Akuma:

Official Grading: 16/20.
Unofficial Grading: 16/20.

♥ It was a good social topic!
♥ Be careful with your homonyms (there, they’re and their). You also have some awkward sentencing and misplaced commas.
♥ Next time, try to aim for higher word counts. Add more dialogue and details; make it more interesting! (:

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Soul:

Official Grading: 18/20.
Unofficial Grading: 18/20.

♥ Try thinking of other things to talk about. Not every topic has to be a recruiting topic. (:
♥ No grammatical errors, as always.
♥ When you’re RPing with Kija, try bringing this scenario up. Tell him Ayame was in the hotsprings with another male. Spark some emotion. ;)