Kuroi, Hinoko. [Konoha Genin]

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Kuroi Hinoko

THE INFO

Name: Kuroi, Hinoko

Nickname: Seme

Age: 15
Gender: Female

Appearance:

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Hinoko is exactly 5’7 and weighs 136 lbs. She has brown-black hair and it’s pulled into a spiked ponytail at the back of her nap. A few strands of her bangs dangle on both sides of her cheeks. She appears rather pale, almost translucent. Hinoko has a 4 inch braid starting from the side of her ear, to the base of her neck; this symbolizes womanhood.

Her attire is complicated but not intricate. A red-hued mask of double layered fishnet covers the lower half of her face; she usually wears a look of melancholy or a frown. She also has a scarf attached to her mask, also of a reddish-hue. She has a thin mail shirt, covered with gray cloth and piping making it looks like a corset.

Hinoko also has a dark purple pair of thigh high shorts. She also has a pair of shoulder high sleeve like wear, with metal plating on the forearms and back-hands. Hinoko has a ration pack and pouch for coins or other odd baubles. She has two knee high open toed boots with her village symbol attached to it just under her knee in a sewing pattern.

A scar can be located along the spine of her back from an incident of youth. It healed easily, but it left leopard like splotches all down her back. She also has her village symbol tattooed into her ankle on the left foot. Hinoko’s canines are also unusually large and can be mistaken as dog’s fangs. She has a slim body, and her face has a heart shape. Her body has a few curves; Her waist being 27 inches, her hips 32 and her bust is 37.

Hinoko’s hands have been callused and scarred from heavy work such as training, farming, and black-smithing. Aside from her work-worn hands, they are very nimble and can weave or stitch anything within seconds. She usually wears a blue ring around her left middle finger. Hinoko usually stores extra energy in this ring for further use. There isn’t much special about the rest of her body other than her eyes and back. Her eyes usually change slightly with her mood. One minute they can be a solemn dull blue, then next minute deep green with contentedness.

Hinoko’s muscles are double jointed and she can spring and bend backwards (Or forwards) to the extreme, this makes her foot work better and her ability to dodge slightly better than normal. Her skin has a soft complexion the opposite of her expression on her face. Her skin is also thick and not penetrated easily. The skin is usually white or pale, and doesn’t have much color, even after sitting in the sun for a long time. Hinoko’s eyes are an almond shape, and her pupils are usually dilated to better see in the dark or shaded areas.

Hinoko also has slightly pointed ears, and several piercings along the sides of them. She also has a tongue piercing with the bulb of a sparrow. Her cheeks are slightly round, giving her a kitten like look. Her chin has only a small cleft, and her eye brows are usually arched and thin without having to pluck them. Hinoko has about 20 freckles on the bridge of her nose, and upper cheeks. Her diaphragm and chest are usually extended because her lungs are larger than a normal person. Her running speed is slightly below normal, but she can run longer than a mile, without becoming tired.

Personality:

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Hinoko’s primary mode of living is focused internally, where she can take things in via her five senses in a literal, concrete fashion. Her secondary mode is external, where she deals with things rationally and logically. Hinoko is a quiet and reserved individual, and is most comfortable in security and peaceful living. She has a strongly-felt internal sense of duty, which lends her a serious air and the motivation to follow through on tasks. Organized and methodical in her approach, Hinoko can generally succeed at any task which she might undertake.

Hinoko is also very loyal, faithful, and dependable. She places great importance on honesty and integrity. She is normally a "good citizen" who can be depended on to do the right thing for her own family or other families and communities. While Hinoko generally take things very seriously, she also usually has an offbeat sense of humor, especially around family or close friends

Hinoko usually tends to believe in laws and traditions, and expect the same from others. She’s not comfortable with breaking laws or going against the rules. If Hinoko is able to see a good reason for stepping outside of the established mode of doing things, her personality will support that effort. However, Hinoko more often than not, tends to believe that things should be done according to procedures and plans. If Hinoko has not developed her Intuitive side sufficiently, she may become overly obsessed with structure, and insist on doing everything "by the book".

Hinoko is extremely dependable on following through with things which she has promised. Since she has such a strong sense of duty, she may have a difficult time saying "no" when she is given more work than she can reasonably handle. For this reason she often works long hours and can be taken advantage of a lot.

She will work for long periods of time and put tremendous amounts of energy into doing any task which she may see as important to fulfilling a goal. However, she will resist putting energy into things which does not make sense to her, or for which she can't see a practical application. Hinoko prefers to work alone, but works well in teams when the situation demands it. She likes to be accountable for their actions and enjoy being in positions of authority.

She has little use for theory or abstract thinking, unless the practical application is clear. She also has tremendous respect for facts. Hinoko holds a large store of facts within herself, which she has roped in through out her life. She may have difficulty understanding a theory or idea which may be odd from her own perspective. However, if she has shown the value or relevance of the idea to someone who she respects/cares about, the idea becomes a fact, which the Hinoko will remember/support. Once she supports an idea, she will stop at no lengths to ensure that she is performing her duty of support where support is needed.

Hinoko is not usually in tune with her own feelings and the feelings of others. She may have difficulty picking up on emotional needs immediately, when they presented. Being a perfectionist, she has a tendency to take other people's efforts for granted, like she takes her own efforts for granted. She might need a compliment from people once in a while.

Hinoko is unsure about expressing affection and emotion to others. However, her strong sense of duty and the ability to see what needs to be done in any situation usually allows her to overcome her natural reservations, and she is usually busy supporting and caring individuals with the people that she loves. Once Hinoko realized the emotional needs of those who are close to her, which does take quite a long time, she puts forth an effort to meet their needs.

Hinoko is very loyal., traditional and family-minded. She will put forth great amounts of effort at making her home and family run smoothly. She is usually a good provider to her family. Hinoko cares deeply about those close to her, though she usually is not comfortable with expressing her love. She will likely express her affections through action rather than words.

Clan: --

Nindo: ''Don't bitch about something if you aint gunna do anything about it''

THE NINJA

Origin: Yukigakure
Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin

Specialties:

Main Spec: Kenjutsu
Sub Spec: Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinities:

Main Element: Raiton
Sub Element: --

Combat Style:

Kenjutsu Style: Kendo

Kendo, meaning "Way of The Sword, is a modern Japanese martial art of sword-fighting based on traditional samurai swordsmanship, or kenjutsu. Kendo is a physically and mentally challenging activity that combines strong martial arts values with sport-like physical elements. Kendo is a physically and mentally challenging activity that combines strong martial arts values with sport-like physical elements. Kendo is a lifelong activity. Age and gender doesn’t matter. The purpose when you practise kendo is not only to improve your techniques but also your mind and physical fitness.

Hinoko happens to be 2nd-Dan, the second highest. Equivalent to a New Chuunin. Hinoko will achieve 3rd-Dan when she turns 18.

Special Characteristics:

Perception

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THE BACKGROUND

History:

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--Academy Arc--
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--Genin Arc--
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ROLEPLAY SAMPLE

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THE ARSENAL

Jutsu:

E Rank

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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Replacement Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu (Escaping Skill)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. This technique can only be used if the user is a higher rank then their captive.
Chakra Cost: 1

D Rank

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Name: Kai Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them.
Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappelling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them.
Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza (Act of Water Surface Walking)
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: NA
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing)
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall.
Chakra Cost: 3

C Rank

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Name: (Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:
Rank: C-S
Range: Short, 0-15 feet
Element: Raiton
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.
Chakra Cost: 9
Name: Raiton no Jutsu (Lightning Technique)
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short, 0-15 feet
Rank: C
Range: Short
Element: Raiton
Description: Small static bolts for attack and defense. The bare minimum requirement to activate most Raiton jutsu.
Chakra Cost: 5
Name: (Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short/Mid, 0-22 feet
Element: Raiton
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.
Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Raiton: Raijingu Sanda (Lightning Style: Raging Thunder)
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:
Rank: C
Range: Short, 0-13 feet
Element: Raiton
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body. Usually requires one to put themselves in harms way purposefully, for this jutsu to be effective. Can be used for defense.
Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu (Lightning Style: Thunder Saber)
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:
Rank: C
Range: Short/Mid, 0-35 feet
Element: Raiton
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy and/or paralyze and scar. Paralysis lasts 2 minutes (2-3 posts)
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Raiton: Raikyu mari (Lightning Release: Lightning Ball)
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:
Rank: C
Range: Short/Mid, 0-30 feet
Element: Raiton
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.
Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi (Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armor)
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short, 0-5 feet
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who is exposed to it, but only works for one attack.
Chakra Cost: 10
Name: Raiton: Shingai Genkotsu (Lightning Release; Shock Fist)
Type: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Range: Short/Mid, 0-30 feet
Rank: C
Element: Lightning
Description: Another fairly simple jutsu, with possible side effects. The user would channel her/his lightning element chakra into their fists or arms to increase their Taijutsu or weaponry impact. If this jutsu is not used correctly, it can paralyze the users arm for a certain amount of time, usually 1 to 3 minutes (5 turns). This jutsu requires concentration, and accuracy, because it is easy to miss targets with this jutsu, thought it does a B rank amount of damage if it hits a vital spot.
Chakra Cost: 10
Name: Raiton: Hibana no jutsu (Lightning Spark Technique)
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short/Mid, 0-25 feet
Rank: C
Element: Lightning - Raiton
Description: A simple jutsu utilizing the lightning element to be used for shocking or paralyzing a foe. If the user is strong enough, it could leave burns, or scars. Electrocution could last about 3 to 5 minutes (2 turns) depending on the rank of the user. Causes light damage, and doesn't use much chakra.
Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Raiton: Raikou shikon (Lightning Release; Lightning Fang)
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short, 0-10 feet
Rank: C
Element: Lightning - Raiton
Description:Raikou Shikon is a Lightning Release type Ninjutsu. It surrounds the limbs of the user with lightning chakra, increasing their offensive power. This jutsu can be used as a weak shield, but only against a certain amount of damage, 1 C rank jutsu to break the shield.
Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Raiton: Shuriken no Jutsu (Lightning Shuriken Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-S
Range: Mid/Long, 0-45 feet
Element: Lightning - Raiton
Description: Doing low damage, but taking up little time and energy. Lightning shuriken is, well a shuriken made of lightning. Depending on the user’s level, they can throw multiple shuriken at once, average number is 5 for a Chuunin, 8 for a Jounin, 12 for ANBU etc. Though these shuriken are about the side of a person's head they are quick to launch, but charging the energy before releasing is more efficient.
Chakra Cost: 10

Weapons:

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Name: Katana no Hiraishin (Lightning Rod)
Type: Kenjutsu/Melee
Rank: C
Range: Self/Short, 0-6 feet
Special Abilities: N/a
Appearance: A simple black katana, with gold-colored plating along the blade and handle. The Kanji for Lightning is inscribed in the hilt, along with her family name, and a lightning bolt design going vertically along the blade-edge. Sparkles in an odd way when the sun shines on the lightning bolt. Hinoko has often used it to blind foes and flee, because the blade is extremely reflective.
Origin: With the help of her Grand father and Father, this is the first weapon that Hinoko ever made. The katana was made when Hinoko was about 13, the same year she started practicing Kendo. Though the plating and inscribing of the family name was added a few months after the creation. Hinoko is still doing some finishing touches on her katana, such as the lightning patterns and weaving on the hilt.
Name: Shuniji-Tou (Rainbow Knife)
Type: Melee/Projectile
Rank: D
Range: Mid/Self, 0-3 feet (For Melee) 0-20 feet (For Projectile)
Special Abilities: N/a
Appearance: Literally, as referring to the name, Hinoko’s newly acquired pocket knife actually shimmers with multiple colors, a bit like a hologram baseball card. Multiple levels of heat and metals gave the knife its special colors. Because of the many levels of metal, it does chip easily, but overall it’s very hardy and sharp. It would be easy to cut through a finger with this knife. However, Hinoko only uses it for emergencies. The hilt of the knife is 4 inches, enough for her hand to fit comfortably, and the blade is 7 inches, an average combat knife length.
Origin: Since how her family was proficient in black-smithing and weapons, Hinoko is adept in the art of Weapon smithing. She made this blade herself, meaning to make a normal silver bladed weapon. However, because of a shortage of copper for the edge of the blade, she had to use multiple different metals. Each metal has different weights and volumes, which require different heating structures. The results came out with a rather pretty looking blade, that had multiple colors, and metals embedded into the blade and hilt.
Name: Frying Pan.
Type: Projectile/Blunt Weapon
Rank: C
Range: Mid/Self, 0-4 feet (For Melee) 0-20 feet (For Projectile)
Special Abilities: N/A
Appearance: Hinoko's frying pan is made of reinforced steel, with a silver lining on the bottom plate. The finish is black, and shiny with various specks of diamond inside the metal. Has a red handle and Hinoko's clan insignia on the inside of the pan.
Origin: Hinoko's mother Mari gave this to her for a fourteenth birthday present. Her mother was hoping she would see the meaning, and Hinoko would use it for cooking and such. But Hinoko found its uses somewhat broader, and decided to use it as a blunt weapon or a projectile. Its more effective when in the hands of a Kenjutsu user.

Items:

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Name: Charlotte the Pebble.
Type: Other - Misc
Rank: E
Range: Self/Short, 0-1 inch (Uses as a pocket ornament) 0-13 feet (Uses as Projectile)
Special Abilities: Hinoko related the rock to the Bible phrase ''Hope deterred makes the heart sick'' However, this rock personally gives Hinoko a self-esteem boost cause of the nice memory of finding it.
Appearance: A small heart shaped pebble that Hinoko found while scanning the beach near the lake for skipping rocks. The color was blue and green, and had small Zirconium bits inside the stone, making it sparkle in the sun.
Origin: On a lovely day, with the sun low, Hinoko crouched down, and low and behold...she found a nice little heart shaped pebble, and decided to adopt the little thing and call it Charlotte. They have been happy ever since an hour ago, when Hinoko first found it on the beach.
Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 1
Contents:
10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch,
Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2
blank small scrolls.

Subject: Re: Kuroi, Hinoko. [Konoha Genin] Wed 01 Jun 2011, 9:58 pm

-At least a paragraph for Combat style. That is to say, what makes your style unique. Is she a tank-type of character or an agile type character. What else she incorporates into the style, etc.

-Please edit the special characteristics to the characteristics listed here

Age : 30 Posts : 152

Done~! =3

Age : 30 Posts : 8965

All your canon jutsu are incorrect, they need to be the ones displayed in the Encyclopedia which can be found HERE These are for your benefit and are compulsory to use to ensure all Canon techniques are the same when it comes to the description and the chakra cost. Please make the necessary changes.

Your items pose problems, for one you state you gain +4 strength. We do those kind of statistics in percentages and they're usually only in a effect which jutsu or special characteristics meaning this item poses a problem. I'd suggest removing this item completely.

As for your Ninja Package, the Anti Poison should be removed.

After these notes have been acknowledged I will review the jutsu you have replaced to make sure they are all approvable. This application is nice and simple, I sense a swift approval in your immediate future. Wink

Age : 30 Posts : 152

Fix in progress!!!

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Edit: 100% Suggested Corrections in place.
Edit: Corrections Updated

Corrections:

Jutsu -- Canon Jutsu; Updated
Items -- Ninja package; Removed anti-poison vials. Added spools of thread.
Items -- Charlotte; Removed strength boost.
Chakra Cost -- Jutsu; Updated
Weapons -- Katana; Origin Added
History -- Village information; Updated
Affiliations -- Village; Updated

Age : 31 Posts : 1036

1. Fix all elemtal jutsu that are placed as D rank. Elemental jutsu are C rank and higher.

2. You also have weaponry techniques. Please take those out. As you have Kenjutsu and Ninjutsu as your specialties. I think the only one that could stay would be the String Reeling Technique as it is a basic academy jutsu.

3. More explanation on all the Raiton jutsu you have put as D rank that should b C rank. In most cases you only have about a single line of explanation for them.

After that. It should be approved.

Age : 30 Posts : 152

Corrections:

Jutsu: Raiton Jutsu; Rank Change
Jutsu: Weapondry Jutsu; Removed
Jutsu: Raiton Jutsu; Updated/Additions

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- Not all elemental jutsu are C-rank. I believe that is an Ingoo rule not one for here. But, easy mistake ^^. So, the specific edits on certain ranks can be changed accordingly back. Are these elemental jutsu taken from the encyclopedia? because we have them all listed there and in their right template.

Age : 30 Posts : 152

None of the elemental jutsu are from your encyclopedia. I got them from another Naru-pedia.

And I already changed all the jutsu to C DX URGH... I knew something was weird about that request yo'....

Age : 15 Posts : 455

Well they are required to be the ones from our Encyclopedia so please change them accordingly.

Age : 30 Posts : 152

Theres only two C rank Raiton. What the hell? Thats incredibly unfair! I can only use two elemental jutsu because thats all your stupid encyclopedia has? Im not changing my app just to add ONLY 2 Jutsu.

This stupid application can sit here and rot for all I care. Thats extremely uncool and gives me a disadvantage against other people, who have more jutsu on the list.

Age : 31 Posts : 1118

Quote :: Well they are required to be the ones from our Encyclopedia so please change them accordingly.

They are definably not. The encyclopedia is to help members with jutsu, not limit them. Amaya is perfectly fine and should be able to display her own custom jutsu if its acceptable.

In any event, her application looks fine.

And she has my approval.

Further discussion may be moved to staff lounge

Age : 31 Posts : 1036

Well It looks fine to me as well. So I give the second approval, and move this bastard of application to the approved section. Very Happy

Age : 30 Posts : 8965

Archived.