Miwaku Clan

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Clan Name: Miwaku
Location: -
Signature Traits:

Preserved Body

The Miwaku clan was the result of a dangerous experiment that first sought out to create a human being with a permanently preserved body while still being alive. This experiment was a success and so Miwaku clan members have a body that never ages and therefore does not die from age. These bodies are very corpse like in appearance and the internal organs are reduced to nothing but fleshy messes with the blood running through them being a fine red dust. This body does not need to perform any normal bodily functions such as breathing or eating either. Miwaku's bodies also feel no pain and limbs can be torn off with no danger to the Miwaku. They also have a seemingly unlimited amount of stamina assuming their chakra hunger is satisfied. Since they are essential chakra based beings, physical harm does effectively nothing to them. This means that they can perform normally harmful jutsu and not have to suffer the adverse effects. As long as the Miwaku has sources of chakra around them (trees, animals, people) and they remain in a normal state they are able to reach an equilibrium of chakra gain and loss and have no 'active' upkeep for their body. However, if a Miwaku performs techniques that are physically straining such as Taijutsu or weaponry techniques it will cost them 5 more CP for the energy used in conjunction with the actual technique.

Chakra Hunger

Miwaku require no physical sustenance for their bodies. However, they do require spiritual sustenance. Miwaku feed off chakra from their surroundings and can actually 'taste' different chakras. They can tell the difference between everyone's chakra due to the subtle changes in its 'taste' This can be used as a tracking technique or as a sensory technique since they are able to 'taste' chakra. This is done by inhaling the air and picking up chakra residue from their surroundings. Miwaku's tasted buds are altered so that this energy actually has a taste to it like food would to a normal person. Weaker chakra taste bitter and the stronger the chakra is the sweeter it becomes. Bitter chakra is repulsive to Miwaku but sweeter chakra is like ambrosia to them. C-rank Miwaku can taste chakra from 10 meters away. This increases by another 10 meters every rank and then jumps to 50 meters around them at S-rank. Miwaku love the taste of chakra and often grow an addiction towards exotic types of it.

Chakra Digestion

The Miwaku's otherwise unstoppable physical ability is hindered by the Miwaku's bloated state that they must enter in order to process incoming chakras. A Miwaku can absorb chakra from living things around them with no problem with the exception of humans. When a Miwaku drains a human's chakra it goes straight to their chakra pool but is not use able until it is processed. After draining 3 posts worth of chakra, the Miwaku's body begins to process the chakra. This processing takes one post and during this post the Miwaku loses all of their strength and stamina and become the equivalent of a defenseless citizen in terms of physical abilities. After this post the Miwaku regains their normal levels of strength and the chakra that has been drained in the 3 posts becomes added to their chakra pool as use able CP.

Multi-Colored Chakra

Since Miwaku clan members condense foreign chakra into their own chakra pool they have a tendency of having odd colored chakra. Whenever they absorb another kind of chakra it leaves a residue in their own and changes its color. This usually leads to a black colored chakra after the Miwaku has absorbed enough different colors of chakra.

Kekkei Genkai:

Kuroi-Ana Seishou [Black Hole Energy]

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Miwaku clan members are essential 'beings' of chakra. Their well being has more to do with their chakra than their physical state and they are able to contain much more chakra than the average person in their bodies. This is due to their strangely oriented and odd functioning chakra system. Miwaku's chakra system is very unique. Instead of spreading all over the body and branching off, it is condensed into one small area and remains in that spot until moved around. This spot is called their Kuroi-Ana and it is located inside their skull. This centralized chakra system makes it extremely difficult for Miwaku's to perform jutsu that involve chakra being focused into one spot since they must work against their chakra system in order to achieve them. This makes Water Walking and Tree Climbing impossible to perform until S-rank. However, the chakra is so condensed that the Miwaku actually have a higher capacity for it and they are even able to exceed the normal amount of chakra their body can contain. All Miwaku's have 20 more CP and they are able to obtain up to 50 CP more than than their max amount via clan jutsu. The condensing properties of this chakra is used in clan jutsu as both offensive and defensive as well.

Like the name of the KKG suggests, Miwaku are like black holes of energy. They serve as focal point for a vacuum that sucks chakra around them towards the hand that their Kuroi-Ana is located. This constant feeding off of chakra from their surroundings acts as an energy source for Miwakus like eating and drinking would for a normal person. This causes plants and wildlife to die within the radius of this effect due to the chakra drainage caused by the Miwaku. This drainage also steals chakra from other people or ninja in the area. The amount of chakra stolen and the area of this effect are dependent on the rank of the Miwaku.

C-Rank: The radius of the Miwaku's chakra draining is 5 meters and it saps 5 CP per post from life within this area. This isn't enough to noticeable wither plants or kill wildlife and is unnoticeable to people.

B-Rank: The radius of the Miwaku's chakra draining is 8 meters and it saps 8 CP per post from life within this area. The effect is still not enough to be noticeable.

A-Rank: The radius of the Miwaku's chakra draining is 10 meters and it saps 10 CP per post from life within this area. This is a noticeable drain on people and plants and animals can be seen dying in the area of this effect.

S-Rank: The radius remains 10 meters but the amount of chakra drained per post is increased to 15 CP. This is extremely taxing on people and wherever the Miwaku walks becomes devoid of life.

The curse of the Miwaku clan is that this effect is difficult to control and while it is active they always leave a trail of destruction wherever they walk. This usually prevents them from living a civilized life due to their insatiable hunger for chakra from their surroundings. This also makes team work extremely difficult so they also lean more towards solitude rather than team work. However, their are ways for a Miwaku to control this ability. Miwaku are actually able to limit their chakra draining to one person or object. This is done by keeping their chakra pool in contact with the individual object they want to drain. This can also be done via a chakra channel between the object and the Miwaku (Example: Chakra strings). If this constant fueling of chakra was ever disrupted the Miwaku would start to lose their strength and fortitude as if they are being starved at a rapid rate. If they lack anything to feed off of or lose the ability to feed for 3 consecutive posts the Miwaku slips into a coma like state until a source of chakra that they can drain from comes withing 5 feet of them. This coma like state can also be activated willfully if need be. Another downfall of this otherwise powerful ability is that Miwaku are completely dependent on the chakra that they drain from others. Their core amount of CP is there to maintain themselves and give them a source of energy in place of the sugars that a normal human body would run on. If this pool is deducted from, the Miwaku immediately feels fatigued and weakened in proportion to the amount taken from it. This is especially felt by lower ranking Miwaku's due to their smaller chakra pools. Once their base chakra pool is deducted from in a topic it can not be restored via the draining effect and is only restored after the topic.

History:

Nearly 1000 years ago in a distant island unknown to most of the world there was a war. This island was known as the Island of Swords because that was the most well known thing to the inhabitants of it, swords. There were two civilizations on the island; one that wanted to branch off and try to make contact with the rest of the world and one that wanted to stay secluded. These conflicting ideas sparked many wars and caused many people to die for their opinions. These wars had been going on for hundreds of years when the group in favor of expeditions came upon a strange traveler that they had found lost at sea. The traveler spoke of the outside world and constantly used terms such as chakra and ninjutsu, things that were never heard of on the island. The Island of Swords was a land that favored technology over spiritual energies and they never unlocked the power of the human body without giving it weapons and equipment. The traveler was shocked at this and agreed to help them merge the two concepts.

For a long time they had been working on creating the perfect soldier. A warrior that could not die and needed no food to survive. Essentially a one man army. They had almost reached this level of technology but they still needed an alternate power source. If the super soldier wasn't going to run on food and water it needed to run on something. They attempted to make a bionic soldier but these attempts failed and they were left looking for another power source. The traveler filled in this void with the concept of chakra and after a few experiments they were certain that their idea would come into fruition. But to make the perfect soldier they needed the perfect body. This perfect body was supplied by a high ranking officer by the name of Funjin. He was the deadliest soldier on the battle field and they knew that he was their best bet. So they took him in against his will and started the procedure. They made him into a creature that required no human basics to live that only lived off chakra itself. However, the plan backfired and all of the scientists and the traveler died soon after having all of the chakra drained from their body. Funjin, the now super soldier, then went on to drain all of the life on the island before leaving it and going off into the world that the traveler spoke of.

Clan Jutsu:

Core Techniques

Code:: [b]Name:[/b] Kuroi-Ana Houmon [Black Hole Call]
[b]Rank:[/b] C-S
[b]Type:[/b] -
[b]Range:[/b] C:5m/B:8m/A:10m/S:10m
[b]Element:[/b] -
[b]Description:[/b] Kuroi-Ana Houmon [Black Hole Call] is a passive ability that is always active. This technique creates a field of 'chakra gravity' around the clan member that draws chakra from their surroundings to their Kuroi-Ana. People inside of the area of effect have 5 CP drained from them every post when the Miwaku is C-rank. This drainage is increased to 8 CP per post at B-rank, 10 CP at A-rank, and 15 CP at S-Rank.
[b]Chakra Cost:[/b] -

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Ready to be checked.

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Quote :: The Miwaku clan was the result of a dangerous experiment that first sought out to create a human being with a permanently preserved body while still being alive. This experiment was a success and so Miwaku clan members have a body that never ages and therefore does not die from age. These bodies are very corpse like in appearance and the internal organs are reduced to nothing but fleshy messes with the blood running through them being a fine red dust. This body does not need to perform any normal bodily functions such as breathing or eating either. Miwaku's bodies also feel no pain and limbs can be torn off with no danger to the Miwaku. They also have an unlimited amount of stamina assuming their chakra hunger is satisfied. Since they are essential chakra based beings, physical harm does effectively nothing to them. This means that they can perform normally harmful jutsu and not have to suffer the adverse effects.

There would need to be a specific CP drain per IC post which occurs for your body to be able to actually function, let alone on charka. This CP should increase the more that a Miwaku causes stress on their body (i.e even though it is not physical any stress whether it was mental or physical would cause you to use more chakra to sustain a normal state). Also, can a Miwaku be affected mentally e.g. genjutsu.

Quote :: Miwaku require no physical sustenance for their bodies. However, they do require spiritual sustenance. Miwaku feed off chakra from their surroundings and can actually 'taste' different chakras. They can tell the difference between everyone's chakra due to the subtle changes in its 'taste' This can be used as a tracking technique or as a sensory technique since they are able to 'taste' chakra from 50 meters around them. Miwaku love the taste of chakra and often grow an addiction towards exotic types of it.

Ok, so this is a chakra sensory type based around sense. It needs to be better explained to coincide with taste (much like Kiba's sense of smell) like strengths and weaknesses such as a foul tasting tech could distrupt etc. Give it a tiered range per rank (with 50m still the highest for S).

- Regarding your KKG, I do no like the fact that you are simply able to suck up chakra from your surroundings passively. In your clan description you justify it as the only way you can survive as you need chakra like normal people need food, sleep etc. There, your technique cannot be passive but an actual technique which has to be activated, consumes chakra (less than taken obviously). But, your character actually doesn't need to anything whereas normal people have to actively stay alive. There would need to be two separate pools of chakra in my opinion. One as your survival pool of chakra where it is used for your vital (necessity) aspects of a Miwaku's life, then another pool of chakra which stores chakra leech from your surroundings. There would need to be definitive pool limits on the chakra (much like how the jinchuuriki's CP are capped at an amount).

- Also, I don't logistically see your two chakra pools being located in your palms. Such a small physical area to hold chakra isn't practical. I would suggest places them on either side of your chest cavities. You should also make a note that if a clan member was to receive a fatal blow (i.e sword stabbed directly through your concentrated chakra pool area) then you would physically die.

Quote :: This centralized chakra system makes it extremely difficult for Miwaku's to perform jutsu that involve chakra being focused into one spot since they must work against their chakra system in order to achieve them. This makes jutsu such as Water Walking or other jutsu that involve such focus impossible to perform until S-rank.

You need to specify this more as it doesn't overly make too much sense. To make it easier you should generalize this over a specialty or chakra in itself, i.e all chakra based technique's cost one rank higher or something.

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-Changed it so that Taijutsu and weaponry techniques have an extra cost tacked to them due to the strain.

-Changed the chakra taste to a literal taste of chakra and made weaker chakra repulsive to them.

-I don't really understand what you're saying about the actual KKG. I know that you said that it shouldn't be a passive ability and should instead be an activated ability. However, wouldn't that conflict with what you said earlier with the upkeep or drain on their chakra pool to remain active and all that? Having it active 24/7 is more of a curse I would think because it eliminates the possibility for team work and is really an inconvenience for everything besides combat. As for the separation of pools...

Quote :: All Miwaku's have 20 more CP and they are able to obtain up to 50 CP more than than their max amount via clan jutsu.

Quote :: Their core amount of CP is there to maintain themselves and give them a source of energy in place of the sugars that a normal human body would run on. If this pool is deducted from, the Miwaku immediately feels fatigued and weakened in proportion to the amount taken from it. This is especially felt by lower ranking Miwaku's due to their smaller chakra pools.

This means that they have a 50 CP 'drain pool' and a larger than normal 'regular pool' that causes them to tire if they touch it. I have added that their regular pool can not be restored by their draining effect in topics but beyond that I'm not really sure what you're asking for.

-Regarding the chakra pool locations, I arbitrarily chose a spot because it isn't of great importance. They only have one chakra pool (it says either the left or right palm) and it is small due to it being condensed. Like the name suggests, it's like a black hole. However, I'll move it to the cranium since that seems like a more appropriate place. As for the being stabbed resulting in death, that doesn't really make much sense since chakra is an energy and being hit with a physical object shouldn't have such an effect.

-It's difficult for them to perform them because chakra around them gravitates to one spot. So they would be working against themselves by trying to move it somewhere else in the body and then keep it there. I changed it to just Water Walking and Tree Climbing.

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(What is the deal with this clan due to the developments know in the staff lounge. You still want this?)

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Okay, this needs to be checked again. I have added Chakra Digestion and I have made some changes to the KKG to make it more friendly to being around other people.

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I don't like the idea of this being a passive ability at all. It would need to be a technique similar in function to that of Pein's gravitation abilities. It would need to be activated and have a delay until used again. The constant draining of chakra around you would make you nearly invincible as you could suck the chakra out of any technique that comes within 10m of you.

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This clan isn't going to work. Feel free to archive it.

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Archived.