The Shuriken is a basic shinobi weapon used by ninja at Academy age.

Name: Steel Katana
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Zen Tankou [Kumogakure Genin](WIP) Cold_Steel_Knives_88BK

Special Abilities/Characteristics: The purpose of this sword is not mainly used for kenjutsu, but a nearby object in which Tankous can absorb metallic properties from.
Origin: Steel Katanas are usually the choice of weapons used by the Tankou Clan. These blades are given to each clan member at the early age of 8.

Name: Smoke Bomb
Quantity: 2
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Zen Tankou [Kumogakure Genin](WIP) Smokebomb

Special Abilities/Characteristics: A smoke bomb conceals a ninja's position and movements for short periods of time.
Origin: Smoke Bombs are basic ninja tools used by students at Academy age.

Name: Exploding Tag
Quantity: 5
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Appearance: Zen Tankou [Kumogakure Genin](WIP) Explodingnote

Zen Tankou [Kumogakure Genin](WIP) Explodingnote

Special Abilities/Characteristics: The exploding note is a piece of parchment paper which has script on it that serves to faciltate its explosive properties. The ninja can attach the note to another object such as a kunai or log. When the note is set it begins a slow burn which results in a large explosion.
Origin: Exploding Tags are ninja tools used by Academy students.

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First Time Rping:

" I'll back you up"

"'Earth Style: Head Hunter Groundhog Jutsu (Double Suicide Decipitation Technique)"

Egress heads and travels underground.....
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Egress's hand appear out of the ground and pulled fredo down to the ground up to the neck. The fire came closer and reached fredo, the flames concealing and burning him....

Egress swifted away to face nami and harry...

"Sharingan!"

Time for the real battle to start
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'What a massive compression of chakra..." Egress analyzed...

"Time for my best jutsu.."

"Chidori! 1000 Birds!!"

With Zero aiming for Nami, Egress aimed for Harry.

With both of the jutsus connecting..... thr fight will be over....
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Egress dodged all those kunais but had two cut off part of his hair...

Another mystery ninja......

"Shame all three for your other comrades have died....."
Egress glares his Sharingan at him.....
Hmmm, something feels familiar about him.... he thought
Naruto Way:
Sharingan!
Lighting Blade!
Egress charges in and stabs a rib of SonicWave's
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Egress performs a mixture of handsigns
Fire Style: Great Dragon Inferno
Two huge dragonheads appeared in each hand. Egress goes underground and throws the huge dragonheads up from the groundhole upward to SonicWave, the dragonheads flamed SonicWave's body, but missed as the heads fly away.
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With SonicWave distracted, Egress teleports away.
"Body Teleportation!"
His whole body teleports back to Konoha, using a diserable amount of chakra.
Lord Dread, I have the plans!

My First Day at Naruto Life:
Egress Uchiha walsk into the academy of the twilight Village. He enters the classroom adn sits upon a desk... He suddenly notices a great ninja before him... " Hello, I wish to become a ninja of the Twilight Village

You may call me Egress- Egress Uchiha, orphan of the Leaf. And what may i call you, sensei? (Zero-sensei?)

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True Shinobi Legends

Scorching over the dark and deep forest, Airon jumped from tree by tree to search for the kidnapper. You gotta be here somewhere.... he thought. Suddenly, he heared a slight sound in a bush below him. "Ha! There you are!" Airon took out a handful of sand from a tube and mixed it with chakra, converting it with a magnetic force. Suddenly, the sand blacken and harden, its chemical and physical state transforming. Airon extending the iron snad into a huge spike and smash it down onto the bush. A dark figure quickly emerged from the bush and flickered into a safe spot...

Landing on the bottom of his spike, Airon took a closer peek at the mysterious intruder that stole his student. He saw a man with red hair and black robes covering him neck to toe. "Where is she?!" yelled Airon. "You'll never find her! She is with us now.." replied the kidnapper. He took out two swords from his back and threatened him. "Hmph, you're ignorance dosent scare me..." said Airon bravely. Weaving a single handsign, the huge spike behind him dispearsed and headed stragiht towards their target! The iron sand binded the stranger's arms and legs and he fell to the ground. "Gah.. you cant stop us. We have much more stronger forces with us now that we possess her talent.." he announced. Airon looked deep into the man's eyes... "I don't care... I wont stop till I find her and secure her back to the village.." said Airon. He contuined his search again, jumping tree by tree to find his kidnapped disciple.. leaving the ANBU Black Ops to the red-haired man... Don't worry Hiami... I will find you...

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Shinobi Awakening

Battle Between Taco Maneki and Uchiha Egress

Maneki:
It was a bright sunny day and the wind was blowing lightly on maneki.He was enjoying this time of peace until a fly was blown straight into his mouth.After several moments of gagging up a fly he remembered why he was their.He was going to be having a fight against someone.He had posted invites to the fight all over the hidden villages stating that the first to show up would be the one fighting him.In anticipation for the fight he unsheathed his sword and just waited.To pass the time of waiting he decided to place a few manual explosive tags around the area.After placing 5 around the area he went back to waiting.

Egress:

Egress entered the battle arena during a cool, windy day. He looked around the enviroment to search for his opponent. Why was Egress here in the first place? Although he has been expired from ANBU, Egress could never surpass the urge to perform assassination... which can be the reason why he still wears his uniform under his robes. But now his robes were removed, his outfit still intact, and his Konoha headband laced on a red bandana glittered produly on his forehead. Two Ninjato blades were attached to his back and he possessed two equipment pouches full of ninja tools. Egress's hair was being blown on by the wind. Tuck in his purple ANBU vest, were bunches of summoning scrolls that he can utilize to call in an item for battle. Even still he's Hokage, he needed to take a break once in a while. He actually cannot believe that by assigning himself a S-rank actually got him out of the village. Egress stopped walking until he saw a figure across the distance. Could that be him...? wondered Egress. He remained silent until he got a closer look. He neared the figure, placing a hand on one of his swords to get ready for combat...

Maneki:
Maneki was whistling to pass the still bored from having to wait.Then he heard a noise and to his surprise saw what appeared to be a member of the anbu black ops of the leaf village.He said to the guy "hello their i am maneki taco of the hidden mist village you must be here because you answered my ad so im ready when ever you are you can have the first move."Now he waited for his opponent to make his move He was gonna gauge how strong this guy was depending on what he did.

Egress:
Egress adopted a battle stance after his opponent had identified himself. "Maneki Taco of Kirigakure, nice to meet you... I'm Egress Uchiha of Konoha, I'll begin our match then," introuduced Egress. A sense of murderous intent filled up in Egress starting with a small amount, as long as his opponent gets more challenger, his killer instinct will rise as well. He unsheathed one of his Ninjato and surged his chakra to it. First I shall make some judgements on him. Since he's from Kirigakure, he's likely to possess the Suiton element which is quite a bother, and the man looks like above his teenage years so probably he's a Jounin-level ninja. assumed Egress. He will not underestimate this opponent, who knows what tricks his enemies has up his sleeves. During the beginning of combat, he will attempt to not utilize the Sharingan... but the powers of his Sora Juin. He was merely eight meters away from his opponent and begun his usual combat method. First are the elements and what skill expertise he possess! decided Egress. He took out his Ninjato blade, remove its wooden container from his back, and converted the chakra to Raiton. Raiton: Raiken! emitted Egress. He ran a few feet towards Maneki and threw his Raiton-enhanced metal sword at him. As the lightning projectile is flung in the air, Egress took out a kunai from his shinobi pouch, twirled it, and gripped onto it for some defense purposes.

Maneki:
Maneki was surprised to be fighting egress Uchiha.Being of the Uchiha clan their was the chance he would have the sharingan.Then egress threw a sword from what he had said was imbued with raiton chakra.To block the attack maneki used his sword to deflect the blow and said "now its my turn."He charged at egress and drew out his swords diamond aura for the attack.when close enough he slashed at his foot being that it isn't an obvious attack.Well with his free hand he drew out a kunai to defend himself just in case his attack didn't work.

Egress:
Egress watched as his Raiton projectile was easily defeated by the his opponent's own sword attack. Seeing his opponent charging towards him, Egress began to back up four meters and threw his kunai. He instantly weaved three handseals in a second and he superheated chakra stored in his gullet to Katon. A sword... a Kirigakure ninja... could he be... one of those wretched Seven Swordsmen?! wondered Egress. Egress smiled as today he would have his long time revenge. "You know.. my own sensei was slaughtered by a Kirigakure shinobi.. one of those seven swordsmen.." told Egress. "Are you one of them?" he asked. After that, he blew out a huge Katon attack as the large mass grew and rapidly raced towards Maneki to incinerate him. "Katon: Zukkoku!" expelled Egress. Egress was already several feet away from Maneki as his swing was made and his KAton attack burned to it. Now he would uncover his opponent's elements.

Maneki:
Maneki sword had missed hitting egress and now egress had a fire jutsu heading straight for maneki.Even though he didn't want to he had only one way to block an attack in this kind of pinch.He activated his curse seal covering him in a flame armor this was his power seals 2ed form.since it is a higher level then egress attack he came out of the attack unscathed.He then charged at egress slashing from from the right at egress well watching his feet slightly to counter in case of a movement.

Egress:

Egress watched as his Katon attack was pulverized by Maneki who's body apepared to be covered in flames. Katon affinity..? wondered Egress. Interesting... let's see what other elements he possess... Egress surged his own Sky Curse Seal to a level one form. Energy and strength flowed through Egress's veins and throughout his entire body. I wonder how long has it been since I used this... perhaps I shall show him that the Dark Raven shall rise again.. he thought. Seeing Maneki laying an attack on him, he would use another technique to stop that from connecting. Forming a couple of handseals, he unleashed a Raiton technique. Raiton: Shichuu Shibari! conjoured Egress. Four long pillars were summoned from the ground around Maneki, giving off the illusion of a Doton technique. However a second later, lightning was released from the cardinal pillars to contain anything within it... then it sended a huge electric charge that shall paralyze and bind anything within its range. Let's see him reveal more and more of his abilities... Shame for Egress, he had already revealed his two only elemental affinities.

Maneki:

Maneki with his current armor could not be hurt by anything under a rank jutsu.Lucky for maneki egress didn't know he had that power so he let the attack hit him and then started to act.He then began to scream in pain maneki was an excellent actor.Then he said "curse you eg...."Then pretended to pass out and fell to the ground fully ready to counter attack.

Egress:

Egress watched as his Raiton attack had worked but was slightly puzzled. The level of the attack should have caused only stunning, not pain. He really must be weak... thought Egress. However, the Katon armor told Egress to go no further. Might as well extinguish that first... then cut through his heart.. He fumbled with his ninja pouch then took out three kunais with exploding tags attached to them. With a might, he threw those explosive projectiles at Maneki in an effort to at least konocj him back so Egress can see his chest.

Maneki:

Maneki saw that eg was throwing kunais at him.He opened his eyes and said "gotcha."Maneki was ling on a explosive tag he had set on the ground.He did the hand seal and the tag exploded sending maneki into the air unharmed and causing the kunais to stop.Maneki regained his balance well in the air and landed safely. He then put his sword in front of him and got ready to attack.He charged at egress and began to charge chakra into the tip of his sword.upon contack the sword will cause an explosion.He tehn swung at full force at egress downward at his head.

Egress:

Egress had noticed that Maneki was still conscious and released chakra throughout his entire body around the surrounding area. Playing possum eh.... I'm beginning to figure out his style... observed Egress. As Maneki headed to slash down at Egress's head, Egress supercharged the chakra to Raiton to make it to an electric current. "Raiton: Chidori Nagashi!" emitted Egress. The electric zone provided an excellent defense for Egress as if Maneki's body were to come in contact with a current, his attack would be repelled and be paralyzed for short periods of time.

Maneki:

Maneki saw that eg made no attempt to dodge his attack.The he heard a noise it sounded like chirping. He had heard of this jutsu it was chidori and it was protecting his body. He quickly activated his seals 3ed form allowing him to quickly switch from his fire armor to his lightning armor.Being of the same element egress armor would not be able to block his attack but chances were that his arm would be numbed.his His sword went seeding towards egress head causing a jolt to run through manekis arm unaffaecting the speed and power of the swing thanks to the armor.

Egress:

Egress observed as his opponent's Katon armour changed to a Raiton one. Raiton affinity as well? Challenging... thought Egress. With Maneki's attack just a couple of meters above his head, Egress planned to stop that attack and land an attack at Maneki from the side. And so it begins... that the Dark Raven awakens once more! Utilizing his partial transformation skills, two, large, black-feathered, wings erupted from Egress's back. These wings were like that of a bird's except quite bigger.. and under the wing hidden by darkness are five, small fingers. Egress quickly jumped to his right side with his wings coming along with him as his left wing took the blow for him and Maneki's attack sliced right through it. Egress went ahead to strike his right wing at Maneki's head but suddenly felt an unsettling feeling on his wounded wing. This... dosen't feel good... he thought. Instead, Egress immedaitely jumped aside to make a a far distance between them and could notice a giant explosion of energy erupting from Maneki. Egress shielded himself with his wounded wing, pushed off the ground, and attempted to fly. Boosh! The resulting explosion scarred the entire battlefield.

When the smoke cleared up, Egress's body was not seen. It would seem that he's entire body was blown to smithereens but if we were to turn our heads to the air.. we would see a man with strange marks over his body and what appears as a black wing soaring twelve feet high in the skies. Egress sacrificed his left wing in order to buy him some time to take flight in the air and escape from the blast radius. Still flying in the air with only one wing, Egress retracted the damaged tissue from his destroyed wing back to his body. Better the pain than the blood loss. High in the air, Egress briefly enjoyed the moment of superiority and a chance to fly again. But his opponent was bound to figure out his abilities. The blast wave not only destroyed one of his wing but also left some scars and wound on his left arm, but it was still functional. Egress looked down at Maneki for some analysis. That was some explosion... such a jutsu... he observed. The memories of his survival flowed through him. That explosion occured within a second his sword pierced through my wing just when I was about to hit him... he must have erected a probe around him that he can activate any time to set off the explosion... assumed Egress. Egress tried for another expierment to test out Maneki's abilities. Soon, he would skip to the next battle phase. Raiton and Katon affinities, chakra manipulation activation, and mastery over the blade... a tricky opponent but I best might just rely on Sora Juin.. he thought. Egress took out an exploding kunai and threw it below him at Maneki. Egress is now trying to see how fast his opponent can move and how fast they can react to attacks. It was needed for his next strategy.

Maneki:
Maneki though he had defeated his opponent and was ready to celebrate when he saw egress flying in the sky. Maneki then saw and heard a kunai coming towards.To cancels out the kunai attack he picked up the kunai with an exploding that that egress had thrown but never detonated. He then threw it at the other kunai when they connected it caused a massive explosion. He then tossed a 2ed exploding tag into the smoke with the cover of the smoke it was highly doubtful that egress was gonna see it in time to dodge it.Then he also switched back to his fire armor in case of a counter attack from egress.

Egress:

Egress watched from five meters high in the sky analysing Maneki's movements with his wing constantly ascending. He had seen his kunai gone off and EGress squinted his eyes to judge the impact. Either he used another probe detection.... or he used his quick reactions.. concluded Egress. His sense of hearing must be a great weapon to him... disabling it would be tricky, meaning I can no longer deal death blows to him from far distances... have to get closer... he formulated. Then, he saw some of the smoke flushing away and a blunt object speeding towards him just two meters away. Ah, a counter... I hope there's something in my arsenal that can protect me from such force... he detected. Egress quickly weaved two handseals and sparks of electricity erupted from his mouth. Only a big attack with a large offensive impact can assist me now.. "Raiton: Gian!" blasted Egress. A huge projectile of electricity bulleted from his mouth and headed towards the exploding kunai. The two forces collided as the Raiton blast repelled the kunai just eight feet below Egress before setting off. The resulting explosion weakened the Raiton blast's damage by 1/4 but the attack tunneled down to Maneki's position in a chance to hit him.

Maneki:

Maneki thought he had finnaly got the advantage in fight with the surprise attack with the kunai but when the kunai exploded instead of seeing egress falling from the sky maneki had a bolt of lightning coming straight at him.even though his armor could protect him from the attack he had a better idea.He took off his sword from his back and got ready to use it.Being one of the mist swordsmen it was his mist blade and it was called Pirania.As the lightning was coming at him he lifted his sword and had its mouth face the lightning.When the lightning hit the sword the sword ate it.No doubt that egress would be surprised by that move so he decided to release the attack back at egress for his counter attack.

Egress:

Egress watched as Maneki pulled out a strange-looking blade that had absorbed his technique. Bringing out Sora Juin, Kirigakure shinobi, and that huge sword, no doubt, this man must be one of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist! he concluded. Egress's eyes were now glaring with vengeance. Do not worry Yoku sensei.... the avengement of your death... by killing all of the Seven Swordsmen... is about to come.. Egress's wings were still flapping as now he was eight feet high in the air. He was shocked for about a second or two, but was more stunned to see his own attack repelled back to him. Tricky, I'm starting to deduce more of his abilities... with a blade like taht he can consume chakra... meaning even multiple ninjutsu attacks would prove ineffective... unless I.. strategized Egress. He knew the perfect defense against his own attack seeing as he used this particular technique against Gian before successfully and he had learned to find loopholes in his own jutsus. Weaving the Tora, Saru, U handseals, Egress expelled a shield of electricity. "Raiton: Raikouheki!" barricaded Egress. The lightning projectile dispelled when it contacted with the Raiton wall... but so did it. Egress lowered his wing movement and descended to the ground. When he was just two feet from the ground, Egress flapped his wings three times with normal force and he safely sinked back to the ground.

The recovery process is going.... but I think I need to create an opening in order for me to get him.. he planned. I thought a simple defeat was gonna go by but now that he's one of those wretched greats... I must use assassination... Egress was seven meters away from Maneki, and Egress drew out his second and last Ninjato blade.... having three plans in his mind already..

Maneki:

Maneki saw egress block his own lighting attack with a lightning shield.As he saw egress go towards the ground to land maneki put Pirania back on his back.He then saw egress finnaly land and take out a Ninjato blade.He decided to use his funnist jutsu.He threw a kunai into the ground a few feet away from egress with a flash bomb.Maneki quickly covered his eyes and a second later the bomb went off causing a blinding light.Maneki took this time to body flicker behind egess and put to fingers together and aimed them at egress butt.

Egress:

Egress noticed Maneki's metal projectile speeding several feet towards him. He twisted his body into a horizontal position for him to fit behind his wing. Egress covered himself with his black wing, which suddenly started to grow more and more black feathers. He quickly activated his Sharingan and began to weave the Rat and Tiger handseals. Time for me to show him a huge Katon technique... thought Egress. He felt the kunai breaching an inch in his one wing but was more surprised to hear an ignition of a bomb. There was a sudden blur of blinding light that had scarred the edges of his eye. The light had stunned Egress for 0.50 of a second. Flash Bomb...? He created an opening on me?! wondered Egress. Just then, he could faintly sight...hear, no smell someone aiming towards him. Egress quickly looked to the left to see Maneki aiming towards his lower side.

Maneki was already two meters from Egress and it seemed as if he crawled into his own time stop. Any second later and he might be dead. Fortunately, he would have to soon skip to the second phase of his new plan. Damn! cursed Egress. He did not have time to use up ninjutsu much less convert the chakra. So instead, Egress kept eye contact with Maneki and utilized the hypnotic power of the Sharingan. Magen: Kasegui!" binded Egress. He also shifted his Ninjato to his side in order to protect him from Maneki much less than directly attacking him, but it also served his purpose as a distraction. A second later, Maneki would be paralyzed and doomed to his power. In his current state, his Sora Juin would boost his genjutsu for the bind to be more stronger.

Maneki:

Manekis attack was about to hit egress when he shifted his ninjato to block his butt.He was able to stop him self.He then quickly turned around and jumped into a nearby tree.Maneki was wondering how egress was able to see his attack so fast.Then it hit him egress must have been using the sharingan.If that was the case maneki knew he would have to not make any eye contact with him.Maneki then decided to stay hidden for the time being.But decided to explode one of the manual exploding tags that he planted.The one he explodes was directly in front of egress.

Egress:

Seeing as his illusion spell did not make contact, Egress watched as Maneki quickly retreated. He did not clearly seee what he had gone but when he shifted his head towards the direction Maneki had retreated to, he saw a faint chakra presence diving towards a tree. Either that's a squirrel.... or somebody has some sneaky toes.. thought Egress. Even with his slightly wounded wing, Egress rushed towards that tree that he had seen the chakra presence going into. He turned off his Sharingan as the urge to kill that he had locked up now rose to the surface of his heart. He immediately turned off his Sharingan as he would no longer need it. Be quite grateful that you'll be one of the few survivors... to witness the true Dark Raven of Konoha.... flappings its wings again! thought Egress. As he ran towards the tree, an explosion ignited just four meters behind Egress. He quickly jumped as he flapped his wings to protect him from the blast wave. However, a change occured in him that caused him to no longer cared whether or not the blast had connected.

As the explosion headed, Egress's curse mark clustered together all around his body, transforming him into Sky Curse Seal's Level Two! Once the smoke cleared up, Egress's right wing has been blown up. But the Egress now standing was no longer Egress. The man...or creature took the appearance of a humanoid bird or human raven... resembling a tengu! Egress's mouth was changed to a black beak, his hands and feet are claws and talons, his teeth are that of fangs, and his eyes resembled a hawk's. His skin were now sharp, black feathers and the top of his head were raven-shaped hair. And his battle stance and calm breathing had reflected the immense killer instinct that had activated in him. This was Egress's legacy.... the legend of Konoha's Dark Raven. It has been quite awhile since he had taken this form. Egress stood up, a fearless shinboi who was feared among others. His face was calm and quite collective. Suddenly, Egress's left wing fully resprouted and regenerated from his body! Sora Juin's limb regeneration ability had made Egress Uchiha's name famous world wide. Only four people in Konoha knew about Sora Juin's second stage abilities other than its transformation power.

"Maneki Taco.... consider yourself lucky to witness this form.." stated Egress in a more gruff and deep voice. He took his Ninjato and surged Raiton chakra into it. The Raiton chakra which usually appeared blue was now black, stating its power boost to overcome normal Raiton-enhanced metal blades. With the sharpness of his feathers and the lightning emission, Egress's large fetahered wings took off and his whole body charged towards the tree. The Raiton emitting from the blade was spreading similiar to that of Chidori Nagashi. He lunged the blade at the tree and his whole body was surrounded by tremendous force. The impact would instantly breach through the tree and if Maneki was hitted by this, several organs, limbs, and bones would be severely fractured. His original stamina and strength has been triple boosted.

Maneki:
maneki saw that after the smoke cleared egress was still alive but had a lost a wing.Then suddenly his body turned black and he regrew his wing.He then took out his ninjato and electricity started to surge everywhere.He quickly jumped out of the tree and a second later it was destroyed by egress attack.He safely landed on the ground and was about 15 feet away from egress.He then took out hiyomori and took a defensive stance.He was ready to counter attack egress next attack.

Egress:

Egress weaved a couple of handseals as Maneki dodged his attack. He threw his remaining Raiton-enhanced Ninjato to the ground as he prepared his next attack with a Katon. He can absorb chakra and reflect them.... so I I would use turn his advantage to his disadvantage.. thought Egress. A large dark mass blew from Egress's mouth and when Egrexx fully expelled it, it grew into a huge fire blast. "Katon: Zukkoku!" he blasted. Instead of the usual fire, Zukkoku appeared more darker with vile energy. Zukkoku had went through a power boost. The large flaming raced towards Maneki at high speed.

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Naruto Rivals

Egress Uchiha, the 7th Mizukage, become his work in his office. he was busy filling out reports, paperwork, and mission files that is filled with constant pleas from foreign countries. Ever since the 4th Great Ninja World War has ended and two months after he had left Konoha, Egress was assigned by "them" to conquer this one who he has no interest in. But after a few years as their leadeer, he begins to feel the responsibility he had felt them, not to mention what he had done to Rokudaime Mizukage, he had alot to take care of before he can join them. He smiled and reassured himself that he's now a member of the Five Great Nations, that had always cheered him up. He then took a big breath, and lowered his head, contuining with his work.

Sigh, the shinobi here are pretty strong.. not to mention their manners.. Egress thought. It had been three decades ever since Kirigakure has earned its nickname the "Village of the Bloody Mist" and become the most feared country over all of the other countries. Their system of creating and breeding talented and amazing warriors was successful and their ninja were always elite, strong, and follows the Code of Shinobi. But that was around 30 years ago, the so-called BloodMist Village returned to its normal state and their nightmare was over, they were just ordinary, Godaime Mizukage has assured that peace would be kept. The 6th Mizukage even thought about restoring the Mist Village back to its feared status, but he had failed in that plan. Until Egress Uchiha came...

Now the current Mizukage is up to something extraorindary. He plans to restore the way people graduate from the Academy as a free-for-all deathmatch! But in order to keep the happiness of people, Lord Mizukage assured that the top 6 survivors, regardless of grades or talent, would promote to Genin. As even inside the weak and poor shinboi of Kirigakure's Academy, once the melee graduation exam begins, he'll seek out true killer instinct and that's what all shinboi of Kirigakure is hammered into them: Murderous Intent. They all have to will to fight on and risk their lives for the village, to brutally and forcefully slaughter everyone even their own comrades, to withstand gruesome tasks and crush all of those in their way, in just three months ever since Egress became the Mizukage, the Mist Village became bloody again and is feared across the entire ninja world.

Egress smiled knowing his plan has worked, Kirigakure's Assassination Squads are fearsome and the Jounin are emotionless, or so it appears. Even the toughest fighters in the Village of the Bloody Mist, including Genin, Chunin, Jounin, Hunter-Nins, and even his "trustworthy" advisors, their strength nor prowess could match Egress's own, as they would be easily be controlled by his ocular eyes, that's why it's wise to not look into the Mizukage's eyes if you're talking to him. Happy to know that he's leading a very elite country, even during these times of peace and luxury, where money and raising prodigies were no longer a concern to the shinobi villages, the Renaissance was truly helpful in massively increasing the economy. Finishing filling out a D-rank mission plea, he grew bored and awaited for someone to enter through that door and ask for a mission....
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As soon as Egress saw the smoke, he pulled out a kunai. Concealing himself so soon... is he going to use a Doton technique..? wondered Egress. Suddenly, as the smoke begins to diminish, he sees a dark figure- doing absolutely nothing. "What's this..?" said Egress. he began to make sense of this as his eyes adjusted to see what laid in the smoke. It was Suzumo... but he was not.. moving. Not moving..? Impossible... how can this be? But it was true, Egress couldn't even see the Suzumo figure moving an inch. So is this a Bunshin? No matter... not like it would stand a chance against anything... However, what would happen next surprised him evermore. He reacted instantly when Suzumo had launched blades from him. The way it was done was weird, but Egress's anticipation was too late. So he can move... but the Bunshin is containing such weapons.... and he's moving in a zig-zag formation.. possibly so my Sharingan can have trouble keeping up. he analyzed. Egress threw his one kunai and then reached into his ninja pouch at the same time. He pulled out four shurikens and threw them as well to block the blades.

"Alright, I might as well pull out your full potential," promised Egress. Quickly weaving six handseals in merely two seconds, he releashed a Fire Style technique. "Katon: Goukakyuu!" Instantly, he spewed a huge wave of fire towards the upcoming blocks and to stop Suzumo in his tracks if he comes to close. What will happen next?

Mura of Shinobi:

As his attack failed and from the moment he had jumped he was immediately pulled down, right into his enemy's area! Expecting a counter from the Hokage, Egress tried to react to it but the gravity seemed to have been pulling down his weights and he felt his bones had become weaker, as he's sweating long beads of sweat. He was then kicked by a swift kick to the chest, Egress had only a moment to move a little to the left, but the attack was strong enough to send him tumbling down the floor. Attempting to rebound, he actually just held himself to the ground like an animal. He jumped up but was pulled down by the immense force and he struggled to land on his feet.

Hearing the words from the Hokage's advice, he decided to follow it for awhile, until he could get use to this type of training, he would have to avoid aerial attacks, which can almost make his evasion dodges difficult. Getting up, he began to anticipate he Hokage's next movements and to expect his incoming attacks. This could be useful, I could get use to perceiving motions without the assistance of the Sharingan.. he thought. "Ah yes, you're very much correct Lord Hokage.." he said. "The increased gravity pulls me down much quicker than usual, so it limits my fighting style, however it can also..." Thinking of a strategy, the gravity pulling him down in that well can assist him in using ninjutsu, but it requires accurate thinking to use it correctly...

He felt as he had little chance in completing his task, as it seems the Hokage had a better experience in this type of training and he was new to such things. He then sees the Hokage moving his hands and throwing something invisible, or it could be nothing at all. But like it was said, there was no point in wasting energy and performing useless things, it is important to perceive as much stamina as possibly. This could be Ninpou... or Fuuton but... Egress thought due to previous encounters with enemy ninjutsu. He lifted both of his hands over his head, and anticipating it, he felt two painful forces leveling at him and he was knocked back violently.

Focusing chakra on his hands as the two blasts connected, he was flipped over and then with his hands pressed to the ground, he flipped himself back up! Hmm.. intruiging.. it was Fuuton after all.. It might appear that Egress was actually dodging and evading the Hokage's attacks, but it is actually to Egress, that he's "experimenting" and utilizing whatever advantages and uses this new technology has offered to him and use it against his enemy. He felt two sharp pains in his chest, but he did his best to ignore it, or most of it. "Alright then Lord Hokage... guess it's my move now.." he said. In three seconds, Egress flickered six handseals and molded chakra in his gullet. "Katon: Goukakyuu!" he conjoured. Egress blasted out a huge fireball heading towards Lord Hokage, just in time for a stranger to walk in and ask for Egress's name.. Hmm..?

History:

Early Childhood/Pre-Academy Arc:

Zen Tankou is the son of the reknown Shigen Tankou and the kind Namikio Tankou. Since the moment of his birth, Zen was expected to be special among the other Tankou children as his father was branded as a proud prodigy in the clan and graduated top of his class at a young age. However, Zen was poorly build and rather slow on learning. The clan elders feared that there won't be a suitable leader for their clan and they blamed it on his mother, Namikio Tankou who was given Zen too much freedom. But Shigen did not give up as he continue to nurture his son like a normal parent would, so there would be someone to guard the clan when he left this world and to succeed the current clan leader, Airon Tankou. He was very close to his mother but also distant from his father. He sometimes felt he didn't know him at all despite all of the care he has been giving him. The greatest motivation he has all lies on his father. On his own free time when he's not playing with his sister or cooking with his mom, Zen trains in the clan's local training grounds in hope of becoming great. At age 6, Zen had become one of the rare, few Tankou members to unlock this power at a young age. When Zen was practicing in the field, he fall and sat on a couple of metal coins. He picked them up and squeezed it tightly. He was training to learn how to manipulate chakra taught by his mother but just couldn't get it right. With a large force, he slammed his fist on the ground. Miracously, Zen's hand began to ache and he began to scream in pain. His hand darkened until it changed to to color of copper. It took his mother several minutes to disable the partial transformation and restore Zen back to his normal state. From then on, Zen became sullen but knew his own destiny as a shinobi. At age 8, he enrolled in the Kumogakure Ninja Academy to begin his life as a shinobi-in-training.

Academy Arc:

During his times at the Academy, Zen studied hard on the ninja basics and Shinobi Code of Conduct. He quickly memorized most of the text but then grew quite bored. His studies were too long and too hard that it seperated his social life. But that didn't bother Zen, he didn't even realize it. His grades exceeded the standards and his Taijutsu and Ninjutsu were above-average. His chakra control had amazed his teachers and they were described as "truly above the expectations." However, his Shurikenjutsu and skills with ninja tools were only between poor and normal. This is partially due to Zen's fear of metallic objects. But even so, he developed accurate aiming that has a high chance of hitting whatever he wants. Above all, his "Intelligence" and "Shinobi Knowledge" were the best just above his "Speed" as he was the fastest student in his class. At age 8, he was given a steel sword by the clan leader himself and destoryed his fear of metallic objects. He studied for nearly four years but failed the exams on his first try. Dissapointing his father, Zen decided to try again. With a single look at Zen's grades, you might have guessed that he's suitable for having genius talent but his Genjutsu skills and Leadership were just too horrible. He easily becomes lazy when it comes to corporation and so any projects that he was assigned to finish came up poor. Still, he practiced at home his Ninjutsu techniques and mastered the basics. At age 12, the exams came once again and Zen was prepared for it. He finally passed the test and would soon become part of the Ninja Universe. His reports had made them proud of Zen, which had sastified him.

Genin Arc:

Just two months after his graduation ceremony, Zen had developed his first elemental affinity- Doton. The chakra nature was the same as Shigen's as he also had the Doton element as his first. He was several simple Doton ninjutsu that might help Zen is later times while he's increasing his muscular strength. His clan techniques also furthered as he was able to cover his body in a sturdy layer of steel. He was taught some Taijutsu such as the Iron Fist, Iron Elbow, and Leaf Hurricane by his father. Learning more about his clan's history, he was sometimes considered in the thoughts of the elders as the reincarnation of Koumanzen- the clan's great ancestor who had a hidden partial-metallic spine that rarely appears in the Tankou clan. He made use of his abiities and was good at using the clan's Metal Fist style. But a dreadful event fell on Zen that inflicted a lot of emotional impact on him. His father had fallen ill to a new virus formed from the combination of certain dieseases from his father's associates. Shigen was gravely in danger and with no medical assistance, death would be certain. That mentally had an effect on Zen and he had locked himself from the world and his family, spending most of his time in his room. Then, in a dream, an old man had spoken to him that somehow gave Zen some hope and shedded light in the shadowy world he has taken refuge in. As long as he worked hard like his father fighting to live, then he'll live. Miracously, the doctors had found a cure for the virus and successfuly brung Shigen back to his healthy state, which had brung Zen out of the darkness as well. So he had avoided other students in order to ask what kind of world his father himself was in. But his father had dismissed it and returned right to training, despite the rest the doctors had informed him of. Eventually, his training at home ended as he was informed to be joining a Genin cell and begin his life as a shinobi, with a Jounin to lead the squad and to complete missions. He had also discovered his Raiton affinity but never got the chance to learn some techniques. Zen was a little nervous but excited to officially be a ninja. He remains calm and goes on as a Kumo Genin, clashing combat every day as shinobi.

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Zen's Techniques

Name: Underground Fish Projection
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Ramge: -
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him.

Name: Double Suicide Decipitation Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: Earth
Description: Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized.

Name: Mole Hiding Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Range: -
Description: Doton • Moguragakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to burrow into the ground and hide out of sight. This allows them to avoid attack or travel underground.

Name: Earth Flow River
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Doryuu Taiga is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud.

Name: Rock Spear
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Gansetsukon is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Earth Element. This jutsu allows Fuen to break up nearby stone and shape it into rock spears. These spears can then be launched at Fuen's opponent. One spear per rock/stone.

Name: Rock Hiding Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Iwagakure is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Earth Element. This jutsu allows the user to change their appearance by blending and merging with the surrounding rock. This allows the ninja to move unseen, which assists in attack and escape.

Name: Iron Fist
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu/Secret Clan Technique
Element: N/A (Metal)
Description: Airon Genkotsu is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Tankou Clan. By touching a piece of metal, the clan member can absorb the metal through them and enhance their abilities. Using this enhancement, they'll charge forwards their target and thrust a strong punch to it, where it might be able to break a bone. All clan members are expected to be able to use this style when they've unlocked their absorption ability.

Name: Iron Elbow
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu/Secret Clan Technique
Element: N/A (Metal)
Description: Airon Erubo is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Tankou Clan. By touching a piece of metal, the clan member can absorb the metal through them and enhance their abilities. Then, they can use the Iron Fist skill. While in their enhanced state, the clan member heads towards their target. Then, they'll turn their body and launch their elbow right at the opponent, an unexpected attack. The impact can be strong enough to severe one's neck or inflict some damage to the opponent's head. Unfortunately, because it takes a split second to perform the spin, enemies who recover quickly and have good instincts can react to block this attack.

Name: Metal Fist Style
Rank: -
Type: Taijutsu/Secret Clan Art
Element: N/A (Metal)
Description: Kinzoku Ryuu is a fighting style developed by the Tankou Clan. By touching a metallic object, they can absorb them throughout their body. The Tankou Clan will be able to use their metal state and encoporate it to their hand-to-hand combat skills. Similiar to the Gouken Ryuu which injures the body and breaks bones, Kinzoku Ryuu's main purpose is to overwhelm the opponent with barrages of enhanced attacks, thus limiting their space to perform hand seals, counter, and escape. Tankou clan members can then distract their enemy with their swift and strong techniques and to triumph over enemies relying on their sheer force alone. Techniques like Airon Senpuu, Airon Erubo, and Airon Genkotsu derive from this style.

Name: Partial Metal Absorption
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu/Secret Clan Technique
Element: N/A (Metal)
Description: Kuzen Kane Kyuuin is a basic technique taught to new, inexpierenced clan members at Academy age. Just by exerting a small amount of chakra into a body part while touching a piece of metal, such as the hands or feet, with large effort they'll be able to absorb the metal into that small portion of their body. This could also be utilized by more skilled clan members but by touching a piece of metal with smaller sizes.

Name: Leaf Whirlwind
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique involves a powerful leap forward followed by a spinning kick with both legs in succession, the second kick being aimed lower in case the intended target ducks the first.

Name: Dynamic Action
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Dynamic Action is a taijutsu technique used by Maito Gai. Gai will launch himself at his opponent and then use a barrage of strikes and kicks.

Name: Dynamic Entry
Type: TAijutsu
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Dynamic Entry is a taijutsu technique used by Maito Gai. Gai will throw a kunai to distract his targets attention, he will then use his speed and agility to quickly approach and attack his opponent from their blind side.

Name: Leaf Great Whirlwind
Type: TAijutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Konoha Dai Senpuu is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Leaf ninja Rock Lee. Like the normal Senpuu, Lee uses his quickness and agility to deliver a series powerful spinning kicks to his opponent.

Name: Leaf Shadow Dance
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Konoha Kage Buyou is a Taijutsu technique that is used to position a ninja's opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. The ninja will first quickly appear below their opponent, then with a switch upper kick they will launch their target into the air. The ninja will then jump into the air to "shadow" the target with the target's back to their chest. Rock Lee uses the Konoha Kage Bayou to place his opponent into a position to do his Omote Renge technique. Uchiha Sasuke would go on to copy this move to set up his opponent for his Shishi Rendan technique.

Name: Leaf Gale
Type: TAijutsu
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description:Konoha Reppuu is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Leaf ninja Rock Lee. Using his quickness and agility, Rock moves low to the ground and spinning kick to sweep his opponent off their feet.

Name: Leaf Rising Wind
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Konoha Shoufuu is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Leaf ninja Rock Lee. Using his quickness and agility, Lee with do a swift upwards kick at his opponent or at a weapon his opponent is wielding.

Name: Iron Cut
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Airon Kai is a Taijustu technique utilized by the Tankou Clan. By touching a piece of metal, the clan member can absorb the metal through them and enhance their abilities. Using this enhancement, they first run up to an enemy or just get close to them. Then, they focus their strength and force into a hand and curl it into a fist, with left-most knuckle pointing higher than the rest. Then, the clan member swings their fist towards the opponent, perferbly the lower jaw, like an uppercut. The amount of force can deeply break the jaw or even cause them to fall to the ground.

Name: Iron Force
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Airon Chikara is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Tankou Clan. By touching a piece of metal, the clan member can absorb the metal through them and enhance their abilities. USing this enhancement, they can increase their overall strength and charge towards their enemy. Using the area between one of their shoulders and elbow, they thrust it towards their enemies to push them asides, which can cause great impact depending on the opponent's position.

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