Kaguya, Kenshi [Konohagakure Genin]

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Kaguya, Kenshi

THE INFO.

Name: Kaguya, Kenshi
Nickname:

-By friends- Ken-san

Name that has spread due to his ability with fire and his misbehaviour- The Salamander

Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Kenshi's appearance is almost the complete opposite of what you would expect from someone of the Kaguya clan. Instead of the signature white hair, he has dyed his hair red, showing his love for fire. It also shows rebellion against his father, who wanted Kenshi to be just like him.

Standing at 5'6, he is about average height for his age, if not a slight bit taller than average. He weighs 140lbs and is very lean, with little fat on his body. He has a very structed jaw line, small nose and average ears. His eyebrows are slightly singed in parts due to exposure to fire on a regular basis. There is usually a slightly sadisitic smirk on his face. At times he actually does smile, but thos occasions are rare.

Kenshi wears a scarf around his neck, white with black stripes, that was given to him by his mother right before she died. On his torso he wears a tan vest that is open, exposing his upper body. His pants are also tan and are a bit baggy. The reason they are like this is so he can extend his legs all the way when jumping or kicking. On his feet he wears nothing. Kenshi says that being barefoot allows him to fight better and is a lot more comfortable than any shoes he's ever had.

Forehead Protector: Kenshi wears his forehead protector tied around his upper right arm, to hide the scars from his youth.
Personality:
A very energetic and loud boy, Kenshi tends to be the center of attention any time he's around a group of people. He has a talent for angering people with only a few words also. Most people don't like him and he doesn't like most people. The one's that he actually likes are lucky for they have a great friend. For those that he doesn't like, they have a very annoying enemy on their hands.

That is just what he shows on the outside. On the inside, in his head, Kenshi is a very dark boy. Due to the brutality and abuse his dad showed him when he was young, Kenshi doesn't view things the same as most other kids his age. Some that have seen the serious side of him say that he is way too mature for his age. When most kids want to go play or hang out with their friends, Kenshi would rather burn something to take away the pain of his past. Only his closest friends know anything about his past. Everyone that doesn't know just sees him as an irritant, someone that just likes to cause trouble and has no regard for the people he hurts in the process.

One thing about Kenshi is he loves the study of his own body. He tries to have self awareness at all times, even when doing other things. He describes this as a way for him to completely stay in harmony with his body and still stay focused on the task at hand. This also helps him to stay calm in most situations, which is the better side of him. Usually, he is very loud and the center of all attention. But when alone or on a mission, he will focus on a small flame in his head and pour all his emotions into it, clearing his mind completely. He has learned that this helps with whatever he is doing and allows him to focus in on things better than he could before.

Another things about Kenshi is his love for women. Not a pervert by any means, but he enjoys the company of women over the company of even his closest friends. He isn't one to go long without a girlfriend and when he doesn't have one, he is constantly on the search for a new one. Putting aside everything he is doing, he will leave everyone behind just to go and talk to a pretty girl. Most of his friends hate this about him, wishing that he would put girls out of his mind and focus more on training. Kenshi says he trains enough, why can't he have a little fun.

When it comes to someone of higher rank, like a sensei, the Hokage or just a adult who thinks they have the authority to tell him what to do, Kenshi tends to rebel. He has problems dealing with authority due to the way his father was to him and what he did to his father is proof of his rebellious nature. Although he wouldn't do anything like that to anyone in the village. Kenshi loves everyone in Konohagakure no sato even though he won't admit it. He is very thankful to all the people that have helped him get to where is now, but he just won't voice it to them. A very stubborn boy is what he is.
Clan: Kaguya
Nindō: "One day I'll leave this place and burn a fiery path through this country until I reach my destiny!"

THE NINJA.

Origin: Land of Fire
Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Elemental Affinities: Katon
Combat Style:
Kenshi has a very explosive combat style. He's not one to rush straight in but when he sees an opening he will take complete advantage of it and try to finish the fight in that one attack. Most of his attacks have to do with his strong affinity for fire or his swift kicks and punches. He doesn't tend to use kunai or shuriken like other ninja. He says that isn't personal enough. Kenshi likes to see the fear in his opponents eyes when he defeats them. Another thing about Kenshi's fighting style is that he tends to try and move in the likeness monkey. He incorporates acrobatics into his movements. Flipping and hitting all fours is one of the tactics he uses for evading attacks. Also, he has learned to time his Katon jutsu so that he can attack while in the air, hitting his opponent with a simple but effective attack when they are least expecting it.

When it comes to his Kekkei Genkai, Kenshi doesn't tend to use it at all. The only time he will ever use it is when extreme anger takes over, he is close to death or someone very close to him is in danger. Due to the way his father treated him, Kenshi hates the fact that he is a Kaguya. Most would take advantage of the bone manipulation, but Kenshi doesn't. He'd rather just blow things up.
Special Characteristics:

Katson Prodigy:

Evasiveness:

Perception:

THE BACKGROUND.

History:

Origin Arc

Vicious sounds of violence tore through the silence of the forest. A man scrambled from tree to tree, looking over his shoulder frantically, nearly out of breath. A huge, white moon loomed over the whole scene, lighting up the darkness enough for the man to see. The thing was, if he could see, his enemies could see him too. This man was a member of the Kaguya clan. His white hair and pale skin gave this away. His assailants were a group of elite mercenaries sent to kill him for crimes against Kirigakure no sato. They planned to kill him and get back home to their families before the night was over with.

A small light shone from the cabin near a small river that flowed through the forest. Ayame stared out into the darkness, searching for her husband. She could hear her newborn son, Kenshi, crying behind her. The baby could sense her worry and was pitching a fit. Where are you, Raizo? she though to herself as she walked back to where baby Kenshi lay and picked him up, cradling the young boy in her arms. Kenshi looked up at his mother with his soft blue eyes and attempted to speak but it was beyond his abilities. All that came out was a bunch of gibberish that we describe as baby talk. Ayame smiled down at her baby and walked back and forth, waiting for her husband.

Raizo sat quietly as the men rushed by, heading further into the forest. He had evaded them for a time but he knew they would eventually be back. Most importantly, he couldn't let them reach his home, where the love of his life was. He could care less for the boy. "Bringing that boy into this world was a mistake. He will only feel the hate that I have felt all of my life." Raizo steeled his resolve and moved stealthily after the men who had been following him, intent on killing them one by one before they could see him again or endanger his love.

Ayame stood looking down at the snoozing little baby, a smile on her face. She loved the little boy even though she knew her husband didn't feel the same. Kenshi had given her new hope to live and strive to be a better person and change from the woman that she used to be. Odd sounds reached Ayame's ears from outside. Footsteps moving almost inaudibly through leaves on the ground. If it hadn't been for the deep silence that had enveloped the whole area before they showed up, Ayame wouldn't have heard a thing.

Peeking out the window, she saw movement all around. She could see men darting from tree to tree getting closer and closer to her small home. Fear gripped her heart as she rushed to where little Kenshi lay and grabbed him, wrapping him tightly in his blanket and hiding him in a cupboard. As she was turning around, the door flew off it's hinges and landed in the center of the room. A tall, muscular man stepped in, his ugly tattooed face distorting into a grotesque smile when he saw the woman standing there. "Hello there. Is there a man here by any chance? Has white hair, really weird looking. Kinda like your hair."

Ayame screamed as loud as her lungs could muster and started to throw things at the man. He just laughed and walked towards her, his long legs closing the distance in just a few strides. Once he reached her, the brute of a man lifted her off the ground by her throat and repeatedly slammed her against the ground until her body went completely limp. Then the man started to search the house. By some twist of fate, the man forgot to look in one cupboard and inside that cupboard lay the still sleeping Kenshi, who had miraculously stayed asleep through all the commotion.

The scream split the night. Raizo threw caution to the wind when he heard the sound of his wife screaming and ran faster than he had ever run in his life. Laughter filled the air as he got closer to his home and he could hear men talking all around. Anger surged through his veins and he tapped into the power of his clan. Using his bone manipulation technique, he slaughtered all the men before he even came in sight of them. It was like a bone graveyard. The whole area had bones erupting from the ground and the screams of dying men filled the air.

Stumbling through the space where his door used to be, Raizo set eyes on his dead wife. Tears streamed from his eyes as he hit his knees next to her and lay there, sobbing into her mangles body. He would have probably stayed there and died in his own sorrow if it wasn't for the sound of a baby crying behind him. Following the sound, he walked towards the only untouched cupboard in the house and opened it, looking down on his son. This was all he had left of his wife, this boy, so he reached down, picked him up and carried him in one arm as he went about cleaning up the mess and burying his wife.

Childhood Arc

Once Kenshi was old enough to understand, Raizo sat him down and explained what happened to his mother that dreadful night not long after he was born. Kenshi sat and cried long and hard when he knew the truth, wishing he had been old enough to do something at that point. Before he could finish grieving, his father was back, smacking him in the face for being weak, saying that tears were for the ones who had given up. Kenshi sneered at his father and walked out of the cabin. Using the ability that he had had since he was a young boy, Kenshi created a small flame on the tip of his finger and put it up to the house, watching it slowly start to smoke.

Raizo sat inside, being as grumpy as ever when he caught the smell of smoke. Looking around, he couldn't find the source of the smell so he walked outside. Kenshi was standing at the corner and Raizo could see the smoke coming from in front of him. With a roar of anger he rushed the young boy and tackled him from behind, proceeding to beat him in the back of the head. While this was going on the house burst into flames and started burning brightly. Raizo stopped what he was doing and stared in anguish at his house.

Kenshi looked up at his father who was paying him no attention and decided that he was going to end it here and now. His mother was already dead and he was left with this man as a father. With a cry of fury, he blasted the man who had been called his father into the flames of the house with a fireball. Raizo screamed as his body was enveloped by flames. Kenshi sat and watched his father was incinerated by the beautiful flames. Turning away from the scene, Kenshi walked away, into the woods, towards the only place he knew to go: The great village, Konohagakure no sato!

Two Shinobi stood at the entrance to the village, looking at the small form of the boy who was walking towards them. It had been two weeks since Kenshi left behind his former life and set out for the village. His body was filthy, clothes ripped and pure white hair filled with dirt and all kinds of twigs. The men rushed towards him, catching the boy just as he started to collapse.

A bright light shone down on Kenshi as he opened his eyes and looked around. He was in what looked like a medical wing. His clothes were gone and his body clean. Refreshed, that's how he felt. It had been a long time since he had felt this way. Clean and energized.

Getting out of the bed, Kenshi searched for some clothes. All he could manage to find was a pair of tan pants and a black shirt. Pulling it on over his head, he looked around again. There was a note on the bedside table so he walked over and grabbed it, looking down at it. It reads. "Young man, please know that you will now be allowed to stay here in the village as long as you enroll in the ninja academy and contribute to the village to the best of your abilities. Thank you and good luck, The Hokage." Kenshi shrugged and it put it into his pocket, walking out into the open street in search of the ninja academy.

Academy Arc

The first few weeks at the Academy went by smoothly. Kenshi learned many different things about being a ninja that he hadn't known before. He also met lots of people he hadn't seen around before and soon had many friends. It caught him by surprise that he was so popular. All the kids crowded around him his first day and asked him about his clan. He told them a small bit and then went shyly to his seat. They all went off and started talking about how cool the Kaguya clan was. From that day on Kenshi knew that it was gonna be a good year. With the way the first few weeks were going he had no worries.

Over the next few years Kenshi studied night and day on his Katon jutsu, his Taijutsu and his school jutsu. After class he would go home and train until he couldn't move. Every day he would repeat the process, always managing to work himself to the point of exhaustion. With this training schedule he soon became very good at Taijutsu and at using his Katon. His agility and strength had risen high above what they had been a few years before.

As the years passed Kenshi grew taller and stronger than ever beofre. Now he had girls hitting on him almost every day at school and him and his friends were always hanging out. He trained the same way he used to but he had acquired the endurance to last longer than he had before. Now he could train like he used to and still be able to stay awake and go hang out with his friends. They would spend most days at the park or go to the outskirts of the village, messing with people and just having fun.

Graduation day came around and Kenshi was the first up at the front of the class room to receive his headband. After that day he put the headband around his right arm. He wore it with pride and honor. He was now a ninja of Konohagakure no sato.

Genin Arc

Now Kenshi is a Genin, waiting patiently to be put in a team. Until then he plans to train and cause mischief throughout the village and hang with what few friends he has. (This arc will grow as Kenshi progresses in rank.)

Roleplay Sample:

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THE ARSENAL.

Academy Jutsu

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Katon

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Taijutsu

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Clan Jutsu

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Genin Kit

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FACE CLAIM.

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Age : 29 Posts : 1797

Welcome to US, glad to see you've already decided on a character. Your app is fairly nice, but there are quite a few issues I'll have to point out.~
Appearance • This is more of a nitpick than anything; but do be weary that Ninja are far shorter than humans of the modern day. Whether this is because Kishimoto is racist and thinks Asians are short; or because time has gradually made humanity taller is beside the point. A ninja at 5'8" would actually be considered quite tall Canonically, but if you wish to keep this height, it's perfectly okay. As long as it's mentioned that the character is significantly taller than his peers. (For reference, Naruto was 5'5", and he seemed to be 'above average' to average for his age).
Personality • You'll need to greatly expand on your personality. Do remember that the personality of the character does not necessarily have to reflect yourself, and actually makes for an interesting RPing experience to place yourself out of your comfort zone. To help you with expanding the personality, it helps to imagine things like your character's hobbies, what their likes and dislikes are, who they assosciate themselves with, how they react around people, how they react in combat, how they react to superiors, etc. etc. A detailed personality makes those pesky social RP's much more bearable.
Origin • Another nitpick; the Origin should be a country, and not a village (or a specific location in that country). Therefore, in your case it would just be "Land of Fire" or "Fire Country" (Or if you want to be Japanese Hi no Kuni works).
Elemental Affinity • You're allowed to start with 2 elements total, whether you wish to use any jutsu or not with the second element is up to you, but just know that you'll need to go through a grueling training topic to achieve that second element later on.
Combat Style • This will also require some more depth, but it shouldn't be very hard. If you reference the Creation Template Guide, you'll find that this paragraph pretty much covers everything:

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How does your character like to fight? Hit and run tactics, a fearless tank on the battlefield or do you lurk in the shadows and kill silently. There are many different tactics and here is where you can write a brief description of the combat style in which encapsulates your character. This in some regards can be seen as a characters 'Combat Nindō'. Include such things as your strengths/weaknesses, the range in which your character likes to fight, any martial or other styles they have learn't, and your 'trump card' or otherwise known as 'Signature Jutsu'.

"Kanton" • Besides the fact that "Kanton" is typo'd, you seem to have oddly placed "code:" words located in this section. A simple skim through it should easily eliminate the error. Though a bit of a nitpick, it does help make your application look much nicer.
Clan Jutsu • Please use a font color more visible than white. I almost missed the section if not for the random spoiler tag that peaked my interest. Also, the warning at the end isn't really necessary, and can actually be thrown into combat style to give your character some more depth.

That is all for now~

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Edited everything that needed to be fixed. Thanks for the input by the way (: It's always good to have someone that will critique your work.

Age : 29 Posts : 1797

Everything seems fine.

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Well your app looks nice I just noticed this small thing...

You don't have a genin kit. Unless you wish to pay for one at a later date it would be best to get one now. With out it you have no access to any of the things it offers.

Code:: [b]Name:[/b] Genin Kit
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1
[b]Contents:[/b] 6 Kunai [6], 10 Shuriken [5], 9 Senbon [3], 10 Makibishi [2], 4 Exploding Notes [4], 3 Exploding Pouches [1], 3 Smoke Pellets [1], 12m String [4], 1 Windmill Shuriken [5], 1 File & Scissor [1].

Of course I understand if you don't want it. Just let me know.

Other than that I see nothing wrong with it and will give you my approval once we clear this up.

Age : 30 Posts : 30

Added the Genin kit. Thanks for the heads up man (:

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2/2 Approved

Don't forget to make an account here buddy. Clicky

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