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Uzumaki, Toto [Konoha Genin]

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UZUMAKI, TOTO


THE INFO

Name: Uzumaki, Toto
Nickname: Mockingbird
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Standing at 5'3", Toto is really short for his age, being smaller then 3/4 of the ninja in his graduating class from the Academy. His hair color is green, which he inherited from his mother, who was not an Uzumaki till she married. Toto represents Konoha by wearing it's symbol on his forehead protector, which is a blue color. His eyes are gold, with the pupil being invisible. The gold color sinks in with this light skin color and light colored hair, making him seem almost completely white. Many girls his age become very infatuated with him. He has the symbol of his clan tattooed onto his left shoulder to honor the Uzumaki clan and the kanji for "love" tattooed onto his right shoulder to represent the murder of his parents at the hands of his older brother, Miharu.

Toto's main outfit consists of a white jacket with the Uzumaki clan symbol on the back that is usually zipped from his waist to the base of his chest or unzipped. He then wears black baggy pants that fit loosely around his waist and allow him to move more freely when in battle. He wears bandages around his right thigh where he puts his kunai pouch and he ties his shuriken pouch onto a yellow belt he wears around his waist to the back side of it. Like other ninja, he wears ninja sandals that are colored black. When not on duty (Toto's secondary outfit), Toto wears a white T-shirt with the symbol of his clan on the back of it, black baggy shorts that fit loosely in case he ever has to go into battle, bandages on his right thigh where he attaches his kunai pouch, he ties his shuriken pouch onto his belt around the back of it, and like many other ninja, wears ninja sandals that are colored black.

At first glance, Toto appears to be much skinnier than he really is due to his baggy clothing. This makes his opponents underestimate him. Toto is very muscular though and very capable of fending for his-self from other ninja.



Forehead Protector:
-Wears blue forehead protector (with the Konohagakure village symbol on the metal plate) loosely around his neck.

Personality:
When he was a child, Toto was kind, loving towards his parents and older brother and respectful to his fellow clansmen as well as his teachers. He was also proud to be the younger brother of Miharu, one of the best ANBU in the village. His original dream was to become an ANBU like Miharu. After witnessing Miharu kill their parents, Toto's grades started to slip and he started to loose friends. By the time Toto graduated, he had some of the lowest scores in his class and few friends that put aside the fact that his ego was slowly rotting away.

After seeing that he still had people who cared about him, he became lively, carefree, and childlike individual, who always seems to have a smile on his face. He is always there for people whoever it may be. It is very hard to get him angry, but he does get angry really quickly when someone brings up his parents or his older brother. He has devoted his life to protecting those that he cares about and honors, and to also killing his brother as to avenge his deceased parents.

While on missions and during battles, Toto is very serious, focused, and seemingly emotionless. He does not like to take chances and does not take his opponents lightly. He does however, have something inside of him that is different. After his older brother murdered his parents, he became mentally unstable. At the sight of blood, he would become aggressive and his blood chakra would turn cold. Later in his life, this mental un-stabability turned into a personality of it's own. This personality is named Oni (Demon) and it is cold, indifferent, cruel, cynical, and arrogant. Oni is able to be surfaced by the sight of blood. Some people say that his personality resembles that of his father's, having taken his mother's apperaence and his father's personality (with the exception of his other personality).


Clan: Uzumaki
Nindō: "To protect those that I love and honor with my life."

THE NINJA


Origin: Land of Fire
Affiliation: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Specialties:
-Main: Ninjutsu
-Sub: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinity:
-Main: Katon (Fire)
-Sub: Doton (Earth)
Combat Style:
Toto's Combat Style:
When a battle beings, Toto likes to use his taijutsu combat and his earth style jutsu to either restrain his opponents or tire them out. After this, Toto likes to go about 4-6 yards away and use fire style jutsu or weapons to deal some major damage to his opponents. Before making any moves, he likes to observe his opponent's current state and think up

Oni's Combat Style:
Oni is the personality-turned-being that was born from the hatred of his older brother and the sorrowfulness of the death of his parents. Oni, sharing the same body as Toto, has the same jutsu and strength as Toto.

Oni likes to toy with his opponents. When he is first awakened, he likes to use kunai to demobilize his opponents by hitting their pressure points and muscles. When his opponents are demobilized, he uses swift taijutsu to cause pain to his opponents. To end his battles, he uses his strongest jutsu to kill or attempt to kill his opponents. Toto/Oni is feared in Konoha and neighboring villages and lands.

Special Characteristics:

Name: Katon Prodigy
Rank: C
Type: Chakra Based
Physical Requirements: Must have Fire Affinity
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: A trait given to ninja who posses a natural talent for fire manipulation and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the fire element becomes so talented that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy in the fire element. Because of this, the user's fire techniques are 20% more destruive with their increased in heat and size.

THE BACKGROUND


History:
Childhood Arc:
Toto was born in The Land of Fire into the famous Uzumaki clan. He was born with his mother's light-green hair, which was extremely odd for an Uzumaki to have a hair color different from red or close to red. When he was 4, he exclaimed to his parents that he wanted to be a ninja and his father started to teach him how to fight.

By the age of 6, Toto was a master of survival. One time he tested himself to stay in a nearby forest alone for a whole week and did so easily. He could also use basic jutsu such as the clone and transformation techniques. He was praised by his parents and friends for developing so far in such little time for a child his age.

Academy Arc:
When Toto turned 7, he decided that it was time for his real training to begin. He entered into the Academy. He made many friends and was the best in all of his classes. When he got home from school everyday he would do an hour or two of training.

One day when Toto arrived home from school when he was 8, he saw his older brother, who hardly ever came out of his room when he was home, holding his father up in the air by his neck and slitting his father's stomach, watching his guts spill to the floor. Toto was splashed by his father's spilling blood, and trembled in fear as his brother dropped the body and started walking towards him. As his brother kept walking towards him, he fainted. He woke up in the hospital the next morning, traumatized by the events that had happened.

His grades at the academy started to slip and he started to loose friends. By the time Toto graduated, he had some of the lowest scores in his class and few friends that put aside the fact that his ego was slowly rotting away.

Genin Arc:
Toto, having been touched that some of his friends stuck with him, besides the fact that his ego started to rot, changed back to his friendly and smart self. He developed many strong techniques and also many strong friendships. But, something else has also been created. Before his ego changed back to normal, he developed a new personality that had fed off of the sorrowfulness of the death of his parents and hatred of his older brother. This being is called Oni and is the complete opposite of Toto. After having Oni surface a few times, he (Oni) killed 25 people. Toto/Oni is now known and feared by people of Konoha and neighboring villages and lands.

RP Sample:
Spoiler:


THE ARSENAL.

Academy Jutsu:
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Katon:
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Doton:
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Taijutsu:
Spoiler:

Nin/Taijutsu:
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Weapons/Items:
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Themes

Toto's Theme:



Oni's Theme:


Last edited by TOPKite on Sun 03 Feb 2013, 2:47 am; edited 10 times in total (Reason for editing : Needed changes)
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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki, Toto [Konoha Genin] Uzumaki, Toto [Konoha Genin] EmptyMon 20 Aug 2012, 7:27 pm

You need more,

  • Appearance
  • Personality
  • History
  • Combat Style
  • Roleplay Sample

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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki, Toto [Konoha Genin] Uzumaki, Toto [Konoha Genin] EmptyMon 27 Aug 2012, 12:50 pm

Good work so far. Let's get you quickly approved, shall we?

My only real criticism is length. Firstly, please remove spoilers from Personality, Appearance and History. Then please expand on your Personality and Appearence. Your history is fine, but those two are what others will be most interested in and so it's good practice to be detailed and descriptive.

Also, please add one Special Characteristic (C Rank) from here. The first one is free, so might as well.

And there is a coding issue (Size=24) at the very end of your post. Please fix that
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Good stuff.

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