Kagai, Akki [Konoha Genin]

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LAST NAME, FIRST NAME.

THE INFO.

Name: Kagai, Akki
Nickname: N/A
Age:14
Gender:Female
Appearance:Akki stands at around 4ft 6. she is slim built with lean muscle. Her hair is a deep red, it drops down to her shoulders but is usually put into puffy pig tails. She has large hazel eyes that afew guys have called dreamy. Her dress sense is pretty alternative, A black tight t-shirt and blue Jeans that at pretty wrecked and torn. Over her arms she wears long black gloves with no fingers that come down to just before her elbows. Akki loves to accessorise. Looped several times around her kneck is a thin leather chord with a ring hanging from it, around her waist a studded belt with a broken love heart as the buckle. And from a belt loop a long chain that holds both her keys and wallet which is situated in her back pocket.

Akki also has a few peircings as tattoos.

Piercings:

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Tattoos

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Personality: Akki has a rather nasty nature about her, she is the unwanted bad girl. she grew up in a rather rough area on the outskirts of Konoha and has the attitude of someone who grew up on the streets. She is rude, loud and easy to anger. she can swear quite alot when she wants to and is vulger at all times burping,farting and making rude noises comes as a second nature. Akki doesn't really make friends she is happy to respect someone if they seem like they could handle being around her she will also make short term alliances if it meets her need. Although she is young Akki drinks and smokes like an older person not caring for her health or anyone else around her.

Akki is as stubborn as a mule and refuses to back down even an inch on anything she belives is right and she will do anything to show it, If she fights she will continue no matter her condition, if she argues she will do so until the other person backs down ,gives up or starts crying.

She is also Cold and thinks of mostly herself, those that don't know her however just think she is nasty and doesn't care, but those who do know she has a fear of getting to close to anyone incase she ends up hurting them, although she won't admit this to anyone.

Akki lives for battle and honing her skills as much as possible, she looks to be a role model to those in her squad showing them that she is the strongest and toughest in all of the ninja nations. She cant stand slackers and is more than happy to discipline them herself by what ever means possible.

In her spare time Akki can be found sharpening her skills or sitting some where quiet with a bottle of Sake enjoying the stars in the night sky

Clan: None
Nindō: "Get in my way and I'll flatten you, even if I might be drunk"

THE NINJA.

Origin: A slum on the outskirt of Konoha
Affiliation: Konoha
Rank:Genin
Specialties: Main: Weaponry (Exotic) second: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinities:Main:Katon second:Suiton
Combat Style:Akki never sticks to the same thing twice she like to just wing it which 100% of the time is actually just going hell for leather in an all out attack againsther opponent using strength and speed to over come anything
Special Characteristics:

THE BACKGROUND.

History:Birth Arc
Akki was born on the outskirts of Konohagakure, She never knew her father and was brought up by her mother, the outskirts were rough with constant violence and crime it was hard for a single parent or any parent to bring up their child without fear of them not making it past their first birthday. Akki's mother did what she had to just to get by, she stole if they got hungry and fought to defend herself and her baby from the prying hands of the other residents. The problem was it was far to hard to do all this while lugging a new born around with her so her mother made a hard decision and dumped a 2 week old Akki in a small side street several blocks from their house. A lone baby in one of the roughest parts of Konoha has no chance to survive, so it was sheer luck that an old man found her screaming and took her home to his wife. Of course since she was only a couple of weeks old Akki wouldn't have know that the old man that had found her was the head of a small time crime gang that terrorised outer Konoha. So without a choice Akki was going to be raised by criminals. The only thing she would have to remember her mother by was 2 clawed gloves the cat claws.

Age 5-9 Arc
Time flew and Akki grew up with the only people she knew to call Mother and Father, at the age of 5 her father, the old man who saved her entered her room while she was staring out of the window and told her it was time she learnt the family business, if she wanted to stay she had to earn her keep.

Akki was led outside where a small group of kids had gathered at the head of the group was a teenage or around 15, he was punching a much smaller kid to the ground, Akki hid behind her father but was told that the small kid hadn't done his job so was being punished, Akki was quickly introduced to the Teenager his name was Ruy, he was in charge of this gang of Kids know as the Street Rats, their job was to mug and steal, making money for the higher ups, The old man bent down in front of Akki and placed and hand on her head.
[color-blue]"Now Akki just because you are my daughter don't think you are going to get any special treatment you do as Ruy tells you or you will end up like that little brat over there"[/color] he said softly pointing to the badly beaten kid that Ruy had punished earlier.

Akki nodded to her father and went to Ruy's side, Ruy partnered her up with a kid 2 years older than her, Ruy nodded and the group broke up, Akki followed the boy who was called Shin. Shin quickly talked Akki through what they were going to do they were going to the main streets of Konoha, which were better off, Akki would distract people by looking as though they knocked her down and Shin would mug them. It paid off and by the end of the day their pockets were full. They returned to Ruy smiling and laughing. Their smiles dropped as they approached Ruy was standing over a girl who was about Akki's age, her face was swollen and bleeding from several cuts and in Ruy's hand was a knife dripping with blood.

"And let that be a lesson to you all, don't bring nothing back, don't live long" Ruy laughed and then went back to collecting the rest of the days Takings.

two years passed and Akki was moving up in the gang, she worked with Shin, they became inseperable, the best of friends. They were both became known as the Streets Rats Golden Duo Ruy had never beaten either of them and Akki and Shin never gave him a reason to. Until one day while in Konoha right next to the Hokage's Palace. It was the usual set up but in reverse Akki had bumped the last 3 people so it was Shin's turn but their target turned out to be the wrong one this time. Shin charged into the target, a woman,Shin fell down, cut his knee with a small bit of glass and started crying while Akki snuck up behind and stole what ever he had on him. The target spun round and grabbed her by the wrist. Akki had been caught, The woman was wearing a black uniform it was then that Shin cried out

"Akki get away thats a Jounin, let her go god dam you"

The Jounin threw Akki to the ground and walked away. Akki was pretty bruised but not bad off but they sun was getting low and there was no one else around The Street Rats Golden Duo had failed and Ruy would not stand for it, with their heads hung they walked back slowly.

Ruy not standing for it was an understatement, he was furious he lunged straight for Shin and grabbed him by the throat, hefting him up while pummling his face with his other hand. Shin screamed out and Ruy pulled his knife and slipped it between Shin ribs and dropped him in a pool of his own blood, then Ruy spun on Akki, he thrust knife hand first but Akki was quicker she grabbed Ruy's wrist and twisted the knife out of it. What no one knew is since that day 2 years ago when Ruy had killed that girl Akki had trained and trained and honed her skills in fighting just in case and now she was mad, her best friend in the world had just been killed because of her. Ruy swung with his fist but Akki rolled out of the way and grabbed the knife and swung, slicing Ruy's throat the big teenage bully went down with a gurgled scream.
Akki didn't stop there she jumped on Ruy's body and stabbed and stabbed and stabbed. Then she blacked out as something struck her from behind, the last thing she heard was her fathers voice.

"Disappoinment girl, you are not my daughter any longer"

Akki awoke in a strange room with an awful smell it seemed to smell like rotting flesh. The room was too dark for Akki to really see anything, a small sliver of light came in through a window it was night time from what she could tell. A door some where creaked open and a pair of foot steps could be heard getting closer and closer to Akki. It was her father and standing beside him was someone who looked just like Ruy but that was impossible Ruy was dead.

"Girl I dont know what go into you back there you killed Ruy in cold blood, this guy next to me is Ruy's twin brother Kai, now I could let him kill you here and now but you are still some use to me, so im putting you under Kai's charge he is the leader of out little Assassin's group and with his training you will be a deadly killer"

Akki said nothing, didn't make a single noise she just nodded this wasn't what she wanted but as she had learnt from past experiances that her fathers word was absolute. She was then hefted up by Kai and led outside. Afterwards she was blindfolded and led somewhere else.

The blindfold dropped off and the light flooded into Akki's eyes making her blind for a few seconds. When her sight returned she took in her surroundings. She was in a huge dojo and about a dozen other people stood against the wall all wearing black masks. Kai turned to her and grinned while throwing something at her as Akki caught it she realised it was her cat claws, she slipped them on and looked around again. Kai nodded and one of the people from the wall charged her. Akki bearly dodged out of the way, the next thing she knew she was flying across the dojo and smacking painfully into the back wall. Akki bounced to her feet and shook it off it was then she realised how light she felt, she was attacked again but this time she vaulted her attacked and struck out with her claw scoring a hit in their back. No time to revel in it though she was being attacked again this time by two people she couldn't tell if they were male of female since they all had masks on. Akki fought like a demon, dodging and lashing out. On of her assailents charged her she rolled making them loose their footing Akki pounced Literaly, she jumped off the ground onto the opponents chest and dug her claws in, then with quickness she didn't know she possessed she bit down on the throat and pulled. a warm feeling splashed against her face, the taste of blood in her mouth told her that her opponent wasn't getting back up. Akki sprung to her feet ready for more but everyone had gone back to their original position and Kai was standing with a smiled on his face.

"haha not to bad for a kid there something about you all right now i see why my brother got taken down so easily, you shall make a fine addition to the Shadow snakes"

Years past Akki was second to none in the shadow snakes except to Kai whom she had fallen in love with and he felt the same. Akki has taken up some bad habits as well though smoking and drinking being the worst, She dressed in black and sported peircings and tattoos that Kai had given her. Since she was only 9 she didn't know these things were wrong the same as she didn't know loving someone 11 years older was wrong.

One night Kai came to Akki in her chambers. Akki has smelt him coming before he entered.

"Akki a Job for you, some scum bucket is causing a local merchant bother he wants him erased and since you are our best the merchant asked for you personally"

Akki bowed and dressed for the occasion. She put on her black t-shirt and torn jeans and looked for the rest of her outfit. On her chest of drawers were the things she was never without the Black finger less gloves,leather with ringon,,her chain which held her keys and wallet along with a few other accessories. She then slipped on her cat claws and vaulted out of the windows.

Akki ran along the streets and full pace keeping to the shadows as not to be seen, it wasn't long before she spotted her target, this wasn't the first hit Akki had been on she had slaughtered many not really knowing right from wrong, she had become cold since Shins death all those years ago. It wasn't until Akki got closer she realised something very wrong her target wasn't some scum but a Jounin not just any Jounin the same Jounin that had stopped Shin and herself mugging her so long ago. Akki shook it off a hit was a hit and if the Jounin didn't know it was coming it would be easy. So she sprung like a coiled snake like she had be taught, she should have known she would never have been as fast a jounin. she was caught easily her arm wrenched behind her. Akki cried out in pain it felt like her arm was being ripped out of it's socket.

"Hmm a kid what you doing her kid, wait that symbol on your clothes a Shadow snake eh well looks like im putting you under arrest" The Jouin carried Akki off.

Akki sat in the prison cell for what seemed like an eternity before the jounin returned.

"Right kid theres some serious things against you here,several witnesses have come forward identifiying you as an assassin, but i have a way out, we will allow your release on one condition you name every member of your gang and then because your so young take a place in the Shinobi academy learn to use those skills for good not evil."

Akki didn't have a choice she knew that if she went back to Kai he would kill her for failing and he had set her up didn't mention her hit was a Jounin, so she nodded and went on to tell the jounin everything. A few days later Akki was enrolled into the academy and told she was to stay with the Jounin she had tried to kill, oddly she was returned her cats claws.

Academy Arc age 9-present 14

The academy wasnt an easy thing for Akki she was slightly older than most since alot of young Shinobi passed their Genin exam at 10 and she was only one year off of that. fitting in wasn't working since she pushed everyone away afraid to be close incase she hurt them or they hurt her. People started to call her names and she lashed out getting in trouble all the time for fighting,drinking an smoking. She wasn't doing well in class since she her jutsu were weak however she did excell in anything with weaponry and Taijutsu after a whole year she saw alot of her class graduate while she had to continue to work. Although she was living with someone she rarley went home preferring to sit outside and drink sake while watching the stars.

the next few months got slightly easier since a new batch of students came in and she kind of became the boss since she was bigger strong and slightly more skilled but it wasn't long before they to surpassed her. Akki was at a wits end and though of just running and doing what she did best Assassin for hire but that wouldn't work in the slightest so she hung on in there, Honing her Taijutsu and weaponry skills to their peak. It was during this time Akki realised a change that had over come her since long ago, she was finding her eye sight was better as was her sense of smell and hearing it looks like her training was paying off also for some weird reason she was attracting cats alot.

Things improved massivley from there Akki knuckled down and got by still drinking and still smoking but less fighting she still couldn't improve her other jutsu but her Taijutsu and Weaponry skills were the best in the academy. Finally on her 14th birthday it was the day she would sit the Genin exam, it was a long haul but eventually she passed and was glad, the next step was waiting to be placed into a squad not something she was looking forward to since she hated being round others.

Roleplay Sample:The rain lashed down and the wind was strong an awful day in Konoha. Akki stood in battle ready stance, she cracked her neck from side to side. She wasn't happy with how things in her form were so now was the time to change that. In a fluid movement Akki brought her right hand up, attached to it was her favoured weapon the cats claw a claw like glove. Akki crouched low and jumped forward ponching landing on all fours her claws digging into the damp ground. From these she flipped backwards landing with perfect poise swinging into a roundhouse kick. A noise from the left made Akki turn, a little cat was sitting several meters aways just watching her. Akki always seemed to attract cats Akki smiled and swiped with both claws one at knee hight the other at chest, then dropping to her back she struck out with both legs as though knocking someones knees away from them a quick backwards handspring and she was back on her feet.

Akki was panting it had been to long since he had done this much training especially in the weather conditions but she wasnt bothered. Akki swung round right hand knuckles first and since the knuckles of the cats claws were on hers they propelled her forwards into a sort of flying punch while she spun landing on two feet and left hand in a sort of tripod, sweat was dripping from her along with the all the rain water. The weather seemed to be getting worse and oddly the cat was still watching even though it was getting very very wet. Akki shrugged it off and continued on running through a series of blocks and Kata's before deciding to head home.

As she left she put her hand into a small bag around her waste and produced a small hip flash full of sake and a pack of cigarettes and lighter.

"Nothing better than a smoke and drink after a hard days training" she said to herself and carried on mutter to herself all the way home. As she approached the front door she quickly stashed the sake back in the back and got rid of her smoke she know how much Mia-chan hated her doing that at her age but she didn't really care. The house was warm and the smell of cooking attacked her senses a note sat on the table, it read:

Dear Akki-chan

sorry was called to a mission by the Hokage dinner is on the stove will see when i get back in, touch my drink and your dead.

Love Mia-chan

P.S

No smoking in the house if you must smoke do it outside.

Akki grinned to herself went into the fridge removed a beer cracked it open and lit a smoke.

THE ARSENAL.

Jutsu, Weaponry, Items etc.

Jutsu

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Weaponry
Name:Neko ha hikisaku:-cat claws
Rank: C-S (Depending on users capability and training Akki would be at C rank)
Type:Exotic,Close combat hand weapons
Appearance: Kagai, Akki [Konoha Genin] 9045163785602097

Kagai, Akki [Konoha Genin] 9045163785602097

The cat claws are melee weapons . The claws can be used for slicing,stabbing and grouging. While outside of combat they can be used for climbing. They are made for steel folded several times in the same style a Katana would be they are however slightly chunkier than a Katana. The claws are colourd red and gold with silver blades the tops of the blades are colored red.
Quantity: 2X claws
Storage:Hung on a chord from Akki's belt
Special qualities: None

Age : 31 Posts : 208

Please add in your academy jutsu

Delete the spacing you have set in the your jutsu

Also, though Taijutsu are physical base, they do cost chakra on US using the term "stamina" for better choice of words in order to prevent confusion and complications.

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Ok got rid of the spacing and added a chakra cost as for academy jutsu all academy jutsu are ninjutsu I have added to special abilities that Akki has no affinity with and cant grasp anything but working with weapons and Taijutsu and as said in my history the graduation exam was changed for her because of her lack of other jutsu.

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changes made Bump

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- could you please spoiler your tattoo's and piercings.

Quote :: Akki has no affinity for anything but Taijutsu and weaponry there for cannot grasp and use anything but Taijutsu and weaponry.

This is not a special characteristic. We have a list of them in the character registration area. Most of the physical characteristics are weaponry/taijutsu only so it would fit with your character. You are allowed one to begin with.

- remove the "creator" from your jutsu.

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Ok fixed it all up ^_^

Age : 31 Posts : 208

Im not exactly sure which (Though it was the Clone Jutsu in Naruto's time) or even if at all, but it appears that certain academy jutsu are required to be mastered to even become a Gennin, which is why you'd need at least one to truly say you're a Gennin. Though I'll try to check wih others to confirm.

Also, if you're confused on exactly what Special Characteristics are, refer to the Special Characteristics Page

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Rock lee cant do any ninjutsu and made it to the rank of jounin he must have passed the genin exam at some point right? As for special abilites i have none I deleted it decided Akki doesnt need any ^_^

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C-rank techniques scale from 5-9 in terms if CP, yet yours are listed as 4 which is below standard. Please edit accordingly.

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If the Kagai clan is a pre-created/approved clan please add a link to it.

Your only specialty is Taijutsu but you state mainly with weapons which means Weaponry needs to be your second specialty, when adding it be sure to view Ultimate Shinobi's weaponry system so you understand how it is branched.

Rock Lee was an incredible exception, not that its important, he's actually only a Chuunin whereas you said Jounin. Rock Lee passed because of the itensity of his Taijutsu and how it was unmatched at that age, not to mention the pleading Gai did to get him passed. I'd assume you're not even on the same level as Rock Lee, because if you were we wouldn't allow it. TEEHEE

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Okies have added academy jutsu but added to history that Akki just isnt that great with them. Have changed the chakra cost for the C rank jutsu and since Kagai isn't a clan its just her surname ive taken it out on the App now I cross me fingers and see what you guys have to say.

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To have the weapons you must have the weaponry specialty. Those weapons are not normal knifes or something you can have around. Please remove, or add the specialty. After that, since I dont really see anything wrong with it I myself or another staff member if they don't find nothing wrong will give 1st approval.

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Weaponry specialty is already there as her main Neutral

In any case, you (Akki) have the choice between two of the following to add to your weaponry specialty: Sword, Axe, Polearm, Blunt, Ranged and/or Exotic. Judging from your weapon, Exotic would be one of them.

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Ok added exotic as weapon type dunno if I put it in the right place however.

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You did but like I said, you're allowed 2 of the categories, that doesn't stop you from keeping only one but you won't be allowed to change it once it's all said and done.

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Ones fine with me but thanks for the heads up ^_^

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1/2 Approved

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2/2 Approved.

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