Kija:

Official Grading: 15/20.
Unofficial Grading: 15/20.

♥ Your posts make me laugh. XD But in a good way.
♥ Try fixing those awkward sentences (It might rain) and contradictions (It wasn't bad or anything, it was just the fact that he was a leader of a group and she was one of the members, it only looked bad. Even though it wasn't necessarily bad at all).
♥ Remember your capitals, Kija!
♥ It was well written for a travel post. I can’t wait to read more about Midara and Ayame. (:

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Soul:

Official Grading: 20/20.
Unofficial Grading: 20/20.

♥ I liked how you took my advice and held his hand! ;____;
♥ I think this was an important topic for character developments, despite it being a travel topic.
♥ No grammatical errors, whatsoever! You deserve a perfect grade.