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Lysander
Age : 34 Posts : 591
| Subject: Kabetetsu, the Elephant Warrior Fri 29 Jun 2012, 8:08 am | |
| Name: Kabetetsu Rank: B Appearance:
Kabetetsu stands at an astounding 40ft tall and weighs several tons. His grey skin is thick and leathery and his trunk reaches a full 10ft in length. The sheer size and weight of Kabetetsu are indeed his most notable physical details but it is far from what truly makes Kabetetsu whom he is. Upon his form is usually draped the robes of an aristocrat in the Japanese sense, loose flowing golden colored threads draped over his form and gave him a regal appearance as he appears wherever he is summoned. Always carried is his trusty warhammer, a mighty behemoth of a weapon that adds to his appearance. And of course one would be quite remiss to forget the goring tusks of Kabtetsu that marked him as both male and a fierce combatant.
Personality: Kabetetsu is an elephant with impeccable tastes, being quite fond of art and music in his day to day. He practices creating kanji with calligraphy and spends many hours in meditation daily, usually a slight distance away from other elephants. Where some might find the philosopher others are sure to find the warrior. Kabtetsu trains his body with as much devotion as he does his mind, finding the two inseparable as he seeks out his own perfection. In fact, this very trait is why he became the first of his species to sign a contract with Etorufuu Yuki. His love of the arts and calm afternoons sipping teas has also made him a fine teacher in the arts of war, philosophy, and other subjects many consider to be frivolities while the enlightened few see them as truly helpful lessons to be applied upon the battlefield.
The elephant prefers working with weapons that are heavy and unique, particularly his war hammer. This of course means that he is a polar opposite to his contract holder. Where Etorufuu is speed and precision incarnate his partner Kabetetsu is the staunch defender and muscle of the pair. This preference complimented each other and made their relationship that much more cooperative. The true separation between the pair begins with Kabetetsu’s lack of vicious nature that Etorufuu can sometimes achieve and as such he remains calm and cool headed in combat even when losing a fight. His analytical existence simply persists and overcomes those base emotions and relies on his skill.
Contract Type: Personal Contract (With Elephants)
Species: Elephant
Specialty: Weaponry (Exotic, Blunt) Elemental Affinity: Fuuton (Air) Special Characteristics:
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Name: Photographic Memory Rank: C Type: Mental Based Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The ninja trains their innate skill in photographic memory which allows them to remember everything with precise detail. From lost information to remembering told secrets, the ninja can hold onto the information for their entire lifetime.
Name: Improved Endurance Rank: C Type: Physical Physical Requirements: N/A Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: The first level in the art of endurance accessible to those who have undergone intensive training. The possessor of this talent has an increased endurance of 20% which makes them slightly tougher. They can withstand greater damage that could otherwise stun them in pain, and continue fighting.
Summons Arsenal: Weapons:
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Name: Tarento Shikkyaku (The Falling Star) Rank: B Type: Modified Hammer Appearance: (See Summon Picture) The hammer has a silver gleam to it and is big enough to require even Kabetetsu to wield it with both hands to keep it up at full speed and strength. The hammer has an abundance of weight to it and is actually quite unique in construct. The base of the hammer’s head is only connected to the haft by an interesting contraption. This contraption stores a length of chain on a spool and is able to extend or retract at the will of the wielder. This means that in an instant this hammer’s head can be practically hurled towards any target before being retracted back into a functioning warhammer. This versatility and ability to change between a flail like weapon and a sturdy hammer for closer range combat allows for great maneuvering on the part of Kabetetsu. Quantity: 1 Storage: Carried Special Abilities: Extension/Rectraction: As described above, this weapon has a special mechanism built into the base that allows it send the hammer’s head free of the haft and attached back to it with only a length of incredibly durable chain. This chain is roughly 20m in length. The Great Weight: This hammer easily weighs a solid ton and were it not for Kabetetsu’s strength and size he would be unable to wield such a solid weapon. Of course all aspects of the hammer were designed knowing the weight and shape so that it functions perfectly for larger individuals. No small fries stand a chance of wielding this weapon effectively.
Weaponry Techniques:
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Name:Ricochet Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Long Element: None Description: Using a mastery over weaponry, Kabetetsu has taught himself the ability to use his chakra and assist with his hammer while it is being used with the chained extended. After sending out the hammer’s head and it makes contact with a surface it will utilize chakra from Kabetetsu to bounce off of the surface and change direction immediately while maintaining its speed and force. Chakra Cost: 5cp (Per bounce)
Name: Mighty Swing Rank: C Type: Weaponry Range: Close Element: None Description: Pouring chakra into the head of the hammer, when it comes into contact with a surface it immediately discharges rapidly. This creates an almost explosive effect, increasing the destruction a normal hammer swing two fold. Chakra Cost: 7cp
Name: The Mortar Technique Rank: B Type: Weaponry Range: Mid Element: None Description: Kabetetsu will swing his hammer underhanded and launch the leashed hammer head high into the sky until it reaches the end of the chain’s length. Then the chakra soaked hammer head will plummet to the earth and upon landing create a small crater around it sending out bits of stone, soil, and any other present materials like shrapnel around where it landed. This is a great technique to harm smaller opponents (Such as shinobi) due to the widespread destruction and the speed of which the shrapnel is flung in all directions around the landing zone of the hammer. Chakra Cost: 10cp
Name: Sonic Crackdown Rank: B Type: Weaponry Technique Range: Close Element: Fuuton (Wind) Description: Kabetetsu will swing the mighty warhammer to make contact with a surface to use this jutsu. Mixing his wind element and skills with the hammer, when the head strikes the surface it will expel an enormous amount of air capable of blowing most shinobi clean away with the blunt buffeting force of the air. This massive wall of air helps the weapon to create a large crater and utterly obliterate whatever the hammer made contact with. Chakra Cost: 12
Academy Jutsu
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
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| | | Lysander
Age : 34 Posts : 591
| Subject: Re: Kabetetsu, the Elephant Warrior Fri 29 Jun 2012, 9:45 am | |
| Note: A) Do not pay for this with EXP, this requires a mission according the summon rules. As such, I will be requesting that mission once I get this summon approved. B) What country does the Elephant live in? |
| | | Adam
Age : 31 Posts : 8965
| Subject: Re: Kabetetsu, the Elephant Warrior Fri 29 Jun 2012, 10:37 am | |
| This isn't an elephant though, this is like a half man half elephant half warhammer.
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| | | Lysander
Age : 34 Posts : 591
| Subject: Re: Kabetetsu, the Elephant Warrior Fri 29 Jun 2012, 11:08 am | |
| And toads don't normally wield swords and ferrets don't normally wield scythes larger than their entire body. What's your point? |
| | | Cookie Monster
Age : 29 Posts : 4301
| Subject: Re: Kabetetsu, the Elephant Warrior Fri 29 Jun 2012, 12:13 pm | |
| His point is that this Summon is overpowered as hell. A forty foot tall half elephant, half human summoning that carries a heavily powerful weapon that most likely far exceeds B - Rank capabilities. Forget the hammer though, release this Summoning and you could wreck the bloody battlefield with it. For now, that hammer needs a pretty big downgrade in power.
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| | | Lysander
Age : 34 Posts : 591
| Subject: Re: Kabetetsu, the Elephant Warrior Fri 29 Jun 2012, 1:05 pm | |
| A) It's a hammer. If you want to argue about the chain links, I could just build it as a flail. And I will should you really require me to but the head is still going to be 500+lbs due to it's size. B) Gamabunta's roughly twice the size and carries a sword of similar weight C) My Elephant is within size limits (B ranks get to be up to 50ft) D) It's a giant hammer for a giant elephant. EVEN if I made it a regular hammer it is still within size/weight ratio for a B rank summon
It is no more human than Gamabunta or any of the other Toads. Yes, he is big but within size ratios. The thing that flips your shit is that it is an elephant. And it's techniques are even more than acceptable. If I sized this down to human terms it would be
War Hammer (Which usually weighs between 30 and 60 lbs (Usually 1/3 or more of the person wielding its weight) Human (Average height between 5'6-6'9 depending on race and genetic lineage) And the techniques would still be approvable. |
| | | Kiseki
Posts : 1216
| Subject: Re: Kabetetsu, the Elephant Warrior Fri 29 Jun 2012, 3:05 pm | |
| - Tyler~Durden wrote:
- A) It's a hammer. If you want to argue about the chain links, I could just build it as a flail. And I will should you really require me to but the head is still going to be 500+lbs due to it's size.
B) Gamabunta's roughly twice the size and carries a sword of similar weight C) My Elephant is within size limits (B ranks get to be up to 50ft) D) It's a giant hammer for a giant elephant. EVEN if I made it a regular hammer it is still within size/weight ratio for a B rank summon
It is no more human than Gamabunta or any of the other Toads. Yes, he is big but within size ratios. The thing that flips your shit is that it is an elephant. And it's techniques are even more than acceptable. If I sized this down to human terms it would be
War Hammer (Which usually weighs between 30 and 60 lbs (Usually 1/3 or more of the person wielding its weight) Human (Average height between 5'6-6'9 depending on race and genetic lineage) And the techniques would still be approvable. The war hammer makes anything around it pretty much run for its life. Not to mention the fact it can launch itself towards those trying to flee. Gamabunta is chief of teh toadz. He is A-S probably S considering who he is. The size limits are redonkulous my friend. Jesus. On your final point yeah. It is within a B-rank summon. But I'm pretty sure the summon guide needs some changing.
All in all I'd say if this were A-rank It would be okay with me. But at B-rank that thing is meant to kill everything around it that ever had dreams. I'm pretty sure most people would die trying to fight that thing one on one much less with you backing it up. All in all sorry Tyler but Adam and Cookie here have my vote for it being over powered. |
| | | Lysander
Age : 34 Posts : 591
| Subject: Re: Kabetetsu, the Elephant Warrior Fri 29 Jun 2012, 3:21 pm | |
| Adam never stated it was overpowered. He said he didn't like it being humanoid-ish.
Also, you could make your own summon? |
| | | Reggie Bell-Bottom Jr.
Posts : 760
| Subject: Re: Kabetetsu, the Elephant Warrior Fri 29 Jun 2012, 3:26 pm | |
| When it comes to the humanoid part, I think that this particular summon is far more personified than it is elephant. It has a large human body with an elephant head. Like to me it's 75% human and 25% elephant. I was envisioning a B-rank war elephant like a version similar to the elephants in the LOTR: The Return of the King. I wouldn't say it's boss level because I know the closer you get to S rank, either the bigger they are or the more flexible they are with their body as terms of being bipedal. |
| | | Lysander
Age : 34 Posts : 591
| Subject: Re: Kabetetsu, the Elephant Warrior Fri 29 Jun 2012, 5:27 pm | |
| For the record, we all understand that the less human I make it, the larger it actually gets. Right? The measurement to 45ft is if it is standing, so a 45ft elephant on all fours would be...... MASSIVE. |
| | | Reggie Bell-Bottom Jr.
Posts : 760
| Subject: Re: Kabetetsu, the Elephant Warrior Fri 29 Jun 2012, 8:55 pm | |
| Don't see why you would want a elephant that big anyway |
| | | Adam
Age : 31 Posts : 8965
| Subject: Re: Kabetetsu, the Elephant Warrior Sat 30 Jun 2012, 4:50 am | |
| Landing an attack with a 45ft tall elephant would be an impressive feat, they aren't exactly known for their speed.
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| | | Lysander
Age : 34 Posts : 591
| Subject: Re: Kabetetsu, the Elephant Warrior Sat 30 Jun 2012, 7:30 am | |
| More reason he is approvable as is? Because he is slow. |
| | | Lysander
Age : 34 Posts : 591
| Subject: Re: Kabetetsu, the Elephant Warrior Sun 01 Jul 2012, 3:29 am | |
| Archive the shit out of this since everyone is bitching. |
| | | Kiseki
Posts : 1216
| Subject: Re: Kabetetsu, the Elephant Warrior Sun 01 Jul 2012, 4:12 am | |
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