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Ureiha
Age : 39 Posts : 56
| Subject: Ureiha Clan Thu 16 Aug 2012, 11:41 am | |
| Clan Name: Ureiha Clan
Location: Lightning Country [Kaminari no Kuni] originally. They are in every nation now in days.
Signature Traits:All members of this clan have the mental traits of creativity and inventiveness. Although not all of them are dreamers, most of them look around the world around them to see what they can change.
Kekkei Genkai:
Mugen-Kan [The Eternal Eye]: This BL is a Doujutsu that gives birth to two spirits that represent the Ying and Yang aspects of the user. These Spirits not only are capable of one Specialized Jutsu at Genin, Chunnin, and Jounin but have a group of shared abilities common in all holders of the Mugen-Kan: [list] [*]Chakra Sensory: The users become sensitive to Chakra and can see its ebb in flow around them in the form of Ying [Amethyst] and Yang [Gold] chakra that exists in all things. This sensitivity is similar to Sensory Nins, but is only in the user’s Line of Sight. This also allows them to see chakra being molded for Jutsus but not the ability to copy it. [*] Ying-Yang Release (Onmyoton) : The awakening of this Kekkei Genkai allows the user the ability to Use Ying-Yang Manipulation, as well as access to all elements / advanced elements that one has seen used or has trained for. By using ones Imagination, vitality, and chakra one is able to turn dreams into reality. [*] Soul Summoning: While only having 1/3 the Jutsu of the user, and 25% weaker. The user can summon the Spirits formed from the technique to the outside world. At the cost of going blind in that eye while the spirit is summoned [although the spirit has full senses]. The Spirits themselves being a physical part of the user can talk telepathically to the user. The Eye itself looks like looking into a deep pool of water with a rainbow like hue shimmering throughout the eye. When the second stage is activated the user’s eye fills with a fractured rainbow shifting constantly, and a white orb where the pupil would be surrounded by 3 Black Orbs that spin clockwise around it. This takes 1000 Word count at Chunnin to activate and once one does the summons is as powerful as the users, as well as they gain the ability to fully manipulate not just their chakra, but the chakra that touches their body allowing for powerful and even devastating techniques that are hidden by the Ureiha Clan. Then there is the Final Stage called True Body Awakening. Where ones separate selves merge with the body transforming the user into a marvelous form that usually is a hybrid of some sort of the two spirits, but sometimes can give rise to a magnificent new being. This transformation is not permanent, and only lasts for 5 posts unless one trains for 500 words per additional post with a maximum of 10 posts per thread. While in this stage ones powers and abilities are at their height and they are capable of tapping into the building blacks of reality and shaping it in small and temporary ways. This Kekkei Genkai is the perfect defense against the Sharingan since all Jutsus become Blood Line which prevents copying of Jutsus, and ones dreams can become reality. Whether to create or destroy is up to the user. As is what change they will be for the world. This is the greatest part of this Kekkei Genkai. History: - Quote :
The Beginnings [Birth and Tragedy]: The Ureiha Clan is descendants of the first Uchiha, they originally did not have a Doujutsu or a Kekkei Genkai, but inherited his massive chakra, as well as a gift as Sensory Nin. After many generations using the art of Eugenics to carefully add in other Doujutsu users into their family tree their Doujutsu formed and evolved but it took a special event to awaken it to its current form.
As their eyes slowly developed the ability to see and manipulate chakra, so too did their need to experiment with not only Chakra as a whole, but to see what Jutsus their research could lead too. During one of these experiments they sealed Gobi within one of their Ninjas to use as a base to tap into and use in a Clan wide Jutsu that would utilize all of them. The experiment was to tap into Gobi’s affinity to nature, and all of the elements to see if they could bypass nature affinity altogether and be able to do all Elements with impunity.
As they set up the Fuuins [Seals] needed, and the various ritual gear set into place the Jinchuriiki cried and warned that he got a bad feeling about this. That using a Tailed Beast in such a matter could only end poorly, laughing at him they shrugged off his cries as the Tailed Beast possessing a weak soul and trying to dissuade them from progress. They then sealed him within a Gem and started the experiment. As the sky turned black and lightning clawed against a furious sky the stone glowed and hummed ominously. Yet still the clan continued their chanting. Molding their chakra through one another, and through the stone, linking themselves into one giant Chakra Circuit. As the ground shook and the rain started pouring they noticed nothing but the warm glow of chakra, and began to draw in the chakra of Gobi the 5 Tails. But alas the warning turned out to be real, the full force of the Tailed Beasts Chakra flooded through them and pierced their very souls flooding all of them with the raw nature of all the elements in the universe. This stressor forcibly awoken the Kekkei Genkai within them releasing the 3rd and final form without warning which unfortunately was enough force and physical stress to kill half the clan as the Tailed Beast freed himself and fled in pain as the ritual took its toll on his body. - Quote :
Quest for Self Redemption:
When they turned back to their normal selves they noticed their eyes had transformed as well as their ability to sense Chakra mutated to an intimate sight and knowledge of Ying and Yang Chakra. While this did lead them to being able to use any mixture of elements, as well as the ability to shape their dreams to reality, the cost was too high. As they buried their dead the Ureiha’s promised to use their powers more wisely and to shape the world to a land their Clan would’ve been proud to live in.
As time went by Nations rose and fell, Wars came and went, but the Ureiha’s were there in the Shadows of History shaping events. Giving a secret push in the direction they thought things should head while doing their best to ensure they as well as other major players didn’t make the mistake of their own past. But as the Nations of the world progressed they found their clan at odds. Was it really fair to manipulate the destiny of a planet? Or was it better to allow the Shinobi of the world to determine their own fate? Too come out of the shadows and allow the world to choose what it was they wanted from life. So it went to a vote that lasted a generation of debates with in the clan. Eventually it came down to the decision that the Shinobi world would be allowed to choose their own fate, but if things should ever get to the point where the world would suffer. They would step in once again a shadow of a shadow and ensure that the world was safe behind the scenes, keeping themselves hidden from the eyes of others once more. - Quote :
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Salvation: A new Start
Thus the new generation came out of hiding and slowly announced themselves to the Ninja world in a roundabout way using Family trees linking them to head families of Ancient Clans as well as one of the original children of the Sage of the 6 Paths they grew in prestige as an Old Clan. Using the excuse that one of the Tailed Beast almost wiped out the clan, and made them go on a journey of inner discovery for all those many generations they infused themselves into the modern world. Both as their old reputation as sensory ninjas, as well as showing off small bits of their Clans Kekkei Genkai while leaving out the full nature of their powers and abilities. While technically not lies, they have become known to small inner circles as powerful Ninjas in their own right due to their Ying-Yang Release, their ability to summon parts of their soul, as well as the aforementioned skill as a Sensory Nin. Clan Jutsu: |
| | | Enzo
Age : 29 Posts : 1797
| Subject: Re: Ureiha Clan Thu 16 Aug 2012, 5:12 pm | |
| Denied. Clan is way too over powered. Let's break down why this is OP. - You command two spirits, which resemble Yin and Yang. We have a special characteristic that gives the user Yin Release; or a similar variant. Your clan doesn't have said SC, and gives twice as many releases. Denied on the grounds that you're getting free SC's.
- Now your chakra sensory, although common with Dojutsu, makes no sense at all. You don't even go to explain what Yin and Yang are in your terms, because in the Canon Yin and Yang haven't been properly defined yet. Therefore, you could really just fill in the blanks and make it incredibly over powered. You don't even state to what limits you can see the chakra flow.
- Your Yin-Yang Release is unbelievably overpowered. You somehow gain access to any possible elemental combination and all possible elements, just because you have some special eyes. That on its own is unacceptable. Why would your clan be allowed such stupendously over powered ability, yet other clans and characters can't? What makes you so special? Oh, and I'm not even going to mention the Izanagi clone of a technique you mentioned in the final part of your description. It allows you to make dreams come true. So if you had a dream your rival died, you pretty much win the fight before it began. Auto-denied.
- You're not allowed to create summons out of nowhere. Theoretically you'd be allowed to create armies of summons, which would overwhelm any opponent ever. Let's not forget spirits are ethereal; therefore one can't even touch them. You basically have an infinite supply of spirits. Oh, and just because it makes you blind in one eye doesn't mean it's a real disadvantage. You don't state "The user cannot make more spirits with the blind eye." So really, one could loophole this and theoretically create the enormous amount of spirits I mentioned with, get this, no chakra consumption at all. Not going to acknowledge the next two paragraphs, since this is OP enough as it is.
- Finally we have the immediate transformation of every jutsu into a bloodline, which doesn't even make sense. I won't even ask you to fix it, because; well. This clan is denied on so many grounds of being remarkably over powered. Sorry, but no Naruto site would approve of this.
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| | | Ureiha
Age : 39 Posts : 56
| Subject: Re: Ureiha Clan Thu 16 Aug 2012, 7:26 pm | |
| No problem. Can I break it down and remake it from Scratch / WIP it? |
| | | Enzo
Age : 29 Posts : 1797
| Subject: Re: Ureiha Clan Thu 16 Aug 2012, 7:48 pm | |
| I suggest just creating a new topic if you plan on doing that. |
| | | Ureiha
Age : 39 Posts : 56
| Subject: Re: Ureiha Clan Thu 16 Aug 2012, 8:06 pm | |
| I'll get on that then later today. Thank you for your time. |
| | | Enzo
Age : 29 Posts : 1797
| Subject: Re: Ureiha Clan Sat 18 Aug 2012, 8:30 am | |
| Denied & Archived. |
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