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Basic Information:

Name:
Ookami, Fang

Age:
14

Gender:
male

Physical Appearance:
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Fang is, to say the least, hairy. The hair on his arms are long, but get shorter the farther down you go. His hands have short hair. This same can be said for his legs and feet. His eyes are completely black. He has seven wrinkles on his elongated nose. His facial hair is short and dark blue, excluding his sideburns. His sideburns, at the bottom, are dark blue. It extends through three other blues until the tips, which are white. The white tips only appear on his sideburns. The other long tips are baby blue. You can tell that, under all of this hair, he is extremely muscular.

He is 6 feet, one inches tall. He weighs 220 pounds of pure muscle and ferocity. His teeth are bright white and shine when in the right light. His nails are dimmer, but they too are white. Well, when they are clean anyway. They are generally dirty from running and climbing. He wears a loin cloth to hide his private area. The cloth blends in with his fur. His gear blends in with his fur, also. His headband is around his waist. This is where he attaches his kunai, shuriken, etc. His tail can easily attain his gear, as well as his hands. This tail is proportionate to his body and is long haired. It can function as a hand, as all Ookamis' tails can.




Personality:
He is, first of all, family oriented. He would do anything to protect his family. If someone insults his family, he is quick to throw down without a second thought. They are his weak spot. Another weak spot of his is his honor. He acts with as much honor as he can in every situation. He does this to gain his family respect. He is very prideful and is quick to defend it. He trusts his instincts and doesn't take much time to think about things. If needed, he will sit there and plan, but he doesn't enjoy it. He is intelligent, but prefers to use his speed, reflexes, and strength in battle. He doesn't have good people skill. He has come to dislike people for their cruelty. He is quick to snap at people, unless he is working with them at the time. If they are united to solve a common problem, he is relaxed with them. He refuses to back down from fights. He doesn't want to start fights, but if his pride and honor are challenged, his goal is to rip the challenger apart. He tends to use a lot of sarcastic remarks toward shinobi of his level. He shows respect to those that are higher level than he is, unless they are his enemy. He shows no respect to his enemy, only fierceness. He wants to lead whatever team he is on. He cares for those that work under him and does not want to see them die. Though he is willing to put their life at risk to get the job done, he would put his own life on the line to save them.


Clan Information:

Clan Name:
Ookami
Clan Location:
Konoha
Clan Traits:
Ookami can go for four days without starting to get hungry, assuming they had a large meal.

Kekkei Genkai:
The Ooakmi clan are half wolves. They have elongated faces, like a wolf's. Their mouths hold many teeth, each one pointed and razor sharp. Their jaw power is increased to easily bite through flesh and bone. Their jaws are not strong enough to bite through metal, however. Their nails are long and pointed. They are also very hard and sharp. These are used for slashing at close quarters combat. It can also be used to dig holes into different things like dirt and trees. The palms of their hands and bottoms of their feet are padded. This makes their feet much tougher so they can run without shoes or gloves. They have hair all over. The hair can be different colors and nobody's color pattern is exactly the same. The hair acts like an insulator when needed. It also serves as a protective layer of the skin. The tails are proportionate to the body and can be used as a hand in some cases, like reaching into a pocket and throwing a kunai. It is also used for extra balance. Their ears are long and can rotate, like a wolf. Hearing is increased 25%. This makes them more sensitive to sound genjutsu. Their sence of smell is improved 35%. They are 15% more agile than normal and, when on all fours, 15% faster at running. Everything else are human traits.


Secret Clan Jutsu:
Spoiler:


Clan Weapons:
Spoiler:

History: This clan originated just like humans did. Except they started off as wolves, not monkeys. They mimicked what humans did, but stayed away from them as much as possible. The made their own traditions. They made their own religion. They made their own fighting style. They learned from their surroundings.

The Ookami used their superior senses and intelligence for hunting. They were fearsome, using wolf tactics and human. Their fur camouflaged them with their surroundings, as did their instincts. The Ookami grew much from observing the tactics of humans, but when the tables flipped, the humans struggled to comprehend and successfully apply the tactics used by the Ookami. This led to jealousy.

The Ookami wanted to be peaceful. The assisted humans where they could, but due to human nature, they were spat at and harmed. The Ookami kept their peace with humans. They did not fight back. They backed down whenever possible and only fought in self defense. This led to propaganda being spread that the Ookami were cold blood killers.

The Ookami were hunted and killed for sport. The wolf men eventually fought back. A war began between wolf man and wolf. The war was lost in the sands of time, but it inspired the tales of the werewolf. Now, the Ookami are nearly extinct. They live amongst humans now, but keep their traditions and the memory of mans savageness alive.

Clan Details: Open with my permission

https://ultimateshinobi.darkbb.com/approved-clans-f18/ookami-clan-finished-t373.htm#3265

Rank Information:

Rank:
Genin

Village Affiliation:
Konoha

Special Information:

Character Speciality:

Main:
Ninjutsu

Sub:
Weaponry

-Primary=Exotic

-Secondary=Blunt

Elemental Affinity:
Lightning

Main:
Lightning

Sub:
None (Genin, can't have one)

Special Characteristics:
None

Skill Information:

Jutsus:

Basic jutsus

Spoiler:


Lightning Ninjutsu
Spoiler:

Cannon Lightning Ninjutsu
Spoiler:

Weapons:
Name: Hammer
Rank: E
Type: Other
Natural Abilities: Obviously for building and deconstructing. This can also be thrown to cause blunt trauma or to slice through flesh and muscle. The slicing part would be the back end of the hammer that removes nails. This can be used like a kunai, but is not an ideal replacement due to it's not made for fighting. There is a hoop at the bottom of the metal handle to attach to a belt or loin cloth.

Name: Wing and Prayer
Quantity: 2
Rank: C
Appearance:
https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img219/2183/kanabool0.jpg


A difference from the picture is the ring at the bottom. This is not on Wing or Prayer. The handles are a reflective black. The ridges are not there. The very bottom, instead of a round ball, is a spiral. The point of the spiral isn't sharp, it is just for show. The top half of Wing and Prayer is the same as in the picture.They are five feet in length.

Special Abilities/Characteristics: At full force, meaning with a keeop and complete focus, one of the Kanabo can break up to a D rank weapon. Used at the same time with full force and focus they can break a C rank weapon. The same is applied to armor. They can break 7 D rank weapons and 14 E rank weapons before breaking. After the mission or fight, they can be repaired. Wing and Prayer and single handed weapons and are often used together for quick impact. The studs create more impact. Each swing has potential to create internal damage. The weapons are repaired upon the next rp.
Origin: The Kanabo was created by the Samurai. The Japanese demons carried around this weapon. Archangel herself was created by Fang's great grandfather and was passed down through the generations. He made these weapons after having fought a ninja who had used one against him and had put him out of action for three months. Fang's great grandfather refused for this to happen again, so he made a Kanabo of his own. Thus, Wing and Prayer was born and a line of hand crafted Kanabo began down Fang's line of Ookami.

Name: Archangel
Quantity: 1
Rank: C
Appearance:
https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img219/2183/kanabool0.jpg


A difference from the picture is the ring at the bottom. This is not on Archangel. The handel itself is a reflective black. The ridges are not there. The very bottom, instead of a round ball, is a spiral. The point of the spiral isn't sharp, it is just for show. The top half of Archangel is the same as in the picture. It is eight feet in length.
Special Abilities/Characteristics: At full force, Archangel can break C rank weapons and below. This requires a keeop and full focus from the user. The same is applied to C rank and below armor. Before breaking, it can break 1 C ranks, 10 D ranks, and 18 E ranks and is automatically repaired upon the next RP. The studs create more force on this already bone crushing weapon. Each swing has potential to cause internal damage.

Origin: The Kanabo was created by the Samurai. The Japanese demons carried around this weapon. Archangel herself was created by Fang's great grandfather and was passed down through the generations. He made this weapon after having fought a ninja who had used one against him and had put him out of action for three months. Fang's great grandfather refused for this to happen again, so he made a Kanabo of his own. Thus, Archangel was born and a line of hand crafted Kanabo began down Fang's line of Ookami.

Background Information

History:

Birth: Fang was born into a wealthy family. He was given everything he needed to become a great shinobi. He trained endlessly on his basic taijutsu. He studied all the books he could find and used all the tutors he could buy. He soon, at the age of seven, out smarted most of the people in konoha. He could tell you the best tactics to use in a fight and the best ways to give you control of a group. He could even decifer most languages and moris code. At the age of seven, he was a threat to anyone against him.

His mother and father loved him. He remembered his father fondly. They played together and his father taught him many tactics. He taught him how to take care of his mother if he died. Little did they both know that, at the age of eight, Fang's father did die. Fang would strive to avenge him.

His family was killed by a group of outlaws. Although fang tried extremely hard to discover who his fathers' murderers were, nobody would reveal the name. He asked around, but everyone he met would not reveal the name. They all gave him looks of pity. To this day, nobody has told him, and to this day, he trains avenge his father.

The period after his father's burial was hardest on him. It was hardest on his body and hardest on his soul. He was slightly insane for a few months. He barely stopped training to eat, sleep, or even use the bathroom. He prepared himself for killing. For being a warrior. For taking revenge at any cost, even if it would cost him his own life.

Academy: At this point, he was no longer insane. Well, not at the point that he used to be anyway. He was still extremely driven to find the killers of his father. He was mega focused during his training in the academy. He quickly learned the jutsus taught by the teachers and spent most of his time attempting to master them. He became great with kunai and shurriken, learning all the tactics on how to use them effectively and how important they are.

He made a few friends right from the start. But he also made enemies right away. He knew not why they hated him so much. He didn't care much. They weren't of any importance to him. But they refused to leave him alone. They did everything humanly possible to mess with him, to get under his skin. He refused to show weakness to them, making them more hateful.

One day, when he was walking home alone. The group of haters (for lack of a better term =] ) surrounded him. Without hesitation, Fang unleashed his animalistic side. He walked home banged and bruised, but the group was dragged to the hospital. The group was kicked out of the academy, while he was not punished at all. He was the hero of the academy, but he was also the terror.

Testing day came. Fang was prepared for it. He flew through it, preforming at genin level. There was no doubt in his mind that he had passed. He succeeded at the top of his class. He went home to his mother, proud to be the top rookie, so far, of konoha. When he arrived home, his mother was waiting with his father's old combat gloves. He planned on fighting hard with these gloves. These gloves would kill those men...



Role-Play Sample:
This is an actual post I made on the original US

And so it began.....
Oushi was charging toward the village, directly across from Sheekoe on the other side. He held two kunai, both with explosive tags. He had more like these prepared. He ran the most aerodynamic way he could, his head at waiste level, his arms back like scorpion stingers. His fire-red hair blew backwards and to the left as he ran. The pure speed made it fly backwards and the raging sandstorm, that provided almost zero visibility, blew it slightly to the left. His vest was light blue vest was zipped and protected his neck from the stinging sand. His Jounin vest was unzipped, hardly blowing in the wind from the weight of his ninja tools. His headband was shinning, even in the sandstorm. Sand got imbetween his toes as he ran, but he didn't notice. He was too focused at the job at hand.
Most of his skin was covered. His arms were wrapped and he wore gloves. His mask and hair protected most of his head. His shoes were toeless and his gloves let his index finger show. His eyes were showing, byakugan activated, intence fire burning within them. He was ready.
And so it began....
He reached the boarder of the village. He could see fine through the sandstorm thanks to his Byakugan. He knew Sheekoe wouldn't be seeing fine, though, and would be traveling WAY too fast. Probably. He had to come up with a way to signal Sheekoe to tell him where to go. He thought of one of the red flairs in his jounin vest. That would work.....
He hadn't seen any bandits so far, but he could see the tower. Infront of the tower three bandits. One stood proud and tall. Oushi asumed that was the leader. The other two, just from looks alone, were shadowed by him. He had some sort of leadership position. Close to the tower were bandits running around, gathering hostages. With his Byakugan, Oushi Hyuuga saw more guards and hostages inside of the building. He had to take out the leader before the hostages got hurt.
Thinking quick, Oushi jumped onto a roof, silently. He imidiately jumped toward the tower, spinning in the air so that he landed faceing the ground, feet on the tower. He fell towards the earth. He threw the two kunai, killing the minions and landing in the Hyuuga taijutsu stance directly behind the leader.
"Surrender now, and you don't have to die."
And so it began....


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PostSubject: Re: Ookami, Fang [Konoha Genin] Ookami, Fang [Konoha Genin] EmptyFri 26 Feb 2010, 11:02 pm

Lightning Bulb Lightning =/= Light, they are two different things.

Lightning Bolt Stun If the electricity were to hit a sword or shield of some sort that are made of metal, it would make a big difference depending on the size of the blocking object. If it were just a kunai, the current would still hit the person but if it were something like a buster sword it wouldn't work so well.

Forced Magnetic Attraction Magnetism would have to be KKG.

Soushuuha - Manipulate Advancing Blades This is Kugutsu(puppetry) jutsu.

Reverse Summoning I'm not sure if this is banned or not so I must inquire, I don't like it personally and think it should be banned.

History At least two paragraphs per arc, centering it may make it look longer but it looks sloppy to me.
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PostSubject: Re: Ookami, Fang [Konoha Genin] Ookami, Fang [Konoha Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 1:55 am

I actually did not center it on purpose. The code used kept messing up, making random center commands appear on the app when there was an ending code obviously there, so i put one at the end which solved that problem, but made the entire bottom half centered. It was weird... But anyway I will add on to that.

Also, I took out those three and edited The stun jutsu, but there really isn't much I can do to make it minimal effective because they are only stunned for one post, so if you have any suggestions, I'd be glad to take them.

And the history is directly off of a pre approved app on the original us. (Cheap, I know =] ) I can get the link for you if you'd like


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PostSubject: Re: Ookami, Fang [Konoha Genin] Ookami, Fang [Konoha Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 2:04 am

Lightning Bolt stun seems to be a temporary paralysis jutsu, which,if im not mistaken, might not be allowed.
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fuck! ok, hold up. gettin some sort of electric jutsu on there >>
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Just because it is approved on old US doesn't means it is approved here.
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PostSubject: Re: Ookami, Fang [Konoha Genin] Ookami, Fang [Konoha Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 4:38 am

Weaponry gets a Primary and secondary classification, such as Kenjutsu and Bows, or Spears and Daggers.
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ok...done
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PostSubject: Re: Ookami, Fang [Konoha Genin] Ookami, Fang [Konoha Genin] EmptySat 27 Feb 2010, 5:37 am

ραττýcακëš wrote:
For weaponry, you get a main and a sub:

Swords - All forms of Sword
Axes - All forms of Axe
Polearms - All forms of polarms, from spears to halberds
Blunt - All blunt weaponary, such as hammers, maces, ninchucks etc
Ranged - All ranged weaponary such as bows and advanced forms of shuriken/kunai
Exotic
- Any weapons that don't fall into the norm such as whips and chains.
Really odd shaped weapons of whatever variety count as exotic

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oh thanks =] ok, its more specific now.
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I'm going to ask an admin about reverse summoning so this will have to hold till I do so.
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i dont even want it that bad, i removed it.
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Question, for the non-elemental pre approved, where were they approved?
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on the original US. yes, i know, just because they are approved THERE doesnt mean they are approved HERE
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Human Mine Jutsu Concentrating chakra at chakra points would require insane chakra precision, like what the Hyuuga clan posses. Please remove.


Chakra Shield Jutsu same thing, but I think you can change this to work without using chakra points.
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i couldnt figure out how to change it, so just removed it
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Ookami, Fang [Konoha Genin] A_047-1

OH GAWD, I HAVEN'T USED THAT IN FOREVER!!!
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AWESOME! =]
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Weapon Hammer added.
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Wing and Prayer added. Archangel added.
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