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HYUUGA, HANATARO.

THE INFO.

Name: Hanataro Hyuuga
Nickname: The Grey Reaper
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Appearance: Hanataro is a tall boy, standing at five feet and eleven inches, towering over most children and even quite a lot of adults. His pale silver hair hangs short and stops just over his shoulders, thin and elegant. Hanataro's shoulders are thin and sharp, slanting downwards towards the ground. He wears a gray trench coat over the black flak jacket that covers his fish net shirt covered body. On the sleeves of his trench coat his arms are wrapped in a silver covering of cloth wrapped around his arms from his fists to his elbow. The one thing however that sets him out in society and usually draws the attention of others, is the cloth wrapped around his head over his eyes that bears the symbol that appears on the forehead of members of the Branch Family when the Hyuga curse mark is placed on them, leading most to believe he is a boy who has lost his sight and bears the burden of blindness, though in reality the power of his eyes is quite the contrary, creating a fake statement forced upon him since birth based upon his appearance.

Under the blindfold he bears a prominent scar across his left eye, a dark line that goes straight down across his eye, the damage even partially seen upon the eye itself. Hanataro often keeps his few weapons he carries hidden within his clothing. On the inside of his jacket, he keeps each of his weapons in various pockets and slotted into straps along the inside, a windmill shuriken can even be found among them folded up into one section and stowed in a pocket on his left side near the center of his chest. Hanataro keeps his ninjato sword slipped into a small strap on the inside of his right sleeve, kept so that when needed he can make a thrust enough forward with the right arm to let the ninjato slip out and the handle fall into his hand as it falls, a carefully hidden blade. On the sides of each of his shins are each tomahawk he wields, held by singular clips. Finally, he keeps a file on the inside of the collar of his trench coat, strapped to where when the collar is perked up like it usually is, he can use his teeth to grab it out and transfer the file from his mouth to his hands or to be used.
Forehead Protector: Located on Hanataro's fist of the left hand
Personality: Hanataro is a generally happy go-lucky boy, one who stays generally on the optimistic side. Even when in combat, he stays sarcastically happy and taunts the enemy with smart remarks and his optimism. When he is on a mission, Hanataro tries to stay optimistic and is determined to succeed in his objective. Along with being optimistic and determined, Hanataro is a bit on the perverted side. Using the blindfold to his advantage and the fact most people think he is blind, Hanataro uses his Byakugan to peep on certain things. But he forgets that people think he is blind and some often will catch him laughing or blushing for an unknown reason. But inside his happy outlook and appearance, Hanataro is a very serious and cold boy. Sharpened and becoming cold from being thought weak all the time, if pushed to his limits he becomes serious and fights with all might at a terrifying mercilessness.
Clan: Hyuuga
Nindō: "Failure.....Is not an option!"

THE NINJA.

Origin: Unknown
Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin/C Rank Ninja
Specialties: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities: Suiton, Katon
Combat Style:

Spoiler:

Special Characteristics:

Spoiler:

THE BACKGROUND.

History: Upon Hanataro's birth, his father was told that Hanataro was, ironically, blind, as that was what was thought due to the lack of coordination and the fact that the way Hanataro as an infant at four days old acted, he seemed to give the behavior that indicated he had no eyesight. It was tragic news to his parents, but the truth was that the part of the eyes that connected to the brain wasn't fully developed and appeared "defective". And with the belief that he was blind, a piece of cloth bearing the insignia shown by the Hyuga's Juinjutsu placed on Branch Members was placed over Hanataro's eyes, forced to bear it as a symbol of tragedy for the duration of his life.

Upon the age of 6, Hanataro was enrolled into the Ninja Academy of Konohagakure. The expectations for his ability was low, as he was thought to be blind. However, most were extremely surprised by his abilities, especially by his accuracy with attacks and ability to read. Unfortunately, the surprise at his ability was only due to people not knowing that Hanataro could see through the thin piece of cloth that covered his eyes. Even worse so was that he was forced to wear the headband around his eyes, so he could never prove that he was not blind. It took two years of schooling and extra curricular learning before Hanataro graduated the Ninja Academy at the age of eight. Upon his graduation, with the permission of his parents and the supervision of a Chuunin, Hanataro left the village for a nearby mountain range to begin training.

The time he trained was hard. He built up his strength everyday by practicing relentlessly, adapting and improving the state of his body. Hanataro would only perform the necessary tasks each day to survive, sleep, drink, eat, and then train. That was all he felt he could do. If he were to be believed deformed, blind, weak, and determined an outcast by his clan, the least he could do was become stronger to keep up with the rest of the world. Hanataro trained for five long years in the mountains, only once every so often returning to the village nearby of Konohagakure to visit for two weeks at a time. On the fifth year on the day of his birth, Hanataro Hyuga, age thirteen, returned to his village and resumed normal life for that of a ninja.

Roleplay Sample:
Spoiler:

THE ARSENAL.

Academy Jutsu (Free):

Suiton Jutsu:

Equipment:

Hyuuga Secret Jutsu:

Non Elemental Jutsu:

FACE CLAIM.

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PostSubject: Re: Hyuuga, Hanataro [Konohagakure. DONE] Hyuuga, Hanataro [Konohagakure. DONE] EmptyMon 13 Aug 2012, 1:39 am

That face claim is taken. Please use another.
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Finished, changed face claim, all done >.>
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The one thing however that sets him out in society and usually draws the attention of others, is the cloth wrapped around his head over his eyes that bears the symbol that appears on the forehead of members of the Branch Family when the Hyuga curse mark is placed on them, leading most to believe he is a boy who has lost his sight and bears the burden of blindness, though in reality the power of his eyes is quite the contrary, allowing him, no matter the fact he is not skilled in Genjutsu, to create a powerful illusion based on his appearance.

Remove that part about genjutsu since you don't have the genjutsu specialty.

You need to add more to appearance and personality. I am suggesting you run this in word for grammar and spelling mistakes since I see many more. I will be requesting you do this many time until you do it.

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Common Attack Basis: Suiton Jutsu and Taijutsu
You need more added to your combat style. You can also take this out so you have more to write about in your combat style.

You also could use more to your history.
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First, that isn't literally genjutsu, it was word play referring to him having Byakugan and good eyesight but the fact he looks blind and has a blindfold makes people around him believe he is blind, being an "illusion" not an actual genjutsu .-.
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You still need more personality and combat style. A bit more history couldn't hurt.
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