Takeda, Katsumi

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Takeda, Katsumi

THE INFO.

Name: Katsumi Takeda(Azumi Takeda)
Nickname: none whatever the rumors say
Age: 16
Gender: female
Appearance:Katsumi is no beautiful nor ugly... maybe not even pretty. She has short dirty brown hair that can easily get tangled, and usually something gets caught in it, wether it is a twig or even a bug. She is tall thin, very average curves and body. Her brown eyes just as boring as her hair. Unlike most girls she is not pale, she has a normal tan. She usually wears her cheap black ninja costume or the samurai outfits her dad owns. She someone wears a brown rough ugly kimono. However when other people describe her(and from the wanted posters) from all the rumors she is drop dead gorgeous, she also wears a samurai outfit but very form fitting and sexy. She has long LONG black(sometimes purple) hair that is tied in a high ponytail and is claimed to have red demonic eyes. No matter how off the description is from what she actually looks like many claimed she only slightly looks different(or identic) from the wanted posters(only is they meet each other). However Katsumi can be pretty...maybe...if she tried to take care of herself for once. However as she tries to improve herself as being a ninja she might end up improving herself on her looks. Right now she is on part 0.

part 0(not pretty)

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Part 1(slightly cute)

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Part 2 (cute)

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Part 3 (really pretty)

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Or part 3(really pretty)

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Personality: Katsumi personality is also boring, though mostly quiet. She can easily get flustered or angry. If she is in a conversation she is the most animated person ever, going from extreme emotions similar to comedy expressions. (fake anime tears, angry wtf, head dropped down with hand on the nearest wall, comedy faint, acne falling on head, etc). However with all the rumors about her(99.99% is false) people will assume that is she scary, strong willed, smart, strong, fast, and beautiful, when hearing her name. They make up rumors about impossible accomplishments that never actually happened, such as defeating the seven swordmens in one epic battle, or running around the world in 10 days, defeating over 100 ninjas. When first meeting her you don't even realize its her(especially since the description looks nothing like her) but once she greets herself along with telling her name you either are scared(from the rumors), or wanting revenge(for killing someone she never even met), sometimes respect (wanting to battle or learn under her). Many claimed to even have been defeated by her before(even if she never met them). She could lose a battle and still the opponent would say he/she lost. No matter how many times she will explain the truth they assume she is just being honest,or that she is underestimating them. She is pretty good at dancing and singing(more of the popular music of today).

Clan:none
Nindō:none

THE NINJA.

Origin:Konoha
Affiliation: hidden in the leaves
Rank:genin
Specialties: weaponry
main:kenjutsu
sub:exotic
Elemental Affinities: none at the moment
Combat Style: Katsumi hasn't been faced in a real battle, so chance are she might prefer to run away. She can fit in the weirdest places. She did learn a bit from her father about being a samurai but nothing she could use yet in battle. She might also tried to bargain her way out or avoid any signs of a fight. However she is training hard to find he own style.
Special Characteristics: none at the moment

THE BACKGROUND.

History:History
Her farther was a brave samurai who was skilled in the way of the sword. He protected very important people and captured many dangerous men.. He was well-known even more as a honorable ninja. Her whole family line were ninjas, just like Katsumi herself. The only problem is her father and mother didn't want her to be a ninja when she was born. They left their country to live in an outside village not too far from Village Hidden in the Leaves. She grew up with fantasizing she was a samurai or ninja. She would steal her mom's old style ninja outfit or her dad's samurai clothes and head into the fields to pretend and play with her bamboo sword(yes even at the age of 16).

first rumor
One day a man came to her challenging her; apparently the man was blind since he called her by his old rival's name. Then he started to attack her with his sword, and perform a few justsus. She only managed to dodge them all when she fell backwards into the nearest hole. The man out of nowhere started to cough blood and fell. Running to his aid he tells her(still thinking she was his old rival) that his eyes were going bad and his heart condition was becoming worse. Then he started to talk to himself in a short bio-summary. The man used to be a powerful ninja, and could have been one of the seven swordsmen if it wasn't for his secret heart condition. Even with his bad eyesight he managed to keep the information from others. He holds the sword to her his sword and explains that he might not make it, that she must take care of the sword. He continues saying the sword is extremely heavy and unless given directly too it's pretty much almost impossible to use it let alone pick it up. Of course since she wasn't a ninja, once the sword was placed in her hands it dragged her to the floor, making her use all her force to simply pull her crushed fingers out. He continued saying that it might be slightly heavy even for a strong ninja like her(big understatement). After a couple moments of trying to explain to him he was not his old rival he figured it out and asked for her name. She told his name and punched him on the chest trying to be friendly and not make him mad. Unfortunately because of his bad heart condition he died right then and there. Freaking out she started to shake him back and forth slapping him to wake up and not be dead; making matters worse a old couple(they also knew the man and his strength) who overheard and saw what happened mistook her as some powerful samurai looking ninja and snuck away terrified.

motivation
Ever since the guy died she would hide the sword under some branches(despite the fact no body ever came to the field in years). Every morning she would sneak out and spend hours and hours trying to move the sword, then she would work out(epic fail i might add) by punching or kicking the air, running in place, dodging at nothing(lame comebacks included) and continued on trying to move the sword. A week later of exercising and additional running she managed to move the sword an inch. She probably could have moved it another inch if the fact that the sword glowed a tiny bit where her hands were(chakra flow a bit) which freaked her out and causing her to fall.

second rumor
The second time came a man who asked if he seen a female named Katsumi Takeda. She said that was her and then he automatically got into a fighting stance. The man was friend/rival to the first guy that died and now wanted to challenge this oh-so powerful girl that where embedded in these rumors. Unlike the first man his he was not dying of disease or blind as a bat, which terrified her with the thought of getting killed. What she didn't know was the man was extremely picky to how his battle went. He was good at predicting the obvious moves. Such as usually when he did a surprise attack his opponents would either block/dodge or counterattack and from there he could determine whether he would lose or not. Much to his surprise she didn't do any of those three, and the man's blade was only a centimeter away from her face before he stopped. He simply stared at her confused while her heart raced with fear. Then he soon started to freak out since he couldn't predict what was on her mind(my guess....nothing). So he did what he usually does in any battles he loses, kneel down and praise his opponent. Of course to her luck it was waaay over dramatic despite the fact she tried shush him and try to stop him from talking,"I,{insert name here}, acknowledge and accept my defeat to Lady Katsumi Takeda, a strong and worthy opponent, samurai and ninja...maybe your journey stay a pleasant one"...something stupid along the lines like that. Another way to worsen her day was people were around to only hear what happened
and run off telling people.

moving the sword and learning
After another two weeks of hard training she managed to move it a foot without using all her strength, it was getting easier and easier. The glow would happened once in a rare occasion. After hiding the sword under the branches her father came out holding his other samurai uniform handing it to her. He told her to go inside and put it on, only to come back out wearing it. He had decided to show her the basics for using a katana(for her a wooden bamboo) and the way of the samurai. She was all excited and extremely happy to do more than pretend.

third rumor and the rest
Katsumi decided to get drunk over regular pickle juice(some people can easily do that) upset at the thought of stupid rumors. She was a bit afraid someone might want revenge and she couldn't fight. She got up not looking where she was going and bumped into a muscular looking man with a mean face. Out of the corner of her eye next to him she saw a picture of his face on the wanted poster...-gulp- Sweat dropping, she tried to apologize and avoid a fight, she ended up making it worse. He picked her up by the back collar and walked outside while the others were worried about what might happen to her. No one came out and no one was around outside when he told her to fight him(non-ninja). Out of nowhere ten poison darts sped through the trees and in various places of the thug, killing him almost immediately. Somewhere in the trees a ninja dressed in black said to herself "that is for killing my sister" and disappeared, right when everyone came out. The lady was nowhere to be found nor there to back her up when she tried to explain to the villagers it wasn't her. They ignored her 'modesty' and cheered heading back in for more drinks. She took this chance to run and escape. The next day she wore a hood and slipped in to see if the rumors were still going on, and yes but not about yesterday. People where literally claiming from left and right about things about things she had never done. "I one time saw Lady Katsumi take down 99 ninjas including me", "yeah i think i heard that too,... in fact i think i lost to her once", "what a beautiful girl, i wish i had extremely long purple hair like that", "really? i thought it was more black", "someone told me her eyes can change to a demonic red and that her name is silent killer" "no it's not it's dead raven" "your both stupid besides she is a samurai ninja" "... i think she gave me a kiss one time..." "really the only thing she gave me was my ass on a silver platter" "that stupid &%^ killed my sister".

wanted posters
There also had been posters of her(not really) for crimes she never done. She didn't have to worry about it too much because the image looked nothing like her...NOTHING. She had long beautiful dark purple(some posters with black hair) hair tied up high. She wore a extremely sexy samurai outfit with a long ass sword. Red eyes, hair flowing curves everywhere, etc. Sadly enough she kinda wished she looked like that...except for the fact she was on a wanted poster...the only truth about the poster was her name spelled right.

Konoha, kage, academystudent/genin?
Since her parents found out about sword, the rumors, and wanted posters they also tried to explain the truth to others, but no one would listen. They decided to send her to village hidden in the leaves, where she originally was born from. The only person who automatically believed her was the Kage, who offered to help her catch up in being a ninja. Not only does she have to go to being a academy student, but she needs to find someone to learn under in order to catch up as a genin. Of course the Kage allowed her with a fake name, to avoid problems. Azumi Takeda.

Roleplay Sample:Katsumi stood there with a serious look on her while both hands grasped the bamboo sword. Her eyes shined with determination keeping focus on her target, without any movement. The wind automatically started to shift slightly giving an epic hair blow for her. The field was dead silent and the wind stopped. Without warning she made the first move throwing her sword above her head and yelling with all her might. The first step was her last since her foot got caught her in samurai uniform forcing her to trip. Her head hitting the wooden dummy with the words "stupid enemy" written on it. She started to rolled side to side animated tears shooting out from her eyes. "Ahhhh, you stupid dummy that hurt". She got up all dizzy and kicked it.

For no reason at all she started to run into town and went inside a pub. OUt of breathe and ignored by pretty much everyone she headed towards the bar, where the bartender gave her a wondering look. She asked for a large bottle of pickle juice;depressed she slammed her head on the table as if she was already drunk. The bartender who was simply standing and staring at her with the up most confusion turned to get the strange request. After three bottles she was drunk...i think; spinning in her chair all happy and weirdly optimistic.

A large man came through the door bringing rumbling from under his feet as he stepped. The once loud pub was now quiet as people started to turn their heads nervously towards him. He was big...large...smelly... and dirty;even the bloody axe he carried by his side was cleaner than him. He strolled up to the counter next to katsumi not bothering to look at the stupid girl. Still spinning she accidentally kick him which got his attention. Her drunken state was gone in a flash when she realized what she did.

She started to apologize "oh sorry i didn't mean too, you know how stupid people are...not that you are stupid- i am just saying you look stupi- i mean i am the stupid one for calling you stupid-what i mean is i didn't really called you stupid and-" she stopped when the back up her collar was pulled up along with the rest of her. The was carrying her like a pet by the collar and directing her towards outside. His face hard to tell whether he was mad or if that was how he always looked.

He kicked her out the door where a chibi version of her flew and landed perfectly on the butt, skidding and hopping to a stop. "Name..." he said his expression not changing...it was probably stuck or something. "Um..." she started to sweat like a pig, as baby pigs in the background passed her by, "Katsumi Takeda". A moment of silence and he pulled a oily looking piece of paper from his long tangled hair...he kind look like some kind of ugly viking. He looked at her,then the paper, at her, then the paper, and at her... then turned the paper around to show her. "i should have recognized you from the wanted poster you look exactly like her"

...WHAT!? Not only was he ugly but apparently stupid...or blind. The poster, in which she tried to explain to many people(everybody) looked nothing like her. The girl on the poster was one long sexy black(or purple sometimes) hair, she had short brown hair. The girl was tall and had red eyes with ginormous boobs. And as much as she would like to pretend she looked like that, still doesn't take away the fact it wasn't obviously her. "THAT DOESN'T LOOK ANYTHING LIKE ME" she yelled little flames appeared from nowhere. He did another comparison and said "you right...." "you changed clothes" T-T. "i heard you killed medusa" (SHE DOESN'T EVEN EXIST, DON'T MAKE RUMORS WORSE) More small flames appeared as she tried to say what she was thinking, however nothing came out.

The next thing she next, about 10 needles flew out from the nearest trees hitting the man in various spots. The man flopped down like a frozen statue in a heartbeat. A lady wearing completely black jumped down and said "that is for my sister you bastard" and disappeared before Katsumi could even thank her. Right then and there(BASTARDS) everyone came out and only saw him dead and Katsumi alive; next thing they knew they all started cheering caring her into the pub to celebrate. Unfortunately the door was too small and she hit the wall and fell back on the floor, no one bothering to turn around to pick her up. She dragged up and headed for the nearest window listening in on the cheering still. "I saw the whoooole thing"(LIAR) "I heard she killed 100 ninjas"(WHERE DID YOU GET THAT FROM) "i heard she made a tree grow in 10 seconds with her beauty"(HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE) "i heard she fought five kages...and won"(I DID NOT AND YOU HESITATED) "i am her ex-lover"(WHO ARE YOU).

Her body deflated and laid on the floor to be carried away by the wind.

THE ARSENAL.

Jutsu, Weaponry, Items etc.

1 bamboo sword

Name: bamboo
Rank: E-D
Type: bamboo sword
Quantity: 1
Description: Takeda, Katsumi Wooden_Sword

A simple plain sword made from bamboo. A child's toy where one can easily replace it, if broken, almost anywhere or in any store. It's pretty smooth so one doesn't have to worry about splinters.

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Quote :: Rank:academy student/genin

We don't have Academy Student as a rank here, you'll need to wswitch to Genin and, at the very least, put in 1 specialty/element as well as add at least your academy jutsu.

Your history is also quite confusing on a few accounts, such as "Village Hidden in the Heavens".

I suggest that you revise your history and ask someone from the US community (Staff and/or members alike) for assistance.

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- Indicate which sub-sections of weaponry you will specialize in e.g Main: Kenjutsu, Sub: Exotic.

- Your personality is confusing, I don't understand how someone at genin rank would gain a reputation like that in the first place? Perhaps see some approved apps for guidance.

- Go to the encyclopedia and use the jutsu that are created for you. I would think you atleast would need some academy jutsu or you wouldn't be a genin. You are allowed 15 in total.

- You are not allowed to use that weapons template you need to change it to the generic one. There are weapons already created for you in the encyclopedia so I suggest you use them also.

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she hasn't learned the jutsus yet. Once she is approved i am having her train through them.

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-You still may want to put in your 2nd specialty in which you may want to train. Otherwise your character wouldn't be able to learn anything but weaponry until she went through the proper training of learning her 2nd specialty before she learns the jutsu for it.

-That weapon is what I would consider a custom so you must change it's template.

-It seems you may want to train for you academy jutsu but I think it would be in your best interest to at least start with them....then again that's my opinion.

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well... i have an idea i will put the basic jutsus and have her as a genin but until i train the basic jutsus i can not use them nor say i am actually a genin(will claim to be a student academy). once i finish the training then i will be considered genin. That way you don't have to through all the work of changing me from academy student to genin just for a few posts. The weapon template was changed from the first to the only other one i could find, and i am still told to change it...not which one it is now?

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