Soul:

Official Grading: 20/20.
Unofficial Grading: 20/20.


There’s not much to say! XD Good job with everything, it was VERY interesting to read.
I liked how you skipped the actual part!

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Kija:

Official Grading: 18/20.
Unofficial Grading: 18/20.

The only problem I had was with your punctuation at the end of your dialogue. Remember to put SOMETHING.
I think you’ve really improved since the first topic I evaluated. Keep up the good work!