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| Subject: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Tue 16 Feb 2010, 6:14 pm | |
| Name: Uchiha, Hiro - Nickname: The silent one or the Uchiha of the sand Age: 17 Gender: Male Clan: Uchiha
Looks:
Hiro has beautiful, dreamy eyes that causes many to just stare into them. His eyes are normally hazel brown, and his eyebrows are nothing but ordinary. His hair is also brown, and most of it comes down past his face stopping at his cheeks. He is usually wearing a frown on his face, and it would be abnormal to see him in a good mood.
He sometimes wears ninja wear, but mostly he prefers a black shirt, and some dark colored pants. He wears normal ninja shoes on his feet. His konoha leafband is worn on his forehead, or alternatively worn on his neck. His skin is considered pure, cause he has no permanent scratches on his skin. He has a normal height for his age. He is not really thin, nor reallhick. He is in the middle range. His teeth are pure white, and his body is not as big as his head.He keeps his personal hygene under way. His finger nails and toe nails are always clean and clipped. He is never seen unkempt.
Personality:
Hiro personality is ver abnormal. He never really talks to anyone, or has any kind of social life. He is not shy, but he does not like to say things that are considered unnesscary to say. He listens to his elders, and does what he is asked. He hates people who talk to much, and does nothing but boast about their abilities. He likes people that are out going and hardworking. He doesn't like to speak, but if he is agitated enough he will speak his mind.
Once you really get to know him, and that's if he allows you too. You will learn he is kind, thoughtful, forgiving and sweet. You will never catch him being disrespectful towards anyone that is older than him by a vast region. He knows how to swallow his pride in any heated moment. He is proud of his Uchiha heritage, and thinks he should befriend all Uchihas that he come into contact with.
He will not forgive you if you bad talk his clan, or his friends. In fact he may be plotting something devious if you go around poking fun at his friends. His nindo is many things, but he perfers it to be this little phrase. "A shinobi must protect his name for it's a valuable thing". That is his nindo.
Catch Phrase
"A shinobi must protect his name for it's a valuable thing" "You will die if you ponder about it" "Life is meaningless if you have no purpose"
Basic Clan Information:
Clan Name: Uchiha Clan Location: Konoha Clan Traits:
The Uchiha have a number of traits which set them apart from the normal ninja. First off being that they all seem to have black hair. Also, every one in this clan has a main element of fire. They seem to be very proficient in the three basic jutsu arts of Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, and Taijutsu (This does not mean Uchiha characters can have three specialties), and are usually known as the elite brand of shinobi. Uchiha generally seem to work with their speed rather then raw brute strength and are very agile and quick.
* Must have Fire as main element and either Ninjutsu or Genjutsu as a specialty
Kekkei Genkai:
Sharingan is the blood inheritance limit of the Uchiha Clan. The Uchiha are said to be descendants of the Hyuuga, with the Byakugan changing into the Sharingan over time. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and almost instantly memorize the movements required to be able to complete it, including the needed chakra moldings and seals used. However the clan member cannot copy techniques that are unique to another bloodline and the clan member must have a body capable of meeting the chakra and physical requirements to do the jutsu. This rarely stops the clan member though, as such stressful situations often push their limits farther and allow them to harness their full potential.
The Uchiha clan member is not granted the Sharingan at birth; it is only activated later in life, typically during a time of emotional stress in the heat of battle. The Sharingan itself can be transferred to another non-Uchiha by a medical ninja, such as happened with Leaf ninja Uchiha Obito to his teammate Hatake Kakashi. Because his body was not born to carry the Sharingan, the eye is always activated and it burns Kakashi's chakra when used. To lessen the impact of the Sharingan on Kakashi's body, he normally keeps the eye hidden and out of use. Also of note, is the fact Kakashi, a non-Uchiha, was able to advance the Sharingan from two tomoe to three tomoe after gaining the eye.
The Sharingan itself contains three tomoe (comma). A higher mastery of the Sharingan can be seen in the creation of a new tomoe in the eye, with three tomoe being the typical highest form of the eye. The rare Mangekyou form is a unique evolution of the Sharingan beyond the three tomoe form, please see its entry for more information. An eye possessing two tomoe can allow the Uchiha clan member to track the movement of an opponent and do some minor copying of an opponents attack. For avoiding incoming attacks, the Uchiha's speed and agility will greatly control whether they can move to avoid it. However, three tomoe will greatly help in this area.
Two tomoe will also allow the ninja to pierce Genjutsu and see the surrounding reality for what it really is. It can also allow the member to pierce another’s body and see their chakra. While the eye is not refined enough to see the tenketsu and chakra circulatory system like the Byakugan, it can view the movement and flow of chakra. This can help them tell if a person is trapped in a Genjutsu, or if an attacker is a real threat or merely a bunshin.
An eye containing three tomoe will allow the ninja to see the image of an attacker’s next move from the slightest muscle tension in their body. This prevents wasteful movement and allows the Uchiha clan member to conserve much needed chakra in battle. It allows them to synchronize their movement to strike at an area moments before their opponent is even in that spot, essentially allowing them to strike out and hit their opponent before they're even there.
Three tomoe also grants the Uchiha the ability to do Genjutsu and hypnosis after locking eyes with an enemy. This can be used to cause their opponent to do an attack of the Uchiha's choosing. This hypnosis can also be used as a Genjutsu counter, which is the ability to turn a Genjutsu spell back upon the original caster without the requirement of forming any handseals.
The Mangekyō Sharingan ( Literally meaning Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye) is a heightened form of Sharingan. The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to powerful and forbidden techniques. The Mangekyō Sharingan is distinguished from a normal Sharingan through its appearance, which changes the form of the tomoe seal. Unlike in the case of the Sharingan, the appearance of the Mangekyō Sharingan differs from user to user. The Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user access to several powerful techniques, and erodes the eyesight of its users, eventually causing blindness, which can be alleviated by obtaining another pair of Mangekyō Sharingan from a sibling. The new Sharingan is dubbed the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan. The techniques used by this eye vary from person to person and is limited to one technique per eye. It can be achieved by the killing of someone who is very close to the user as a display of being willing to sacrifice anything for power. This can not be fooled and be a fake friend. It must be a real and true strong connection so it takes a certain kind of individual to be able to get it. It can also be gotten by extremely brutal and long training, taking many many many years to obtain of constant hard work and dedication, though the person can not be aiming for it and it actually just happens at random. Even with the hardest work, it is possible for an Uchiha to never achieve this level of eye mastery.
Secret Clan Jutsu:
Name: Demonic Illusion - Mirror Heaven and Earth Change Type: Genjutsu Rank: A Element: - Description: A Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. Using the copy and counter functions of the Sharingan eye, the Uchiha clan member can stop the sensory spell cast on their body and reverse it back on their opponent. This technique requires the user to have three tomoe in each eye to use it.
Name: Ephemeral Type: Genjutsu Rank: A Element: - Description: A Genjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha clan members. They will start this technique by using only one finger on their right hand. The target does not have to look into his eyes, a glance at the hand itself will be enough. Once inside the illusion, they can control the visions the ninja sees. This illusion can also be used to play on the fears of the target, causing them to see and hear those who they care about degrade them.
History:
The Uchiha clan was descended from the elder of the two boys entrusted by the Sage of the Six Paths with the power and will of the way of the ninja. The elder believed that might would bring peace. The Sage chose the younger as more fitting to be his successor, causing the elder to be vengeful. From the younger boy descended the Senju clan who would be the eternal rivals of the Uchiha. Before the founding of the ninja villages, the Uchiha were one of the many mercenary clans for hire. Because of their Sharingan, the Uchiha clan came to be known as one of the two strongest clans, the second being the Senju clan. Madara Uchiha was particularly powerful, and, upon attaining the Mangekyō Sharingan, he took control of the clan. Under his leadership the Uchiha grew stronger, conquering whatever clans they came upon, such that, whenever the Uchiha clan was hired for a job, the opposing side would hire the Senju.
Hashirama Senju, the leader of the Senju clan, grew tired of the endless fighting, and approached the Uchiha clan with a peace treaty. Madara feared that an alliance would lead the Uchiha to ruin, but his clan disagreed, and he was forced to accept. The two clans came together to form Konoha, with Hashirama being selected as Hokage. Madara believed that this was proof that the Uchiha would be made subservient to the Senju, but his clan saw this only as his attempt to rekindle the flames of war. They turned their backs on him, and he defected. Following Madara's betrayal, the Second Hokage gave the Uchiha control of the Konoha Military Police Force as a sign of trust. According to Madara, this was really just a way of keeping the Uchiha in check and out of Konoha's governing affairs. Over the years, some Uchiha have figured out this motive's true meaning, and tried to rebel against the village as Madara did, but they found that it was too little, too late to make a difference, as the Senju had already completely suppressed the Uchiha. Eventually a revolt was attempted by a select few Uchiha members, but this was crushed quickly and they were thrown in jail or put to death based on their role in the uprising. The Uchiha who did not partake in it, were not held accountable and after that the relations between the Uchiha and the rest of the village grew stronger and trust was finally instilled
Rank Information: Rank: Jounin Village: Suna
Skill Information: Skill Specialty: Genjutsu and Ninjutsu Elemental Affinity: Fire and Lightning Special Characteristics: 5% more reflexes/reaction than a ninja of his normal stature from hard training at Genin and Chunnin ranks 5% faster than a ninja of his normal stature from hard training at Genin and Chunnin ranks His IQ is 150 due to before his ninja years he went to school and studied until he was old enough to be a ninja physically.
Jutsus:
Fire Jutsu
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Name: Great Fire Ball Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: Fire Description: Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. Jiraiya will first gather the fire into his mouth and then spew a giant breath of fire constantly at his opponent.
Name: Fire ball jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Fire Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows Jiraiya to emit a jet of fire from his mouth. While not stated, this is probably the same or a similar jutsu to the one Jiraiya uses in conjunction with Gamebunta to do Gamayu Endan.
Name: Great Fire ball jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Fire Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Katon jutsu such as this are seen as a rite of passage into adulthood for Uchiha clan members. Once the member can manipulate fire, they are finally recognized as no longer being a child.
Name: Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: Fire Description: Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.
Name: Haisekishou - Burning Ash Accumulation Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: Fire Description:Katon • Haisekishou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed handseals, Asuma will expel an ash from his mouth. This large cloud begin to envelope his foe and when Asuma clicks his teeth, the cloud will ignite in an explosion.
Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Element: Fire Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.
Name: Mist Waltz Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Element: Fire Description:Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and then proceeds to blow a large combustible mist at the target. When the mist hits flame, it will ignite in an explosion of fire.
Name: Fire swarm burst limit Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Element: Fire Description: Hiro after forming the necessary handsigns well emit flames from his mouth. Once they hit the ground they race towards the opponent, and burns anything in it's path. The flame just keeps on going after the opponent unless the flame is put out by a reasonable source(IE. WATER),or on Hiro's command.
Non elemental Jutsu
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with 4another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: E Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Rank: E Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kai - Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique Rank: D Element: N/A Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Genjutsu
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Name: Torture thoughts Type: Genjutsu Rank: A Element: N/A Description: This Genjutsu is a technique used by Hiro. Hiro will cause the area around the target to be enveloped by darkness. Once inside the black space, the target will see grotesque figures said to be tortured criminals, the previous victims of the technique. These grotesqueries will reach out and grab a hold of the target. They will then be thrown into the void to the mercy of a spectral dragon. The horrifying oni can even extend from the targets own body to attack them. All aimed at transfixing the victim with fear and shock while Hiro himself chokes and kills the target. This genjutsu can be used through eye contact or sound.
Name: Black Void Type: Genjutsu Rank: A Element:N/A Description:Kokuangyou no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the ninja's opponent to be enveloped in total darkness. While in the black void, the ninja will be unable to see any incoming attack or threat. The genjutsu can be used through eye contact or sound
Name: Magen • Jubaku Satsu - Demonic Illusion • Tree Binding Death Type: Genjutsu Rank: B Element: N/A Description: Magen • Jubaku Satsu is a Genjutsu technique utilized by the Hiro. After forming the needed hand seals, Hiro will disappear and approach his target. Once near his target, a tree will grow at their feet and its branches will bind them so they can no longer move. Once the illusion makes them believe they are captured, Hiro will come from behind or front and stab the opponent with a kunai. The genjutsu is used through eye contact or by looking at a finger of Hiro.
Name: Magen • Kasegui no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Shackling Stakes Type: Genjutsu Rank: B Element: N/A Description:Magen • Kasegui no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. After activating their Sharingan, the clan member will look into the eyes of their target to bind them with a paralyzing illusion. This illusion takes the form of giant spikes which stake them in place and restrict their movement. A powerful enough ninja will be able to fight the bind to give themselves an opportunity to gain freedom. The genjutsu can be used through eye contact ot by looking at a finger of Hiro.
Name: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique Type: Genjutsu Rank: D Element: N/A Description:Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion. Used through eye contact.
Lightning Jutsu
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Name: Lightning strike Type: Ninjitsu Rank: B Element: Lightning Description: After forming the necassary handsigns, Hiro will emit from his mouth a strong bolt of electricity.This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element
Name: Earth Flash Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C-S Element: Lightning Description: Hiro after forming the necassary handsigns can send a electric current through a object that has the ability for the electric current to be sent.(EX: Humans, bodies of water, metals).
Below will explain the volts sent at which rank:
C- 20 volts B- 40 volts A- 80 volts S- 120 volts
Name:Raiton Kage Bunshin Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Element: Lightning Description:Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Kage Bunshin clone. Because it is a Kage Bunshin, the Raiton version shares the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Raiton Kage Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into its natural lightning state. Like in other Lightning Element attacks, should the target come into contact with the electricity, they will be momentarily stunned.
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| Subject: Re: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Tue 16 Feb 2010, 11:25 pm | |
| Pick another village, we aren't any allowing any further Konoha Uchiha. |
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| Subject: Re: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Tue 23 Feb 2010, 3:28 am | |
| History and RP Sample: History:
Life before ninja/Academy
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Hiro was born in the hidden leaf village located in the Fire country. His parents names were Danzo and Yuri. Danzo was a favorite amongst the clan, and Yuri was the most beautiful woman in the Uchiha clan. All of the Uchiha clan waited for them to have a baby to see both of his parents characteristics in the child. So one day Yuri got pregnant, and the clan was happy. It was a big thing, and the baby shower was huge. Everyone awaited the baby’s arrival. Then one day Yuri’s water broke. She was taken to Konoha’s hospital, and their the baby was delivered. Everyone rejoiced at the baby. The baby did not cry though when he came out. He was one of the first to do this. He was known as the cry less baby.
Hiro eventually through his age watched and learned more and more. First he was sent to the whirlpool country to learn academics at the age of 6. At the age of 10 he returned home with enough knowledge so he could just study ninjutsu. He was considered a great scholar, but he was no where near a status of a ninja, so his parents put him in the academy. His great skill at adapting to everything really influenced the other children in the academy to like him. He graduated at the top of his class, because he was the most skilled there. Many thought he was a Nara because of his intellect. He now was genin at the age of 12.
Genin
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Hiro was now 12, and basically part of a team. His team included his little brother that was 4 months younger than him, a Inuzaka girl who was keen to medical jutsu, and his father; Danzo. Hiro felt a lot of tension between his brother and himself. They always competed for dad’s happiness and proud ship. With dad as their Jounin leader they had to compete against each other. Kiru(Inuzaka girl) thought the quarrel was hopeless. Hiro and Kiru were in a relationship, and they beyond puppy love. Of course his brother was jealous of their intimate relationship. Eventually going on missions of the lower ranks bored them. They were then given A rank missions, and sometimes S rank missions. Though each had reached a high point at a young age, they still had to participate in the Chunnin exams. Of course the first part Hiro passed with flying colors. It was a test just like ones at the academics school. Then the forest of death was like a late walk in the park. Hiro and his team had been secretly playing in the forest since they formatted their team.
They passed that and advanced further on. Then they defeated each of their opponents with no sweat. Even without the sharigan in his eye nor his brother his normal skills were superb. They easily passed the Chunnin exams, and so did Kiru. They now were Chunnin. Also during the Chunnin exams Hiro’s brother obtained his sharigan in the forest of death putting their brotherly rivalry in a whole new perspective.
Chunnin
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Hiro was now 14 and he was Chunnin. His dad was heavily proud of his brother cause of his sharigan. Hiro was worrying what was happening, and what was going on. He had not obtained sharigan, and that made him real sad. His father was upset, and disappointed. He did not know what to do. His relationship with Kiru slipped away more and more. He began to isolate himself from everyone and train every single day from morning till night. He began to miss missions and training sessions with his team, and they could do nothing but shun him. Also Kiru and Hiro suddenly broke up, and that sent his emotions in all different directions.
The Uchiha clan knew he would never obtain Sharigan nor he would be a great ninja. So the village and his father decided to do one thing, and that was to leave him out in ninja world. He was going to become a abandoned ninja. Hiro did not know, but his team was to leave him in the whirlpool country where he would wander forever alone. That was a fail plan. When they got there, Kiru’s feelings took over and she told him the truth. He did not say nothing, he was angry. He relentlessly objected to this, and they did not know what to do. So then some S ranked Shinobi appeared and attacked them. Of course Hiro’s father defeated one, but the other two was hard to defeat. Then something terrible happen. One of the ninjas came to deal a finish blow to Hiro when Kiru jumped in front of him. Kiru died there, and Hiro could do nothing but watched. Now Hiro was furious, and he closed his eyes and opened them. He had obtained his sharigan. The ninja that killed Kiru left himself open for a attack, so Hiro and his brother killed him. The other one was fighting their father, and he was actually winning. Apparently the sharigan was not fast enough to keep up with his movements. It was remarkable that the ninja had obtained such a skill. So the three sharigan wielders. They together destroyed the ninja that had attacked. They had won the fight, but at a cost of a life. Hiro was upset about it. When his father and brother began to walk away. He stood there looking at the body. They wanted to know why he did not come back. His final words to them before he disappeared was, “I was suppose to be left here, and that’s what is going to happen”. His anger and frustration had left him to leave the village that had abandoned him, because of a false prediction. He then headed to another village where he could contribute better.
Hiro reached the Wind country, and a place known as Sunagakure stood in the country. He was allowed in there welcoming a Uchiha since their was a scarce amount in the Wind country. He was admitted and he was welcomed. Jounin
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Once obtaining the Sharigan he also trained it gaining to the full maximum of his potential of his eye at his rank. So he had to take a test to see what rank he was worthy of. He passed and was at a rank of a Jounin. So now he continues his life as a Sunagakure Uchiha Jounin. He was now 16.
To be continued…….
Rp Sample:
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Hiro was following his team on a mission. This was one of those days again. Hiro had lost his touch. He was the infamous silent one, but he had remained silent for many months now. No one noticed his progress when he trained everyday, they only saw the outer wall of it. They saw him being lonely and non compatible. So they had decided his fate. They decided to leave him in the middle of no where, where he could isolate himself forever. He had not obtained his sharigan, he wanted those dark red eyes so bad. He wanted to see through the eyes of a true Uchiha.
The Uchiha clan had recently neglected Hiro, because of it. That was one of the main reasons why he was so gloomy at almost all times. He walked around like he was carrying the world on his shoulders, and like he could no longer bear the torment of life. They were on their way to the Whirlpool country. He had no idea they were suppose to do a drop and run mission with Hiro himself. Kiru his Girl friend was part of the team. She was called the beautiful Inuzaka because her looks made even the prettiest lady look ugly compared to her. She looked sad when she usually was in a happy mood.
Hiro had deduced from his Girl friends disposition that something wasn't right. She could no longer hold the emotions she had bottled up since the mission began. She began to cry, and that's when Hiro stopped. They kept going until they noticed he had stopped. More importantly they noticed the tears trickling down her soft, creamy skin. Hiro did not move and he yelled with frustration, "Why is she crying? Why are we going here, and I we were told nothing about the mission? Why is every one acting strange", said Hiro as he looked at his father in disarray. Hiro had finally spoken some words since his graduation from Genin to Chunnin.
"Hiro I am sorry but...but", said his father, but he could not finish his words he had to utter to his son. Then his brother stepped up, and walked towards him. He stared at him face to face. He closed his eyes and opened them. His eyes went from the pure white to a bloody red. "You are losing your touch brother, and you are a defect of the clan", said Hiro's brother in a serious manner. Hiro was irate to the point where he wanted to punch his little brother in the mouth. So Hiro was about to start a fight he knew he had no way of winning. He tightened his fist like a screw being tightened. His brother knew what was about to happen he got ready. Kiru stood there crying as her dog companion comforted her. She could no longer keep control of her emotions. Then when the battle was about to happen, a kunai with a explosive tag appeared from the bushes onto the ground. It laid stuck in the ground in the middle of the two Shinobi.
They heard a sizzling sound like the cooking of barbecue. They all jumped back, and escaped just in time before the loud clattering that sounded like thunder. After the smoke and debris cleared what was left was a opening in the middle of the forest. It looked like a forest fire had just finished savaging the area. Then 3 Shinobi appeared on top of a bunch of piled up burnt logs. They stared at the ninjas that had evaded their attack so well. They saw two sharigan so they assumed their was two Uchiha. "Two Uchiha, a dog breeder and a nobody with no clan", said one of them. "Should be easy", said another. They body flickered and each appeared in front of one. Hiro was left out. "Nobody, I will show them nobody", thought Hiro with much anger. He got up took out a explosive kunai and ran at one of the ninjas that had Kiru cornered. Hiro screamed and swing the kunai. Of course he blocked with his own, Hiro then grabbed Kiru with his legs and threw her away. Hiro plunged his kunai into the guy's back, and then pushed off of his face with a lot of force. As he flew he heard the explosion.
Hiro landed on the ground, and was huffing and puffing. He was coughing out blood. Kiru came to him, and healed him. Her eyes met his and for the first instance she though she noticed his eyes changing color. That's when the ninja that was thought to be combusted appeared from behind and stabbed her. Hiro did not know what to do. He panicked, and made handsigns. He put his hand on the ninja's head, and the ninja was electrocuted with 40 volts. After the explosion, the volts was enough to kill him. Hiro could not save her. He looked into her eyes, and she smiled. He kissed her, and she said, "I always loved you Hiro, your sharigan has finally came, but it's time for us to say out adieus", said Kiru as she coughed some blood. Tears rolled down both of their eyes, and the tears hit the ground making a form of a heart, blood mixed with that to cause the outline of the heart to be red. She then slowly crept away from life, and her body was no longer inhabited with a soul. Just a corpse.
Hiro was now pissed. He stood there staring at her. He took off his headband. He took one little swipe, and the head band was cut. He officially cut off his ties with the village. So his father finally defeated the ninja that attacked him. Hiro's brother was getting his butt whopped. He was about to die, when Hiro used Body flicker to appear in front and block the finishing blow. He stared into the mans eyes, and as quick as he had appeared the man was trapped in a Genjutsu. While he was stuck he took out a kunai and stabbed him causing a fatal wound. Hiro stared at his brother with his red eyes having nothing to say to none of his family.
After the battle Hiro's dad and brother were happy. They congratulated him, and walked away forgetting about Kiru. He picked up her body, it was lighter and lifeless. He handed it to his father. "Make sure to tell her family she died protecting the one she loved. She protected the silent one", said Hiro with a sad look. Hiro then backed up. He placed a bunch of explosive tags in between them. He put on his headband showing he had completely crossed it out. He cried, "Leave me be forever like your mission stated", said Hiro as he activated the explosive tags. The explosion went off, and after the explosion Hiro was gone. He decided to start his life all over again, well he knew one thing. He would never live in a land where they would betray him like a cat that is scared of mice.
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| | | Naim
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| Subject: Re: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Wed 24 Feb 2010, 5:05 am | |
| COMPLETION BUMP |
| | | Pattycakes
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| Subject: Re: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Wed 24 Feb 2010, 6:26 am | |
| remember, you'll be held to that RP sample...
you'll need a bit more in your first history arc.
Raiton Kage bunshin is A rank
make sure you list what triggers the genjutsu in each of your techniques (ie, eyecontact)
Fire Swarm should be A... or even S, given they're more or less Amaterasu... |
| | | Pattycakes
Age : 30 Posts : 1701
| Subject: Re: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Wed 24 Feb 2010, 6:27 am | |
| 15% more reflexes/reaction than a ninja of his normal stature from hard training at Genin and Chunnin ranks 15% faster than a ninja of his normal stature from hard training at Genin and Chunnin ranks His IQ is more than 200 due to before his ninja years he went to school and studied until he was old enough to be a ninja physically.
Not okay, not enough explanation. I say, 5% faster, and 5% better reflexes... and are you sure you're capable of RPing a ninja with an IQ of over 200? Remember, that to do so accurately, your IQ must be at least close to that number..
16 is a tad young for jounin, we can't all be prodigies.
Add a bit more to each of your appearance paragraphs. |
| | | Naim
Posts : 16
| Subject: Re: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Wed 24 Feb 2010, 6:51 am | |
| EDITED |
| | | Guest
| Subject: Re: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Wed 24 Feb 2010, 5:12 pm | |
| Pat idk if you realized it or not, but the only open positions available anymore anywhere are genin ones. So either way, youll have to turn this into a genin application before any more modding can be done to it. |
| | | Naim
Posts : 16
| Subject: Re: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Thu 25 Feb 2010, 2:48 am | |
| So in every village Genin is the only thing open. |
| | | Guest
| Subject: Re: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Thu 25 Feb 2010, 3:06 am | |
| That is what I said yes. |
| | | Travis
Posts : 414
| Subject: Re: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Thu 25 Feb 2010, 4:39 am | |
| I also believe all the Uchiha spots are taken. |
| | | Travis
Posts : 414
| Subject: Re: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Thu 25 Feb 2010, 5:35 am | |
| Nevermind, Suna Uchiha is open. |
| | | Hugh
Age : 37 Posts : 1136
| Subject: Re: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Thu 25 Feb 2010, 3:33 pm | |
| Indeed it is but Jounin isnt, or indeed Chuunin. I am afraid its genin or nothing in Suna. I hope this isnt to greater problem for you |
| | | Naim
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| Subject: Re: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Sat 27 Feb 2010, 4:09 am | |
| So thats only if I wanna belong to Suna, or all jounin and chunnin spots taken. Like Kumo. |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Sat 27 Feb 2010, 4:28 am | |
| Currently all that is available anywhere is genin. That may change, but dont count on it. Read the Rank Availability topic. Uchiha are also closed off. |
| | | Hugh
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| Subject: Re: Hiro Uchiha [Unknown] (WiP) Mon 29 Mar 2010, 2:22 pm | |
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