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Uzumaki, Toto [Konoha Genin]
skullking
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Subject: Uzumaki, Toto [Konoha Genin] Sat 18 Aug 2012, 5:53 am
UZUMAKI, TOTO
THE INFO
Name: Uzumaki, Toto Nickname: Mockingbird Age:15 Gender: Male Appearance: Standing at 5'3", Toto is really short for his age, being smaller then 3/4 of the ninja in his graduating class from the Academy. His hair color is green, which he inherited from his mother, who was not an Uzumaki till she married. Toto represents Konoha by wearing it's symbol on his forehead protector, which is a blue color. His eyes are gold, with the pupil being invisible. The gold color sinks in with this light skin color and light colored hair, making him seem almost completely white. Many girls his age become very infatuated with him. He has the symbol of his clan tattooed onto his left shoulder to honor the Uzumaki clan and the kanji for "love" tattooed onto his right shoulder to represent the murder of his parents at the hands of his older brother, Miharu.
Toto's main outfit consists of a white jacket with the Uzumaki clan symbol on the back that is usually zipped from his waist to the base of his chest or unzipped. He then wears black baggy pants that fit loosely around his waist and allow him to move more freely when in battle. He wears bandages around his right thigh where he puts his kunai pouch and he ties his shuriken pouch onto a yellow belt he wears around his waist to the back side of it. Like other ninja, he wears ninja sandals that are colored black. When not on duty (Toto's secondary outfit), Toto wears a white T-shirt with the symbol of his clan on the back of it, black baggy shorts that fit loosely in case he ever has to go into battle, bandages on his right thigh where he attaches his kunai pouch, he ties his shuriken pouch onto his belt around the back of it, and like many other ninja, wears ninja sandals that are colored black.
At first glance, Toto appears to be much skinnier than he really is due to his baggy clothing. This makes his opponents underestimate him. Toto is very muscular though and very capable of fending for his-self from other ninja.
Forehead Protector: -Wears blue forehead protector (with the Konohagakure village symbol on the metal plate) loosely around his neck.
Personality: When he was a child, Toto was kind, loving towards his parents and older brother and respectful to his fellow clansmen as well as his teachers. He was also proud to be the younger brother of Miharu, one of the best ANBU in the village. His original dream was to become an ANBU like Miharu. After witnessing Miharu kill their parents, Toto's grades started to slip and he started to loose friends. By the time Toto graduated, he had some of the lowest scores in his class and few friends that put aside the fact that his ego was slowly rotting away.
After seeing that he still had people who cared about him, he became lively, carefree, and childlike individual, who always seems to have a smile on his face. He is always there for people whoever it may be. It is very hard to get him angry, but he does get angry really quickly when someone brings up his parents or his older brother. He has devoted his life to protecting those that he cares about and honors, and to also killing his brother as to avenge his deceased parents.
While on missions and during battles, Toto is very serious, focused, and seemingly emotionless. He does not like to take chances and does not take his opponents lightly. He does however, have something inside of him that is different. After his older brother murdered his parents, he became mentally unstable. At the sight of blood, he would become aggressive and his blood chakra would turn cold. Later in his life, this mental un-stabability turned into a personality of it's own. This personality is named Oni (Demon) and it is cold, indifferent, cruel, cynical, and arrogant. Oni is able to be surfaced by the sight of blood. Some people say that his personality resembles that of his father's, having taken his mother's apperaence and his father's personality (with the exception of his other personality).
Clan: Uzumaki Nindō:"To protect those that I love and honor with my life."
THE NINJA
Origin: Land of Fire Affiliation: Konohagakure Rank: Genin Specialties: -Main: Ninjutsu -Sub: Taijutsu Elemental Affinity: -Main: Katon (Fire) -Sub: Doton (Earth) Combat Style: Toto's Combat Style: When a battle beings, Toto likes to use his taijutsu combat and his earth style jutsu to either restrain his opponents or tire them out. After this, Toto likes to go about 4-6 yards away and use fire style jutsu or weapons to deal some major damage to his opponents. Before making any moves, he likes to observe his opponent's current state and think up
Oni's Combat Style: Oni is the personality-turned-being that was born from the hatred of his older brother and the sorrowfulness of the death of his parents. Oni, sharing the same body as Toto, has the same jutsu and strength as Toto.
Oni likes to toy with his opponents. When he is first awakened, he likes to use kunai to demobilize his opponents by hitting their pressure points and muscles. When his opponents are demobilized, he uses swift taijutsu to cause pain to his opponents. To end his battles, he uses his strongest jutsu to kill or attempt to kill his opponents. Toto/Oni is feared in Konoha and neighboring villages and lands.
Special Characteristics:
Name: Katon Prodigy Rank: C Type: Chakra Based Physical Requirements: Must have Fire Affinity Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic. Description: A trait given to ninja who posses a natural talent for fire manipulation and has trained thoroughly to improve their skill. Their power over the fire element becomes so talented that the ninja is now considered a young prodigy in the fire element. Because of this, the user's fire techniques are 20% more destruive with their increased in heat and size.
THE BACKGROUND
History: Childhood Arc: Toto was born in The Land of Fire into the famous Uzumaki clan. He was born with his mother's light-green hair, which was extremely odd for an Uzumaki to have a hair color different from red or close to red. When he was 4, he exclaimed to his parents that he wanted to be a ninja and his father started to teach him how to fight.
By the age of 6, Toto was a master of survival. One time he tested himself to stay in a nearby forest alone for a whole week and did so easily. He could also use basic jutsu such as the clone and transformation techniques. He was praised by his parents and friends for developing so far in such little time for a child his age.
Academy Arc: When Toto turned 7, he decided that it was time for his real training to begin. He entered into the Academy. He made many friends and was the best in all of his classes. When he got home from school everyday he would do an hour or two of training.
One day when Toto arrived home from school when he was 8, he saw his older brother, who hardly ever came out of his room when he was home, holding his father up in the air by his neck and slitting his father's stomach, watching his guts spill to the floor. Toto was splashed by his father's spilling blood, and trembled in fear as his brother dropped the body and started walking towards him. As his brother kept walking towards him, he fainted. He woke up in the hospital the next morning, traumatized by the events that had happened.
His grades at the academy started to slip and he started to loose friends. By the time Toto graduated, he had some of the lowest scores in his class and few friends that put aside the fact that his ego was slowly rotting away.
Genin Arc: Toto, having been touched that some of his friends stuck with him, besides the fact that his ego started to rot, changed back to his friendly and smart self. He developed many strong techniques and also many strong friendships. But, something else has also been created. Before his ego changed back to normal, he developed a new personality that had fed off of the sorrowfulness of the death of his parents and hatred of his older brother. This being is called Oni and is the complete opposite of Toto. After having Oni surface a few times, he (Oni) killed 25 people. Toto/Oni is now known and feared by people of Konoha and neighboring villages and lands.
RP Sample:
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Toto ran down the dimly lit corridor, covered in a cold sweat. "I'm coming to get you, Toto" A voice called from down the hall. "Huff! Huff!" Toto breathed heavily as he turned into the kitchen of the 2-story home. He looked around... no exit point; he was cornered. "Where are you, Toto?" The voice called again, this time heavier then the first. Toto, barely able to breath, opened a cabinet and armed himself with a butcher knife. Toto saw a large figure coming to the end of the hall, aiming itself with a katana. Toto's breathing got heavier as he got into position. The figure reached the door into the kitchen and turned to face Toto. The figure turned out to be his older brother, Miharu. "Everything is going to be fine, Toto, when you are in heaven with Mother and Father." Miharu said as he raised his katana and stood right in front of Toto. "I will make this painless. Goodbye, little brother." Miharu said as he slashed his katana against Toto, cutting his vision to black for a split second.
"AAGGGHHHH!!!" Toto shouted as he shot up from his slumber, barely able to breath and in a cold sweat like in his nightmare. He turned on his night-stand lamp and sat at the edge of his bed. He looked over to his desk and eyed something. He grabbed it and starred at it with interest. It was a picture of his mother, father, older brother and him on his first day at the Academy. Toto saw something wet fall onto the frame, and realised that he had started to cry. "Mother, Father. Why? Why did you leave me?" He sobbed. He then looked at his older brother, Miharu. "God D*** you, you son of a b****." Toto snapped as he threw the picture across the room, shattering the picture against the wall. "It's OK, Toto. Be angry, be very angry. Take out your anger on them, the people who tease you, the people who mock you. I will lend you my strength." A voice said inside of Toto's head. "What the hell!?" Toto said, shocked that another voice other than his own was inside of his mind. "Who the... What the hell is this!?" Toto asked the other voice. "It is me, Toto. I am you, just in a diffrent, more powerful form. I can help you get rid of your sorrowfulness. I can lend you the stregnth to kill him, your... no, our older brother." The voice replied in a cunning way. Toto, who was still in shock, agreed to do this. "OK, me. What should I do?" Toto asked the voice. "First, grab something sharp. Next, cut your wrist and look at the blood. Then, that will surface the power that I am lending to you."
Toto did as the voice said to do. He walked over to the broken picture frame and grabed a piece of broken glass. He clossed his eyes and cut at his left wrist. "Oww!" He exclaimed as he starred at his dirty work. After a few seconds of staring at the oozing blood, Toto started to feel an excruciating pain shoot through is head. "AAAGGGGHHHHH!!!" Toto screamed as he knelled down on his knees in pain. His eyes, once a bright gold with a circular pupil, was now a bright gold with the pupil of a monster. "HAHAHAHAHAHA! That dumb son of a b****! I now have control over the pest's entire body!" Toto said.
The thing is... the Toto that had just said that was not Toto. No, it was a dark personality-turned-being by the sorrowfulness of the death of his parents and hatred of his older brother. What just happened was, that "voice" was Toto's other being. The thing that just said that was Oni, Toto's personality-turned-being, another being that now resides inside of Toto's body, and Oni was blood-thirsty.
THE ARSENAL.
Academy Jutsu:
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Name: Bunshin no Jutsu • Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Genjutsu Range: N/A Medium: Optical Element: N/A Description: This technique creates identical clones of the user. However, they hold no actual substance and will disperse upon impact of an attack or contact with an opponent. They cannot disrupt the area around themselves with their movements; won’t kick up dust, crush grass, etc. They are simply optical illusions used to momentarily fool others. Chakra Cost: 1CP per 5 clones
Name: Henge no Jutsu • Transformation Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique transforms the user’s appearance to that of another object or person. However, it is not a permanent transformation and a mental image of what they are transformed into. Certain aspects of a ninja will not change merely by transformation, these things may include injuries, tool pocket placements etc. The jutsu will dispel should the user be injured. The user does not gain the properties of their transformation (ie. horse like strength), and may only transform into something ranging between 1/2 of their regular size, to 2x their regular size. Thus one cannot transform into large creatures. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu • Body Replacement Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Element: N/A Description: After performing a tiger seal, this technique allows the user to alter places in a speedy manner with another nearby object. This is done mere seconds before an attack lands, thus making the attacker believe his or her attack was a success. Whatever object was used to alter places will receive the brunt of the enemy’s attack instead. The object that the user switches with must be preset somewhere else in the thread, meaning that the object must have received specific mention previously in the thread. Chakra Cost: 2
Name: Explosive Tag: Activate Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to activate an explosive tag they have planted somewhere. Preferably they should be within close to mid range and visible to the user. You cannot activate another persons explosive tags unless your chakra has been channeled into them beforehand. Chakra Cost: 1 (per 3 explosive notes)
Name: Kai • Release Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: By stopping the flow of chakra in their body, and then applying an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra; the user may dispel the effects of a genjutsu. This can also be used on another individual that is stuck in a genjutsu by preforming the necessary hand seal and then touching them, although it consumes half the chakra cost of the Genjutsu. Chakra Cost: Cost of Genjutsu + 2CP
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu • Escaping Skill Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to free themselves should they be tied up. It is extremely basic. Using their physical training, the user will twist and contort their body to loosen their bindings, effectively relieving themselves of the tightness of their bindings and slipping through the restraints. This technique can only be used if the user is of equal or higher rank than their captor. Chakra Cost: 1
Name: Chozou no Jutsu • Storage Technique Rank: E Type: Fuuinjutsu, Supplementary Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A simple jutsu that allows a ninja to seal or unseal any item, mostly weapons, from scrolls or from their body. After forming the necessary handsigns, the ninja will seal the item into a scroll etc. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use. The items themselves are unaffected by time. Ninjutsu can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened, but require another person to cast said Ninjutsu; else it cannot be sealed. Chakra Cost: 1 to seal; 1 to unseal.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza • Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: NA Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on water by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet or hands. Because of water’s nature, this requires the user to be quick to adjust the amount of chakra they must emit to their feet in order to maintain a constant balance. Users may also walk, run and “skate” across the water when using this technique. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Name: Kinobori no Waza • Act of Tree Climbing Rank: D Type: N/A Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique allows the user to balance themselves on trees and vertical walls by focusing a constant and steady stream of chakra to the user’s feet. Gravity can easy be defined if this technique is mastered, allowing people to even stand upside down. If too much chakra is exerted the user will be pushed away; bark breaking and causing the user to then fall. If not enough chakra is exerted the user will lose their footing and fall. Chakra Cost: 1 (1 per post)
Katon:
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Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it. Chakra Cost: 5 (2 per post)
Name: Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Katon (Fire) Description: The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Honoo Ha - Flaming Leaves Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0 - 5m), Med (5 - 10m) Element: Katon Description: Honoo Ha is a ninjutsu technique utilizing the fire element. After performing the required handseals, the user will be able to launch out three oak tree shaped leaves made up of fire from their mouth. It takes a triangle formation, one fire leaf at the front and two following behind it. The leaves are capable of burning the opponent and their clothing, however, the user must ensure that they are within ten metres of the opponent. For once the fire leaves pass this limit, they will simply fade away. Chakra Cost: 4
Doton:
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Name: Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth. Chakra Cost: 6 (2 per post)
Name: Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall. Chakra Cost: 6
Name: Gansetsukon - Rock Spear Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: This jutsu allows the user to take a small chunk of rock and turn it into the shape of a staff. The user can then use it as a weapon or throw it at their opponent. Because it is made of thin stone, it is very brittle. Chakra Cost: 5
Name: Doryuusou - Earthen Rising Spears Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: This technique lets the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes are brittle, and can be broken with a strong blow or tough defense. Chakra Cost: 7
Name: Retsudo Tenshou - Revolving Split Earth Palm Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+) Element: Doton (Earth) Description: Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it. Chakra Cost: 9
Taijutsu:
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Name: Dynamic • Entry - Dainamikku • Entorii Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: This jutsu simply appears to be a flying jump kick, often performed on the face of an enemy, while dramatically screaming the words "Dynamic Entry". Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Konoha Reppuu - Leaf Violent Wind Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: The move here is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Konoha Senpuu - Leaf Whirlwind Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m - 5m) Element: N/A Description: A taijutsu where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark. Chakra Cost: 4
Name: Kurotchishotto - Crotch Shot Rank: D Type: Taijutsu Range: Close (0m) Element: - Description: Kurotchishotto is a humiliating taijutsu technique. By appearing in front of the opponent, the user will charge a small amount of chakra towards their dominant leg. Performing an upward kick at the opponents crotch area, they will be able to force them up into the air by a metre where a second attack could take place. If the victim was a male, a great deal of pain will be dealt after the kick has been made. Chakra Cost: 3
Nin/Taijutsu:
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Name: Bureijinguhitto - Blazing Hit Rank: D Type: Nin / Taijutsu Range: Close (0m) Element: Katon Description: Bureijinguhitto is a ninjutsu and taijutsu combination utilizing the fire element. By charging a small amount of chakra to the dominant fist, the user is able to ignite their hand so that it's enveloped in a glove of fire. By delivering a punch to their opponent, the user is able to add on a burning effect equivalent to that of a scalding tea kettle to the location that has been hit. The fire will only be visible on the top of the hand, covering the top of the fingers, knuckles and hand. Chakra Cost: 3
Name: Small Scroll Rank: D Type: Supplementary Quantity: 10 Description: Scrolls are an important asset to any ninja's arsenal, whether they are used for sealing, summoning or simple communication, scrolls have always found their home within a ninja's pouch or pocket. When stood, a small scroll will measure up to fifteen centimetres in height, with the scroll length itself reaching fifty centimetres. Storage:
Themes
Toto's Theme:
Oni's Theme:
Last edited by TOPKite on Sun 03 Feb 2013, 2:47 am; edited 10 times in total (Reason for editing : Needed changes)
Kiseki
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Subject: Re: Uzumaki, Toto [Konoha Genin] Mon 20 Aug 2012, 7:27 pm
You need more,
Appearance
Personality
History
Combat Style
Roleplay Sample
skullking
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Subject: Re: Uzumaki, Toto [Konoha Genin] Sun 26 Aug 2012, 6:14 pm
edited
Chris
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Subject: Re: Uzumaki, Toto [Konoha Genin] Mon 27 Aug 2012, 12:50 pm
Good work so far. Let's get you quickly approved, shall we?
My only real criticism is length. Firstly, please remove spoilers from Personality, Appearance and History. Then please expand on your Personality and Appearence. Your history is fine, but those two are what others will be most interested in and so it's good practice to be detailed and descriptive.
Also, please add one Special Characteristic (C Rank) from here. The first one is free, so might as well.
And there is a coding issue (Size=24) at the very end of your post. Please fix that
skullking
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Subject: Re: Uzumaki, Toto [Konoha Genin] Tue 28 Aug 2012, 5:31 pm
Edited
Chris
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Subject: Re: Uzumaki, Toto [Konoha Genin] Tue 28 Aug 2012, 6:45 pm
Good stuff.
Approved 1/2
Kiseki
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Subject: Re: Uzumaki, Toto [Konoha Genin] Thu 30 Aug 2012, 12:13 am
Approval 2/2
Don't forget to make an account here, Clicky
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Subject: Re: Uzumaki, Toto [Konoha Genin] Sat 09 Feb 2013, 12:46 am