Enma's Custom Techniques

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Name: Mizu no Yari - Spear of Water
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Suiton
Description: This jutsu is a variation of 'Mizukiri no Yaiba - Sword of Draining'. Instead of creating a sword, the user will utilize a water source to create a spear, which is of a maximum length of 2 metres. The spear can be wielded just like a real weapon and deals equal damage or alternatively, can be created from a source nearby the opponent, in order to surprise attack him. Unfortunately, the water makes a gurgling sound just before the spear is created, thus alerting the opponent to it. The spear also go through most fire jutsu.
Chakra Cost: 8

Name: Mizu no Hōshutsu - Water Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton
Description: This jutsu is allows the user to create his own water source, through releasing a jet of water from his mouth. Although this jet can be used to attack an opponent and its pressure can be increased to deal damage, the jutsu is mainly intended to allow the user to use higher level techniques. The jutsu releases 30 litres of water, which is the approximate amount of water found in the human body.
Chakra Cost: 4; 6 to use it at high pressure.

Name: Mizu no Dangan - Projectiles of Water
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Suiton
Description: This jutsu is a variation of 'Mizukiri no Yaiba - Sword of Draining'. Instead of creating a sword, the user will utilize a water source to create five shuriken, which are pushed upwards out of the water source for the user to catch. The projectiles deal the damage of their real counterparts. An alternative way of using this jutsu, is to fire the shuriken from a water source, in order to surprise attack the opponent. Unfortunately, the water makes a gurgling sound when the shuriken are released, thus alerting the opponent to them.
Chakra Cost: 4

Name: Uzu o Kyūshū - Absorbing Whirlpool
Rank: D-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton
Description: This jutsu is a defensive technique utilizing water. In order to protect himself from a Suiton jutsu, the user can create a miniature whirlpool of water in front of himself, by raising a vertical wall of wall in front himself, which he then spins to create momentum. When a Suiton jutsu collides with the whirlpool, it is partially sucked in and absorbed but it is mostly dispersed and reflected due to the fast spinning motion of the water. The strength of the whirlpool and the water necessary to use it changes; the whirlpool grows bigger with every rank. The whirlpool's rank must be equal to the rank of the Suiton jutsu in order to protect the user. D and C rank Vortexes can be created without a water source other than the user, but requires more chakra to do so.
Chakra Cost: Equivalent to the Chakra Cost of the technique which is being deflected; +2 Chakra Upkeep (if the jutsu is continued); + 3 Chakra if the jutsu is performed without a water source.

Name: Swirling Lightning Ball - Raiton no Senkai Bōru
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Raiton
Description: This technique allows the user to create a ball of lightning in their hand and then throw it at the opponent. As soon as the ball touches a solid surface such as the clothing of the opponent or the earth, the ball explodes in violent lightning in a radius of 3 feet, causing minor damage, shock and numbness to any parts of the body affected. The lightning can spread through a conductive surface such as metal or water.
Chakra Cost: 6

Name: Lightning Spiral - Raiton no Supairaru
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Raiton
Description: This is a defensive technique. The user will form a hand seal then produce lightning all over his body, which he will transfer into the ground below him. The lightning will follow underneath him then at will, the user can release it upwards. It will come out from the ground, spiralling around the user, protecting him from attacks. Making contact causes minor damage, shock and numbing. The spiral lasts a whole turn. It remains under the user for as long as he has chakra and can be released multiple times. It can be broken with several physical attacks, but the opponent will take damage. It can be overpowered by a B Rank Raiton or Doton jutsu, or C rank jutsu of the other elements.
Chakra Cost: 5 for release + 2 to keep it under ground every turn

Name: Lightning Canon - Raiton no Kanon
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Long (10m - 15m)
Element: Raiton
Description: This technique utilizes the lightning element to fire off a straight, concentrated bolt. The bolt is capable of causing great damage, especially if the opponent is close to the user. The bolt itself has a small radius of a few centimetres, and as such, requires accuracy from the user to strike at a vital point. Due to its strength and speed, the jutsu takes one turn to charge up. Because the bolt is released from the user's hand and fingertips, during the time it charges up, the hand must remain quite stationary; the hand glows with electricity, which makes a foreboding noise. The technique doesn't require any hand seals.
Chakra Cost: 7

Name: Raiton no Bāsuto - Lightning Burst
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Long (10m - 15m)
Element: Raiton
Description: This jutsu allows the user to channel lightning through a medium that should be conductive although this is not required. The lightning builds up out of sight, inside the medium, and then bursts out suddenly, expanding dangerously in a 3 metre radius, damaging and shocking the opponent if he is within range. Although the jutsu is not lethal, it can cause slight but annoying numbness of the body, and because the burst causes a huge deal of noise, it can be very distracting and momentarily open the opponent to further attacks.
Chakra Cost: 6 (through conductive medium); 8 (through non-conductive medium)

Name: Raiton no Hogo Ryōiki - Protective Lightning Field
Rank: D-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Raiton
Description: This jutsu is a defensive technique utilizing lightning. In order to protect himself from a Raiton jutsu, the user can disperses a fellow lightning jutsu by thrusting his hands forward and releasing a small, albeit powerful lightning-charged protective field in front of himself. When a Raiton jutsu collides with the field, it is partially sucked in and absorbed but mostly, neutralised and reflected away from its intended direction and target. The strength of the field varies. The field's rank must be equal to the rank of the Raiton jutsu in order to protect the user. D and C rank Fields can be created using a single hand thrust motion.
Chakra Cost: Equivalent to the Chakra Cost of the technique which is being deflected; +2 Chakra Upkeep (if the jutsu is continued)

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What is it with you people and lists?!
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Mizu no Yari
Approved for Training.

Mizu no Hōshutsu
Tone down on the amount please, forty litres is quite a lot for a D - Rank technique.

Mizu no Dangan
Just shorten the range down to Med (5 - 10m) please considering it's a D - Rank technique.

Uzu o Kyūshū
Somewhat confused by this technique. Considering a vortex would be flat on the water, how would it be able to suck in other attacks that are thrown at the user, while traveling above the vortex itself? If you were going with the idea of the vortex being able to suck in attacks, then this would most likely become a Fuuton based attack rather then a Suiton one. Also, how would the vortex exist without a water source?

Raiton no Senkai Bōru
Approved for Training.

Lightning Spiral
Approved for Training. Also you've got the Japanese name mixed up on this technique.

Raiton no Kanon
Approved for Training.

Raiton no Bāsuto
Approved for Training.

Raiton no Hogo Ryōiki
I'd prefer to see the Chakra Costs change to cost the same amount of chakra as the attack thrown at the user. So if the opponents attack cost five, then it'll cost five to deflect the attack.

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CHANGES wrote:: Name: Mizu no Hōshutsu - Water Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton
Description: This jutsu is allows the user to create his own water source, through releasing a jet of water from his mouth. Although this jet can be used to attack an opponent and its pressure can be increased to deal damage, the jutsu is mainly intended to allow the user to use higher level techniques. The jutsu releases 30 litres of water, which is almost the amount of water found in the human body.
Chakra Cost: 4; 6 to use it at high pressure.

Name: Mizu no Dangan - Projectiles of Water
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Suiton
Description: This jutsu is a variation of 'Mizukiri no Yaiba - Sword of Draining'. Instead of creating a sword, the user will utilize a water source to create five shuriken, which are pushed upwards out of the water source for the user to catch. The projectiles deal the damage of their real counterparts. An alternative way of using this jutsu, is to fire the shuriken from a water source, in order to surprise attack the opponent. Unfortunately, the water makes a gurgling sound when the shuriken are released, thus alerting the opponent to them.
Chakra Cost: 4

Name: Lightning Spiral - Raiton no Supairaru
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Raiton
Description: This is a defensive technique. The user will form a hand seal then produce lightning all over his body, which he will transfer into the ground below him. The lightning will follow underneath him then at will, the user can release it upwards. It will come out from the ground, spiralling around the user, protecting him from attacks. Making contact causes minor damage, shock and numbing. The spiral lasts a whole turn. It remains under the user for as long as he has chakra and can be released multiple times. It can be broken with several physical attacks, but the opponent will take damage. It can be overpowered by a B Rank Raiton, Suiton or Doton jutsu, or C rank jutsu of the other elements.
Chakra Cost: 5 for release + 2 to keep it under ground every turn

Name: Raiton no Hogo Ryōiki - Protective Lightning Field
Rank: D-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Raiton
Description: This jutsu is a defensive technique utilizing lightning. In order to protect himself from a Raiton jutsu, the user can disperses a fellow lightning jutsu by thrusting his hands forward and releasing a small, albeit powerful lightning-charged protective field in front of himself. When a Raiton jutsu collides with the field, it is partially sucked in and absorbed but mostly, neutralised and reflected away from its intended direction and target. The strength of the field varies. The field's rank must be equal to the rank of the Raiton jutsu in order to protect the user. D and C rank Fields can be created using a single hand thrust motion.
Chakra Cost: Equivalent to the Chakra Cost of the technique which is being deflected; +2 Chakra Upkeep (if the jutsu is continued)

I made a clearer version that hopefully explains more about how the jutsu works. The user first raises a wall of water in front of himself then uses his chakra to turn the water, until the momentum of the turns and the spinning motion is strong enough, to disperse and reflect other suiton jutsu. The chakra cost has been made in a similar manner as to the Protective Field jutsu above. The no water source issue is a common one. The idea is that chakra turns into an element of your choice or otherwise is used to shape and control a source of it. At lower levels, the user can produce the water himself and then control it. At higher levels where the whirlpool is bigger and stronger, it is necessary to have a water source. In the anime/manga it was explained that advanced shinobi could even use B and A rank sution jutsu without a water source, as is shown with the 2nd Hokage fight.

Quote :: Name: Uzu o Kyūshū - Absorbing Whirlpool
Rank: D-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Suiton
Description: This jutsu is a defensive technique utilizing water. In order to protect himself from a Suiton jutsu, the user can create a miniature whirlpool of water in front of himself, by raising a vertical wall of wall in front himself, which he then spins to create momentum. When a Suiton jutsu collides with the whirlpool, it is partially sucked in and absorbed but it is mostly dispersed and reflected due to the fast spinning motion of the water. The strength of the whirlpool and the water necessary to use it changes; the whirlpool grows bigger with every rank. The whirlpool's rank must be equal to the rank of the Suiton jutsu in order to protect the user. D and C rank Vortexes can be created without a water source other than the user, but require more chakra to do so.
Chakra Cost: Equivalent to the Chakra Cost of the technique which is being deflected; +2 Chakra Upkeep (if the jutsu is continued); + 3 Chakra if the jutsu is performed without a water source.

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All the suiton techniques have been trained. (Uzu o Kyūshū learned both at D and C rank)

http://www.ultimateshinobi.com/t5012-training-working-diligently-to-make-things-work#43685

Please keep this and that thread open as I intend to use the same training topic to learn the remaining Raiton techniques.

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Suiton techniques Approved!
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Another little custom. The lightning jutsu are under way btw.

Name: Lightning Mark - Raiton no Māku
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: Raiton
Description: The Lightning Mark is a jutsu that requires physical contact, yet no hand seals. The user will transfer a small amount of lightning in to the target (the body), that will cause no damage by itself except for a slight initial shock, that disappears as soon as the physical contact is broken. Instead, the lightning mark helps other Raiton techniques, by attracting lightning outside of the target, to the very spot where the Mark has been placed. As such, any Raiton jutsu used by the user have a much higher chance of hitting the target. After 4 posts, the effect wears off. A second physical contact can be used to resupply the chakra.
Chakra Cost: 6 + 3 (to resupply)

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Approved for Training!
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