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| ![Aimi Ayaka [Konohagakure Genin] [Finished] Anime3](https://2img.net/h/cdn.pimpmyspace.org/media/pms/c/93/ok/1w/anime3.jpg) AYAKA, AIMI.THE INFO.
Name:Ayaka, Aimi
Nickname: Reddie, Redhead, Crimsonlocks, Bloodhead, Half-Blood, Crimson Princess of Ayaka
Age:15
Gender:Female
Appearance: Despite what Aimi may think about herself, her appearance would apply to the category of "pretty".Her exotic crimson red hair is a common trait of her clan mixed with other blood, it has been a target for her nicknames ever since Aimi remebers herself.Her face is similar to her mother's as everyone notes:full, pouty lips, small, playfull nose, large, deep eyes.Aimi's eyes have been famous between her friends to be a perfect mirror to how she feels, her lips may lie, but her eyes always tell the truth, never have she been capable of hiding what she feels or thinks when someone looks in her wide, blue eyes.
She is as tall as everyone in her clan, about 1,8 metres, she doesn't have a bulky physique, looking not a small bit different from your average genin girl.She is known to be a little pale, therefore it is easily seen when she lies as crimson blood flows through her face every time she feels any sort of emotion.Her face is usually without an emotion, to maintain her cold unreadable mind, however girl is just learning to control her mindset and emotions, therefore her face often breaks into different expressions, representing her feelings.
She is also known to be a little slim.That may be because of her height, may also be a trait inherited from her clan.She usually wears unusual clothes for a kunoichi, often resolving to apparel more formal clothing, however since she often gets annoyed when her favourite outfits get ruined, she started to change the habit, wearing more simple clothes like t-shirts and such, still wearing accesories and apparel dressing.She usually wears her forehead protector either as a belt, when on a mission, or on her hair, when she wears them loose on cassual days.
Personality: Aimi used to be known as one of the nicest people of her clan, oftenly helping old ladies and people with their chores and doing errands, these days, after graduating the Academy, she learnt the smell of battle, letting the traits of her clan show up.She is nice when outside of the battle, sometimes even trying to avoid it, however if her opponent shows no such wish or disrespects her friends or people of Konohagakure, she fights with all she's got, having a protective nature, often resorting to risky tactics, just to save her dear ones or defend their honor.She also possesses a feel of pride, present in her clan.She also respects life, however has no limits of taking one if it's a person, threatening well being of her friends or village.She tries to be very friendly, when possible, however she doesn't have much friends, because she is sometimes disrespected in her clan, as she is only half-Ayaka, even if she is niece of clan leader, and normal folks still feel a bit cold about Ayaka clan.If she finds a friend, however, she puts every ounce of herself into it.She isn't fond of working with her team, since it is a new thing for her, however she views it as a new horizon and is eager to learn it.
One of her more common and visible trait, usually treated as her main weakness, is her lack of self confidence.Even if she surpasses most of children in her clan of her age, elders view her nice and funny nature as a sign of weakness and passes that down to their spawns, who oftenly treat her as a weak kunoichi, which over time formed huge layer of lack of self confidence within her heart.Even when she is winning a battle, clearly surpassing most of genin her age, she views herself as weak deep down and questions if she is strong enough to protect those dear to her.Likes swords and cutting weapons of all sorts, while most of her age girls were playing tea parties, she was playing war with boys, swinging stick imagining it's a katana, similar to what her mother used.[/b]
Clan:Ayaka Clan
Nindō: A Strong Person Can Protect Himself, Stronger, Can Protect Others
THE NINJA.
Origin: Konohagakure
Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Raiton - Lightning Release/Fuuton - Wind Release
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Combat Style: [spoiler] Prefers a fair one on one fight, often trying to be a tank or mistress of diversion on the battlefield, her abilities to cause havok and scatter enemy's strategy with relentless attacks and create diversions for her allies are known and praised in the Academy.If opponent doesn't fight in a fair way, she gets all the more enraged, boosting her power.Behind that she can think of strategy fairly well, since her role as a tank is to survive the battle as long as possible and observe her opponent's strategy.Is also known for her acrobatic close combat fighting style, however infamous as a terrible stealth kunoichi, prefering face-to-face combat.Often likes teasing her opponents to hit her, as an infamous trap for her Seishin Gado jutsu which ironically absorbs all the hate and reflects to opponent.She tends to show a sadomasochismical side sometimes enjoying getting hit, however just as a trap to activate her Seichin Style.
Special Characteristics:
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Strength
[spoiler]Name: Improved Strength
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: The first level in the art of strength accessible to those who have undergone intensive training in increasing their raw power. The possessor of this talent has an increased strength of 20% which makes them slightly stronger. They can lift larger objects such as large rocks and toss them considerable distances. They can also now naturally deliver more powerful physical blows that can cause agonizing damage to targets.
THE BACKGROUND.
History:
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A very anticipated child in Ayaka clan, as she was a child of clan leader's brother, who himself had no heirs to the clan rule, therefore was destined to inherit the title of leader of her clan after her father, if clan's leader had no heirs of his own
After birth inspected by the clan's council to decide her name, since she was healthy, her presence was welcomed in the clan and she was not given away to the orphanage, the elders gave her name based from love shown from her parents (Ai) and her natural beauty inherited from her mother (Mi), giving her name Aimi.
Grown surrounded by love in her family, however some kids only befriended her because of her status by orders of their parents, some avoided and bullied her for her being not both side Ayaka - Full-Blood, even though clan's abilities are passed if at least 0,2 part is Ayaka blood.
At the age of five, while protecting her bullied friend beaten some bullies into a pulp, which made her a menace in the eyes of other clan members, also accidentaly broke a part of her friend's house after learning her clan Hijutsu while playing, her clumsiness further deepened the image of a menace to society.
Enrolled the Academy at the age of seven.Was a hard studying student, popular for her nice and funny attitude and hated by some because of her clan, which then was new to Konoha.After her mother's death in a mission, started working harder and harder, to forget the pain, trying her best at everything, not to return to reality, training until she broke to sleep.
Finished the Academy with best marks out of almost every class, failed only at stealth classes since that was not her way of a ninja.Trained hard with her father, bonding even more and together overcoming the pain of her mother's death, gaining some acknowledgement from clan elder as a hard working honorary kunoichi, however still made fun at because of her deep bonds with her friends and often sarcastic point of view.
After graduation and becoming a genin, formed her nindo, to become strong so she could protect the weak, and prevent kids from the pain she felt as she was a child, after a Rogue ninja killed her friend genin on a rampage in the village, she followed and fought him, almost getting herself killed in the process, however having her life spared because of her ferociousness in battle and strong sense of honor also Rogue ninja's feeling she's unworthy of a honorary death.
Roleplay Sample:
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When Kenai crushed the poor ninja's arm, Ruka thought "Oh boy....In one side of her she was glad the fight began, but she knew nothing good might get out of it.When Diwa scolded them for a second she was angry at him for being so indifferent, the ninja did touch Kenai and insult both of them numerous times.However second after she understood that he does actually makes sense, she got sad for the fact they were wrong and the guy got hurt because of Kenai's inner demons and could've died because of Ruka's shear dumbness and boldness.
"You're right...Sorry Diwa."
She stepped forward, softly pushing Diwa aside and used most fo her chakra to catch the kunai.She was about to do the dumbest and most embarrasing thing ever, I swear if they start mocking me, I will disembowel them and hang their guts on a tree.She unzipped her backpack and took out the large med-kit.She took one jar of fatigue medicine out and went to the ninja.She then slightly bowed her head and gave the pack.The shear embarrasment really kept her blushed and she really wanted to kill someone now deep down.
"Please forgive my friend, she is not in the best of mood today and I want to apologise for her and offer this kit as a gift, inside you will some things to make a tourniquet out of and some medicine to fix the bone and wounds, in just few days your friend will be almost as he was, also you will find some money for the moral damage my friend and I could've caused you"
One of the ninja kicked her down.She intentionaly didn't dodge the kick.He just grunted, he offered no words so Ruka stood up and took the tags out of the sand, they seemed to be in working condition so she put them back.The ninja seemed to have lost their senses after they've seen they have been standing on explosives.Ruka bowed nearly to the ground.Her pride was eating her from inside and blush of shame dyed her as red as a tomatoe
"If you want us to beg for our lives....Then...I...
Her mouth just didn't open to say those words.She probably would've fought an army of ninjas but not apologising to those
"Well-the ninja asked.The fact that he was interested, made Ruka believe it's not pointless so she smashed her pride to pieces and shouted.
"I BEG OF YOU YOU BASTARDS LET US GO!!!
She viewed it as a challenge now to avoid this brawl since she put so much effort.The boss of the three laughed and turned around.
"Alright kiddies, enjoy your shameful lives, you've been ashamed enough..."
"Yeah we would get in trouble for killing kids in Konoha territory on a spying mission anyways"
Ruka turned around and started walking.She noticed she is still carrying the kunai the ninja threw at Diwa.She tossed it at a tree with a lot of effort.The tree fell sliced in two.She kept walking even if she didn't know the way.Diwa seemed to keep standing there.She didn't want anyone to talk to her now, she was angry and ashamed of herself.She thought they would probably laugh too, since it was already an official fight and Ruka got humiliated enough for an Ayaka to commit five suicides.She just kept walking looking down...
THE ARSENAL. Weaponry
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Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 1
Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
Academy Jutsu
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand.
Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kai • Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them.
Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: NA
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall.
Chakra Cost: 3
Clan Jutsu
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Improvised Jutsu
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Name: Shinku Inryoku no Jutsu (Vaacum Attraction Jutsu)
Rank:C
Type:Taijutsu
Range:Mid
Element:Wind
Description: User jumps on his/her hands and starts spinning fast, making a few metres radius long effect of vaacum sucking in.Jutsu really does no damage and has no element, except one generated from surrounding, however it does attract a person or small object in mid range towards user and may be a perfect distraction and followed by a taijutsu attack.
Chakra Cost:(while Gouryuko is active, together with it's continuous cost) 5
Name: Kikkan Ju no Jutsu(Machine Gun Jutsu)
Rank:C
Type:Taijutsu
Range:Close
Element:N/A
Description:User starts kicking or punching with incredible speed, trackable only by adept eye.While punches have no additional power, their speed and amount is the whole deal of jutsu.Also may be a perfect tanking jutsu with attracting attention to user.
Chakra Cost:(while Gouryuko is active, together with it's continuous cost) 7
Name: Migotona Utsukushi no Jutsu (Stunning Beauty Jutsu)
Rank:C
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:Close
Element:Raiton/Lightning Realease
Description:After performing Hand Seals user generates small static charge within one's body, making opponent's muscles feel numb and stunning opponent upon touch, effect also applies if user clashes with opponent's weapon if both weapons are conductors.
Chakra Cost:7
Name: Konoha Dai Senkou - Leaf Great Light Rotation
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user charges at their opponent and unleashes a powerful lateral kick aiming at the head that will spin his or her opponent away. This technique can certainly cause a head ache.
Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Kurotchishotto - Crotch Shot
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m)
Element: -
Description: Kurotchishotto is a humiliating taijutsu technique. By appearing in front of the opponent, the user will charge a small amount of chakra towards their dominant leg. Performing an upward kick at the opponents crotch area, they will be able to force them up into the air by a metre where a second attack could take place. If the victim was a male, a great deal of pain will be dealt after the kick has been made.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C-A (C in her case)
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Raiton (Lightning)
Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock.
Chakra Cost: C (5), B (10), A (20)
Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Fuuton (Wind)
Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will send a strong gust of wind towards his/her target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.
Chakra Cost: 5
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|  | | Emperor of Rock
Age : 32
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| | Subject: Re: Aimi Ayaka [Konohagakure Genin] [Finished] Mon 19 Sep 2011, 12:27 am | |
| Let me apologize for the wait. Now let's start with fixing this application.
Firstly you should fix the coding of the template. As for jutsus, well I skimmed through it and I saw that you have elemental taijutsus but you don't have ninjutsu as specialty. So I'm afraid you will have to remove those plus all the ninjutsus you have, expect the academy jutsus. Unless you remove weaponry. After you have done those things we will see what to do further. |
| | | | Chris
Age : 29
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| | Subject: Re: Aimi Ayaka [Konohagakure Genin] [Finished] Mon 19 Sep 2011, 12:53 am | |
| Hello Ruka! This application is very well written, so congratulations. I'm currently over looking your clan, so please hang tight. Hopefully, we can get both your app, and you clan approved very soon.
Anyways, adding to what Rock Boy said, please seperate your improvised jutsu in to categories such as Taijutsu and Ninjutsu - Sub Categories for Ninjutsu specifically. Even if you don't really like the cannon techniques we offer, still try to add one or two of them in ^_^ Also I will look at the jutsu very soon, however till then, all I can say is that they all seem to be related to the Clan and as such, would be considered Clan Jutsu, whilst your current Clan jutsu are in fact the Kekkei Genkai. No matter. I will hopefully be able to provide more insight on what you can do to get your jutsu approved soon. |
| | | | Ruka
Age : 32
Posts : 1495
| | Subject: Re: Aimi Ayaka [Konohagakure Genin] [Finished] Mon 19 Sep 2011, 9:18 am | |
| - RockBoy wrote:
- Let me apologize for the wait. Now let's start with fixing this application.
Firstly you should fix the coding of the template. As for jutsus, well I skimmed through it and I saw that you have elemental taijutsus but you don't have ninjutsu as specialty. So I'm afraid you will have to remove those plus all the ninjutsus you have, expect the academy jutsus. Unless you remove weaponry. After you have done those things we will see what to do further.
Well those aren't elements from the user him/herself but those generated by nature in a chain reaction, so I didn't think I'd have to, I mean a Fire-Type could use wind element jutsu if he wasn't the one generating the wind energy, I'll try to fix it. |
| | | | Emperor of Rock
Age : 32
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| | Subject: Re: Aimi Ayaka [Konohagakure Genin] [Finished] Mon 19 Sep 2011, 9:30 am | |
| | Actually he couldn't, unless he had Wind element. And as far as I see the Vacuum attraction is in fact wind element. Also to use the elements from nature, you would still need the appropriate element to use them plus you would have to be a ninjutsu user. |
| | | | Ruka
Age : 32
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| | Subject: Re: Aimi Ayaka [Konohagakure Genin] [Finished] Mon 19 Sep 2011, 10:18 am | |
| | OK minor edits, when clan will get edited, I'll finish editing... |
| | | | Chris
Age : 29
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| | Subject: Re: Aimi Ayaka [Konohagakure Genin] [Finished] Mon 19 Sep 2011, 6:30 pm | |
| | The coding is still wrong. For some reason everything is bold D: Please fix that. |
| | | | Ruka
Age : 32
Posts : 1495
| | Subject: Re: Aimi Ayaka [Konohagakure Genin] [Finished] Mon 19 Sep 2011, 7:32 pm | |
| | Yeah fixed the bolds, added few cannon jutsu, when my clan is balanced and made i'll add few clan jutsu |
| | | | Flare
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