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| Subject: Unagai Clan [Elemental Weapon Charging] Sun 26 Feb 2012, 7:13 am | |
| Clan Name: Unagai (Surname with no meaning.) Location: Any Signature Traits: Tattoos visible on the hands and at the top of the sternum. As well as this they carry a few seals on the arms containing weapons which are used in tandem with the clan's technique.
The charge technique
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Name: Seishou Chozou no Buki ~ Lit. “Weapon of Stored Energy” Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (Contact with weapon) Element: Unagai Seal Chakra Description: User focues chakra from one of the four elemental seals on their body into their weapon. This creates one of four effects that can be used to launch deadlier attacks than simple weaponry attacks alone. There are risks to this though which vary from element to element.
The first of these charges in need of description is the more commonly used of them, the flame charge. When held it heats up a weapon to a scorching 400 degress Fahrenheit. The drawback to this is that radiant temperatures from the weapon are capable of burning the user over time. Holding the charge for one post causes burns to the skin equivalent to a sunburn. Holding the charge for two posts will begin to burn the user's hands to second degree burns. Holding it for three posts usually results in the weapon being destroyed. When discharged through a physical attack the temperature spikes to 700 degress Fahrenheit and becomes capable of scorching flesh if it contacts a body part. Discharging the energy on this can be done through striking the weapon on something or using the Seishou Sendan technique.
The second charge type is the Air type. This chakra is similar to regular air chakra being used with weapons. When held on bladed weapons it is capable of increasing a weapon's sharpness. On blunt weapons it is capable of making the weapon less wind resistant allowing it to fly through the air faster. If this technique variant is hit with flames though the weapon will burst into flames for one post until the wind chakra is burned off. Discharge on this variant is done through strikes or released in the Seishou Sendan technique.
The third type is the Earth type. This type of chakra weights a weapon down by increasing the weapon's weight by one third and increases its durability while the chakra is held. It cannot be discharged into a ranged attack but instead is discharged with more blunt force in a weapon's strike.
The final variant is the Water type.
This type of chakra is also discharged through the weapon hitting its mark. It causes mainly water and cold damage to its target. Not visibly through ice and the like but through numbness in a struck bodypart for one post. This can be used on the user to help the user remain active through pain. However, use of this technique in the same area repeatedly can cause permanent nerve damage
Chakra Cost: 2 cp per post of held charge. (Taken from Seal amounts)
The ranged technique
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Name: Seishou Sendan Lit. “Energy Shear” Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Mid-range (10 meters) Element: Unagai Seal Chakra Description: This technique is used in conjunction with the charge technique, Seishou Chozou no Buki, to discharge the chakra from a weapon into a ranged attack. This can only be done in two ways, through the Wind seal's chakra or through the Fire seal's chakra.
The fire variant of this technique is discharged in an arc in front of the user. It reaches up to 600 degrees at its peak, just after the swing then degrades by 60 degrees every meter it travels making its effective range a mere 10 meters before the heat is barely noticable. At the initial swing this technique is capable of burning the user if over used. second degree burns on the hands and first degree burns on the face will occur if this variant is used more than twice per post.
The second variant of this is the wind chakra discharge. The swing from this creates a visible but partially transparent wave of chakra. The attack is only capable of cutting within five meters from the weapon it is launched from. It's cutting power is capable at one meter from the user of cutting through five inches of solid wood and degrades by an inch of cutting every meter it travels. After the first five meters this technique loses cutting capabilities and becomes what equates to a 25mph gust of wind in the sixth meter, noticeable, but harmless. If this technique is met with flame natured chakra, including that of the Unagai's seal chakra it will cause an immediate small scale explosion.
Chakra Cost: 3cp of seal chakra
The meditative technique
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Name: Yottsu Kouseitan'i no Mokkou Koukotsu ~ Lit. “Meditative Trance of Four Elements” Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This is the name given to the technique used by the Unagai clan to filtrate chakra into the four seals. The user will either sit or stand in one place for usually more than a few hours at a time. During this time they will hold their hands in the handseal that designates the chakra to its seal. Tiger for fire, Snake for earth, Bird for wind or Dragon for water.
The user will then focus on the seal they are charging and funnel chakra through it. Because the seal uses half of the chakra focused into it to convert the chakra into another type for every 2 cp pushed through it 1cp is used to convert the other 1cp which is stored in the seal. Because of this lengthy charging process it is not feasible to charge the seals in a battle setting. Another reason for this is that the user of this technique will become unresponsive to outside stimulus. It has been said that this technique can be used to communicate with demons and chakra beings sealed within the user's body as well. This is only conjecture outside of the clan's connection with Houkou though. It is unknown whether this state can be used to safely communicate with Bijuu.
Chakra Cost: 2cp converted to 1cp of seal's nature
Kekkei Genkai: The Unagai clan focuses mainly on Fuuinjutsu and weapons. The clan's trademark ability is an attack that charges their weapons with specific elements. This is accomplished through meditation and chakra conversion. The main characteristic of the clan's KKG is a set of five tattoos. The first of these is the central tattoo, applied at birth.
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This seal is known as the Ether or spirit seal. Its main function is to siphon off chakra to feed into the other seals. It is located in the middle of the torso and is the greatest weak point of the user. Any lightning natured attack that contacts this seal will scramble the user's chakra system for one post.
The first of the seals is on the user's chest at the top of the sternum and is called the Earth Seal.
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This seal functions as a filter for the user's chakra, forcing it to change elements to the earth element. This is accomplished through hours of meditation in lower users. The cost of conversion is roughly 50 percent. Meaning for every 1 cp pushed into the seal the user will gain .5 so rounded up the seal will convert two cp's into one of earth chakra. This chakra is then stored in the seal. The earth seal is capable of holding more chakra from the user as the user gains more knowledge in the seal and grows physically and mentally. At it's peak it is capable of holding 25% of the person's total CP as earth element. That's not to say that this seal increases the user's totally chakra though. This seal will only hold the chakra in the system. The chakra in this seal is unusable in most elemental ninjutsu save for the clan's technique.
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This is the second of the four outer seals. The flame seal. This seal functions in the same way as the earth seal but converts the chakra filtered through it into Fire chakra. It is located on the user's belly It is capable of holding 25% of the user's total chakra amount as well.
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The third of these seals is the water seal. It is on the back of the user's right hand. This seal has the same conversion rate of 2 to 1 but unlike the other two seals this one and the air seal, being substantially smaller is only capable of holding 20% of the user's total chakra.
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This seal is the final of the clan's seals and is known as the Air seal and converts to wind chakra. It, like the water seal can only hold 20% of the user's total chakra.
As totals go the amount of chakra a user can hold is listed like this. In this example a Genin's amount is used, 50 cps
Total: 50 Earth seal: 12cp (Actual 12.5 rounded down) Fire seal: 12cp (Actual 12.5 rounded down) Water seal: 10cp Air seal: 10cp Regular chakra: 6cp
History:
The Unagai clan has origins linked back to a beast of lore and legend. The beasts name was Houkou, a mysterious wolf god with five tails, each controlling a singular element. The beast was worshipped by the clan for being a balance of both life and death as well as being one of the few bodies capable of housing all five of the minor chakra natures. It took decades for the clan to evolve from hunters and ninja into an almost occult type of group.
They suffered persecution in villages for worshipping a deity many considered to be an omen of catastrophe. It was said that at every appearance of the wolf great calamities and catastrophes would occur. The earth would split and shake, great storms would whip up from the lashing of its tails. Great fires would scorch the land from its actions as well. When it could no longer be tolerated anymore it was said that one of the ancestral members of the Unagai clan captured the beast within a seal on his body. Over the years as the clan quieted and stabilized it was said that the beast was passed from clansmen to clansmen down the leader's line until at one point it disappeared completely.
The clan continued to evolve, stabilizing in time into a clan that worshipped the elements in a pure form. Among the clan five men of each generation would learn how to inscribe the seals of the clan onto the children of the families. For every village the clan was based in five of these men would exist, one knowing specifically how each of the elemental seals was formed and how it functioned within the body and this knowledge would be passed to the firstborn of each of the five founders. The ether seal inscriber was considered the founder in each of the villages because only his line had extensive knowledge on how all five of the seals worked. In the event that one of the four inscribers was killed the Ether elder would pick from the clansmen who would take his place and teach them how to perform the ritual required for inscribing the seal upon an infant.
As the clan spread out, becoming rooted in each of the major villages the main branch became nestled in Konohagakure. Recently though a scroll was discovered nestled within the clan's main house. In a renovation the scroll had been knocked free from a hidden compartment in a central beam of the house and when it was examined it was found to contain only a few letters on it, spelling simply; Houkou.
The Ether elder of Konoha decided to keep it a secret until his son came of age to have the deity sealed within him. It was at that point that his son, Sousuke was marked to be the wolf's next host.
Clan Jutsu:
The charge technique
- Spoiler:
Name: Seishou Chozou no Buki ~ Lit. “Weapon of Stored Energy” Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (Contact with weapon) Element: Unagai Seal Chakra Description: User focues chakra from one of the four elemental seals on their body into their weapon. This creates one of four effects that can be used to launch deadlier attacks than simple weaponry attacks alone. There are risks to this though which vary from element to element.
The first of these charges in need of description is the more commonly used of them, the flame charge. When held it heats up a weapon to a scorching 400 degress Fahrenheit. The drawback to this is that radiant temperatures from the weapon are capable of burning the user over time. Holding the charge for one post causes burns to the skin equivalent to a sunburn. Holding the charge for two posts will begin to burn the user's hands to second degree burns. Holding it for three posts usually results in the weapon being destroyed. When discharged through a physical attack the temperature spikes to 700 degress Fahrenheit and becomes capable of scorching flesh if it contacts a body part. Discharging the energy on this can be done through striking the weapon on something or using the Seishou Sendan technique.
The second charge type is the Air type. This chakra is similar to regular air chakra being used with weapons. When held on bladed weapons it is capable of increasing a weapon's sharpness. On blunt weapons it is capable of making the weapon less wind resistant allowing it to fly through the air faster. If this technique variant is hit with flames though the weapon will burst into flames for one post until the wind chakra is burned off. Discharge on this variant is done through strikes or released in the Seishou Sendan technique.
The third type is the Earth type. This type of chakra weights a weapon down by increasing the weapon's weight by one third and increases its durability while the chakra is held. It cannot be discharged into a ranged attack but instead is discharged with more blunt force in a weapon's strike.
The final variant is the Water type.
This type of chakra is also discharged through the weapon hitting its mark. It causes mainly water and cold damage to its target. Not visibly through ice and the like but through numbness in a struck bodypart for one post. This can be used on the user to help the user remain active through pain. However, use of this technique in the same area repeatedly can cause permanent nerve damage
Chakra Cost: 2 cp per post of held charge. (Taken from Seal amounts)
The ranged technique
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Name: Seishou Sendan Lit. “Energy Shear” Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Mid-range (10 meters) Element: Unagai Seal Chakra Description: This technique is used in conjunction with the charge technique, Seishou Chozou no Buki, to discharge the chakra from a weapon into a ranged attack. This can only be done in two ways, through the Wind seal's chakra or through the Fire seal's chakra.
The fire variant of this technique is discharged in an arc in front of the user. It reaches up to 600 degrees at its peak, just after the swing then degrades by 60 degrees every meter it travels making its effective range a mere 10 meters before the heat is barely noticable. At the initial swing this technique is capable of burning the user if over used. second degree burns on the hands and first degree burns on the face will occur if this variant is used more than twice per post.
The second variant of this is the wind chakra discharge. The swing from this creates a visible but partially transparent wave of chakra. The attack is only capable of cutting within five meters from the weapon it is launched from. It's cutting power is capable at one meter from the user of cutting through five inches of solid wood and degrades by an inch of cutting every meter it travels. After the first five meters this technique loses cutting capabilities and becomes what equates to a 25mph gust of wind in the sixth meter, noticeable, but harmless. If this technique is met with flame natured chakra, including that of the Unagai's seal chakra it will cause an immediate small scale explosion.
Chakra Cost: 3cp of seal chakra
The meditative technique
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Name: Yottsu Kouseitan'i no Mokkou Koukotsu ~ Lit. “Meditative Trance of Four Elements” Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This is the name given to the technique used by the Unagai clan to filtrate chakra into the four seals. The user will either sit or stand in one place for usually more than a few hours at a time. During this time they will hold their hands in the handseal that designates the chakra to its seal. Tiger for fire, Snake for earth, Bird for wind or Dragon for water.
The user will then focus on the seal they are charging and funnel chakra through it. Because the seal uses half of the chakra focused into it to convert the chakra into another type for every 2 cp pushed through it 1cp is used to convert the other 1cp which is stored in the seal. Because of this lengthy charging process it is not feasible to charge the seals in a battle setting. Another reason for this is that the user of this technique will become unresponsive to outside stimulus. It has been said that this technique can be used to communicate with demons and chakra beings sealed within the user's body as well. This is only conjecture outside of the clan's connection with Houkou though. It is unknown whether this state can be used to safely communicate with Bijuu.
Chakra Cost: 2cp converted to 1cp of seal's nature
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| Subject: Re: Unagai Clan [Elemental Weapon Charging] Mon 27 Feb 2012, 11:59 pm | |
| Could you please put every Jutsu in a spoiler please? - Quote :
Name: Seishou Sendan ~ Lit. “Energy Shear” ... Water seal chakra: This type of chakra is also discharged through the weapon hitting its mark. It causes mainly water and cold damage to its target. Not visibly through ice and the like but through numbness in a struck bodypart for one post. This can be used on the user to help ease pain and keep him running. How exactly does this help ease pain and assist with running? Also, I'd like you to add in a one post delay between the user beginning the 'filtering' of their chakra and the changing of the chakra's elemental nature. Furthermore, I'd like you to separate the supplementary and ranged aspects of this into two Separate Jutsu with the ranged one being a C Rank. The reason for this is that in it's current state, your technique feels like it's trying to do too much in one go. I understand that these are fairly large nerfs so I'm willing to let you up the power on the ranged Jutsu to compensate. Overall though, a very interesting idea and one of the more original clan's I've seen |
| | | I am Legion
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| Subject: Re: Unagai Clan [Elemental Weapon Charging] Tue 28 Feb 2012, 3:59 am | |
| - Shinji wrote:
Could you please put every Jutsu in a spoiler please? - Quote :
Name: Seishou Sendan ~ Lit. “Energy Shear” ... Water seal chakra: This type of chakra is also discharged through the weapon hitting its mark. It causes mainly water and cold damage to its target. Not visibly through ice and the like but through numbness in a struck bodypart for one post. This can be used on the user to help ease pain and keep him running. How exactly does this help ease pain and assist with running? Also, I'd like you to add in a one post delay between the user beginning the 'filtering' of their chakra and the changing of the chakra's elemental nature. Furthermore, I'd like you to separate the supplementary and ranged aspects of this into two Separate Jutsu with the ranged one being a C Rank. The reason for this is that in it's current state, your technique feels like it's trying to do too much in one go. I understand that these are fairly large nerfs so I'm willing to let you up the power on the ranged Jutsu to compensate. Overall though, a very interesting idea and one of the more original clan's I've seen The running is not meant as literal running it's meant as a temporary painkiller to help with cuts to the arms and legs and such. It is meant to be stated as "Helps the user remain active through pain" I'll edit this in soon. In the filtering state I'll register another jutsu for the meditative state and it is not meant to be done in battle. The filtering itself usually requires a second topic but I'll edit that detail into the trance state. Also I kinda figured there was too much going on with the energy shear technique and I was prepared to break it into separate techniques for each viable element if necessary, would you prefer I did this instead? |
| | | I am Legion
Age : 34 Posts : 32
| Subject: Re: Unagai Clan [Elemental Weapon Charging] Tue 28 Feb 2012, 6:24 am | |
| Updated with requested changes ~ |
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| Subject: Re: Unagai Clan [Elemental Weapon Charging] Fri 02 Mar 2012, 5:14 am | |
| The temperatures on your fire related techniques are too high given their ranks. It's important to remember that at 200 degrees the blood starts boiling. Considering your figures, even exposure to your flaming weapon for a few seconds would likely kill the wielder. Take that even further with your ranged abilities and the user would probably pass out before the projectile even traveled any distance. Please reduce these numbers as they are too high for the context of their use as well as their rank.
Also, could you please elaborate on exactly how powerful the wind projectile is?
Finally, could you post in this topic instead of bumping in future?
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| | | I am Legion
Age : 34 Posts : 32
| Subject: Re: Unagai Clan [Elemental Weapon Charging] Fri 02 Mar 2012, 9:03 pm | |
| Updated with the requested changes. Also, sorry I didn't realize there was an actual bump thread. x.x |
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| Subject: Re: Unagai Clan [Elemental Weapon Charging] Tue 06 Mar 2012, 6:47 am | |
| Looks good to me.
Approved 1/2
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| | | I am Legion
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| Subject: Re: Unagai Clan [Elemental Weapon Charging] Tue 20 Mar 2012, 6:45 am | |
| k I tried bumping this in the thread and it's been at least a week. So I'm bumping it here in hopes that a mod will see it. |
| | | Enzo
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| Subject: Re: Unagai Clan [Elemental Weapon Charging] Sun 25 Mar 2012, 2:26 am | |
| I see nothing wrong with this. Wonder why it wasn't approved earlier.
[2/2] Approved! |
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| Subject: Re: Unagai Clan [Elemental Weapon Charging] Sat 16 Jun 2012, 2:21 pm | |
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