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Aries
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 |  Subject: Otomichi Clan Tue 23 Mar 2010, 9:40 pm | |
| Clan Information:
Clan Name:
Otomichi Clan
Clan Location:
Konoha
Clan Traits:
Kekkei Genkai:
"The Otomochi are the spider-like ninja of Konoha; they possess four extra arms, have the ability to make webs, and even possess a third eye. This eye improves the percision of their attacks to the point of being almost unavoidable. It also is used to slighly slow down the speed of shinobi by 10% causing the Otomichi to keep up track with faster shinobi. (Also used it for other things such as spotting a flying kunai,etc.) Immune to most poisons that spiders create. They also produce their own stunning poison they can bite you or spit over a short distance. They can work with medics to help cure spider related injuries. Otomichi's webbing are made of a special type of liquid that is created by infusing body liquid with chakra, making it as strong as steel. These webbings are so strong the clan brags on who they have the ability to suppport 2 elephants. They also use this ability of theirs to create weapons from their mouths. These weapon are made of body poison, slava, and chakra. Once captured by this web holding opponents immoble it's nearly impossible to get away. The Otomichi clan are immune to being captured this because of their special chakra they produce an chakra + oily mixture that keeps them from becoming immoble. The more basic form of this webbing is excreted from his mouth, and he spits it directly from there during combat to capture opponents. The otomichi can create a stronger, golden webbing called Spider Sticky Gold that hardens upon contact with oxygen to metal-like quality. Because of the solid nature of this webbing, the Otomichi can shape it into armor or weapons to aid them in battle."
Secret Clan Jutsu:
[spoiler]
Name: Spider Cobweb Region
Type: Ninjutsu
RanK: D
Element: N/A
Description: The user can lay spider thread through all the surrounding area. Unknowing ninja will take the thread as common spider thread, however, it will in fact run all the way back to the user’s finger. Slight movement against a thread will alert them of a nearby presence.
Name Spider Caccoon
Type Ninjutsu
Rank D
Element N/A
Description After gathering spider webbing into their mouth, the user will spit it out in a wide cobweb pattern. This wide pattern can envelop the user's body and hardens to provide extra defense. Their chakra will remain in the web even after it has left their body, making the cobweb harden. This jutsu requires an little amount of chara usage.
Name Ninpou Kumo Shibari ((Ninja Law, Spider Med))
Type Ninjutsu
Rank D
Element N/A
Description Torein has the ability to mix chakra with his mucus to create a very thin metal-like skin to provide extra stability for open wounds. They frequantly used to stop bleedings. This ability produces a spider-web from Torein's mouth almost instantly, no hand-sings are required and it requires little Chakra to perform. This web is sticky and becomes hard as soon as it hits the wound it touches. Doesn't reqire much chakra at all
Name: Webs balls
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Torein has the ability to shoot powerful web balls at his opponent, the balls can harder and become hard as concrete. These web balls aren't much larger than a solid fist. Getiing hit by these ball fells as if you were hit with a extremly hard punch.
Name: Spider Webs jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: After gathering spider webbing into their mouth, the user will spit it out in a wide cobweb pattern. This wide pattern can envelop foes and tie them down to a nearby surface. Their chakra will remain in the web even after it has left their body, making the cobweb sticky. These webs are just big enough to wrap around the average shinobi's body. (1meters in diameter)
Name: Spider Sticky Vomit
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Emitting a stream of spider thread from their mouth, the user will grab onto a nearby opponent like a lasso. If the opponent is in the air, they can move their head and body to sling the opponent wherever they want.
Name: String Webbed Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description:
This is Torein's natural ability to generate the strings he uses to make spider-webs from his fingers, these strings are sticky and can be used as a weapon like piano-wire or to stick to a given surface, the strings are very strong and can fully support Torein's weight while he uses them.
Name: Ninpu Kumonekin ((Golden Spider Spikes))
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description:From the Users mouth comes a body web from this six "branches" sprout. Each of these "branches" are shaped like a sickle and are as powerful as a regular weapon. After being emitted from the mouth, seconds later they "freeze" and harden together, allowing it to be used as a weapon. They can also be thrown in a shuriken fashion, spinning through the air as such. these weapons are as as small as kunai and get as large as an bow.
Name: Coat of Web jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description: This is Torein'snatural ability to excrete the metal he uses to make his webs from his sweat glands. This can be used to cover his entire body and protect him from danger, Other shinobi refers to it as "Golden Skin." However, no such reference is made by Torein and it appears to be more of a natural ability.
Name: Hatchlings
Rank: B
Type: ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Torein can quickly release an egg sac full of baby spiders roughly the size of a average dog. These spider will scurry around all over the place extending webs and setting traps. These webs are much like Torein's himself as the opponent finds it extremly difficult to break free unless they some break the chakra stream running through the webs. The spider will also explode extending out webs as a last sneak attack if hitten any type of wat by an opponent. Only 5 spiders can be hatched at once. If these spiders are struck they dispure into a sticky web sticky oppoent into their current place. The radius of each spider explosion is 3meters.
Name: Ninpou Kumo Soukai ((Ninja Law, Spider Web Opening))
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description:
This ability creates a large circular spider-web from the user. It is also very sticky and anyone touching it will have be stuck, this effect does not apply to the Otomichi'd however, for with his six hands he is easily able to move across it. This consumes a medium amount of Chakra, around 20 percent to perform. The clan brags that it is unbreakable and it could even support two elephants
Name: Kumo-Nenkin ((Spider's Cohesive Bacteria))
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Description:
Otomichi clan gathers a large amount of the metal-like web they can produce in his mouth, after they have finished gathering it, their cheeks begin to puff and he opens his mouth, firing it forward in a large cylinder-like pattern, it is spike-like and extends from Otomichi's mouth to the target, or if it does not meet one to the area it ends out, sharp and erect the entire time.
Name: Maximum Destructive Impact
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Description:
In this Jutsu, the Otomichi conjures an arrow from his throat for his bow, however, this arrow is specially gifted. Once the arrow releases from the bow and hits the ground it explodes in a small circle, this circle has a six foot diameter. It appears not to take too much Chakra, for the Otomichi seems fine after they uses it once. However, it is a tiring jutsu over time and after three or four uses the clan will begin to wear down.
Name: Web Delay
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Description: This is another secret clan jutsu. This jutsu uses a delay effect that catches the opponent off guard. The Otomichi does their handsigns and then slam the palms of their hand into the ground. Resembling as if they did nothing at all this jutsu doesn't take effect until 2-3 post later. The Otomichi send their webbing into the ground so that it can't be seen when they slam their palms. This web expands like a spider trap reachin out 5m all around the center spot of the slamed palm. When this jutsu actually appears 2-3 post later it's like a net trap upon the ground that is sticky and captures it's prey from below.
Name: Death Shot
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Description:
When the Otomichi gather a great amount of chakra they conjures a bow made of the metal they make from web from. This jutsu is the ability to make that bow as well as to make the standard arrows of it, arrows equipped with a line of the metal string so that Otomichi can control the arrow as he fires it. Only 1 shot per use.
Name: Spider clones
Rank: A
Type: ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Using the Kyado spiders the user can create a copy of themselves or anyone else they choose. The clone falls apart into its component bugs when struck. If these clones are struck they disperse into a sticky web engulfing his opponent preventng them from moving.
Name: Rain of Spiders
Rank: A
Type: ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Torein jumps into the air and release eggs, causing the rapidly hatched spiders to rain down on his opponent. The spiders will spin a strand of webbing as they fall, circling the opponent in webbing and sticking them to the ground. 10 one foot spiders will be released and dispurse into 1meter of sticky webbing.
History:
History:The Otomichi clan is a mysterious family that has an extremely creepy and special ability. The ability to summon and communicate with spiders. They are most noticeable because most of the family members have six arms and a third eye. At birth, some of the babies are chosen by gunkai, or hollowed spiders. The gunkai are the spiders of the newborn is the Otomichi. However, it's a mutualism. They both benefit. The gunkai get a peaceful home and the host body gets a powerful weapon.
This clan originate in the village of Konoha. Although very little is known about the Otomichi Clan, they originated from the Aburame Clan in a massive civil war among the clan members. A portion of Aburame within the clan thought it stupid to allow the destruction bugs to harvest their body, calling it unhealthy, and tried to secede from the rest of the clan and form their own Arachaid clan. The Aburame clan put up a large fight, but in the end; the Otomichi clan managed to break away and form a new clan of their own.
Clan Details:
Closed.
Last edited by Aries. on Sat 27 Mar 2010, 5:18 pm; edited 19 times in total |
|   | | Pattycakes
Age : 30
Posts : 1701
| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Tue 23 Mar 2010, 10:30 pm | |
| Some grammatical errors in
"The Otomochi are the spider-like member of Konoha; they possesses four
extra arms, has the ability to make webs, and even possesses a third
eye. This eye improves the accuracy of their attacks to the point of
being almost unavoidable. It also is used to slighly slow down the speed
of shinobi by 10%. Immune to most posins that spiders create they can
work with medics to help cure spider related injuries. Otomichi's
webbing are made of a special type of liquid that is created by infusing
body liquid with chakra, making it as strong as steel. The more basic
form of this webbing is excreted from his mouth, and he spits it
directly from there during combat to capture opponents. Torein can
create a stronger, golden webbing called Spider Sticky Gold that hardens
upon contact with oxygen to stone-like quality. Because of the solid
nature of this webbing, the Otomichi can shape their into armor or
weapons to aid him in battle."
I fixed it , if you wanna edit and put in in
"The Otomochi are the spider-like ninja of Konoha; they possess four
extra arms, have the ability to make webs, and even possess a third
eye. This eye improves the accuracy of their attacks to the point of
being almost unavoidable. It also is used to slighly slow down the speed
of shinobi by 10%. Immune to most poisons that spiders create they can
work with medics to help cure spider related injuries. Otomichi's
webbing are made of a special type of liquid that is created by infusing
body liquid with chakra, making it as strong as steel. The more basic
form of this webbing is excreted from his mouth, and he spits it
directly from there during combat to capture opponents. Torein can
create a stronger, golden webbing called Spider Sticky Gold that hardens
upon contact with oxygen to stone-like quality. Because of the solid
nature of this webbing, the Otomichi can shape it into armor or
weapons to aid them in battle."
Now then, I have a few discrepancies. The first, I don't see how you would be able to magically slow down others by ten percent. Secondly, accurate and unnavoidable aren't the same thing. I can aim precisely for your temporal lobe, with surgical precision, but that doesn't mean you can't just tilt your head to the left or right. |
| | | | Aries
Age : 36
Posts : 1004
| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Tue 23 Mar 2010, 10:43 pm | |
| | not actully slow them down.....but my clan see everything 10% slower when they expose their third on their foreheads |
| | | | Pattycakes
Age : 30
Posts : 1701
| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Tue 23 Mar 2010, 10:57 pm | |
| | Well, you can't move any faster, so I'm unsure how this will help... |
| | | | Aries
Age : 36
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| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Tue 23 Mar 2010, 11:20 pm | |
| eh. I'll find a way to put it in effect even if I have to use the ability for something
DONE |
| | | | Pattycakes
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| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Tue 23 Mar 2010, 11:21 pm | |
| | Post that now ^_^ |
| | | | Aries
Age : 36
Posts : 1004
| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Tue 23 Mar 2010, 11:28 pm | |
| | DONE |
| | | | Pattycakes
Age : 30
Posts : 1701
| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Wed 24 Mar 2010, 4:15 am | |
| String web should be C
If web balls are fast, they should also be C rank
sticky vomit should also be C
spider chain doesn't make any real sense. Please remove it
Nor does spider arrow, and thusly spider bow.
fix this and you should be good |
| | | | Aries
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| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Wed 24 Mar 2010, 4:20 am | |
| | done |
| | | | Pattycakes
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| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Wed 24 Mar 2010, 4:29 am | |
| | Remember, your Bows, and also your destructive impact all fall under the category of things I asked you to remove. And your last jutsu "Hatchlings" Should be downsized a little, and well explained. How many spiders, radius of explosion, etc. |
| | | | Aries
Age : 36
Posts : 1004
| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Wed 24 Mar 2010, 5:00 am | |
| Done....Now after erasing those I want to find more jutsu for my app
Why come i couldn't keep m spider bow's. |
| | | | Vegapunk
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| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Wed 24 Mar 2010, 7:15 am | |
| | If you were to keep your spider bow there would have to be something in your clan stating that members must have a weaponary speciality. Or they will not be able to use it. |
| | | | Aries
Age : 36
Posts : 1004
| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Thu 25 Mar 2010, 4:52 am | |
| | DONE |
| | | | CYANIDE CANDY
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| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Fri 26 Mar 2010, 4:29 am | |
| - Aries. wrote:
Name: Rain of Spiders
Rank: B
Type: ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Torein jumps into the air and release eggs, causing the rapidly hatched spiders to rain down on his opponent. The spiders will spin a strand of webbing as they fall, circling the opponent in webbing and sticking them to the ground.
About how many spiders are we talking about here? A rough estimate will be good.
- Aries. wrote:
Name: Death Shot
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Description:
When the Otomichi gather a great amount of chakra they conjures a bow made of the metal they make from web from. This jutsu is the ability to make that bow as well as to make the standard arrows of it, arrows equipped with a line of the metal string so that Otomichi can control the arrow as he fires it.
About how many arrows are made? |
| | | | CYANIDE CANDY
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| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Sat 27 Mar 2010, 12:51 am | |
| | I still would like to know how many arrows are made with 'Death Shot'. |
| | | | Aries
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| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Sat 27 Mar 2010, 3:14 am | |
| | edited |
| | | | Travis
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| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Sat 27 Mar 2010, 7:35 am | |
| Webs balls- How big in diameter. How hard, example?
Spider Webs jutsu - How wide of an area does it cover?
Ninpu Kumonekin ((Golden Spider Spikes)) - How big are they? |
| | | | Aries
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| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Sat 27 Mar 2010, 5:26 pm | |
| | edited |
| | | | Pattycakes
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| | Subject: Re: Otomichi Clan Sat 27 Mar 2010, 6:43 pm | |
| | Approved. |
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