A Plot Idea

Age : 29 Posts : 3145

I had an idea for a plot in regards to Kumo and Konoha and more particularly, a war between the two.

Since Becky's character has acquired the title of Raikage three years ago, it's still very possible that some of her underlings dream of their own Kage-ship and taking control for themselves. The plot would involve an old veteran of sorts, a respected and powerful warrior (general, right hand of the last Raikage etc.) returning to Kumogakure. He was away on some secret mission, and is obviously outraged to know that his old master (and friend) died. At the sight of the changes being brought to Kumo by Becky's more 'Konoha-esque' Kage, he leaves and returns with an 'army' to take back Kumo. Obviously upon being defeated (if that happens), he flees to Konoha where he convinces the Hokage and the Council to aide him in reclaiming the village, that he believes to be rightfully his. And then... there is no script for what happens Smile

In regards to the plot itself if some wish to join this NPC, perhaps that could be arranged, although really, the focus of the plot would be to bring Konoha and Kumo to bare their teeth and arms against each other. After all, what's a better plot than outright war and destruction?! Also, maybe the Veteran already has an army (Julius Caesar ftw!) or perhaps he is a leader of a Clan and through Clan alliances, gains support from like a third of the village. Whatever works best ^_^

Age : 31 Posts : 8965

I have issues with the actual story, for example. He gets pissy because Becky's character is Konoha-esque as you put it yet runs Konoha to ask for help, who would probably not have a problem with Kumo if they were operating their village more like Konoha themselves.

Regardless of the plot idea, we aren't looking to put a plot like this into play. We run our site off of events because they're easier to control, though we do have a plot already in play being roleplayed out as we speak it is so loose that nothing has even been written up on it because its completely free form and will change in real time. That's for the suggestion anyway.

Age : 29 Posts : 3145

When I said 'Konoha-esque' I meant more peaceful + kind/good/warm/nice/considerate. Etc.

And yeah, he wants his village back. He is gonna do whatever it takes, and since Konoha is 2nd/1st Strongest, it's his last but desperate resort. :/

Age : 31 Posts : 8965

I know what you meant, which is why it would make zero sense for Konoha to help, going out and seeking war to put a dictator back in charge of Kumo.

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Age : 29 Posts : 4301

Plus I doubt Dan's character would help a Kumogakure Ninja in the first place, it states in his application that he's not the biggest fan of 'em.
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Age : 30 Posts : 1236

Cookie Monster wrote:: Plus I doubt Dan's character would help a Kumogakure Ninja in the first place, it states in his application that he's not the biggest fan of 'em.

^ Strong this. I like the idea in essence, but it's finicky in how the villages themselves operate. Love the full-on attention given to Kumo though, weaken them then we come in for the swift and easy kill.

Age : 29 Posts : 3145

Yeah that's the idea. It's not really about helping the Old Veteran. It's about having an excuse to go 'Let's destroy Kumo'. And of course, yes maybe said Veteran would regain control, but he would be an underling of the Hokage and de facto, the Village would also belong to Konoha, if Konoha won the war. Also in the Veteran's eyes, he will do everything to regain control. He won't see the goal of the Hokage, before it's too late. That is, if Konoha wins. If Kumo wins, I guess Persy would become harsher through the process becoming more like the Raikages before her.

Age : 31 Posts : 8965

Quote :: Regardless of the plot idea, we aren't looking to put a plot like this into play. We run our site off of events because they're easier to control, though we do have a plot already in play being roleplayed out as we speak it is so loose that nothing has even been written up on it because its completely free form and will change in real time. That's for the suggestion anyway.

Age : 29 Posts : 4301

Solved.