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Uchiha, Midara [Konoha Genin] 1339c551Uchiha Midara!!.

THE INFO.

Name:Uchiha Midara
Nickname:
Age:13
Gender:Male
Appearance: Midara is a 5'9, 130 pounder. He has sleek black hair, with big spikes in the front and the back goes down to his tail bone. His face is of a normal uchiha, an intimidating smile with 1 wrinkle right under each eye. His skin is a nice white even tone with dark beating black dead eyes. His eye brows thin, with a small pointy nose and thin lips. Has a small scar over his right eye

Casual Wear.

He wears loose clothing, a black long sleeve with a loose turtle neck. On the back he has his clan emblem on the back of his top. He wears white 3/4 shorts with ninja wraps wrapping around from his ankle to his knee. His pants has front pockets and 1 back pocket on his right cheek. He often keeps an ink pad with a brush in there. He has his ninja sandals, with trimmed toe nails. He often travels very light and always has scrolls with him. Midara always carries a bandolier of scrolls wrapped around under his shirt acting as a belt. He has his kunai pouches under his shirt on each hip. He wears his headband around his forehead with proud and honor. He has a notebook he hides in hie right kunai pouch.

Battle Wear.
The few times he can prepare for battle he always bring his normal casual clothing but he uses an extra chunin vest that he found and partly restored. Patches in the vest are covered with black spots. It has more of a camo tint. He brings a ninjato and carries it horizontally on his tailbone, right where his hair ends. He also has seals hidden underneath his shirt, and on his wrist. Midara puts the end of his hair into a ponytail.


Personality:
Loyalty. Midara would give up his life to save his brother, to save his mother, to save his Hokage. Midara has so much nationalism and pride in his heart. He often thinks deep into life and other confusing things, he often consuls with his trustees. He most certainly would try to persuade someone before he could kill someone unless he had no choice. He asks a lot of questions and writes them down in his notebook, he always remembers things and always puts things to use. There is nothing else more in the world that Midara hates is killing of the innocent. Whether it be bugs or an unarmed solider. The uchiha have been known for being merciless, but Midara gives people chances, even if they might come back to bite him in the butt. He can always solve his way out of things.



Clan:Uchiha
Nindō:...Til the day I die...I'll spill my heart for you.

THE NINJA.

Origin:Konoha
Affiliation:Konoha
Rank:Genin
Specialties:Fuuinjutsu, Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities:Katon, Raiton
Combat Style: Midara usually gets other people or other things to do the fighting for him. He summons and stays close to his summons, even without his summons he is still a force to be reckoned because of his powerful sharingan. Midara has a counter for everything in the book, nothing can hurt him. He was constructed by the gods of war. He is tough enough.
Special Characteristics:Increased Charka Capacity
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:
-Midara was born into the shinobi world by the uchiha breed.

-His mother died when he was 2. He no longer has a mother. His father couldn't raise him alone, being good friends with the Hokage. The Hokage took him in as a God Son.

-His father started to train him to protect his family at 4. He trained everyday to the brink of death. He also trained Fuuin with The Lady Hokage

-He learned and researched Fuuinjutsu by himself and from his dad. His dad was a master of Fuuin.

-At 8 he started learning ninjutsu and got his summon. His father has the summon to Midara's summon. They are linked into the main family.

-At 10 he was sparing with his summon and his summon cut his eye out of socket, he got his 1st tomoe then and his eye was saved later. Being in the hospital for a couple of days he made a full recovery but now has a scar.

-He joined the Academy at 12. He often skipped out to go talk to the Hokage. He trained his Sharingan with the Hokage.

-Graduated after a year. He still has many friends from the Academy including his teacher.

-Is a training genin, Still training with the Hokage, most of all now. Is known to be a strong genin, has dreams to work with the Hokage one day.

Roleplay Sample:His deep sleep turned into him being knocked out unconsciously. Being carried into the village and into a hospital. His eyes closed, and looking like he was dead. His heart still beating. The couple of people stared at the two, being a weird image to see. Then being lightly placed on a bed to stay in. The bed itself was quite comfortable with white sheets and a soft white pillow. As a needle punctured his skin on his arm that gave off a clear liquid. The doctor now leaving the scene and Mikio staying. A couple of seconds later Saito woke up again. His eyes barely open are unable to see clearly, his conscious was coming back to him. His vision was very blurred, looking around trying to figure out where he was. 'I'm not died' Bringing a smile to his face, with a small chuckle. He laid still, still to weak to be jumping around. Noticing this Pako was on the edge of the bed and his necklace was still attached, but his headband still wasn't there. Looking down in grief missing his headband and his village. He noticed no one else in the room except for Mikio. "Mikio-san!..." bringing his body up and lifting his arms up, as a hug but unfortunately fell back down on his bed.

"...What are you doing here Mikio-san?...How long was I out?" Mikio was really starting to become Saito's friend. His piercing eyes would frighten anyone else but not Saito. He was so happy to be with Mikio. Mikio was his savior, without him Saito would be dead. Saito held much respect for Mikio, being he was the only one that he really knew. Then realizing he was in a hospital on such a comfortable bed, Saito grinned with the comfort. "What am I doing in a...hospital?!" Saito asked very confused, looking around the room. The room weren't much different than the rooms in Konoha, except for the ones in Konoha they had a doctor in the room too.

Then looking down at the needle in his arm realizing the doctor was already here. Giving himself a nice chuckle, he looked back at Mikio. "What am I supposed to do now?" Saito had so many questions, but Mikio probably wouldn't be able to answer all of them. Hoping to think that some other Konoha ninja made it to this village to. He was hoping so, he highly doubted it though. He was starting to get excited realizing he wasn't dead and he was in a new village that he has never been in before, he wanted to go searching out for the village. Then started to hear lighting, its pouring outside, so now he can't go outside. With a frown upon his face, he looked back up at Mikio as his stomach made a huge call for food. Saito then chuckling after hearing such a huge rumble.

THE ARSENAL.

Academy
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Clan
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Fuuin
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Raiton
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Katon
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Non-elemental

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Weapons
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Midara [Konoha Genin] Uchiha, Midara [Konoha Genin] EmptyWed 15 Jun 2011, 2:34 am

-Regardless of the two jutsu's Redirecting Kunai and Sharingan Windmill Triple Attack, they are consider weaponry and your character isn't under the classification to use said weaponry skills

-I also believe you must have your summon applied in the creature registration before putting it into your application.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Midara [Konoha Genin] Uchiha, Midara [Konoha Genin] EmptyWed 15 Jun 2011, 2:53 am

I got rid of the jutsu

I put a topic in for my summon

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Name: Sukuro Doton-Scroll Earth
Rank: C
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: Midara is place a seal on a small that can be found in nature, like a plant or a squirrel or a tree.
Chakra Cost: 5
I don't understand this technique.

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Name: Sukuro Kikan-Scroll Mirror
Rank: E
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: Midara is able to hold a scroll with a seal and able to copy the seal with charka onto another empty scroll. This jutsu does not need headseals because the charka flows through the hands.
Chakra Cost: 1
I also don't understand this technique, can you elaborate on what it does?

Remove smoke bombs.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha, Midara [Konoha Genin] Uchiha, Midara [Konoha Genin] EmptyWed 15 Jun 2011, 4:22 am

-deleted the first one

-the second jutsu, i reworded,

i removed smoke bombs

can i also have you in the history like that?

You told me I could when we were in the Chatbox.

Like be my god mother and all?

Also I have 1 space for a jutsu, wondering if you could teach me one? or we can have a collobration jutsu? Smile
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can i also have you in the history like that?
Yes you may, Godson^^

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Also I have 1 space for a jutsu, wondering if you could teach me one? or we can have a collobration jutsu?
A collab would be fun, we can create that IC or we can discuss ideas in pm, you're free to decide.

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Name: Sukuro Relan-Scroll Release
Rank: E
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is used to release the captured jutsu and captured attacks.
Chakra Cost: 1
I believe it would be fair to have its CP cost the amount of the technique, so you can simply place a "X" as the cp cost and state it within the description. Also change the rank from C-S so it scales with your jutsu sealing technique.

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Name:Speed burst
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Long
Element:
Description: This technique is executed Kizuato putting charka into his feet and being able to run up to speeds of over 80 miles per hour. This can either be used to run to get somewhere faster or used to charge at someone and trample them.
Chakra Cost: 3
Make it 20% speed increase. 80 is very fast and can probably rival a flicker.
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Thank you
Everything is done

Ill be pming you about our jutsu.
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Name: Sukuro Relan-Scroll Release
Rank: E
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is used to release the captured jutsu and captured attacks.
Chakra Cost: 1

Explain this jutsu with more detail (I.e how it works, exactly what happens after the technique is released, etc.)
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I elaborated on it some more
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Elder Sage wrote:
Also change the rank from C-S so it scales with your jutsu sealing technique.
You failed to abide by this.

Also, I personally think that Fuuinjutsu would be too complicated of a process for much, if any at all, of their type of techniques to be D ranked, let alone E rank (Implying that it's as simple as the academy jutsu for example). As such, switch up your E ranked Fuuinjutsu to at least D rank.
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sorry didnt even notice
everything has been changed
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Sean wrote:
Also, I personally think that Fuuinjutsu would be too complicated of a process for much, if any at all, of their type of techniques to be D ranked, let alone E rank (Implying that it's as simple as the academy jutsu for example). As such, switch up your E ranked Fuuinjutsu to at least D rank.
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The top is one is supposed to be E.
I got it from THIS site
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