A meeting of Kiri Genin

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[Oh no! just noticed his post i must of missed ti when i was sorting out the post order .... If you read this jeff im sorry (he was just watching so it isnt too important that we missed him) but I'm getting a mod on the fight anyway due to my opinion on the substution technique.]

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[This will take it for ever.....]

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OOC: Or u could just say that the moment the pillar had hit Sho, he could have used his wall mist from his clan kekkai genkai to help give a lttle slack for his arms while his front was being gaurded by the wall, so he could move them so he could actually use the substition technque if it did need a hand sig, so he could get away, by subtituting with the bird or the branch the bird was sitting on, just saying it could be possible, before the walll broke, but maybe if he did used it, but he could still get injured from the other spikes, but at least may still be alive if not fast enough. Just saying.....

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[true also a crow isnt big enough for a sub it has to be same size or weight lol]

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(OOC: Well, first off, since its raining the ability to percieve incoming attacks is lessened along with the ability to actually respond because of the resistance by the thickened air and water, its not much but it sounds smart when I talk about it...I'm not sure how Renji knows the other Genin's names (AKA you shouldn't be using them on first visit), that's not common knowledge and you couldn't perceive eye color in the rain so easily especially from a distance.

Egor, the rest of the people in this topic are on rooftops and you don't mention being on a branch so you can't lean against a tree trunk and be able to address them since you'd have difficult seeing them from ground level up in the rain.

Renji, mentioning the destruction of the scroll is slight meta-game as well because thats not normal conversation and why would somebody even think about that? Nobody cares, and even less people would send out a gold anything on a piece of paper.

Nanaya, where did the umbrella you mentioned come from? You mentioned no umbrella in your hand on your first post, and I think that would be kind of important to know if you had an umbrella, so judging by that, you don't have an umbrella.

Renji, you've made some posts below the word limit, take care not to repeat that error. You also failed to provide WHAT rank you used since the jutsu is variable rank. We need to know what rank you used when you reference the jutsu, you should never post a variable rank without defining which form is used. Also, Sho isn't on the rooftop so your jutsu's usage is impossible as described.

I could keep going on pointing out all the various things wrong with this topic but I'd just recommend restarting because its flawed from its onset and repairing it isn't really feasible when you have to change so much.)

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6The umbrella came in the moment i can into the topic,

Quote :: Nanaya leaped from roof to roof top with moderate speed, he wasn't in to much of a hurry, while his black medium long hair was getting soaked, it appeared he didn't really mind the rain at all, while he was carrying his umbrella.

and i threw down my umbrella in the third topic i posted when he first attacked me

Quote :: Quickly moving farther back to help gain more distance from Renjiro, and stuck his hand inside of his umbrella to pull out a kunai, and twirled his umbrella before throwing it to the side and letting it hit the ground

so pretty much i had the umbrella from the begining

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Missed it then, I was speed reading, doesn't change the topic standing much.

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[i say we just void it lol make life easier for me lol]

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OOC: I Egor, declare a vote among all RPers who are and were affiliated with this topic.

- Say 'I' if you comfortable of voiding this particular topic.

- Say 'Nay' if you against the decision of voiding or closing this one of a kind, topic and wish for it to continue.

- Say 'Meh' if you are unsure or hesitant about whether this topic should be closed or left open.

Speak now or forever hold your peace. =P

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(OOC: Theres no need, the topic starter has already stated an intent to restart the topic and I highly doubt anybody wants to rework all of their posts in this topic and make sure they all match up as they should when you could just start a new topic. Voting is nice but its not needed.)

Age : 33 Posts : 428

(I have an idea. Let us just continue from the point where we all came into the area, before three of you started to beat each other up. I really dun like starting this all over again.)

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[ive also changed rank too as you can tell so this topic should technically be voided by that reason. Ill create another topic feel free to use previous posts used on this topic if they apply]

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(Ok, please do so....)