Ketsueki - The Art of Blood

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Clan Name: Ketsueki

Clan Location: Spread world wide

Clan Traits:

Distinct Blood Lust
All shinobi with in this clan have a very distinct bloodlust and urge to constantly battle and spill blood. This lust exists as a seperate psyche, sort of like a second concious, that whipsers directly into their mind, constantly reminding them of the need to spill and see the blood of the enemy. This does not make them "evil" in any way shape or form. Like all natural desires, it can be controlled given the right discipline and guidance and/or personal want to do so. To them battle is just like sex and spilling the blood of the enemy is the equivelent of an orgasm, though it is not quite as extreme an emotion. However, due to these arcane views and natures, they are often outcastted, especially when the shinobi is a child being that those are the most difficult years to control the desires by far due to the under developed mind set. If not given the correct guidance though, the person can go insane and become blood crazed and an overall danger to society as a whole as well as themselves. This can be brought on in shifts as well. Simply stated, this trait makes the ninja very unstable mentally to a certain degree.

Arcane Trade Off
This is actually a few different traits wrapped up into one interconnected base. To being the explanation of this trait, it has to be understood the extreme concentration it takes to manipulate ones blood such specific methods as shown in this clan. Even though it is a natural part of their living, it still takes a great deal of mental capability to perform their clans abilities. To be considered a shinobi worth anything, they are always trained early on specifically in the ways of the art of blood, as it is called. Given this, they will never in their entire life gain any sort of aptitude to an elemental chakra, barring them from the use of any elemental based jutsu. Given this they are typically very crafty and mentally aware. Given this they have a slightly more capable and adapted body to the use of jutsu as a whole and are capable of utilizing one handed seals to perform said jutsu.

(Special note: this does not give the person the ability to use any jutsu outside the specialties they have)

Kekkei Genkai:

The Art of Blood
As to be expected by the title, the shinobi with in this clan have the ability to manipulate their blood to their will and wishes much as a water ninja would use water. This however, is much more beneficial then water ever could be. Blood is a body essential, and as such, this gives the shinobi drastic advantages in battle. To begin with, they have the ability to replicate the amount of blood by duplicating the cells with in it, making it so that they can virtually not run out of blood. Additionally they can control the rate of blood clotting. This means they can make a wound clot over much faster then that of a normal person, and can even go so far as to reverse the process and turn clotted blood back into liquid blood. Finally they can control the direction and speed of blood flow. This means they can effectively control the spread of posions and toxins in their body, though does not make them immune, and also enhance the breathing process by carrying oxygen to the muscles faster so they do not get sore or tired as quickly.

The restrictions of distance on blood manipulation goes as follows:
C Rank - 5m
B rank - 10m
A Rank - 25m
S Rank - 50mm

The Dark Secret
In addition to the ability to manipulate blood, their blood itself has a very arcane quality to it. It has a bacteria in it that has the ability to raise or lower the ph of the blood, being able to change it form neutral to acidic with apparent ease. These bacteria work based solely on chakra, but do work naturally with in the body. These organisms release two different fluids, one basic, and one acidic. The bacteria release the acidic fluid naturally on their own. This trait makes the blood have a pH equal to that of highly potent acid which is capable of eating through human tissue and corroding most metals (C&D ranked weapons for example). When the user wills it, based on a secret clan jutsu, they can force the bacteria to release the basic fluid, canceling the acidic fluid, and eventually turning it back to a neutral 7 pH. In order for the body to cope with such a corrosive fluid with in it, the blood vessels are covered with a slick paste which is resistant to that acidic blood so that it does not corrode the body from the inside out. An even thinner layer is found through out the body across muscles and organs etc to protect them from being eaten away if the clan member is cut open. The only part of the body that they are threatened by their own blood is their skin. However after it gets through the skin it will be stopped by the layer across the muscles etc so this is not a life threatening hazzard in most case to themselves. In this way the ninja is typically safe from their own deadly biological weapon.

Slight Body Modifications
To accommodate with the extremeness of the acidic blood the ninja carries, they also have some slight modifications to their body. These come in the form of extra glands that most people do not have. The first is a gland that lies behind where the ears are on the head. This gland, when activated via a special clan jutsu, will release a specialized hormone into the blood stream and by proxy, the muscles and nerves. This hormone is a mix of adrenaline and the chemicals released when one undergoes a wound which pierces the flesh, (reference would be when someone cuts their wrists or receives a tattoo). The hormone, which is nameless, creates a euphoric feeling with in the ninja which masks all but the most intense pains, which it still manages to soothe slightly. This flood of chemical from the brain causes the brain itself to go slightly off kilter and the ninja loses a sense of control over themselves, going into a slightly more focused berserk mode. They can still take in information but are not capable of the prudent planning they are when not in this state. The mental state can be likened to a mild-extreme psychosis and it will cause them to focus on only one thing, the kill. They will become hyperactive and all sense of calm and tranquil mannerisms will be gone. The gland, unlike most other hormones and chemicals, is not involountary and takes a specific act from the user to become active. This gland came to be because of their arcane way of self mutilation in battle to use their blood. The second gland is in their eye lid, an inch away from tear duct. This is a gland which can, with the use of jutsu, squirt small amounts of blood up to five meters away. However, if used too much the shinobi will have to sacrifice chakra to replenish his or her blood.

Secret Clan Jutsu:
Medical

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Ninjutsu

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Fuuinjutsu

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History:

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The Ketsueki originated from the bowels of Water Country, having a close kinship with the Kaguya clan. Where the Kaguya clan excelled in their bone manipulation and were quite feared for it, The Ketsueki clan excelled in blood manipulation, and were feared even more so. Where as the Kaguya had a lust for the love of battle, The Ketsueki had a knack and lust for killing, torture, maiming, and sadism, quickly earning them an infamous name. Before Kiri was ever founded, the Ketsueki clan ravished the land with out law and threatened to exterminate several lesser clans, one of them being the Koori who were far less in number. They were also said to have been born from the same lineage and it was for that reason the members of both the Kaguya and Ketsueki clans often refer to each other as brother and still do today.

It was around the time, just before the villages began forming that an unsettling change occurred in the ranks of the Ketsueki. A man rose to the top in the clan who was not plagued by the resounding lust for blood in his mind. He saw his clans potential to do great deeds and services for the people of the world, if they could manage to gain control of their minds, finding that the members were exceptionally crafty, and did not act out in evil, simply put, they were governed by their carnal desires. He quickly learned that the older generations were lost for hope, but that the children were very susceptible to his teachings, and were quick to become civilized when given the correct guidance.

He inspired a rebellion amongst the young teens who, after seeing their parents and elders in a new light, sought the path of a righteous kill. With in a single night, the reformed Ketsueki rose up and destroyed their elders, completely recreating the clan, and halving their numbers. It was at this point they approached the Kaguya and Koori clans and the construction of the Village Hidden in the Mist began. They assssted the Koori in the Kaguya rebellion, and aided in keeping the peace. It was shortly there after the clan began to thin out amongst the shinobi world, no longer being limited to just the Mist village.

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Subject: Re: Ketsueki - The Art of Blood Tue 17 Jan 2012, 8:24 pm

Hallo there, Saint!

Celene has forgotten that like characters, clans need to be approved by two members of staff. I will take over from here.

Firstly:

Arcane Trade Off

Saint wrote:: Given this they also gain an extremely good control over their chakra. So good in fact that they can utilize ninjutsu, genjutsu, and fuuinjutsu as though it was one rank lower. (this meaning that they can use a B ranked of these types of jutsu as a genin.

Alright, so there are two issues that have grabbed my attention in this quoted section. Just because your character is "crafty and mentally aware" does not mean that they have better chakra control. It also moves into my second point that your clan will not be capable of being able to use techniques that are a rank higher than your character's. This is mainly because of the fact that this is an extra technique that you are attempting to add on and it has no relevance to your actual Kekkei Genkai. Please remove this.

The Kekkei Genkai:

The Art of Blood

Quote :: The restrictions of distance on blood manipulation goes as follows:
C Rank - 10m
B rank - 20m
A Rank - 50m
S Rank - 100m

These distances are too large. Long-ranged attacked are constituted at 10m+ and I don't think it's realistic for one to be attacking from such long distances. Please alter these to reasonable standards.

Quote :: This trait makes the blood have a pH level of 2, equal to that of stomach acid.

In all actuality, on the pH scale, a pH of 2 is equivalent to lemon juice. Gastric acid sits on level one of the scale. besides that issue, i don't quite understand your need to have the blood tainted as stomach acid will not cause severe harm to another other than irritation to the skin. It is not strong enough as an acid to corrode through skin and cause debilitating damage.

Slight Body Modifications

Endorphins function as neurotransmitters towards the brain. If you are creating a natural agent for numbing out pain, it still means that you are numbing a part of your brain and it will cause your character's reaction time to slow as well as effect his mental clarity. As you stated, it will also affect his muscles, which can cause him to have more difficulty with flexing, therefore hindering his movement. I would rethink this one.

Quote :: This is a gland which can, with out the use of jutsu, squirt blood out of it up to five meters.

This is completely unrealistic nor do you realize how much blood would be necessary for it to reach such a distance. Remove or bring it down to no farther than one meter and it needs to be activated by chakra.

Jutsu:

Medical:

Quote :: Name: Increased Clotting Technique
Type: Medical
Rank: E - C
Element: -
Description: When this jutsu is used it increases the rate at which the blood it is applied to clots, allowing for a faster healing of wounds etc and also for the use of a few other clan jutsu which requires the clotting of blood to use. As shown in the ranking of it, the amount of chakra needed depends greatly on the amount of blood being clotted. For scratches to small cuts reaching up to three inches in length it requires a mere E ranks worth of chakra, in other words, the clan member can do it with little to no trouble at all. For slightly bigger cuts, reaching up to 7 inches in length it will require a D ranks worth. Anything more then that will require a C ranks worth to clot.
Medical use/Bastardized use: The most obvious use of this jutsu is to stop bleeding/hold in the blood. It can also be used just to create crusted up blood for any random purpose the shinobi so desires to fit the situation at hand.
Chakra Cost: 1|3|6

You aren't referring to a diameter for each cut, merely the length. Please provide the previously stated. Also, referring to the bolder area, what is the limit of the wounds that it is capable of healing? What is the increased level of healing for each rank? Please answer these questions and alter the jutsu accordingly.

Also as a note, just because a wound is clotted, does not mean that it is fully healed. For example, when in battle, your character used this jutsu to stop the bleeding of one of his wounds, when he moves, he'll reopen it. How are you going to combat this?

Quote :: Name: Reverse Clotting Technique
Type: Medical
Rank: E-C
Element: -
Description: This is the reverse of the Enhanced Clotting Technique. Simply put it will take any clotted blood and reverse it back to its wet and liquid state. The same scale applys for this jutsu as it did for the Enhanced Clotting Technique.
Medical use/Bastardized use: This jutsu is used in any case where a shinobi needs to get to the blood stream and is blocked by a previously created clot. This can also be used to open up wounds upon the enemy in battle.
Chakra Cost:1|3|6

As you stated in the chat box, your character is unable to manipulate the blood of others. Therefore, please remove the bolder section.

Quote :: Name: Control of Blood Flow Technique
Type: Medical
Rank: E-D
Element: -
Description: Using this jutsu the user can control the speed at which and also the direction of which the blood will flow through out the body. This jutsu is used mainly to keep the blood from flowing out of the body from open wounds. When it does nothing but keeping the blood flowing on its normal path, this costs only an E rank worth of chakra. However, it can also be used to redirect blood flow completely and also increase or decrese the speed of it. In these cases, when used on the users body(D).
Medical use/Bastardized use: Control poision, slow down/ speed up blood flow, alter direction of blood flow. Decrease pain in overworked muscles by providing oxygen. Reduce or increase bleeding.
Chakra Cost: 2|4

It should be noted that when you limit blood flow to an area you are numbing the said agent which results in the death of tissue that cannot be restored. Just as a heads up.

Quote :: Name: Blood Replication Technique
Type: Medical
Rank: E-S
Element: -
Description:: This jutsu allows the user to create more blood from already existing blood. This can not be used if there is no blood around, though that being that the user has blood at all times to live....they are sure to not be in short supply of this requirement. The variation in rank only dicates how much chakra can produce how much blood. and E ranked amount produces as much blood as would fit in the average pop bottle (real life reference). At a D rank they can produce twice as much as at E rank. At C rank this produces the amount of blood that would fill a gallon jug of milk. At B rank this drastically increases to the amount of blood found in a 10 gallon barrel. A rank creates 20 gallons, and S rank would create an astonishing 50 gallons of blood.
Medical use/Bastardized use: To prevent blood loss or create puddles of blood for use of later jutsu.
Chakra Cost: 2|4|8|15|24|37

The body contains approximately 1.479 gallons of blood. Where are you proposing all this extra blood will be kept? These amounts are far too much and there won't be puddles, there will be flooded areas. Please be realistic and scale back to one third of each amount, especially for the B to S-ranked levels.

Quote :: Name: Endorphin Release
Type: Medical
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: Using this jutsu. the extra endorphin gland of the Ketsueki clan member will release its drugs into the body, flooding it with pain killers for the next five posts. This does nothing to cloud judgment, only numbing the pain, though the person can still feel temperature change and preassure on their skin.
Medical use/Bastardized use: Alleviate pain.
Chakra Cost:3

A numbing agent will affect the brain, please alter.

Ninjutsu

Quote :: Name: Deep Red Resounding Screams
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: To use this jutsu requires a source of blood, typically fairly large. When using this technique, by using hand motions, the user can control the blood and manipulate it in waves and torrents. Using this technique does not require hand signs but it does drain a D rank amount of chakra for every post it is used in. (For a refference notice the way Gaara typically manipulates sand with out specific jutsu use).
Chakra Cost: 3 (+1 per post after)

How much blood is needed for this jutsu?

Quote :: Name: Dark Eye : Fatal Warning
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: This jutsu uses the glands below the eye of the Ketsueki ninja. When this jutsu is used, it will spurt a stream of acidic blood in a straight line for five meters.
Chakra Cost:3

As stated above, please alter the distance. I am curious because you stated in the gland description that it didn't need a jutsu and you have one. Please fix the contradiction by deleting that statement in the description of the gland.

Quote :: Name: Small Bombardment, Attack From All Sides
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: This jutsu creates 10 small 1 inch balls of coagulated blood. These can be manipulated to fly around in the air and strike the target from any angle. When a ball makes impact with anything it will instantly go back to its liquid form and splatter in a half a foot radius.
Chakra Cost: 8

What is the distance on the jutsu?

Quote :: Name: Hand of Blood
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: This is a variation of the transformation technique. Using it the user can turn a select area or object into blood via hand contact. This can only be used to create up to a gallon of blood in the initial use, taking more chakra to create more
Chakra Cost: 6 (+2 per extra half gallon)

Transfiguration works because the objects usually have the same basic properties. This is not the case with objects turning into blood. It is not reasonable. Please Remove.

Quote :: Name: Servants of Blood : Creature Style
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: -
Description: Using this jutsu, the clan member can create two smaller scorpions made out of blood. These scorpions will be of average size and be completely maroon due to the fact that the skin is created from congealed blood, and inside they are complete liquid blood. Their purpose is to deliver sneak attacks and inject the users acidic blood into the targets body via the stinger on their tail. The user can cause them to burst at any time if they want as well, sending blood flying in a single meter radius.
Chakra Cost: 8 (+2 to make "detonate" per scorpion)

How far can they travel away from the user? A chakra cost per post should be occurring to keep these things "alive."

Quote :: Name: Servents of Blood: Warrior Style
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: -
Description: Using this jutsu the clan member can create two clones made from their blood. The clones will look just like the user aside from the fact they will be completely colored maroon because the skin creating the clone is made from congealed blood. The inside is completely filled with the Ketsueki acidic blood. If they are hit they will burst sending acidic blood flying everywhere for 5 meters in each direction. They can also be used as a medium from which to cast blood jutsu as well. They can be made to burst at any time the user wishes.
Chakra Cost: 14(+7 per additinal clone) (+3 to "detonate" per clone)

5 meters is too far, please limit to 1 meter in diameter. I am worrying about how they are going to be completely filled with blood if they are created from your character. Please explain the "science" behind this to me.

Quote :: Name: Warning to the Pharoh, The Waters of Egypt
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: -
Description: This jutsu is relatively simple. All the user does in this jutsu is manipulate their KKG chakra and place both hands upon a body of water. Blood will begin to billow out from their hand and it will turn completely into blood for use at the ninjas desire in further blood jutsu. This blood will be acidic.
Chakra Cost: 15

There is nothing simple by attempting to reenact Moses. The chakra cost is going to have to be much larger and you need to limit how big the bodies of water are that can be infected and transfigured. Change this to A.

Quote :: Name: Lake of Blood
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A/S
Element: -
Description: This jutsu is a higher ranked more advanced version then the hand of blood technique. When using this the user will make the needed hand signs and then slam both of their hands upon the ground. The surrounding area for 20m(A) 50m(S) in each direction will turn into liquid blood. This blood is not acidic initially but does have the bacteria in it to become acidic.
Chakra Cost:22|39

I am having a really hard time trying to picture and accept this. For one, the diameter is too big and as I stated on "Hand of Blood", the physics are not the same. Please remove this jutsu as it is far over-powered.

Fuuinjutsu

Regarding your Fuuinjutsu, I want it to be noted that since this is not one of your two specialties, your character will not be able to use these.

Quote :: Name: Forced Entry, Seal of Corrosion
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: B
Element: -
Description: Using this jutsu the user must gain direct contact with the persons body. Clothes do not count, it must be skin to skin. When the seal is placed upon the body, it also siphons a good deal of blood out of the users system and places it into the seal. This seal will lay dormant for three posts. After these three posts, the seal can be activated with an additional C rank amount of chakra, flooding the targets body with a liter of blood. It is highly recommended that this also be used with the Blood Replication technique to replace the blood that is lost.
Chakra Cost:15

As I stated above about the amount of blood that is found in a person, by flooding an opponent's body in this manner, you would cause an increased blood flow to the brain and heart which could result in a blood clot, brain aneurism, or cardiac arrest. Due to this, this jutsu is denied as it is overpowered and not fair to an opponent who cannot escape it.

Quote :: Name: Vampire's Fang, Closer to the Dark
Type: Fuinjutsu
Rank: A
Element: -
Description: This jutsu requires skin to skin contact to be placed upon the body of the target. When placed upon the target, the seal will begin draining blood from the targets circulatory system the following post. It will drain the blood at 5% total volume per victims post. The drain will occur at the end of their posts. To keep the seal active, the user must sacrifice a C rank amount of chakra per post, so that it will drain in the opponents next post. The effects go as follows.
4 Posts - Heart Beat starts picking up rapidly, pumping blood much faster. Difference in blood pressures starts to lessen. Vasoconstriction sets in and the skin starts to become paler.
5 Posts - The condition worsens slightly, the victim will begin to feel light headed.
6 Posts - The condition starts becoming serious. Blood Preassure drops and heart rate increases immensely. The victim can no longer think straight or move 1/2 as efficently, drasticly decreasing speed and stamina. Vision becomes slightly blured and tunnel vision sets in.
7 Posts - The victim will pass out.
9 Posts - The victim will die.
Chakra Cost: 25 (+5 per post kept active)

The percentage is too high, please limit it to 2.5%, as well as creating a loophole for the opponent for a potential of escaping. Re-rank to S as well as up the posts needed.

History:

Quote :: Where the Kaguya clan excelled in their blood manipulation and were quite feared for it, The Ketsueki clan excelled in blood manipulation, and were feared even more so.

Please fix the mistake!

Alright, that is all I have found that needs to be worked on. Overall, the idea of Blood Manipulation is an interesting one and if it is utilized properly, it will be enjoyable to read. Please make all the necessary alterations that I have stated above and I cannot wait to see the finished product. You have the makings of a great clan.

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Before we get into this, Id like to thank you for the extensive work you put into modding the application, it really is appreciated. I am making sure I say this now because Im afraid Im going to have to debunk a few of your points and I dont want you to take it personally or in some angry tone, I really do appreciate the work and effort you are putting forth here. Thank you Very Happy

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Here we go

Arcane Tradeoff - It is very loosely connected at best, but you cant blame a guy for trying, removed. However, Id like some compensation, personally for the no elements, as most clans actually give a user three elements, mine gives me 0 in exchange for the use of one different thing which is not balanced against my favor I belive so Im going to add in the use of one handed seals instead which is much more connected with proficent jutsu use. I dont see it being to big of an issue.

Distance Restriction on Blood Control - I do believe long range is much more like 20+ meters, and with 100 meters being equivelent to about a football field i personally dont see it as being that large of a stretch however I will half all of the distances for you, why not.
Ph Level of acid: Understood, I must have been led astray by some graph a long time ago, keep in mind this clans been around for about four years so a discression in information is not unlikely. I will have this fixed immediately.

About the Endorphins: Point taken, Im going to alter this to more mimic the effects of adrenaline as a hormone. Please reas what I edit in its place

Gland Below the Eye: Ah, see I did not mean a continuous stream of five meters, i meant a small spurt that could travel about five meters, will add this in for clarification, that, was my fault entirely. Also there is absolutely no contradiction and I have no clue where your getting that idea from. The fact that there is a jutsu for it indicates that you do indeed need chakra for it. However, most people do not have this gland which is why it needs to be described in the KKG section. It is a decleraton of the glands existance nothing more, the jutsu is there to display how to function said gland and the gland can not be functioned with out the jutsu. I will say that actually it would be possible to have muscles that cause this to happen (google horned toads), I have not taken said liberty in the attempt of being fair. All indiscresion with this should now be null and void I hope.

- Clotting: I will add in further specifications and if they are not enough, I will add more. Further on that aspect. I have never once had a scab just pop off of me because I moved. Yes scabs can be easily removed from the body and I am well aware of this. However it is fully to think that a scab crafted through this technique, as created by a ninja through medical needs as an obvious quick fix in the heat of battle to help aid them would not be a little bit thicker and more sturdy then the common scab, nor do I believe it to be a very farfetched Idea. Yes it is still a weak fix that the enemy certainly would be able to exploit. However the scabs are not going to simply fall off because I move and such an accusation is absurd. I am also well aware that the scab does not mean the wound is healed, and no where in the technique does it give such a nomencalture to a wound that has had this applied to it.

- Reversed Clotting: Again, clan has been around for years and some thing get missed, this is one of them. The faulty statement in said jutsu has been removed.

-Control of Blood Flow: No as a matter of fact it does not. After an extended period of time, yes of course. How do I know this? Tourniquets. A tourniquet can be applied for well over an hour before it causes permenet damage to the tissue. In the sense of with in the body, this technique is used to keep blood from actually coming out of open wounds and also quarantining poisons that enter the body. So even though your concern was false, even then it was built on a false pretense. There is no concern here. I woud like to note that my knowledge on this particular bit comes from being trianed by the US Military as a Combat LIfe saver, this is the kind of information that keeps soldiers alive. Im pretty sure is got some solid foundation to it.

- Blood Replication: Kisame created a giant ocean of water from absoloutely nothing, this creates less blood and requires a source to create it from, I fail to see how the amounts are too much. Further more, about it being in the body..........obviously.............this would be used for outside the body. I am not a moron. I am fully aware that the body can not hold that much blood. Thank you for the concern though. If you want we can further discuss the amounts. I am open. I just wanted to make that point about the Kisame thing. I dont think this is asking for much in comparison at all.
-Endorphin Release - Noted, will be changing this to a hormone akin to but not quite the same as adrenaline.

- Deep Red Resounding Screams: I hope you were looking for more of a limit, which that I could then understand this part of your modification, will change to small waves. (This is for when I wish to use the blood in a manner similar to gaara and his sand. Never have with this character, but you never know, might come up. Also this was mentioned in the jutsu description itself so Im not sure as to where the question is coming from here.)

- Small Bombardment: Range added

- Hand of Blood: I just want to say that even in the show etc. Things have been changed this way, its called the transformation technique, which is low level as it gets. I get this is a bit more advanced but that is why there is a higher rank on it, much higher. Id like to note that the difference in ranks is the difference is quite large and the amount created is quite small where as Naruto used the transformaton tech to change gambunta into a version of the nine-tailed fox which is a much larger scale with an E rank tech.. What I am willing to do for you is add in that it reverts back to its normal state after the techs use and possibly lowering the amount of blood created but I fail to see how an out right denial is waranted.
- Servants of Blood: Creature and Warrior: Added post drain for creature style. The warrior style utilizes the ninjas ability to replicate blood cells to create enough blood for this technqiue. Aka a parent technique is what makes this one possible. This is a trend seen often in the narutoverse.
-Warning to Pharoh: Honestly the only reason you think this technique is that powerful is because it is derived from a biblical act which is only captivating in that sense because well...humans arent capable of magic and moses.....in a way....was. Now you have previously stated that the level of dificluty associated with transfiguring things was based on the likeness of what was being transfigured and what it was being transformed into. Well blood is over 80% water so I fail to see where your getting a Jounin level of difficult from here. However, a limitation was added.

Lake of Blood: See comments I made regaurding Hand of Blood and well go from there based on what you think now.
- Fuuinjutsu Use: I would like to point out that I am not an idiot, have been rping for over five years and I am fully aware that I can not use a tech that is not in my specialties, thank you very much. Honestly I am kind of insulted that this was pointed out at all as it has nothing to do with the validity of the clan but rather a question of my own intelligece which I think has been displayed to be efficent enough to understand this on my own. Grrr. Very Happy

- Seal of Corrosion: You would be right, if the seal put the blood into their veins. However, I fail to see that anywhere in the description. The purpose of this tech, as with 9/10 of these techs is to inflict acidic burns upon the opponents body. Take this into account and make your judgement call. Furthermore I'd like to note that skin to skin contact is, at least in my experience, which has been a minute or three, is increasingly rare and difficult, especially when most rpers fight in full clothing. Also there are techs which remove seals and also you could just as easily cut it out of the skin. There is nothing easy about applying this technique. I am more then willing to up the post count on this one however. But not by more then one or two

- Vampire Fang: I could see the need to up the rank but not the post count. 9 posts is a hell of a long time. Especially with the continued chakra drain on the user. A ninja would be lucky to fire this off once in a battle due to the difficulty in applicaton and the fact that it already drains 70 chakra and will fail to function if the user fails to supply the chakra, restricting what they can do to even defend if they want to continue to have the seal active on the victim. And if, I expect it will be since I offered to do it, was S rank, it would take a hell of a lot more chakra. Please take what Ive said on this also into consideration and refer to my notes on the seal of corrosion about the removal of seals and the difficulty of applying them directly onto a persons body.

Thank you for the time, hope we can work these bits out

Subject: Re: Ketsueki - The Art of Blood Wed 18 Jan 2012, 10:17 pm

Arcane Trade off

One-handed Sealing is denied. Blood can be seen as its own individual element and one-handed seals, again, have no relevance to this Kekkei Genkai.

Distance Restriction

Actually, this is an excerpt from US' Jutsu Guide.

Guide wrote:: • Close (0 - 5m): These techniques are close range; anywhere between a single inch up to five meters. Almost all taijutsu moves are of this range.

• Mid (5m - 10m): These techniques are mid range; anywhere between five meters to ten meters.

• Long (10m+): These techniques are far range; anywhere above ten meters. Almost all puppeteers are of this range.

leafninja.com also has the same ranging system, therefore, for the S-Rank level, the distance restriction can be no longer than 15 meters. All other distances must be altered accordingly.

pH Scaling

That's fine, mistakes often occur. Regarding your new changes, I am going to decline this level of acidity as you are hoping to create large amounts of this blood. It will be an overpowered characteristic. I will, however, accept a pH level of 1 which you had previously had.

Endorphins

In all honesty, I feel like this section is not necessary to your character. It ruins the integrity of this clan with unnecessary theatrics. It barely relates back to your Kekkei Genkai as you are beginning to reach for unneeded additions to the clan. I am going to deny this as a character can regularly be hit with adrenaline in battle which somewhat dulls the pain of an injury.

Gland

Thank you for making the necessary clarifications. Now please limit it to 1 meter.

Increased Clotting Technique

When a scab is made, when one continues vigorous activity, it often splits in areas. That was merely what I was referring to. Your jutsu did not specify that it healed the wound until a point of scabbing, so I would appreciate it if you specifically stated so in its description. Moving forward, a 30 cm by 30 cm diameter is much too large, I believe it should be no bigger than 10cm by 5cm as it is only C level.

Reverse Clotting Technique

Thank you.

Control of Blood Flow

Yes, I quite understand that the death of tissue does not occur immediately. I was merely giving you a heads up, however the other point that it will result in the numbing of a body part is still valid and that needs to be added to your jutsu as a backlash.

Blood Replication Jutsu

Kisame was capable of creating the large masses of water due to his monstrous amount of chakra, which your character does not possess. This jutsu is also under evaluation to be banned from the site. What I have previously stated on the amounts still stands.

Hormone Release

For reasons listed previously in the "Endorphin" section; denied.

Deep Red Resounding Screams

Quote :: Name: Deep Red Resounding Screams
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: -
Description: To use this jutsu requires a source of blood, typically fairly large. When using this technique, by using hand motions, the user can control the blood and manipulate it in waves and torrents. Using this technique does not require hand signs but it does drain a D rank amount of chakra for every post it is used in. (For a refference notice the way Gaara typically manipulates sand with out specific jutsu use).
Chakra Cost: 3 (+1 per post after)

I am looking for a specific volume here.

Small Bombardment

Accepted.

Dark Eye: Fatal Warning

Please alter distance to the above stated 1 meter.

Hand of Blood

I stand by my previous statement; there is no relation between a solid object and a liquid that does not have any properties of blood. Please remove.

Creature Style

Thank you, Accepted.

Warrior Style

Please limit splatter to 3 meters.

Warning to Pharaoh

I want specific dimensions please. I know I don't know what an average sized pond is.

Lake of Blood

My previous statement still stands. Please remove.

Forced Entry, Seal of Corrosion

Quote :: Name: Forced Entry, Seal of Corrosion
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Rank: B
Element: -
Description: Using this jutsu the user must gain direct contact with the persons body. Clothes do not count, it must be skin to skin. When the seal is placed upon the body, it also siphons a good deal of blood out of the users system and places it into the seal. This seal will lay dormant for three posts. After these three posts, the seal can be activated with an additional C rank amount of chakra, flooding the targets body with a liter of blood. It is highly recommended that this also be used with the Blood Replication technique to replace the blood that is lost.
Chakra Cost:15

Excuse me for misinterpreting that. Please alter the description so that it may be more precise. As it still stands, denied.

Vampire's Fang, Closer to the Dark

After consideration, this jutsu is accepted.

Please make the corrections! I hope to have you up before the start of the new Bomber Plot. (:

Subject: Re: Ketsueki - The Art of Blood Wed 18 Jan 2012, 11:24 pm

Clan has been Archived due to loss of interest.