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Aito Uchiha
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 |  Subject: Aito Uchiha Thu 04 Mar 2010, 4:30 am | |
| Basic Information:
Name: Aito
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Physical Appearance:
Aito wears a black cloak with red designs. He almost never smiles and has black/white hair. Aito wears red gloves to grip his sword Egil. He would wear a ANBU mask (he steals them) to cover his identify. His sword Egil got the ANBU mask sign on the end and is very sharp. It also got some permanent blood stains on it to. Egil is a black sword that Aito uses mostly in his battles.
Character Personality: He is always bored because all of his family members died. So he kills animals for a living. He always like to spar with someone and will try to kill them. He likes to rob from people like their headbands, ryo and ANBU masks(if they are ANBU). He is wanted in all nations except Konoha. He isn't a coward and will even face a Missing-Nin if he has to. He is considered a Missing-Nin because he got the ''Line'' on his headband even though he still visits Konoha. Some people admire him for some of the stuff that he does.
Catch Phrase: You cant beat me
Rank Information:
Rank: Genin
Village Affiliation: Konohagakure
Special Information:
Character Speciality:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Weaponary
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Fire
Sub: Earth
Skill Information:
Jutsu Template:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description:This jutsu sends multiple balls of fire at a target. It is also possible to hide shuriken within the fireballs, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. For the most part, however, this jutsu is used as a distraction.
Name:Fire Release: Great Fire Ball Jutsu
Rank: C
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Description:After performing the necessary hand seals, a ninja inhales air via their mouth and, gather up chakra in their chest, then spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range.
Background Information
Academy Arc- Aito was 8 when he went to the academy and graduated at 11. He had a hard time because he couldn't control his chakra. When he was 10 he left for a little bit and found Egil. He returned with Engil and it was banned. Aito left and trained by himself. He did all the basic techniques in less than a year. Next he goes to Iruka and showed him and Iruka failed him. Aito then learns Fire Release: Pheonix Immortal Fire Technique. Iruka pased him and told Aito's sensei about that jutsu.
Genin Arc- When he was 12 he became a genin and was enjoying. He never listened to his sensei and went back to the academy. Iruka still banned Engil so Aito left agian. He trains and trys to learn Kenjutsu but it was advance for him. So he goes out the village for a little bit to train. As he left the village he gets jumped by ninja's and take Engil. But Engil's special ability comes back to Aito and controls him for 5 minutes. The sword kills the bandits and witnesses started to call Aito an assassin. So he kills all witnesses and goes back to the village with an ANBU mask. He goes to his teacher and tells him he was ready to become a genin. His teacher said he had to face him to be in the Chunin Exams. Aito beats him with Engil and now awaits for the Chunin Exams. As he awaits he is trying to learn new jutsu's to beat people in the Chunin Exams. His teacher is trying to make him learn about the Eight Gates but Aito wants to learn Kenjutu. So Aito wanted to learn Kenjutsu before going to the Chunin Exams then after the Chunin Exams he wanted to learn about the Eight Gates. So right now he is trying to learn Kenjutsu. He is also currently trying to increase the power of his newest jutsu Fire Release: Great Fireball Jutsu.
Role-Play Sample: Akio walks out of Konoha and was looking for animals to kill. As he was looking he was thinking about all the people he killed. When he saw a deer he used Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique. Not knowing Missing-Nin were there he went up to the deer and fell for their trap. He got caught in a net and got knocked out by poison. When he woke up he found himself in a pit. He jumped out and found a Missing-Nin in front of it. He does Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique and saw the Missing-Nin skin rip off. He then uses Substitution Jutsu so if any other Nin come he would be ready. When all the other Nin come all they see is a burnt skull as Akio used Fire Release: Flame Bullet. They all turned to ashes as Akio left. When Akio went back to Akio with his dead deer the villagers asked him what happened because he had blood on his headband. He didn't saw anything and went to his house.[/color]
Last edited by Aito Uchiha on Fri 05 Mar 2010, 2:40 am; edited 4 times in total |
|   | | CYANIDE CANDY
Posts : 1084
| | Subject: Re: Aito Uchiha Thu 04 Mar 2010, 4:49 am | |
| Uchiha is not an open clan at the moment.
Iwagakure is a closed village.
A longer description of your physical appearance is needed.
More history is needed, too. You need to separate them in arcs like, Birth Arc, Academy Arc, Genin Arc, ect... |
| | | | Aito Uchiha
Posts : 8
| | Subject: Re: Aito Uchiha Thu 04 Mar 2010, 5:00 am | |
| | edited and waiting for feedback |
| | | | Caranore
Age : 35
Posts : 1492
| | Subject: Re: Aito Uchiha Thu 04 Mar 2010, 5:07 am | |
| | History needs to be longer, each one atleast half of your RP sample, if not the same size. |
| | | | Aito Uchiha
Posts : 8
| | Subject: Re: Aito Uchiha Thu 04 Mar 2010, 5:24 am | |
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| | | | CYANIDE CANDY
Posts : 1084
| | Subject: Re: Aito Uchiha Thu 04 Mar 2010, 5:37 am | |
| You need to take out all the bits about Iwagakure in your app, such as in your personality.
Mentions of Canon Characters in your history need to be taken out.
Your history still needs to be a little longer.
You only have the basic jutsu in your app. It is recommended you include a few more. |
| | | | Aito Uchiha
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| | Subject: Re: Aito Uchiha Thu 04 Mar 2010, 5:52 am | |
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| | | | CYANIDE CANDY
Posts : 1084
| | Subject: Re: Aito Uchiha Thu 04 Mar 2010, 5:55 am | |
| | By Canon Characters, I refer to the mentioning of Iruka in your history. You need to take his name out and instead, replace it with just 'The Academy Teacher' or a fake name. Iruka does not exist here. |
| | | | Vegapunk
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| | Subject: Re: Aito Uchiha Thu 04 Mar 2010, 9:42 am | |
| | Also, this application will not be accepted until it is put into the code given in the character template. The code is the green writing, and that must be used. ^^ |
| | | | Aito Uchiha
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| | Subject: Re: Aito Uchiha Fri 05 Mar 2010, 2:55 am | |
| | edited with code |
| | | | Pattycakes
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| | Subject: Re: Aito Uchiha Fri 05 Mar 2010, 4:00 am | |
| | 2+ paragraphs in both looks and personality |
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