Pandora's Box, The Hunt Begins

Age : 31 Posts : 149

Naruto RPG

Subject: Re: Pandora's Box, The Hunt Begins Tue 12 Jul 2011, 8:04 am

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Subject: Re: Pandora's Box, The Hunt Begins Wed 13 Jul 2011, 8:05 am

Silver
Name: Aalis, Faith
Official Grade: 19/20
Official Grade: 19/20

Soul
Official Grade: 19/20
Unofficial Grade: 19/20

Lady A.

Official Grade: 19/20
Unofficial Grade: 19/20

Comments: In most cases I would put separate comments for the rest of you but interestingly enough I’m going to do this all because I found this topic to be interesting even though it was about capturing a cat. There weren’t too many mistakes made on many of the parts. The one few parts were with Silver with some sentences needed semicolons instead of commas. This happens even a lot because we type it one way and it makes sense. When spoken, however, it sounds a bit odd to the reader. But that didn’t take away the score. I only wish it could go on. Ah but continue on writing, this is good stuff.

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