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| Subject: Kanu Unchou[Konoha Genin] Fri 16 Sep 2011, 11:59 pm | |
| Unchou, KanuTHE INFO. Name: Unchou, Kanu Nickname: Age: 15 Gender: Female Appearance: Kanu can be defined as completely flawlessly good looking. Her smooth tanned skin can easily noticeable from a far distance and is as smooth as silk. Her beautiful eyes with her long eye lashes, with a nose and mouth that fits her face perfectly. Her most distinctive feature being her long smooth blue hair that is even longer than her own body and runs all the way down to the floor, makes her easily noticeable by anyone, even in a crowd of a million people she is easily quick to be noticed because of it. Her hair comes down over her left eye which is one of her cutest features which easily draws in most guys. The rest of her hair comes down into her face in several bangs, some of it framing her face perfectly for even more beauty.
Kanu is a rather tall woman with a rather athletic but not too athletic built. She stands at 5"10 and has very voluptuous and easily attractable figure. Her figure in accompany with her rather large bust becomes even more drawing for males with her standard type of clothing. Her clothing is rather scanty and is obviously very revealing. Her clothing resembles that of a school uniform. A white above navel length school t-shirt with blue and white collar and sleeves, she wears a yellow neck crest up at the neck area, she also wears a pair of red gloves with long knee length white socks that fluffs at the ankle. Her skirt is rather short so much that a simple slight pull up of her skirt usually reveals her panties(usually white). All this consist of Kanu's standard outfit. Her clothing often gets torn up in battle and often serves as a distraction if her opponent is a male, most often her shirt and sometimes her panties will tear from the damage.
Going by all this, it is easy to say that Kanu is a very distinctive person and can be easily noticed in a crowd because of her long hair, voluptuous figure, good looks and rather scanty clothes.
Personality: Kanu can be described as a strong and ferocious warrior, who is built for battle. She prefers to fight with her bare fist and her dragon staff. She is independent, strong willing, loyal and trustworthy. She usually fights strong and ferocious, but only with the intention of disable the opponent, due to the fact she doesn't have the courage and doesn't like to see blood shed, making her more of a pacifist. She fights if needed and tries her best to avoid it. She has strong belief in the word 'loyalty'. She is most loyal to her village and the kage who runs that village, ready to give her life for either or do anything for them, and although she hates to see blood spilled she has stated that she will kill anyone if they hurt her village or love ones, or if her kage orders her to.
She usually keeps herself in a calm, stoic and level-headed posture. Even as a child she was not a very talkative person and had strong love for one person, her mother. She would often become a sociable, friendly and likable person when around other people though. Ever since young she has also hated to see people in pain, although, after her mother's death and her village's destruction she became more willing to do battle, but only if truly necessary. At the age of 15 Kanu's village was destroyed and she was raped by the raiders, which had seemed to brought out a sadistic side to her, which would occasionally show itself.
Clan: None Nindō: Loyalty is a ninjas most respectful trait.
THE NINJA. Origin: Village Hidden in the Light Affiliation: Konohagakure Rank: C-Rank Genin Specialties: Weaponry - Taijutsu Elemental Affinities: Fuuton - Raiton Combat Style: Kanu is a very straight forward fighter. She fights strictly with her her weapons, and considers her staff(Dragon Blade), as a extension of her body. She is easily very good in other weaponry other than her staff. She was never very good at ninjutsu when she was young. She is also very good in taijutsu as she is in weaponry.
In turn, Kanu's entire fighting style revolves around that of pure natural strength and power. Being not of a clan she didn't have any special talents and made her fist her weapon. She is very fast, strong, durable and evasive. Along with her Dragon Staff she is a nearly unstoppable force. Special Characteristics:
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Name: Improved Speed Rank: C Type: Physical Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of speed accessible to those who have undergone intense training in high speed movement. The possessor of this talent has an increased speed of 20% which makes them slightly faster. They can cross distances quicker than others would expect and outrun others with little effort.
THE BACKGROUND. History: - Spoiler:
As a child, Kanu was a very quiet and stoic girl. She lived with her mother who was the person she loved the most in the world, even more than herself. Her father had walked out on them when she was born, and she was a only child alone with her mother. Kanu mother life wasn't very easy and her mother was forced to work several jobs to make a income, and did what was necessary for the too to live happily. They had no family in the village of light to help them. None the less, she still couldn't make Kanu a wealthy life like other children had, but none the less Kanu was happy just being with her mother.
Kanu had always wondered what had come off her father. She was a very loving little girl and even though she didn't like the fact that her father had abandoned them, she still loved him and hoped to meet him some day, just to forgive him even what he had done. The village hidden in the light wasn't a very shinobi like village. There were very few ninjas and it's appearance and lifestyle was more like that of modern society. Instead of ninja academies there were normal schools and high schools. Most people who wanted to become ninjas would have to do so training themselves. None the less, the village was a very prosperous village and was one of the most wealthiness villages, despite not being one of the five great shinobi nations.
Kanu attended to the 'Chengdu High School' and was a top class student. She didn't have many friends except one who was her best friend, named Ryuubi Gentoku. She had always been a beautiful girl, with her long blue hair and wonderful skin and good looks. She lived the life of a typical teenager, and while she wasn't completely happy, she made her living work for her since she knew her mother would want her to be happy. She was slightly difference that she had the same hormonal feelings as a girl her age, but it was mainly directed towards Ryuubi who she grew to love. Because of her quiet persona she was often taken advantage, but Ryuubi often was the one who would bail her out with her fearless attitude. And so was Kanu's life.
One day the vllage of light was the target of a raid from the hidden mist village. Most of the light villagers of the light village was very snobbish and was heartless in that they didn't share their money with the villages, and during a time of need, Kirigakure had ask for there support financially in the past. The village not being filled with ninjas were easily destroyed and overrun without much trouble from the blood thirsty kirigakure ninja. Kanu at that moment had witnessed the death of her mother and was traumatized at losing the most important person in her life. On that same night, Kanu lost her innocence along with her mother. She was harhly raped by the men who raided the village. Kanu didn't mind dying right there, since her mother was killed. She was left with many questions as to why she was left alive. All the other villagers had been killed and she was the only one left alive. She would have preferred to die with her innocence and see her mother in the after life, but instead she was left alive with nightmares from that day.
The next morning of the invasion Kanu awoke to a destroyed and completely abolished village. The cold breeze of the morning shivered her spines from her being completely naked from the incident. She felt the blood from her private genital run down her legs and she began to cry. Kanu left the village behind before she dug a suitable grave for her mother and best friend Ryuubi on the outskirts of the light village. The stink of the dead villagers was too much to take. She was no idiot and took some money along with her from the dead villagers.
After leaving her village behind, Kanu joined the leaf village, with new set goals. She undergo-ed a personality where she became more bold and brave. She joined the academy with golds set to revenge her best friend Ryuubi and her mother. She joined the academy at a late age though because of her having to go through a series of process before she can officially become a citizen of the leaf. Once that was over with she passed the academy with the best grades in her class.
Even though she had gotten rid of her quiet and shy persona, she was still a little shy though, primarily when pushed to her limits. She couldn't completely get rid of it, and was taken advantage even more, to the point where she became the victim of various males. At the age of 16 she finally found the strength to stand up for herself after visiting her mothers grave. She grew to hate men and seeks to prove that a woman can be as powerful as men, and even stronger. Roleplay Sample: Kanu got laid on her bed, her eyes fixated on the ceilings, although she wasn't really looking at the ceiling and was in fact of in thought. She wore nothing much, which was only a white vest and a pair of white panties. It wasn't much, but it was what she slept in. Her thoughts were fixated on her past, about her mother, about Ryuubi, everything that she had been through. She had made a small life in Konoha, and her life was no better than it was when she was in the light village, as she was still not making enough to make a wealthy way of living. She wasn't expecting to get sympathy from the kage just because she had lost her family, of course not, that would be stupid. Out of a village of thousands, almost millions, she was nothing more than another ninja.
She brushed of her thoughts as she span and sat herself at the rim of her bed. She looked over her shoulder at her bed, her usual stoic expression remaining the same as she did so. Her bed was pretty small, it's length wasn't long enough to hold her entire body without her feet being over, and the width was too small for her to turn very much. Heck she had only managed to get it after her neighbors gave it to her when they were about to throw it out, it had belong to their younger son. Her apartment was just as small, only consisting of a small room which was only about twice the size of her bed, a small kitchen about same size without even a kitchen table and barely a sink, and a small bathroom with luckily a bathroom, unfortunately no toilet. She had only managed to get the place because of the kage.
Kanu life in leaf wasn't great, and was definitely far from it obviously. She had the same sort of life in the light village and at least back there she didn't have to sell herself cheap for money to make money to feed herself. none the less, she was going to get out of such a life one day. Once that was done, her next gold would be to avenge her mother and best friend.
THE ARSENAL. Taijutsu:
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Name: Dynamic • Action (Dainamikku • Akushon) Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The user flips towards the opponent and attacks with a series of punches and kicks. Chakra Cost: 8
Name: Konoha Raiken - Leaf Thunder Fist Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The user will spin to gain momentum and then lay a powerful strike into his or her opponent via punch. Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Konoha Kage Buyou - Leaf Shadow Dance Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Konoha Kage Buyou is a Taijutsu technique that is used to position a ninja's opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. The ninja will first quickly appear below their opponent, then with a switch upper kick they will launch their target into the air. The ninja will then jump into the air to "shadow" the target with the target's back to their chest. This move is used before preforming "Omote Renge - Front Lotus" or "Shishi Rendan - Lion Combo". Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Konoha Shoufuu - Leaf Rising Wind Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: This jump uses the entire body as a spring by amassing power in the legs before kicking upwards. Because the power of the kick from the ground is instantly converted into a blow, the enemy hit with this attack will be launched high into the sky. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Shishi Rendan - Lion Combo Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The user first uses the "Konoha Kage Buyou - Leaf Shadow Dance" to manuever his/hrt opponent in a vulnerable aerial position. While shadowing his/her opponent, the user will attempt to strike them from a vulnerable angle. If he/she is unable to make a clean strike, he/she will strike anyway as a feint, to draw his/her target's attention and defense to one area. The user can then strike the undefended area and begin knocking them downwards towards the ground. As the enemy falls back to the earth, the user will deftly rotate his/her body around to deliver a full force kick to their chest. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Konoha Dai Senpuu - Leaf Great Whirlwind Rank: C Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A series of kicking attacks, starting from a low kick and linking into a middle kick and high kick then finishing off with a heel drop. As the rotation speed picks up the user gains buoyancy, which they use to shift into gradually higher attacks. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Konoha Reppuu - Leaf Violent Wind Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The move here is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Konoha Senpuu - Leaf Whirlwind Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A taijutsu where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark. Chakra Cost: 4
Weaponry:
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Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique Rank: D Type: Weaponry Range: Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: N/A Description: It's an extremely simple technique where two shuriken, like the Fūma Shuriken, are piled one onto another and thrown simultaneously. However, depending on the way it's used, it can prove its absolute efficiency. The trick is to somehow draw the enemy's attention towards the upper shuriken. Then, to deal with the path of the lower shuriken. If the enemy notices both shuriken, the technique ends up losing all of its efficiency. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique Rank: D Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Kuchiyose • Tobidougu - Projectile Weapons Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: N/A Description: Should the user specialize in throwing projectile weapons; to enable her/him to carry more weapons, she/he will store them in a summoning scroll. When needed she/he can unwrap the scroll and summon whatever weapon she needs. Chakra Cost: 5
FACE CLAIM. Source: Ikki Tousen. Kanu Unchou Image URL: http://i-d.animepaper.net/thumbnails/preview/202246/1/%5Banimepaper.net%5Dpicture-standard-anime-ikki-tousen-ikkitousen-kanu-flying-in-action-202246-astara-preview-e0669409.jpg
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Chris
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| Subject: Re: Kanu Unchou[Konoha Genin] Sat 24 Sep 2011, 5:40 pm | |
| How is this going? |
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MelMel
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| Subject: Re: Kanu Unchou[Konoha Genin] Tue 27 Sep 2011, 3:58 am | |
| Done. ^^ |
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Emperor of Rock
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| Subject: Re: Kanu Unchou[Konoha Genin] Tue 27 Sep 2011, 8:41 am | |
| Write few more lines in combat style and you're golden. |
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Chris
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| Subject: Re: Kanu Unchou[Konoha Genin] Tue 27 Sep 2011, 11:17 am | |
| Just a quick suggestion - You might want to lower your age down a notch. The majority of genins are around the age of 15, not 17, so you would be quite out of the loop ^_^ And yes, as Rockboy said, good job. |
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MelMel
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| Subject: Re: Kanu Unchou[Konoha Genin] Wed 28 Sep 2011, 12:06 am | |
| Edited. |
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Chris
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| Subject: Re: Kanu Unchou[Konoha Genin] Wed 28 Sep 2011, 12:08 am | |
| Very good!
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Emperor of Rock
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| Subject: Re: Kanu Unchou[Konoha Genin] Wed 28 Sep 2011, 4:44 am | |
| Approved 2/2
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Cookie Monster
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| Subject: Re: Kanu Unchou[Konoha Genin] Mon 09 Jan 2012, 4:04 am | |
| Archived.
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