Soul:

Official Grading: 19/20.
Unofficial Grading: 19/20.

♥ I love Ayame as a character, I think she is the cutest thing ever.
♥ I also loved seeing the character development; I can’t wait to read more about Ayame and Midara!
♥ I know it’s really not like Ayame to “act out,” but perhaps next time, she could make her own little playful gestures (ex. holding his hand).
♥ No spelling / grammatical errors spotted! ^-^

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Kija:

Official Grading: 17/20.
Unofficial Grading: 17/20.

♥ I think you’ve improved A LOT from the first topic I evaluated. I don’t see as many spelling errors and I can see the effort you’re putting in to your posts.
♥ I felt like you could’ve continued the topic a bit more; explaining what happens in the Hot Springs and so on. It left me wanting to read more!
♥ Be careful with those dialogue parts. At the end, you need to put some sort of punctuation mark there BEFORE the quotation marks.
♥ Overall, good job!