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Uchiha - Hikari, Sanjiro [Kumogakure Genin]

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Uchiha - Hikari, Sanjiro [Kumogakure Genin] Genesis

(Uchiha) Hikari, Sanjiro.

THE INFO.

Name: Sanjiro Hikari
Nickname: Sanji
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance:

Sanji is an unimposing figure, standing around 5 feet and 3 inches and looking to weigh possibly around 100 to 120 pounds. His build is the standard Uchiha body type, lithe and muscular, built more for speed than strength with no scars, tattoos, or any other markings to speak of.

Sanji often chooses to garb his lithe frame in somewhat casual clothing, usually consisting of a dark blue t-shirt worn under a grey hooded jacket that is often kept slightly unzipped or unzipped entirely and hangs low enough on his body to pass under his belt-line. The jacket possess 4 pockets in total, two front pockets that come with zippers to seal the contents inside, one small pocket on the right sleeve near the shoulder, also possessing a zipper and one on the inside of the jacket's lining that uses a zipper as well. On the back of the jacket is a red kanji insignia representing the word "Sky". The jacket was a gift given to him by his mother when he passed his exams to become genin and thus it is a treasured possession of his.

Covering his lower body is a pair of black loose fitting break-away cargo pants that possess 6 pockets in total; two in the front which contain no sealing mechanism, two on the legs which use two snap buttons to keep them closed, and two rear side which use small zippers to remain close. The cargos have, in the middle of the legs, a zipper that runs concentrically around the entirety of the pant leg. This zipper can be undone to turn the pants into shorts when needed. The bottom of the cargos possess an elastic banding in the pant legs to keep the pant legs from flowing and getting caught on anything. Because of the elastic banding Sanji opts to not wear the tape on his shins that so many other shinobi seem to do. Adorning his feet are usually a pair of traditional navy blue shinobi style sandals.

Back when Sanji was an active ninja he chose to wear his kunai holster on his left thigh, signifying his left handedness. Sanji still, at times can be seen wearing a small pouch, strapped around his waist, usually tucked underneath his jacked. The pouch is located on his lower back, right above his butt, acting as a type of fanny pack. When he was active the pouch usually housed various ninja tools but as of late it has been used to cary pens and scrolls and other various items that would be useful in the library.

When lounging around at home or on particularly warm days he may be seen forgoing the grey jacket and wearing his break-away cargos in their shorts varient, giving him a t-shirt and short appearance. While in both outfits the colors may be different at time (except the jacket) he tends to favor darker and earth tone colors rather than their brighter counterparts.

Sanji's facial features can be described as angular, and masculine, giving him a very mature and attractive look for his age. Possessing the traditional Uchiha black mane that is worn in a semi long fashion yet adorned with the traditional "spikiness" and deeps set dark brown eyes, he has been described by his mother's friends and colleagues as "tall, dark and handsome" despite not being notably tall. His appearance has caused him a certain amount of grief in the past as he was (as it seems to be with members of his clan) seen as one of the more attractive members in his class and in the village. Because of this he was often harassed by female class members in the later years of his academy training, and his mothers friends and colleagues, whom to this very day still come to the library from time to time to flirt with him.

Forehead Protector: Tied to his left arm, outside the jacket around the bicep area. The cloth is dark blue and the metal is heavily scratched.

Personality:

Sanji is a boy that seems to lack the chip on his shoulder that so many members of his clan have shown in the past. This is most likely the result of Sanji being completely oblivious of his true heritage and his rather underprivileged background, being the son of a prostitute. Coming from such a background Sanji truly believes in the idea of not judging books by their cover and not judging people by their appearance. The value of what lies beneath the surface is more important than the surface itself and as such nothing is usually ever as it seems.

This idea has stayed firmly in Sanji's mind from a young age as he is seemingly able to find value in almost anything and anyone, always looking at the good qualities. Because of this ideal Sanji is the type of person who expects the best out of those around him. Rather than being arrogant of his own abilities, he projects the excellence he demands from himself onto other people as well and will often give them the benefit of the doubt until proven otherwise. A ninja who Sanji has never met will be treated as someone who is either on equal ground or superior to Sanji in every way until said ninja proves consistently that they are not of that caliber. This can and has often caused problems for Sanji as he openly expresses these high expectations to others, and is not afraid of expressing his disappointment in them when they fall short. This also manifests itself in a slight inferiority complex along with a tendency to judge oneself harshly as any failure on Sanji's part is close to unforgivable in his book and as such anyone who can do better than him is on a much higher level than he is and should be treated with respect.

In the past Sanji used to be a very driven and very happy person who was full of laughter and inner strength despite being teased by the other boys for being the son of a prostitute. But due to a recent history of loss and sorrow Sanji's personality has become one of stoicism. Rarely expressing joy or intense interest in most things anymore, Sanji can be a frustrating person to be around. He is by no means a cynic, as he still tends to see the good in most people and still possesses that inner strength and inner joy, but he will not often express such views openly. His expression is usually a stern look if not a constant frown, rarely revealing a smile. This stoicism comes from the idea of not getting to attached to anything. Sanji has been hurt by loss and does not wish to repeat it. The natural solution to the young ninja was to steel his heart against such loss by not forming strong attachments, censoring himself from feeling too much happiness or joy as these emotions tend to lead to attachment. Perhaps this may one day change as somewhere deep down in Sanji's personality is lonely child who just wants to be accepted and loved and to laugh again without fear of being hurt or rejected.

Sanji could be described as a thinker. In his early age he was identified as having a very high natural intelligence which only blossomed further during his academy years. Now that he currently resides in the village's library he can often be seen reading books or perhaps partaking in games of strategy or riddles with the old librarian who seems to have formed a bond with the boy. Due to this trait, Sanji is a thoughtful individual, usually able to put himself in other people's shoes and understand their feelings. Most of the time he uses this in a way that allows him to be tactful and considerate but if annoyed he has been known to do the opposite, either by disregarding their emotions or using them against the offender, often in a sarcastic manor. Sarcasm is probably one of Sanji's favorite weapons. The use of clever quips and the like to either berate people who annoy him or to describe frustrating situations is something that is common in Sanji's mannerisms, using this type of dry humor to make light of a situation.

At the end of the day though, Sanji is a ninja through and though and though he admittedly gave up on that life he still keeps his comrade's headband very close and still finds himself thinking back to his days as a genin. The exact reasoning of why he quit in the first place isn't exact or even firmly held in the young man and perhaps all it would take is the right incentive to bring him back into action. Until then, Sanji remains in Kumogakure's library, reading his books and playing his games, doing his best not think of the greater purpose he was most likely destined to pursue.

Clan: Uchiha

Nindō:
"Everyone has value and everyone has significance thus everyone is important to the world."

THE NINJA.

Origin: Lightning Country
Affiliation: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin
Specialties: Ninjutsu; Weaponry (Main: Sword; Sub: Exotic)
Elemental Affinities: Katon; Raiton
Combat Style:

Utilizing a combination of ninjutsu and weaponry skills Sanji operates best at close to mid-range, rarely opting to move out to longer ranges. While in close range Sanji relies heavily on weapons, striking quickly and usually remaining on the offensive unless doing so would put him at a major disadvantage. This strategy tends to change though as more distance is created between him and his opponent, rather than pursuing his opponent, Sanji will begin to rely on ranged weapons and his ninjutsu to strike at his distant adversary. Sanji is at a major disadvantage when fights are taken to long range distances as he is not able to easily strike his opponent. As such when in long range situations he will become more defensive all the while trying to close the distance between himself and his opponent.

Due to Sanji's high IQ he is able to analyze his opponent and the current situation and is able to come up with solutions at a quick pace. This results in split second decision making and quick reactions that may seem somewhat unorthodox at the time. Sanji embraces the idea of adaptability during a fight and as such uses his high level of intellect to help him adjust to situations.

Due to his time spent at the library and his high IQ Sanji has a general knowledge about most common forms of combat, and thus has an easier time coming up with ways to counter such complications during combat in a relatively short amount of time.

Special Characteristics:
Physically Based:
Chakra Base:



THE BACKGROUND.

History:

Roleplay Sample:

THE ARSENAL.

Jutsu:

Academy Jutsu:

Uchiha Clan Techniques:

Kumogakure Specific Jutsu:

Non-Elemental Ninjutsu:

Katon Jutsu:

Raiton Jutsu:

Weaponry Jutsu:

Weapons: Name: Ninjaken
Rank: C
Type: Primary/Melee
Quantity: 1
Description: Short and straight, this blade takes a similar form of a katana, but without the curvature in the blade. With the blade measuring no more than three feet, and a square guard on top.

Items:

Genin Kit:

FACE CLAIM.

Character Claim: Ishigami Kamuro
Source: Kamikaze (Manga)
Image URL: Link


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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha - Hikari, Sanjiro [Kumogakure Genin] Uchiha - Hikari, Sanjiro [Kumogakure Genin] EmptyMon 09 Apr 2012, 2:53 am

A few things I have to point out about your application:
  • Split that huge paragraph in Appearance into two smaller ones. Maybe your Combat Style two. It makes it extremely easier for the reader.
  • Add a second Specialty to your character. You also have a "Weaponry" title, without any material. So I guess your second is going to be Weaponry?
  • Your maximum limit is 15 Jutsu. You can add more if you wish to.
  • "Image URL: I can't post open links yet, sorry." I fail to understand.

Take care of these things, then I go further in depth.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha - Hikari, Sanjiro [Kumogakure Genin] Uchiha - Hikari, Sanjiro [Kumogakure Genin] EmptyMon 09 Apr 2012, 8:40 am

Alright, dealing with the issues in the order you presented them:


- Paragraphs has been split up to be more readable. Appearance has been split. Personality has been split a bit more, and combat style has both been split and re-written to account for the addition of the second specialty.

- Weaponry with main focus on Swords and sub focus on exotic weapons has been added. I moved my genin kit to an items subheading rather than having it in weapons and I also selected a C rank weapon.

- I have given myself 15 jutsus, excluding the academy level jutsu.

- The site will not allow me to post an external URL as I am a new member who only registered 2 days ago, so that means that I need to wait another 5 days to be able to put an actual external link in the text. The link can be found though if you go to my image and retrieve the link from the image. I'm sorry.

- What else seems to be the problem with the application?
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha - Hikari, Sanjiro [Kumogakure Genin] Uchiha - Hikari, Sanjiro [Kumogakure Genin] EmptyMon 09 Apr 2012, 12:25 pm

Quote :
Weaponry:
This appears in your Katon Jutsu Spoiler. Please remove and change Weapon Jutsu into Weaponry Jutsu. A bit trivial, but needed anyway.

Apart from that, I cannot spot any additional issues concerning your application. Thank you for your work.

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha - Hikari, Sanjiro [Kumogakure Genin] Uchiha - Hikari, Sanjiro [Kumogakure Genin] EmptyMon 09 Apr 2012, 2:31 pm

Scale wrote:
Quote :
Weaponry:
This appears in your Katon Jutsu Spoiler. Please remove and change Weapon Jutsu into Weaponry Jutsu. A bit trivial, but needed anyway.

Apart from that, I cannot spot any additional issues concerning your application. Thank you for your work.

Approved 1/2

Done, sorry about that. It's not the firs time weird things ended up the spoilers... So I need approval from one more person?
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Approved!
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Archived due to character death
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