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| Kyouki clan - Dangerous weapon Release (Raiton weapons) -finished | |
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Dari's Angel
Age : 25 Posts : 1767
| Subject: Kyouki clan - Dangerous weapon Release (Raiton weapons) -finished Mon 29 Aug 2011, 7:13 pm | |
| Please note, this is a side project i've been working on. It's likely to be flawed, it's just something I thought of and decided to do.
Clan Name: Kyouki
Location: The clan originated from travellers, but the current family resides in Konoha.
Signature Traits: The Males tend to have purple or dark blue hair, whilst the females have lighter colours, such as indigo, violet or light blue. As for eye colours, the women have warm browns or wise greys, whilst men, and even some more fierce women have purples or red. The builds of the clan members are usually tall and slim, it is rare to find a plump Kyouki, and many of the clan are passive, preferring the company of a few good friends, and are shy in battle, unless alone with the opponent. The Kekkei Genkai has occasionally formed minor 'defections', such as some members having no fingernails, or very sharp, small teeth. One very powerful member was missing an arm from birth, although this happened to be hugely to their advantage from a battle aspect.
Ninjutsu/Kenjutsu:
The clan is famed for its Raiton ninjutsu/kenjutsu specialities. These are jutsu which include the 'summoning' of weapons fashioned from Raiton chakra, and jutsus which are used in conjunction with them. There are many different types of Raiton weapons that can be conjured, but most members specialise in only a few. These include scythes, staves, swords, sais, halberds and so on. Each member has one of their own creation or modification. They do not need to be carried, as they are weapons made of chakra, but to save effort of continuously re-summoning them, they can be installed in scrolls. However, weapons is not the only use of this. Some members use barrier jutsu over kenjutsu, and are more 'support' type nins. They can create shields to carry, some powerful enough to block jutsu of an equal or lesser rank, or create a defence for their teammates, etc etc. Other members use bows or other long range Raiton weapons in combat. They can be supportive for their team mates, or use long range jutsu to fight their opponents solo.
Kekkei Genkai: The Kekkei Genkai of the Kyouki is often not taught to members deemed immature, as improper use harms the body. It effectively changes or adds to the body, making the ninja's body the weapon. The effect is unique to every member, and through intense training can be harnessed or improved. Examples of this are hands turning into knifes, scythes extending from the user's back, arms changing into blades, etc etc. To truly harness them, most members must be at least B-A rank. The weapons are born with the ninja, and circulate in his blood. They take a liquid form. By using their chakra to 'awaken' the blood, the ninja will effectively summon the weapon, but it must in some way be connected to the user. When the babies are in the womb, the weapon needs minerals and such to survive, and if things get drastic, it will consume minor parts of the unborn-baby to survive, and this is how the defections, such as missing fingernails, are created. However, when the child is born, the Weapon will need less minerals, thus decreasing the chances of the ninja losing more body parts. It is common that clan members who use the Kekkei Genkai for a prolonged period of time will be very hungry.
History:
Founding years: The clan was founded 150 years ago, by three siblings. The founders were travellers, their Father sold things he made, such as whacky contraptions with little practical use. Their Names were Shinrai, the eldest, who was quiet and passive, like the common members, and had purple hair. It was him who used Ranged weapons and jutsu. The second son was Takumi, who was intelligent and happy-go-lucky, with Dark blue hair and indigo eyes, he mastered barrier jutsu. The youngest was Michiyo. She had light blue hair, and red eyes, and it was her who created half of the kenjutsu used today, her personal preference was scythes and scimitars of Raiton. The three did not train as ninjas until late on in life, when they finally settled down. After 7 years of training, when they were in their twenties, the discovered their Kekkei Genkai.
First generation: Michiyo's child was born without his arm, and further research showed of how the Kekkei Genkai had affected him. Shinrai's two children explored further into jutsu, creating barriers, close range and long range weapons of all kinds, and how to use them in coherence with other jutsu. Takumi had four children, who spent hours every day training their kekkai genkai. Shinrai was made first head of clan.
Second generation: By this time, the clan numbers were growing, and Michiyo's granddaughter was named second head of clan. They officially settled into Konoha, and were welcomed, with a small part of the clan housing given to them. Michiyo's son became the most renowned of the kyouki's, his kekkei genkai replacing his lost arm with a huge scythe, and he mastered barrier jutsu and kenjutsu.
Third generation: The clan was much larger now, with it's original founders deceased, the bloodline was strong and it had become well known.
Past years: Not much changed from then to now. The head of clan has been passed down, as with would be expected. The numerous Shinobi live happily, and now, every member must make a decision at 12 (if they chose to be a ninja) between Barrier jutsu, short range Kenjutsu or Long range Kenjutsu. The idea to divide into three different branches was abolished.
Other:
The Cerimonial Katana Of the Kyouki
The Ceremonial Katana of the Koyouki is awarded to members or non, that show valor and honor, or assist the clan in a way for which the head of clan thinks they should be commentated. In the 125 years of it's existence, it has been awarded four times.
Cerimonial Katana owner 1:
Takumi, Akimoto. Awarded for defending the clan from an ambush, co-ordinated by rouge ninjas. He lost an eye, after taking down 23 enemy shinobi.
Cerimonial Katana owner 2:
Shinrai, Kaitle. Awarded for Retrieving a kidnapped member of the clan. The culprits were after the Kekkei Genkai, and Kaitle surprised them, before taking the group of 16 out.
Cerimonial Katana owner 3:
Kaitou, Minwa. Awarded for discovering a plot to assassinate the head of clan.
Cerimonial Katana owner 4:
Kyouki, Lorlen. Awarded for Killing the first and only missing-nin of the Kyouki, who was in fact his own Sister.
Clan Jutsu:
Name: Raiton: Jinkourai Kyuoki - lightning style: lightning weapon Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: - Element: Raiton Description: This jutsu allows to summon a weapon unique to every caster, made of raiton. The weapon can be a long ranged or close ranged weapon, and this is the basic jutsu of the Kyouki clan. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Raiton: Akeru Shi-rudo - Lightning style: dawn shield Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: (personal), Close (0m-5m), mid (5m-10m) Element: Raiton Description:The Akeru Shi-rudo is a jutsu taught to the barrier third of the clan. It summons a shield the size of a torso, that can be placed anywhere within range, including other around other people. Chakra Cost: 6 (2)
Name: Sanjuu Inkaten - Triple flashing point Rank: C Type: Kenjutsu/ninjutsu Range: Close (0m-5m) Element: Raiton Description: This technique involves any close combat weapon (scythe, katana, dagger, stave, etc). The user will simply keep the feet rooted, and swing their weapon three times. The first, the weapon will strike normally. The second, the weapon will still strike, but the attack will come from behind as well, in a flash of lightning, which well then disappear (note the attack is mirrored, so if the user strikes right, the other blade will strike left). The third time, it comes from underneath AND behind (and off course in-front). This attack is good for catching unweary opponents, or people who are proficient at Tai/kenjutsu. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Raiton: Hishou Shuurai - Lightning style: Soaring lightning strike Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu/kenjutsu Range: Mid (5m-10m) Far (+10m) Element: Raiton Description: First, the user must throw/fire a projectile. Then, after forming very few handseals, object will be sped up massively, causing its destructive force to rise. Chakra Cost: 9
Name: Raiton: atamagaokashii Arashi - lightning style: insane storm Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu/kenjutsu Range: Close (0m-5m) Element: Raiton Description: The user will swing their weapon, around their head, before a strike lightning chakra comes down very close to them. They will turn very fast, with streaks of lightning appearing all around them. Afterwards, the user may feel a varying degree of dizziness. Chakra Cost: 10
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| | | Dari's Angel
Age : 25 Posts : 1767
| Subject: Re: Kyouki clan - Dangerous weapon Release (Raiton weapons) -finished Sat 03 Sep 2011, 12:04 am | |
| Well, i guess thats finished, so... bump |
| | | Dari's Angel
Age : 25 Posts : 1767
| Subject: Re: Kyouki clan - Dangerous weapon Release (Raiton weapons) -finished Wed 07 Sep 2011, 10:32 pm | |
| It's been five days... re-bump |
| | | Vegapunk
Posts : 2032
| Subject: Re: Kyouki clan - Dangerous weapon Release (Raiton weapons) -finished Fri 09 Sep 2011, 8:00 am | |
| I don't overly see this as a viable clan concept. Your clan revolves around weaponry (which is fine) but you do nothing special that would warrant this as a clan. This is nothing TenTen couldn't do with a talent for raiton release.
Also, your KKG isn't a viable bloodline ability. You merely create a weapon from your own body something which can be done with a simple nature release technique (creating a water, fire, wind sword etc). This is also accomplished by the Kaguya clan through a simple technique. |
| | | Dari's Angel
Age : 25 Posts : 1767
| Subject: Re: Kyouki clan - Dangerous weapon Release (Raiton weapons) -finished Fri 09 Sep 2011, 10:01 am | |
| - Todd wrote:
- Also, your KKG isn't a viable bloodline ability. You merely create a weapon from your own body something which can be done with a simple nature release technique (creating a water, fire, wind sword etc). This is also accomplished by the Kaguya clan through a simple technique.
True, but the idea of this is that the weapons are part of the ninja, or the ninja IS the weapon, and all members of the clan have a weapon in there blood. This weapon is essentially another living being, and also note how i said it must be attached to the user. Also i did note that it was considered a B-A rank technique (it varies for the ninja), and is thus more powerful than the jutsu you mentioned.
- Todd wrote:
- I don't overly see this as a viable clan concept. Your clan revolves around weaponry (which is fine) but you do nothing special that would warrant this as a clan. This is nothing TenTen couldn't do with a talent for raiton release.]
For some part, that is true, but there is also the barrier jutsu and such. The idea of most of the jutsu was that they could be used in coherence with the KKG, or by junior members who have yet to learn it. |
| | | Chris
Age : 29 Posts : 3145
| Subject: Re: Kyouki clan - Dangerous weapon Release (Raiton weapons) -finished Sat 10 Sep 2011, 12:08 am | |
| I personally don't like the clan because as far as I can see it, it is a rip off of the concept present in the Soul Eater anime. In other words, people or parts of the person turning in to a weapon. Whereas in the Soul Eater universe that is fine, I would like to think and hopefully Todd will agree with me, that the staff would like more explanation as to why and how the change between tissue into metal occurs... because to be honest, there is no real viable way of doing this - and yes, chakra does allow crazy feats, though this seems far too bizarre. |
| | | Dari's Angel
Age : 25 Posts : 1767
| Subject: Re: Kyouki clan - Dangerous weapon Release (Raiton weapons) -finished Sat 10 Sep 2011, 10:46 am | |
| Meh, i guess i see your point you may as well archive this, i'm finished with it. |
| | | Chris
Age : 29 Posts : 3145
| Subject: Re: Kyouki clan - Dangerous weapon Release (Raiton weapons) -finished Sat 10 Sep 2011, 12:48 pm | |
| Ok well I'm just gonna put the whole clan in a code for you and sent it by a PM so that you can keep it, and continue working on it, if you want. ^_^
Having said that, this is Archived. |
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