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Kuroda, HanaTHE INFO.
Name: Hana Kuroda
Nickname: The Migratory Ninja, Konoha's magic blade
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Appearance: Her normal appearance: Hana is a busty woman that is apparently drop dead gorgeous. Though of course she couldn't be perfect so she has an average facial structure. Perhaps a slightly smaller nose than more girls. It’s more button sized than anything. She’s got a few freckles on her nose as well. Though you can’t see them unless you look hard. She’s got a small, tan birthmark on her neck as well. It’s heart shaped and about half the size of a nickel. Hana’s bust is about a D size.
She tends to like low cut shirts and loose shorts. She doesn’t like to show too much skin though she doesn’t like to hide everything away either. Outside of her ninja gear and at home she likes to walk around in panties and a T-shirt. If someone decides to visit she’ll throw on a robe.
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The true form of herself. Not many see it. She barely even sees it herself. Seeing as how she keeps up her jutsu all day until she goes to bed. That is the time she stops her jutsu.
Personality: She’s got a flirty personality and loves to have fun. She’s very manipulative. She can be very untrusting as well though she tries not to show that she doesn't trust someone too much. She’s also very migratory. Basically she doesn’t like to stay with one thing at a time. She switches hobbies often, can’t stay on one mission too long, and can’t stick with a man for very long either.
At times she can be very fragile though she really tries to cover it up. Her worst trait is her stubbornness. She refuses to lose. She’ll fight until she is broken and bloody but she’ll still fight. She's also very happy-go-lucky.
She loves to swear and hit people with her wooden sheath to her katana. She's extremely self concious about her looks and loves the attention she gets from men. She is so self concious about he looks that she abandoned the Akimichi name. Despite this she still eats constantly due to her having to keep her calories up for the Akimichi diet.
Clan: Akimichi
Ninpō: "I'm not Fat! I'm a gorgeous bitch that will kick your ass!"
THE NINJA.
Origin: Konoha
Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Dominant:Weaponry - Swords/ Ranged
Sub: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinities: Doton, Suiton
Combat Style: Hana likes to use ninja tools as distractions and such. Though she also likes to use her sword style. She's more close and mid ranged than anything. Hana is mostly weak against experience. If the warrior she is fighting against is more experienced she is most likely going to lose. She doesn't have alot of experience so that is also a weakness. Hana isn't really sure WHAT she is good at yet. She knows she's got alot of strength. More than the average ninja. She supposes she will find out when she begins to engage in more combat. Her signature jutsu is he Hidden Mist.
Special Characteristics:
Evasion
Name: Evasiveness
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Physical Requirements: Must Specialize in Taijutsu or Medical.
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: The ninja trains their ability in more advanced evasive maneuvers which serves the purpose of avoiding enemy attacks. The survivability of the ninja increases as they are now capable of executing quicker flips and dodging basic forms of physical attacks by reading an enemies movement.
THE BACKGROUND.
History: :GENIN ARC:
Since birth, Hana Akimichi was already known to be one of the bigger members of the Akimichi clan, which was a pretty big insult within the clan. Her parents were regular members of the village of Konoha, her mother being just your average pampered girl and her father being a retired Chuunin at the age of 33. At first, her weight wasn’t too much of a problem, being depicted as cute at her extremely young age so she was pretty set when it came to food and such, proving to be a potentially great Akimichi clan member soon enough at the right age.
This lifestyle lasted until she was about 7 years old, when she enrolled in the Konoha Ninja Academy however. With the barrier that was her house wall was breached, the reality of the real world started to set in with kids continuously making fun of her weight issues and such while calling her names such as “fatty”, “whale”, etc. This started to make Hana feel bad about herself for being the way she was so she strived to train as hard as she could so she would be better than all her classmates and perhaps lose an incredible amount of weight on the way.
The latter was to no avail however as it was imbedded into her genetics to be that way. She tried going on a diet but she wouldn’t last long since that was her only source of energy, ending up fainted amongst other things that threatened her health. Soon enough, Hana simply gave up her hopes of losing weight and endured her classes’ onslaughts after onslaughts. It didn’t really take her too long or much effort to graduate the academy, despite the jokes many guys were making about physical training.
Once she was a Gennin, Hana strayed away from getting close to people so easily. She hated the lifestyle of Konoha. The Akimichi were riduculed. They weren't respected at all.
At the present she is getting stronger. She likes to toy with men as well. Part of her own amusement at fooling them and another part of her trying to feel accepted. She's waiting patiently as to what she should do next. But knowing her, nobody knows when she will snap.
Roleplay Sample: - Spoiler:
Hana noticed the change in attitude of the boy. Oh boy, this doesn't look good. She forced a cheerful smile and replied, "I was actually looking for someone. But... apparently he's not training today." She sighed slightly. "I was about to head back home and run some errands but I noticed you here and thought that we could talk a bit. You're another genin right? It's nice to talk about techniques and stuff."
Kitsu noticed how Hayate's body and eyes changed. His hackles raised and his hair stood on end. He could sense some tension in the air. Kitsu wasn't a fighter though. Hana knew that for a fact. She'd have to protect him.
Hana blinked as another boy sauntered over. He introduced himself though that didn't seem to stop Tenisei from becoming doglike. His eyes seemed to hold an animalistic excitement. Hana gulped. "It's nice to meet you Sasori. I've heard of the Sabure clan. They're really powerful."
She gave the newer boy a huge, glinting smile. At least HE seemed friendly. She wanted to scoot closer to the red haired guy but that didn't seem to be a smart idea. Hana was trying hard to think of something to say when an idea popped into her head.
With a wicked smile the girl stepped closer to Tenisei. In one fluid motion she wrapped her arms around the boy that was on four legs and held onto his waist tightly. She squealed in a high pitched voice, "Oh my gosh! You're playing doggie charades aren't you?! You're pretending to be my doggie! Well I'll pretend to be your loving owner! Wag your tail doggie!"
She giggled and held on tightly. She didn't want to risk letting this wild boy go. After all, he seemed to want to fight. She knew from experience with animals and he seemed to be more animal than human at the moment.
Kitsu yipped playfully. His hackles seemed to lower and he barked at Hayate while slightly waggling his ears and tail in an animalistic language. It was a global language that most animals knew. Kitsu might be getting quite a treat. If Hayate wanted to play then he would get a new playmate.
THE ARSENAL.
TAIJUTSU - Spoiler:
Name: Bubun Baika no Jutsu | Partial Mutli-Size Technique
Rank: C-S
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Clan: Akimichi
Description: Bubun Baika no Jutsu is a taijutsu technique used by the members of the Akimichi clan. Like the standard Multi-Size Technique, this jutsu expands the body, but expands parts of the body as opposed to just the stomach. Skilled clan members can alter the size of their body to a large scale with little trouble. With the larger body parts, the user's strength increases proportionally.The most commonly expanded body part is the arm. C-ranked nin can expand their limbs five times their average size. B-ranked nin can expand their limbs ten times their average size. A/S-ranked nin can expand their limbs twenty times their original size.
Chakra Cost: C5/B10/AS20 CP (Additional 3CP Per Post)
Name: Nikudan Sensha | Human Bullet Tank
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Clan: Akimichi
Description: Nikudan Sensha is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Akimichi clan. The user makes themselves into a human-sized ball, they tuck their limbs inside their clothes and use chakra to propel themselves into a powerful roll. The gain enough momentum to pummel through trees and squash everything under them.
Chakra Cost: 5CP (Additional 2CP Per Post)
Name: Baika no Jutsu | Multi-Size Technique
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Clan: Akimichi
Description: Baika no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique used by the members of the Akimichi clan. This is a secret jutsu passed down in the Akimichi clan that expands the user's stomach. This jutsu increases the user's body size by using up the user's food energy, converting calories into chakra. Akimichi clan members tend to eat fattening foods and have large physiques in order to support this technique.
Chakra Cost: 5CP (Additional 2CP Per Post)
Name: Body Fat Manipulation
Rank: E-S
Type: Taijutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: For this technique, the user utilizes the Akimichi's secret of converting calories to fat. Instead of expanding the body however, the user is able to contort and fold their fats in order to seemingly reduce their obesity. Within these folds, the user is able to hide and gain near instant access towards weapons and items by manipulating the user's fat in order to move the item towards the right spot. This technique may also be used as a defense mechanism without the user's manipulation or even consent because if more than a light amount of pressure is is placed on the user's body, a hidden weapon may end up being forced out and stabbing the culprit. Though very basic to the average Akimichi in nature, this technique requires almost second nature like mastery in order to maintain, not to mention that the user is required to be continuously fed, even for an Akimichi, to provide enough energy for the technique to be maintained, making the user naturally even more obese than the average Akimichi. With each level of mastery, the user is able to hide more and potentially bigger weapons.
assuming only smaller weapons, such as kunai & smaller shuriken, are being used.
E rank: 5 Weapons
D rank: 10 Weapons
C rank: 15 Weapons
B rank: 20 Weapons
A rank: 25 Weapons
S rank: 30 Weapons
Chakra Cost: (E-C costs 1 CP to maintain ~ B-S costs 2 CP to maintain)
E rank: 2
D rank: 3
C rank: 5
B rank: 10
A rank: 25
S rank: 35
Weaponry
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Name: Battoujutsu
Specialty: Weaponry/Kenjutsu
Emphasis: On drawing the sword using high speeds so that the opponent can't see.
Requirements: Weaponry dominant, with swords as the dominant.
Description: Battoujutsu is the art of drawing sword. It uses a speed draw technique to bring the sword from it’s sheath quickly in a strike. The speed is a certain type of godspeed. Normal eyes can’t follow it. Doujutsu like the sharingan can follow depending on the sharingan user though at most times they can't react fast enough unless the opponent is of two higher ranks than the user. The user after drawing the sword will resheathe it or leave the blade out to block oncoming attacks. Battoujutsu is mainly an offensive style.
Jutsu: listed below
Name: Battou no Shi-su (Drawing sword and sheathe)
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry/Kenjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: This is basically Battou but with another attack that goes along with it. The user draws their sword at lightening speed like usual but also uses their sheath as a second attack. They’ll use their sheath to hit he opponent as well if the opponent somehow dodges the battou or blocks it.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Ken Tama (sword bullet)
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry/Kenjutsu
Range: Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user uses their thumb to shoot the sword out of the sheath. It lets the person attack someone out of reach. It takes precise aiming but they can knock a person out if they aim it right. The weakness is that you lose your sword until you go and get it back.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Kami Chisoku Shi-su (God speed sheathing)
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry/Kenjutsu
Range: (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: This is opposite of the battou. It’s where you sheathe your sword quickly creating a high pitched sound. This sound can make the person unable to hear well for two posts. Though the user must have ear plugs in their ears or else it will make them hard of hearing for that long as well. Hana has a special set of earplugs just for this technique. Which is why she can use it so well. The guard of the sword hits the sheath. Hana's sheath has a metal lining on the inside. Making it tough. The guard is also metal which makes both hitting together a loud sound.
Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Jinsoku no Dageki (rapid strike)
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry/Kenjutsu
Range: (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: It is a rapid strike attack which deals a lot of slashes (5) at a high speed. Attacks the head, stomach, both arms, and neck.
Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Tsuchi no Dageki (earth strike)
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry/Kenjutsu
Range: (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user sends debris from the earth right at the opponent with a strong sword strike to the ground by slashing the earth towards the opponent.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Ken no Shuushi (Sword stop)
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry/Kenjutsu
Range: (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user captures the others sword in between their hands. Their writs are put together like an X. They catch the sword with the back of the hands. The user can either jerk the sword out of the opponents hands or break it by slamming their knuckles together. Only works if the opponent has a sword. The users knuckles will be cut up due to this. May only catch C rank sword attacks.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Supin no Battou (spin draw)
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry/Kenjutsu
Range: (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: Hana returns her sword to the sheath and rests her hand on the hilt. This is the basic stance of Battojutsu, the art of drawing the sword. When the opponent steps forward to attack, Hana responds, drawing her sword while throwing her body into a spinning motion as she does so. This increases the speed of the sword, which is targetting the opponents back/kidney area.
Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Atsui no sai (deep cut)
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry/Kenjutsu
Range: (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user will place their sword facing upwards, curved inwards slightly to their own body. They will then wait for their opponent to strike. When the opponent does strike, the user will unsheathe the blade, deliviring a strike at the upper torso with the full part of the blade. Once that is done the user will switch grips and bring the blade forward, cutting deeper.
Chakra Cost: 3
WEAPONS
Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 1
Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.
Name: Katana
Rank: C
Type: Primary/Melee
Quantity: 1
Description: Commonly refereed to as a 'Samurai sword', the katana is characterized by its distinctive appearance. It has a curved, slender, single edged blade up to three feet in length, circular or squared guard, and long grip to accommodate two hands. As such, it has become renowned for its sharpness and cutting ability.
Name: Ear-Piece Mic Radio
Rank: C
Type: Main -Primary/Accessory
Quantity: 3
Description: The short range radio is capable of keeping ninja in contact up to 10 miles. The radio can accept multiple frequencies and is activated to talk by pushing a button on the neck attachment, making it simple to use even in the most dire of situations. With a durable carapace, it is designed to withstand water damage and even the pressure of extreme altitudes.
Name: Ear plugs
Rank: D
Type: Main-Primary/Accessory
Quantity: 1
Description: They are basic earplugs that muffle sounds. Though if you turn the small radio that is inside it on then it can block out all sound. It can also block out sound triggered genjutsu. It can also block out loud grenades and such.
Name: Reflective sunglasses
Rank: C
Type: Main-Primary/Accessory
Quantity: 2
Description: These glasses are stylish yet reflective. Hana is able to use these to reflect visual triggers in genjutsu. Of course she can't stop any other senses such as sound or touch. Though if the enemy is not careful he or she will get trapped in their own genjutsu through the reflectiveness of the glasses.This can happen when they look into them. Can only hinder genjutsu of it's own rank or below. Must use a C rank amount of chakra to reach it's hidden effects. (7 cp). With two CP per post while having the glasses on and using them.
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Sat 26 Mar 2011, 2:59 am | |
| - squirrel101 wrote:
Personality: Hana is a very calm Kunoichi. She’s got a flirty personality and loves to have fun. She’s very manipulative and plain out cold with people she doesn’t care about. She can be very untrusting as well. She’s also very migratory. Basically she doesn’t like to stay with one thing at a time. She switches hobbies often, can’t stay on one mission too long, and can’t stick with a man for very long either. She can be very sweet when she feels like it and is very friendly. She doesn't try to make enemies.
At times she can be very fragile though she really tries to cover it up. Her worst trait is her stubbornness. She refuses to lose. She’ll fight until she is broken and bloody but she’ll still fight. She's also very happy-go-lucky. She loves to tease guys. Sex is also a drive for her. The girl is just as easily seduced as she is seductive. She likes to use her looks to manipulate. She has a bit of a bad habit as well. She tends to sneak into bars with her fake I.D. When she was sixteen she began sneaking wine from her uncle's wine cellar. She acquired the taste for alcohol.
She had then asked a friend to make her a fake I.D. Since then she's snuck into bars and such to party. She is quite the party girl. She absolutely loves fun. This may lead to Hana becoming an alcoholic. She's already gotten in trouble for her bad habit before. She also tends to swear and call everyone "bastard" as she becomes more drunk. It's quite fun for bystanders to watch. Unless she of course decides to pick a fight with someone.
• You described her as a happy-go-lucky, party, flirty, alcohol loving type of girl that can't even stay with one thing for too long yet you also described her as being calm. It's just slightly hard to imagine that. You also described her as a type of person that avoids making enemies, yet stated that she acts cold towards people she doesn't care for. Seems like a thing you wouldn't want to do when attempting to not make enemies.
- squirrel101 wrote:
- Clan: Sankariki
• You will not be accepted until that clan is also accepted.
- squirrel101 wrote:
- Name: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu - Mist Servant Technique
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: D
Range: Medium
Element: N/A
Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.
Name: Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Fire Technique
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Medium
Element: N/A
Description: Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a vision of fire. After Yoroi forms the needed handseals, a huge ball of fire will descend from the sky to envelope his target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety.
Name: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Technique
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: D
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.
Name: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu - Sly Mind Affect Technique
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Medium
Element: N/A
Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.
• These can all be found in the Encyclopedia in the correct format with the correct information. Please replace the ones you've listed about with the other's instead. Also, "Lust" will need to be given a chakra cost.
• You need to include the Academy techniques, too.
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Wed 30 Mar 2011, 2:18 am | |
| | ~Bump~ |
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Wed 30 Mar 2011, 3:19 am | |
| | 1/2 Approval! |
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Wed 30 Mar 2011, 4:43 am | |
| | Approved! Be sure to go to the Claim A Face thread to ensure your face is claimed. |
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Sat 04 Jun 2011, 10:13 am | |
| ARCHIVED. |
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Thu 07 Jul 2011, 2:07 am | |
| | Unarchived via user request of modification |
| | | | squirrel101
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Fri 08 Jul 2011, 2:20 pm | |
| @.@ Okay I fixed her up some. XD
Oh I'm SURE I made mistakes. I did this character at the wonderful hours of four and five in the morning.  psst that smiley is me~ OOH let's do Adam!  XD That one is Adam! O-o Okay serious time!
Hana has been completely redone! I feel bad for the person that has to tear her apart because of my weirdness so early. @.@
ANYWAY, finished! |
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Fri 08 Jul 2011, 11:48 pm | |
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- Name: Kami Chisoku Shi-su (God speed sheathing)
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry/Kenjutsu
Range: (5m - 10m)
Element: N/A
Description: This is opposite of the battou. It’s where you sheathe your sword quickly creating a high pitched sound. This sound can make the person deaf for two posts. Though the user must have ear plugs in their ears or else it will make them deaf for that long as well. Hana has a special set of earplugs just for this technique. Which is why she can use it so well. The guard of the sword hits the sheath. Hana's sheath has a metal lining on the inside. Making it tough. The guard is also metal which makes both hitting together a loud sound.
Chakra Cost: 5 Reduce to close range.
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- Name:Battoujutsu (sword style)
Rank: D-S
Type: Weaponry/Swordstyle/Kenjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Battoujutsu is the art of drawing sword. It uses a speed draw technique to bring the sword from it’s sheath quickly in a strike. The speed is a certain type of godspeed. Normal eyes can’t follow it. Doujutsu like the sharingan can follow depending on the sharingan user though at most times they can't react fast enough unless the opponent is of two higher ranks than the user. The user after drawing the sword will resheathe it or leave the blade out to block oncoming attacks. Battoujutsu is mainly an offensive style.
Chakra Cost: Varies for each attack. Why does this technique scale from D-S?
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Sat 09 Jul 2011, 12:09 am | |
| | -Place the sword style in that style template |
| | | | squirrel101
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Sat 09 Jul 2011, 12:40 am | |
| | Fixed and took away C rank ninjutsu replaced with Weaponry techs. |
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Mon 11 Jul 2011, 2:28 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Mon 11 Jul 2011, 4:00 am | |
| - Quote :
- Name: Reflective sunglasses
Rank: D
Type: Main-Primary/Accessory
Quantity: 2
Description: These glasses are stylish yet reflective. Hana is able to use these to reflect visual triggers in genjutsu. Of course she can't stop any other senses such as sound or touch. Though if the enemy is not careful he or she will get trapped in their own genjutsu through the reflectiveness of the glasses.This can happen when they look into them. D-Ranked glasses would have no ability to hinder anything above its own rank. So, it could only reflect D-rank genjutsu's if anything, please edit this.
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- Name: Body fat manipulation
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: At first sight, Hana appears to be a drop-dead gorgeous girl. However, she is not called "The Magic Blade" for nothing. Her most coveted secret is that she is extremely obese due to her clan genetics. Over time of constantly trying to hide her obesity, Hana gained the ability to contort and fold her fat using her control over chakra. This ability is passive and requires very little chakra to continue on that it's practically second nature to Hana now. In these folds, she can hide throwing knives and other various small objects if needed. Thus to the untrained eye when she is fighting, Hana seems to be able to pull knives out of nowhere. This secret is so well kept that only a few people know.
Chakra Cost: 3 plus 3 per post This would be a ninjutsu not taijutsu. You should perhaps edit it to C-S and describe the level of manipulation over your 'fat' per rank. Also, instead of describing your characters background so much in the technique you should explain more of the actual mechanics of the technique (how it works etc).
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Tue 12 Jul 2011, 11:43 pm | |
| | Edited the sunglasses and just took out body fat manipulation. It would just be easier for me to use the henge technique which is E rank. |
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Wed 13 Jul 2011, 12:57 am | |
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- Name:Battoujutsu (sword style)
Rank: D-S
Type: Weaponry/Swordstyle/Kenjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Battoujutsu is the art of drawing sword. It uses a speed draw technique to bring the sword from it’s sheath quickly in a strike. The speed is a certain type of godspeed. Normal eyes can’t follow it. Doujutsu like the sharingan can follow depending on the sharingan user though at most times they can't react fast enough unless the opponent is of two higher ranks than the user. The user after drawing the sword will resheathe it or leave the blade out to block oncoming attacks. Battoujutsu is mainly an offensive style.
Chakra Cost: Varies for each attack. Make it so that the opponent isn't deaf but more hard of hearing.
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- Name: Jinsoku no Dageki (rapid strike)
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry/Kenjutsu
Range: (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: It is a rapid strike attack which deals a lot of slashes (5) at a high speed.
Chakra Cost: 5 Be more specific on the areas where your character will strike/
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- Name: Ken no Shuushi (Sword stop)
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry/Kenjutsu
Range: (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: The user captures the others sword in between their hands. Their writs are put together like an X. They catch the sword with the back of the hands. The user can either jerk the sword out of the opponents hands or break it by slamming their knuckles together. Only works if the opponent has a sword.
Chakra Cost: 3 A jutsu like this has to sustain some type of damage to oneself.
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Wed 13 Jul 2011, 1:49 am | |
| I changed rapid strike and sword stop. ^^ As for you I would make sure you read over your edits. lol
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- Name:Battoujutsu (sword style)
Rank: D-S
Type: Weaponry/Swordstyle/Kenjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Battoujutsu is the art of drawing sword. It uses a speed draw technique to bring the sword from it’s sheath quickly in a strike. The speed is a certain type of godspeed. Normal eyes can’t follow it. Doujutsu like the sharingan can follow depending on the sharingan user though at most times they can't react fast enough unless the opponent is of two higher ranks than the user. The user after drawing the sword will resheathe it or leave the blade out to block oncoming attacks. Battoujutsu is mainly an offensive style.
Chakra Cost: Varies for each attack.
I think you meant
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- Name: Kami Chisoku Shi-su (God speed sheathing)
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry/Kenjutsu
Range: (0m - 5m)
Element: N/A
Description: This is opposite of the battou. It’s where you sheathe your sword quickly creating a high pitched sound. This sound can make the person deaf for two posts. Though the user must have ear plugs in their ears or else it will make them deaf for that long as well. Hana has a special set of earplugs just for this technique. Which is why she can use it so well. The guard of the sword hits the sheath. Hana's sheath has a metal lining on the inside. Making it tough. The guard is also metal which makes both hitting together a loud sound.
Chakra Cost: 5
XD I fixed it anyway. |
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Wed 13 Jul 2011, 7:54 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Wed 13 Jul 2011, 11:20 am | |
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- Name: Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu - Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m)
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: Doton • Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will travel through the ground to appear below their target. They will then surprise their target by then pulling them into the ground. Once in the ground their target is thus immobilized.
Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Hidden Mist Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Suiton
Description: where one causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan-user will see the mist colored by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.
Chakra Cost: 4 Considering that your specialty isn't Ninjutsu (Taijutsu/Weaponry) and you're a Genin, you'll have to remove these for now.
Also, if you plan on utilizing your Academy Ninjutsu, I suggest you place them all in your application.
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- Name: Reflective sunglasses
Rank: C
Type: Main-Primary/Accessory
Quantity: 2
Description: These glasses are stylish yet reflective. Hana is able to use these to reflect visual triggers in genjutsu. Of course she can't stop any other senses such as sound or touch. Though if the enemy is not careful - Quote :
- he or she will get trapped in their own genjutsu through the reflectiveness of the glasses.
This can happen when they look into them. Can only hinder genjutsu of it's own rank or below. This is a touchy subject because it's essentially what this jutsu is, without the chakra cost.
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- Name: Magen: Kyō Tenchi-ten | Demonic Illusion: Mirror Heaven and Earth
Rank: E-S
Type: Doujutsu - Genjutsu
Range: -
Requires: At least Three-Tomoe
Description: Magen: Kyō Tenchi-ten is a technique used by members of the Uchiha clan who have acquired the final version of the Sharingan. The user decrypts a genjutsu that has been applied onto them and casts back the technique with identical effects onto the opponent. It's a form of illusion reversal, but in order to instantly read through a technique and cast it in return, the Sharingan's power is necessary. Those of which have their genjutsu reversed on them suffer the same effects of the reversed technique. However the user must place equal amount of chakra into the technique in order to reverse it.
Chakra Cost: Dependent on Reversed Technique
Furthermore, I believe that you should at least state that you need to add in a C rank amount of chakra (5-9 CP) before you can activate the sunglasses' special effect and perhaps an additional cost (2 CP per post) for how long you have it on.
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroda, Hana [Konoha Genin] Wed 13 Jul 2011, 1:04 pm | |
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