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| Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] | |
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Kayden
Age : 28 Posts : 103
| Subject: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Mon 22 Mar 2010, 9:31 am | |
| Name: Kayden Khyakhi Age: 14 Gender: Male
Physical Appearance: Looks: 2Paragraph Personality: 2Paragraph Rank: Genin Village: Konoha
Specialty: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu Main: Fire Sub: Wind
Background: (Write about your character the higher the rank the more you should write) Childhood arc- When Kayden was just four, he, his parents, and two of his three sibilings moved from the hidden waterfall village to their ally country, the hidden leaf. Kayden didn't understand why they moved from their peaceful home, but he seemed to like it here more. He made new friends, and enjoyed his life at the Hidden Leaf.
Academy arc- Just two years after they moved to the hidden leaf, Kayden's parents enrolled him into the hidden leaf's academy. However, that's when things started to go bad. A week in, he overheard his parents talking about a 'morgue' for his 16 year-old brother, Kyadiatt-Howl. He learned later that Howl had lost his life on an S-ranked mission. Kayden then went a week without going to the place he loved so much. He finally decided to go back so he could possibly be the top student to graduate. They had to either perfect the subsitution jutsu or shadow-clone jutsu. He chose the subsitution jutsu. He could not get it right, and ended up failing. A week into his second try to graduate, he heard that his second oldest brother, Natukei , 13 (while Kayden was 12), had been killed on a missoin when he was climbing a mountain and had been crushed by a rock avalanche. Kayden still could not perfect the sub. jutsu, and failed again. A week into his third year, his sister, Laiena, had been killed...but no one ever found out how she died. This year the finals was a written exam. He had never experienced a written exam, never learned to write, so he failed again. His fourth time was a charm. He passed with ease, becoming a genin.
Rp Sample: (this is actually from a site where i am a missing-nin, so it doesnt follow my character's storyline) Ian waited, knowing that the man would find him. Suddenly, Ian saw a kunai flying towards the man. It went straight through the man, killing him. Someone walked up to the man and knelt. He said something Ian couldn't hear, then turned and stared straight at Ian. You're next, he whispered. Ian stood up and fled.
The next night: Ian heard someone. He turned around only to see the man he saw die the day before. Along with him...was the man that had killed him.
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| | | Kayden
Age : 28 Posts : 103
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Mon 22 Mar 2010, 9:47 am | |
| Kayden's Jutsus
- Spoiler:
Name: Flamm Moonbeam Rank: D-C (depending on weather) Type: Ninjutsu Element: Fire Description: This is a very unique jutsu, that is more powerful at night. HOw to use this jutsu is you gather energy and focus it all on your hand. Point it at wherever you want to shoot it, and the energy you gathered will power out in a firey beam. It calls down a beam of moonfire from the sky, and however close the moon is makes it stronger.
Name: Dark Aura Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Fire Description: This jutsu is a barrier-type of jutsu that protects you from attacks up to C Rank (when Genin use it). What you do is concentrate your chakra around your body in a circular motion. If done right, there will be a dark purple aura surrounding you.
Name: Flamm Missile Jutsu (supposed to be spelled flamm) Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Fire Description: What you do to use this jutsu is you form a hand sign, and if right, will bring red and orange clouds hovering you. They will shoot pieces of fire at the enemy, at an incredible speed, for about 30 seconds. The speed is so high, and there's so many pieces of fire...let's just say you don't want to be the enemy. {please don't be OP) It ranges about to 50 feet.
Would this one be allowed for me? Name: Weather Change (Night) Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Wind Description: This is a very unique move and is solely seen. The jutsu changes the time of day from any time of day, to night. It takes long hours of training to perfect this, and it can actually reverse it if not mastered. Form a hand sign, and then release some of your chakra into the sky. This can not be used too much in a period of time, because it can drain alot of your chakra. The time of night lasts about (3 posts). (This jutsu can be reversed)
Name: Air Slash Rank: can't use-C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Wind Description: The only difficult thing about this jutsu is that there must be wind or this jutsu won't work. If there is wind, make a hand sign, and if done correctly, all wind will halt, and you will have control, using your arms. Just a quick chop, and the wind actually chops the enemy.
Name: Kunai Deflecter Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Wind Description: This jutsu is moderately ranked because it can only reflect attacks. The jutsu, however, can only deflect attacks up to S rank, not S-Rank. You must have a Kunai (OBVIOUSLY), and let it charge for about 3-5 seconds. You will know when it's ready because it will have a green aura around it. Just let the attack hit it, and it will reflect back. RP Sample: (Provide a good RP sample of you using your 'new' jutsu so we may better get a understanding of how you intend to use it) He was in a corner. he had little chakra left, and all he had was one kunai. The shadowed man lunged a fireball at him. He charged his kunai up, let the fireball hit it, and watched as the shadowed figure was blown miles away.
Academy Jutsus
- Spoiler:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: E Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Rank: E Type: N/A Element: N/A Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed
Name: Explosion Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Kai - Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique Rank: D Element: N/A Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Last edited by Kayden on Mon 21 Jun 2010, 7:12 am; edited 2 times in total |
| | | Uchiha Osore
Posts : 1044
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Mon 22 Mar 2010, 1:32 pm | |
| You need 3 History Arcs.
You can't have B Rank jutsu.
Your RP Sample is below the rank minimum, correct that. |
| | | Kayden
Age : 28 Posts : 103
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Wed 24 Mar 2010, 1:04 am | |
| Ok the deflecter is supposed to be c rank a typo probaly mistake on me but it won't let me change it cuz I'm on my iPod and it won't let me scroll down on posts so I can't change it.
What is the third arc I need?
I will try to fix those and my rp sample if I can get on my friends laptop idk |
| | | Kayden
Age : 28 Posts : 103
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Wed 24 Mar 2010, 1:20 am | |
| Is this good?
Rp Sample:(this is from another site, therefore does not interfere with Kayden) Ian waited, knowing that the man would find him. Suddenly, Ian saw a kunai flying towards the man. It went straight through the man, killing him. Someone walked up to the man and knelt. He said something Ian couldn't hear, then turned and stared straight at Ian. You're next, he whispered. Ian stood up and fled.
The next night:
Ian heard someone. He turned around only to see the man he saw die the day before. Along with him...was the man that had killed him. Ian quickly pulled two kunai out, and threw them at the dead man. They just fell to the side when they clashed, like he was steel. Then, he flew at Ian at incredible speed. Ian pulled out a paper bomb and attached it to the dead man. It blew up, and the man was unscaved. Ian used up all of his chakra on the dead man, forgetting the killer was there. They put him in a corner. A corner he had never been in, with no chakra left... |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Wed 24 Mar 2010, 1:50 am | |
| Edit the application with the RP sample, dont double post. |
| | | Kayden
Age : 28 Posts : 103
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Wed 24 Mar 2010, 6:09 am | |
| - Kayden_0044 wrote:
- it won't let me change it cuz I'm on my iPod and it won't let me scroll down on posts so I can't change it.
and sorry I thought I was allowed to double post in here sorry |
| | | John
Age : 31 Posts : 2547
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Wed 24 Mar 2010, 6:25 am | |
| Two paragraphs for both personality and physical appearance please. |
| | | CYANIDE CANDY
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| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Thu 25 Mar 2010, 9:12 am | |
| - Kayden_0044 wrote:
Name: Dark Aura Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Fire Description: This jutsu is a barrier-type of jutsu that protects you from attacks up to C Rank (when Genin use it). What you do is concentrate your chakra around your body in a circular motion. If done right, there will be a dark purple aura surrounding you.
What does this have to do with Fire? |
| | | Kayden
Age : 28 Posts : 103
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Sat 03 Apr 2010, 7:00 am | |
| Sorry i meant wind for that xD it doesn't really have o do with any of them, except for a little bit of wind and fire. sorry about that. Oh, and when I was on my ipod, the width of the site was distorted, so it made it look like i had ALOT more written than what i did, and it also lookd like i had it in paragraphs. |
| | | CYANIDE CANDY
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| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Sat 03 Apr 2010, 7:43 am | |
| So, will you be able to edit anything on your app that needs to be fixed or do you need someone else to do so? |
| | | Kayden
Age : 28 Posts : 103
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Fri 16 Apr 2010, 11:48 pm | |
| i will try to in time but because of activity issues i am unable to get on very much so again i will try but please dont put this in historical archives. |
| | | ₡amisado
Age : 30 Posts : 1256
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Fri 21 May 2010, 12:51 pm | |
| More for history: 2 paragraphs per arc
Your RP sample is far below the minimum for genin ( Just restating this)
Once you correct that then we'll get jutsu |
| | | Kayden
Age : 28 Posts : 103
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Fri 28 May 2010, 1:33 am | |
| Yeah I know. I am rarely active though, maybe once or twice a month, and in the last month or so, I haven't been able to get on, hence why I haven't worked on this. |
| | | CYANIDE CANDY
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| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Sat 29 May 2010, 12:09 am | |
| Would you like us to archive just for now seeing as your not going to work on it that much? When you're done with it or more active we could move it back. |
| | | Kayden
Age : 28 Posts : 103
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Tue 01 Jun 2010, 5:25 am | |
| Just wondering, how long shoud my rp sample be? |
| | | Caranore
Age : 35 Posts : 1492
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Tue 01 Jun 2010, 5:53 am | |
| Genin has a 150 word minimum for the sample. So the entire sample is up to you, but it should be an average representation of your posts. No lower than the minimum. |
| | | Kayden
Age : 28 Posts : 103
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Tue 01 Jun 2010, 4:59 pm | |
| My RP Sample is long enough then. I used the word calculator. It's 173 words. |
| | | CYANIDE CANDY
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| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Tue 01 Jun 2010, 10:52 pm | |
| Your rp sample may be long enough, but you have yet to edit the problems with your app. |
| | | Pattycakes
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| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Wed 02 Jun 2010, 12:47 am | |
| personality and appearance need to be longer, 2 paragraphs each
Again, you have other things that still need fixing |
| | | Kayden
Age : 28 Posts : 103
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Fri 04 Jun 2010, 3:32 am | |
| I'm not tying to br arrogant, but I know this. Honestly, repeating it isn't helping. By the way, I deleted my looks and personality. I'm gonna re-do that. |
| | | Adam
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| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Sat 12 Jun 2010, 9:52 am | |
| I'm surprised none of you pulled him up on the fact that he isn't using our template. Please fix that Kayden. |
| | | Kayden
Age : 28 Posts : 103
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Tue 15 Jun 2010, 8:20 pm | |
| Oops...sorry Adam. I will fix that but I'm on my iPod right now so I can't. |
| | | Kayden
Age : 28 Posts : 103
| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Mon 21 Jun 2010, 7:16 am | |
| Sorry for the double post.
If it is okay, can someone archieve this? I have it saved in microsoft word and will work on it there. |
| | | CYANIDE CANDY
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| Subject: Re: Khyakhi, Kayden [Konoha Genin] Tue 22 Jun 2010, 12:54 am | |
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