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Kaguya, Shikaku.

THE INFO.

Name:Shikaku Kaguya
Nickname:N/A
Age:14
Gender:Male
Appearance:He has an above average muscular build not too strong not to scrawny he is balanced because he was taught to spread his training evenly, hes about 5ft 6in which some people consider short for his age but he manages, he weighs about 150 pounds which like all Kaguyas is a little on the heavy side because the density of his bones though it doesn't affect his speed in the slightest, he has long white hair, his eyes are green in color, he has no facial hair, and his jaw is broad and strong looking, he has no scars and is not missing anything.

His eyes are a Deep green that seem to give him the appearance of someone wise beyond their years; although, you probably would know otherwise after hanging out with him for more than a few minutes.

He usually wears a blue and grey outfit Variation on the standard kaguya uniform and has bandages all over his torso he also sports a white loose fitted long sleeved shirt, sweatpants and normal ninja sandals. He often wears bandages around his hands because he takes Taijutsu training very seriously. This is his normal outfit but can appear with other clothes some times.

Although he has no scars of any visual he does have a scar on his lower left leg to make sure that no one ever sees his shameful training accident
he also has long, flowing, ghostly white hair

Forehead Protector:he wears his headband wrapped around the upper half of his left arm
Personality: He is a peaceful and laid back sort of person, when he does end up fighting he looks at it as kind of annoying, dispite this he will put his all into the fight, he is usually seen lounging about or working out because even though he is laid back he likes to stay in top physical shape.

He likes to hang out with his friends and he trains for fights just in case he has to face a strong opponent because he believes that he hasn't been alive long enough to die yet, he finds those who constantly search for fights distasteful for the reason that they aren't like his way of life, he respects anybody as long as they are as well.

Keeping his promise true he lives with only happiness in his life though other emotions are still present they are quite hard to bring up.

When those emotions do surface he is in a whirlwind of emotions bringing up all the emotions he really never forgot about when his parents died, He could be crying on the battle field or angry on a sunny day but those emotions can be quelled if he is reminded of his promise to his father.

Shikaku isn't the kindest person who you can find but also isn't the worst. He doesn't make a big deal about some silly mistake so he is quite forgiving. During his free time he often reads something to become smarter or trains. He doesn't like to waste his time and he doesn't like to waste other people's time. Most of Shikau's day to day life consists of taking care of his foster brothers and sisters which makes him a very caring person
In a fight never will he attack first, and rarely will he ever attack someone that is neither a shinobi or is completely unguarded and unready. Its like a law that exists inside his mind, going against it means he has to punish himself.


Clan:Kaguya
Nindō:"If you Didn't win at first at least your alive to hear me say this."



THE NINJA.

Origin:Mizu No Kuni
Affiliation:Konoha
Specialties:Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinities:Main:Water Sub:Doton
Combat Style:Free Flow. Shikaku Doesn't use a style purposely so he can always adapt to the situation which works if surrounded, but this style if you can call it that has a drop back it also hobbles him when it comes to fighting a master this style is useless. He focuses on trying to stay behind his opponent so they can not respond quickly as usual, he can began his series of dance attacks powerful but careless sturdy yet weak
Shikaku purposely will leave an area exposed on its body for an opponent to attack, so he can attack a more vital spot on the body. he thinks it is important not to attack reflexively at open spots, and try to hammer away at their weak spots until they give in. Sihkaku thinks a shorter person with a shorter range can defeat a larger person by getting inside his range and attacking him close to his body.

Special Characteristics:
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THE BACKGROUND.

History:
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Roleplay Sample:
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THE ARSENAL.

Name: Genin Kit
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Quantity: 1
Contents: 10 Kunai, 8 Shuriken, 5 Senbon, 2 Exploding Notes, 1 Exploding Pouch, Five Metres of wire/string, File, 10 Makibishi, 1 Windmill Shuriken, 2 blank small scrolls.

Academy Techniques

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Kaguya Techniques


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Taijutsu

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FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim:Kimimaro
Source:Google Images
Image URL:https://i.servimg.com/u/f44/16/84/85/39/images10.jpg


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Kiseki
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya Shikaku Konoha Genin Done Kaguya Shikaku  Konoha Genin Done EmptyTue 14 Aug 2012, 9:44 am

The name is Kimimaro for the face claim.

You need to add more to personality and a bit more to appearance wouldn't hurt.
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musou_shinteki_ginou
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya Shikaku Konoha Genin Done Kaguya Shikaku  Konoha Genin Done EmptyThu 16 Aug 2012, 4:15 am

Everything is looking good. I'd run this through microsoft word or so to get a feel for any spelling and grammar mistakes you made as I see a few. I'd like about half a paragraph added to your roleplay sample and a bit more to personality. Maybe three or more sentences added to it. Other than that it looks good.
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Approval 1/2
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musou_shinteki_ginou
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Bump-tastic
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Do not bump your topics. Post here if it has been two days with no reply to one. Click
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya Shikaku Konoha Genin Done Kaguya Shikaku  Konoha Genin Done EmptySun 19 Aug 2012, 10:48 pm


There are only a couple of matters that need attending to in your application. Things like your grammar and punctuation slip up in some places, such as your Combat Style, these can be easily fixed by placing your application within a Word document or if you have a Gmail account, try placing it inside Google Documents. Both will be able to help you find any mistakes.

My only other comment is that your application would look a lot better if you had your techniques, kit and special characteristic bolded where needed. Which is basically Name, Rank, Element etc... These all require bolding and it's odd that you haven't managed to bold them the first time around since they should be code format. Have these fixed up please and I'll give my approval.
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Archived due to user's inactivity.
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